hhhlllw.. hhllww.. am back.. with another part of A love story… hope u guys like it… Coz, I get such low comments.. hear… am really upset with it.. but still I find some friends who regularly read… & do comments… & thanks guys.. thanks for supporting me….
recap: swasan surprised.. marriage… & swaragini friendships…
PART-14
A LOVE STORY
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A fine day…. swara was still happy… till she was not entering gym…. the girls gang ( soma,milli,neeta) & swaragini was plan to shopping… & all girls have fun.. rag & laksh now also are in gym….
@gym…
boys are angry with girls.. they have one more male friend who join newly… rishav.. he was all unknown by the couples… so the trio boys are busy to compitie e-o in pushups… yeah.. no one win form our San…. and someone is their who was counting them….
just all enters.. & find jiya is jumping in happiness while hugging San.. he has a killer smile on her face….
jiya: wow… I knew it.. keen it.. awesome.. congratulations…..(and suddenly plant a kiss on his cheeks…..)
and guyss who’s watching it…. rahul gasp in fear… San (was not hugging not anything.. casual)
rishav: (see & shout) arre, swara… & girls… wow… nice
San’s face gone pale to hear her name…. he immediately turn.. & close his eyes.. (after looking her eyes…) ragini was also hell shock… neeta glare at rahul. & soma casually look at rishav… milli hits her own forehead…
rag: vai.. what the hell..??
jiya: hey ragz.. come in.. look what.. San did 100.pushups & in 25….
rag: (happy..) ohh wow.. (but not like her…)
Sw:(smile & lean)
San:(quite shock & smile back… )
swara just cross over him.. & reach to rishav…. : hii.. when u come..??
rish: yeah.. just 45 minutes .
Sw:(holding his hands) wow.. u look good…
San:(flamed in anger) swara…
Sw:haa…??
San:come & start your work.. & u girls also…
neeta: yeah.. yeah… don’t shout.. u boys are not our father or husband… hhuuhh…. (angry & start doing free hands….San more fumbles. )
swara join her… even rag also ignored San.. rahul & San looks e-o helplessly… where milli thinks to tell the truth to jiya….
San: swara… swara.. look at me.. u are doing wrong…
Sw:yeah… yeah.. only fevicol is right… (she call her fevicol)
San:(about to laugh. but manage to control) shona… what is this..
Sw:swara.. (glared at him.. through mirror…)
milli: ohh come on San.. & swara.. pllzz stops your silly fights.. u guys are couples.. so just be mature….
jiya:(shock) what…???
San:(agree with milli to manage her anger) yeah… jiya… we are…
Sw:(turn & shock)
jiya:(laugh naughtily) oppps.. sorry swara… even I have a b/f.. & I knew.. how’s it feell…. but I don’t knew yet… am sorry…. (she reach to her..& hug her) friends..??
Sw:(lil smile.. with jiya) yeah.. & sorry.. too
jiya: Its okk… but pllzz don’t think this way…
San smile but swara again glared at him: noo jiya.. even I knew.. u are innocent.. but some of ppl forgot their status..(meaning like married)
San:(again get sad) swara….
rishav & soma burst out laughing… just them laksh enter….& can guess the all situation…
rag:(smile) hlw..
Lak:hey.. hlw.. what’s up…??
San: (angry) u crack sis.. make me crack….
Lak:(laugh) finally.. finally.. jiju.. I was awaited for it.. when u can recognized her….
