Hi frndz… before writing my second ff I just want o write one os… hope u like it…
MOVE ON:-
Early in the morning… sun rays falls on a villa.. and villa is shown… in entrance of the house there is hall… and at the wall there are so many pics of kunj.. and their family members and in centre of the pics there is a family pic in which whole kunj family and twinkle are there…
Next to this wall there are steps… and from their a room is shown… inside a room there are some photos of kunj and twinkle… marriage photos.. and some other photos in which their lovable memories are captured… and a big size photo of kunj and twinkle with beautiful smiles…down to that there is a bed… and our loveable couples are sleeping in eachother embrace… under a single bedsheet… it looks like… they had spend the most beautiful and memorable nyt…. Just then sun rays falls on kunj.. he gets disturb… and opens his eyes… and sees his life sleeping happily with acute smile on her face and hugging him.. as he is most important person in her life…
Kunj is just seeing her.. without disturbing her sleep…(their both are still in hugging position only… and twinkle is sleeping on his chest..and he is keeping his on her…
Kunj remembers all the moments… how he met her.. how they got married.. how their used to fight, and their friendship.. and slowly falling for eachother…
FB STARTS:-
Kunj and twinkle gets married only because of their parents happiness.. and the first meeting makes them to hate each other… as twinkle slips coffee on kunj hand. He shouts on her in front of everyone… but because of their decided to get married… kunj parents wants twinkle to continue her studies even after marriage.. so she took admission in kunj clg…
Daily their both goto clg together only…
Kunj aand twinkle always plans pranks on eachother… but sad part is always kunj used to get scoldings from his father.. this increases his hate towards twinkle.. to take revenge on her.. one day he leaves her in the clg itself… and leaves without informing her…
(He think that if one day she comes home alone then she gets to know who is this kunj….. an leaves her in the clg itself.. )
It is nyt everyone are worried for twinkle… just then kunj comes.. everyone ask him about her.. he gets shock that till now she didn’t reach home… and gets worried thinking about her condition… goes to clg to take her… but she is not their.. he searches everywhere.. but no clue bout her… this makes him more worried about her… and curse’s himself for leaving her alone…
He prays for god.. and says sorry to twinkle in his mind… just then he gets a call from UV… kunj lifts the call..
UV :- says something..
Kunj gets shock and leave to his place…
IN UV PLACE:-
Kunj comes and sees UV is talking to doctor… and goes to him… at that time doctors leaves
Kunj:- where is she( with so much concern and love)
Uv shows him one room… kunj goes inside..and sees twinkle sleeping or unconscious… he goes to her and sits beside her .. and sees her with love care and guilty.. just then Uv comes in… kunj sees him and ask him what happens to her UV ask him to come out.. kunj goes…
( sorry guys.. forgot to say about UV…. UV is best friend for kunj… more than a best friend… UV is orphan.. but he treats kunj parents as his own.. and same with kunj parents… kunj shares everthing to him.. and even about twinkle also… but uv always try to support twinkle… to tease kunj… so he sn became bestbestfrnd for twinkle too)
In hall.. kunj and uv are there…
Kunj:- uv what happened to her.. say me plz..
Uv:- I’M coming to ma.. from clg… but on the way I saw twinkle… and some boys are teasing her… and tried to misbehave with her… I just went their to stop them before that… some one in that gang slapped her.. she got hurt on her head.. because of that is unconscious.. when their saw me.. they escaped.. and then I went near her and brought her here.. I thought it’s not good to take her to home at tthis condition…
Kunj :- thanks yaar…
Uv:- but I cant understand one thing why twinkle is alone…. Their..
Kunj:- keeps silent and bows his head down in guilty…
Uv :- thinks something and says what u did say me…( in angry voice)
Kunj:- says everthing..
Uv gets angry on him and across him… and kunj also says sorry to him..
And goes inside.. to see twinkle..
Kunj enters into the room and sees twinkle slowly getting conscious… he immediately goes towards her.. and says twinkle…
When twinkle listens his voice she slowly opens her eyes and sees kunj Infront of her.. she immediately gets up and hugs him tightly… and Cry’s…. Kunj also hugs her back and counsel her…
Kunj:- shhhhh stop crying.. ntg happened.. u are absolutely fine…
Twinkle(crying):- u stupid…. Y u left me alone… u know how must I am afraid.. and that boys…and Cry’s more..
Kunj:- I’m sorry… for leaving u… plz don’t cry I can’t c u crying.. I promise I won’t leave u again…
Twinkle:- promise…
Kunj:- (breaks the hug) sees her.. and rubs her tears… PROMISE I WILL NEVER LEAVE U ALONE…
Now don’t cry….
Twinkle smiles and hugs him again… kunj also hug her back…and their started spending some loveable moments with eachother… uv sees this and gets teared eyes..and leaves that place so that their can spend some time with each other….
Days are passing… now also kunj and twinkle fights but only for fun… kunj calls twinkle as siyyappa Queen.. and their both are falling for eachother…. At last their decided to confess their love to eachother…
One day… kunj takes twinkle to beach at eveng time… there is no one near their surroundings…
Kunj takes twinkle to beach by closing her eyes…
Twinkle:- kunj where are u taking me… plz say Na.
Kunj:- Arey u said this dialogue for more that 100 times… can’t u keep quite..
Twinkle:- say me Na.. plz…
Kunj:- it is surprise.. yaar.
Twinkle:h Surprise.. wow …. Say me….
Kunj:- twinkle it is surprise how can say u..
Twinkle:- accha kk say me more how much time… will u make me walk like this…
Kunj:- only 1min… and takes her some what front…. And slowly removes his hands..
And leaves that places slowly… (not so far)
Twnikle opens her eyes.. and sees and gets surprised…
A beautiful sun set from then centre of the ocean… and seawater colour slowly changes to orange colour… because of the sunset .. and sky is also in orange and yellow mixed colour…. It looks like there are two sky’s and sun is in middle of the two sky’s.. twinkle sees this gets happy… and slowly sunsets completely and moon occupies the sky and now the sky and water are in black colour… moon is in white colour…and it’s reflection is seen in the water….
Twnikle is standing on the rock and sees this…. She sees this without even blinking her her… just then she feels some hot breathe close tto her…. And she smiles… kunj comes from back and comes close to her ears… feeling his hot breathe… she closes her eyes…kunj slowly comes close to her ears and says how is my surprise… she turns and sees into his eyes…he too sees her… both are lost in eachother eyes… then twinkle says… just like u…. Without breaking eyelock…. Kunj feels happy listening tto her answer… he turns her and hold her waist… and pulls her towards him… now her back touches his chest… she feels butterflies in her stomach with his touch….She too keeps her hands on his hands…. And leans back…and rests her head on his shoulder…. AAnd both feels the air and closes their both eyes… their stats for some time in the same position…. After some time… their decided to go… and when their turns back twinkle slips…. And about to fall but catches the rock their… twinkle sees this aand gets shocked… and pulls her up… and hugs her…( u can imagine the kunj and twinkle scene in Goa. When she slips and kunj comes to save her)… she too hugs him… after few min. Kunj breaks the hug and scolds her..
Kunj :- can’t u see twinkle… y u always do this… take care of uself not because of but for mme… how do u think I can leave with out u….. can’t u understand that I love u so much..and can’t see u suffer… you aare my life my….
Before kunj can something twinkle kiss him in a second and bows her eyes due to shyness…( twinkle silently listens all his scolings… and smiles seeing his concern… but when kunj says I love u…. She gets happy and kisses him)
Kunj is shocked with her sudden action…. He can’t understand anything… he just remembers EVRYTHING.. and realises the kiss and touches his lips… and sees her…. blushing… And smiles seeing her…
He goes and makes her to see him…. And holds her face in his hands and comes close to her lips and then sees her… she closes her eyes giving a positive sign… then he immediately kept his lips on hers… and kissed her with full love and care… she too respond to the kiss with tte same passion… both kisses each other with full passion he rubs her cheeks with his hand without breaking the kiss.. she clutches his shirt…. This kiss lasts for 10min… and then their break it due tto lack of oxygen… ( the rain starts when ttheir are kissing )…
He lifts her and takes her to house… he directly takes her to his room without breaking the eye contact. Places her gently on the bed…he too sleeps beside her and sees her… and kisses her forehead and says good nyt…. And goes to sleep… but twinkle stops him… kunj sees her with confusion look….
Twinkle:- kunj can u plz make me your completely….