Sw:(just got some tears… ) how mean….
milli: swara… ppllzz yarrr..
jiya: hey.. sanky this is too much.. even u feel angry when she goes near riahav….
rishav: pllzz.. mujhe dur rakho.. am innocent soul….
soma:(irritated) just shut your mouth….
neeta: rhaul.. are u enjoining the situation on them.. then be ready…
rahul: (pouts..) jiya is not hugging me.. if so.. then u can told me like this…
Sw:(frustrated..& quite shout) shut up.. just shatup.. guys….just shut up…. thats my personal matter.is.. not & u all make it fun…. & (sigh) ohh god… (leave gym & goes towards changing room)
San:(sad.. she never like dragged her personal matter) swara…
but till she leave…. all get sad…. ragini looks laksh …(friendly) neehul looks e-o…rima (rishav + soma) & milli was just busy to msg in ph.. just talk about them… San look at gate…
swara leave the gym…(for that day.. ) & straight goe story baddi..
at night…BV(Bose villa)
Lak enter with ragini.. & dida shock….
dida: hey.. kya hua.. shona was sad…
Lak:actually dida…(explain)
dida:(laugh) hhahah.. actually she loves him too much….
rag: dida where is she..??
dida:to her room… but yet she wont oppen…
rag: I knew..
Lak:(smile) how will the idiot.. won’t open.. where is maa..??
dida:she is going to Kolkata. for 5 days…
Lak:wow.. its great.. then dida u too go with us.. (wink at rag)
dida:but where..??
rag:(smile ) dida.. how’s your natni decorated her new home.. don’t u wanna See…??
dida:(can understand) well I don’t mind… even I don’t mind to go for a movie… coz ,shona is too much angry…..(laugh)
& they inform San.. as San in.. thy leave them alone…
raglak dida: best of luck….
San:(smile softly)
it was 40 minutes pass… swara open her room..& her eyes was swollen.. she was hurt… (not with San.. with her promised which she taken from San.. to keep him away form her..)
she was shock to see San.. was sitting on couch.. & he was also sad.. as she…
she just run to him..& hug him tightly… (she was just ferklempted)
San hug back.. & (whispers) “am ssorry…. .. she just suddenly do that””
she sobbs in his arms….
“”and I never forgot my status.. I knew… I am madly in love with U.. I knew Am just unpredictable.. but what she done that not my fault… ”
she broke hug & look out for dida… “dida.. dida…” with a pale voice…..
“dida & ragini,laksh was going to movie…” he says while looking in her eyes….
she avoid eye contact.. “okk u just seat.. I will bring coffee for u…”
she was to cold.. too ice.. but he knew.. she hurts to see jiya kissing him….
she was about to go.. San pulled her in his arms. & hug her tightly…
she nighter hug.. nor broke the hug.. she was stands normal… & he warped her more tightly.. in his arms..
“shona.. plzz I knew u are angry… shona.. then punish me…”
“plzz.. let me go.. I can bring coffee for u…”
“no u can’t do this me… U always did the same.. u hurt yourself.. & its tear my heart…. we are in relation… We are couple.. its not suit us….”
“exactly.. I only give u pain… I can’t give h.. happiness.. can’t give u.. any happiness.. still am your wife.. but I rest u.. form using your rights..am sorry.”
now he can get her point.. & soon start kissing her…. first she not reply him…. but due to his actions.. make her weak… & she also reply him…..
after kissing.. swasan touched theirforehead to e-o…& swara again wet eyes…..
“you give me my happiness… & don’t u dare to say it.. what u can give me or not…. aree u are the gal. who stop your feeling for her family.. who knew me better then myself…. & u are saying.. U give me pain…. & if we are talking about evening iscident I must say.. u will react same if anyhow ragini kiss me on my cheeks…. in Amy excitement…… I am looked at jiya that way….. ”
swara looks at him.. instantly. & cups his face…. “”am sorry…..” & hug him tightly…… he smile & hug bcak…… both again kiss each other…. with lots of passion & lots of love……. they broke the kiss for breathing… & swara was happy.. San come to her house for the first time…. took her towards her Rroom… shows her overall the house…. & atlst they start chating & waiting for all…. even due to cahtting swasan have more light romance…….
next part: swasan fighting for fun.. & lake’s Fb…
ohhk… guys now ppllzz.. do comments.. plzz. am waiting for your support.. pllzz guys…
8 Comments
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