Kunj:- ur always mine…
Twinkle:- I don’t want any distance between us… so plz make me Ur’s completely…
Kunj understands her words and says are u prepared for this twinkle….
Twinkle hugs him and says s…..
Kunj also hug her… and smiles…. He slowly kisses her neck… and forehead eyes nose checks… by this twinkle clutches the bedsheet…. He then slowly undress her and she too does the same…. Now both are under the bedsheet…. Now both the souls and hearts.. met finally… and they slept in eachother embrace..
FB ends….
Kunj sees twinkle is opening her eyes… so he immediately closes his eyes and pretend as sleeping… twinkle opens her eyes and see kunj beside her sleeping peacefully( pretending)… she remembers last nyt and blushes… and kisses his forehead and about to leave…. But one stronge hand pulls her…. With that jerk she falls on him…
Kunj:- this is not fair… u can’t give my mrng kiss while I’m sleeping…
Twinkle :- ur nt sleeping aaaaa
Kunj:- opens his eyes and puts on bed.. now he is upon twinkle… how can I sleep when ur with me…
Twinkle blushes… kunj smiles… and comes close to her… but he gets call…
Kunj:- who is that idiot… disturbing romance with my wife…
And sees the phn uv calling….
Kunj:- see ur caretaker called me… and lifts the calls…
Uv:- hey kunj wru? What Ru doing…
Kunj:- doing something with my wife… but u can’t understand that… till u get married..
Twinkle listens this and blushes and beats him…
Uv understands…. And control his laugh…
Twinkle:- stupid stop this. .
Kunj:- what I did… and winks at her…
Uv:- ohh kk now stop ur romance… and listen to me…our results are out… and u topped th e university… and got job in ABC company… congrats…
Kunj gets happy and says thankq… and cuts the calltwinkle asks him what happened…
Kunj says everything… twinkle totoo gets happy..
There both got fresh up and goes down…. Uv s already comes and says to everyone…. All are happy…and wishes him….
Kunj and uv goes out for celebrating it….
At nyt… twinkle is waiting for kunj….. she tries to call him… but no response…. Whole nyt she waits for him… but he won’t come…. Twinkle and all family members are tensed…. Just then twinkle gets call from kunj… she happily lifts it… but after listening something… she drops the phn and gets unconscious….
LEAP OF 5YRS:-
Again same villa is shown and in hall same pics are seen but the difference instead of kunj.. uv is there… and in centre instead of family pic…. A big photo of kunj with garland on it…( plz yaar sorry for killing kunj)
And room is shown in which twinkle and uv pics are hanged on the walls….
And a voice comes from kitchen…
Usha:- beta come fast breakfast is ready…
Just then Uv comes from steps and whishes her…
Uv:- ha maa coming… go mrng maa
Usha:- good mrng beta….. where is twinkle….
Just then Lela comes and whishes everyone… twinkle comes and whishes everyone e in cold voice… and silently sits and starts eating… while others see her with sad faces but composes themselves….
Lela:- usha I got to know that mera beta kunj is coming back…
(After listening kunj name twinkle stops eating…. Becomes sad.. but again. Composes…)
Usha:- ha Lela see because of him only I prepared all his fav. Dishes..
Uv :- finally my best frnd is back… we will enjoy a lot…
Listening. To this twinkle gets up.. and says I have some work I’m going out… may be it’s late to come back…
Usha:- twinkle at least wait till kunj comes ….
Twinkle :- no ma… I going..
Uv try’s to say something but twinkle stops him.. and leaves the places…
Everyone becomes sad…
Lela:- when this girl changes…
Uv:- maa give her some time to adjust her self..
Usha:+ it’s been 5yrs…
Just then their hears a voice… everyone gets happy listening to his voice and turns to the entrance…
A 5 yrs boy is seen… and he runs and hugs Lela and usha… and takes bless from them.. and goes near uv and hugs him… I missed u pappa…
Uv :- I missed u too…. Ang hugs him..
Kunj:- pappa where mummaa.. (asks with so much of excitement)
By listening g this everyone gets sad… kunj sees this… feels sad… but composes himself…
Kunj:- I know mamma is busy… kk I’m hungry….
Usha takes him and feeds hihim.. uv feels sad by seeing kunj…
At nyt(12:00) … twinkle comes home and sees everyone are slept….
And goes to her room… and sees uv is still awake… and ask him…
Twinkle:- uv… it’s late… y u didn’t slept…till now..
Uv :- waiting for u… ( angry tone)
twinkle:- means?
Uv :- I wanna talk to u…
Twinkle :- about what….
Uv:- don’t act twinkle… u know about what I’m talking…
Twinkle is busy in doing some work or pretending like that… uv gets angry and turns her…
Uv:- more how many yrs. U need to move on… why can’t u understand that kunj is no more… and only because of u all family members are sad… mainly my son.. kunj…
Twinkle sees him…. But uv continuous…
I know u love him… he is the sign of ur and kunj love… but y Ru nt giving him motherly love…
Because of u I’m dying daily with a guilt that it’s only because of me…
Twnikle I’m saying u last time… just move on and give motherly love to kunj… I’m not aasking u to accept me as husband… Infront of everyone we acts as husband and wife… but reality is we are not more than frndz… we won’t share any wife and husband relation….a ttleast because of kunj(big one) u can move on… this is the last wish… plz at least fulfill y frndz last wish… he goes from their… twinkle sits down and think about kunj… (all moments THAT kunj and twinkle spent together)
And then she gets up and goes outside the room and goes to other room… she enters Into the room… the room is completely dark… she switch on the light… and she sees kunj photos…(actual it is kunj ad twinkle room)…. The room is as same as before… nothing is changed in that room… but the happiness is changed…
She sees all the pics and remember their moments… while walking she got hurt because of table… and sees a CD their… and remembers something…
FB STARTS :-
Twinkle is waiting for kunj… she gets a call from kunj. No. She gets unconscious…. In hospital when she gets back her senses… she ask about kunj… everyone are silent… she goes out and asks everyone about kunj… in whole hospital… but no response… just then she sees uv… standing near a door.. and sees her… she immediately goes near him and asks about kunj…
Uv :- Im sorry twinkle I cannot save him…
( FB STARTS:- when kunj and uv leaves from home… their both goes out and meets some of thetheir frndz.. and enjoys whole day… kunj thinks about twinkle and plan to go… aand says thank to uv.. he too agrees and about to go… their other frndz stops them… teases kunj that twinkle is behaving like typical wife… kunj gets angry on them… but uv stops him… and their where about to leave… one of ttheir frnd challenges kunj about a bike race… they says if kunj wins then he can go but if looses he have to accept that twinkle is like typical wife… this time kunj gets more angry… uv also didn’t stop him… as he also got angry on them…their starts race…kunj aand uv are on one bike…kunj drives and uv sits back….. kunj wins the race… and he leaves that place with a winning enjoyment… uv to goes with him… their coming back to home… then apply break due to sudden speed breaker…. Just then he realises that breaks are not working… he ask uv to jump.. but didn’t listen this… and at the same time a vehicle comes bike falls under the vehicle… both kunj and uv jumps from bike at once… uv got hurt by tree.. but kunj got hurt by another vehicle which comes in opposite directions… both Kunj and uv unconscious… and some one their takes them to hospital and sees kunj phn and sees so many missed from twinkles and call back to them… and inform about it…)
After listening this twinkle is shocked and feels dizzy and about to fall uv holds her…and takes her to room…after sometime twinkle gains conscious and ask to atleat show kunj body… their takes her near his body and sees him… with full shocked face… not even a single drop comes from her face…
Twinkle never talks to anyone… she is like a lifelessly body… and uv feels guilty about his frnd… he thinks he is also responsible for this accident… he to stops talking to everyone… then usha and Lela comes their and says that family members are decided to do uv and twinkle marriage… and says this is kunj last wish… and gives oone CD to them..Uv see it and decided to marry her.. but without seeing only gets ready t marry… as she is still in shock… uv and twinkle gets married… as two 2lifeless body’s are getting married… after few days everyone gets to know that twinkle is carrying kunj child… uv is very happy…and takes complete care… she gives a birth to a baby boy…everyone named him as Kunj…
From then twinkle never accepts baby kunj…. Or gives .motherly love to him… here uv also falls for twinkle.. but never says this to him…
FB ends….
Twinkle see the CD and decides to watch it… and plays it…
CD:- kunj is trying g to sit n bed properly… so that he can face the camera…
Kunj:- hi maa… I’m sorry maa I have to leave… plz take care of urself and my twinkle …. Lela ma u too…
Uv I know u may feel guilty now… but not feel guilty yaar… it is destiny… no one can change… uv if u want to do anything for me then plz became a son to my fafamily…take all my responsibilities…
At last… my siyyappa Queen… ( when twinkle listens this her eyes are filled with tears).. don’t cry… is cant see u crying… twinkle I love u so much…. And I can’t see u suffer…
Just then twinkle feels some one touches her and turns back and sees kunj there…( it is just her imagination..) kunj comes close to her and wipes her tears and says…
Kunj:- ur the best thing that happened to me… I’m sorry I can’t fulfill my promise that I will always their with u… but I will always sees u…from their and shoes stars… if u will suffer I will also… do u want me to suffer..(twinkle nodes her head) twinkle uv is a nice guy… I know he will keep u always happy… plz move on in ur life… don’t dare to cry…or plan a thing that u can come their(again points towards sky)… If u did then I will not talk tto u….
Everyone comes to this world for something… my time is finished.. but u hhad ur time… and spend that with happy…
Twinkle I will always sees u… u can’teven miss me…when ever u want u can talk to me….kk(twinkle nodes as s) and kiss her forehead and she closes her eyes to feel his kiss and then opens her eyes and see no one…. And then goes near window and c stars… and sees one star is very bright…and thinks that is kunj..
AAnd remembers his words… wipes her tears… and go to baby kunj room and sees uv and kunj sleeping… she goes near baby kunj and kiss his forehead… Baby kunj feels her touch and ssays I love u mummaa…in his sleep.. twinkle also says I love too… and sleeps beside him… and keeps her hand on baby kunj… uv who listens this thinks it is dream and smiles and touches her hand and sleeps… twinkle sees this but said nothing…. From window stars are seeing them and one star is very bright.. and kunj face comes in the sky and sees this and smiles… and finally his face becomes as a star…
Thus the story end….
IIm sorry guys for killing kunj… I know many of them don’t like this…
21 Comments
Awesome yaaar
Heyy!! ?
Your story is really very cute .. Yor write so well im shocked 😉 .. But i didnt mind u killin Kunj but gave it a really nice ending of him being a starr ? 🙂
Too good and simply amazing !!
🙂 ?
Wow….it was awesome
Amazing prerma…rula diya yaar
Sorry…prerna…damn keyboard!!!
Loved the story
When Kunj died I felt a little sad but the end showed him to be the star
Loved it
Keep writing so that we keep reading such wonderful stories 🙂
it’s a nice story
and really very heart touching
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you know what happened all the sorrows of TEI being going on a worst phase when sid left the show came suddenly in front of my eyes
but this one is much better than the real story of TEI after Kunj’s death but I want Kunj to be alive forever
Nice bt kunj wuld nt hv died bt loved it emotional….
Awesome and emotional os.. but kunj died?? but I loved how at the end u showed him as a star.. keep writing more 🙂
Prerna luved it…..osum…it had such a depth
Yaar Awsome………..
Dear it was amazing n I was actually crying in the last part ……??
U just rocked………
This was such a good story. I read the whole thing with a smile until i finished reading it did I realize that tears were rolling down my cheek. Chotu Aarav just broke my heart ? and the last scene with the stars, omg I couldn’t anymore…it was AMAZING!
*chotu Kunj
yr prerna fab
yeah i m very sad dat kunj died dats y crying bt luvd d stry so cute n emotional till winj part i luvd it n aftr dat wen twinkle was feeling kunj i lvd it 2 infct i luvd d scene where twinkle was all silent bt osm yr u r fabulous
Amazing …it was outsatanding..I was litterally crying…it was superb…I’m speechless yaar…*hats off to you*…
awesome amazing fabulous emotional sad os….loved it……
Thankq thankq thankq so much… I never expected this much love and support for my story… And I will try my level best… To give my best in my next stories…
amazing…n unique…..kunj is starrr…yeahhhhh..
sorry for late
Dear prernaprem.. i m crying… yaar literally.. it was emotional… n also amazing… u r too goaad.. damn awesome…
Hi Aliza Itz Me Zakiyah! U r on insta Rgt? U told me that ur username is love mehendi designs! Have u kept the name Samina?
Amzing!! Unique!!