Geeeez! So many comments in the last epi! I’m soooooooooooo happy! So, here’s a treat for a rise in the no. of comments! I was initially thinking of writing this one after 3-4 days due to my busy schedule, but your comments made me so happy that I decided to give you this episode as a treat! Hope you like it!
Guys! I mean, the SILENT READERS, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE COMMENT! Even if you don’t like. Now that my ff has crossed 20 comments border, I hope it won’t decrease. 20+ comments would mean a quicker episode. Less comments would mean NO frequent updates. You may then get an epi once a week or one epi in 2 weeks. Choice is yours!
Anyway! I’m really happy today! Thank you all soooooo much for your love and support! Keep reading and KEEP COMMENTING! Love you all! ?
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“Err.. Ragini beta.. Actually.. We.. We want to ask you something..”
“Yes Ariba bi! What happened?”
“Wo.. Actually.. We.. We.. You..”
“Bi?? What happened?” Ragini asked, calmly.
Ariba bi looked at Laksh and Mamu until she blurted,
“The weather is so good! Isn’t it?”
Laksh and Mamu facepalmed themselves.
“Huh? Oh yes! You know, I’m here… As in Mumbai, for the first time!” Ragini spoke excitedly.
Laksh knew that there wasn’t any point in staying there anymore. He knew Ariba bi and mamu won’t ask anything, and she won’t give a straight answer to him, if he himself asked. He stood up and went to his room, which Ragini deliberately ignored.
After an hour, everybody went down. Ragini went to her room, Mamu had some work so he left, and Ariba bi proceeded towards the kitchen to prepare the dinner.
“Ariba bi! Why didn’t you ask her?”
“Laksh baba, I tried! But.. You know na.. She’s a tigress! She would have eaten me raw if I asked her! I’m afraid of her! Did you forget what she did with you? How she blackmailed you to stay here? Ya Allah! No no no! I have a daughter! I’ve to get her married! I don’t want to die so soon! She..”
“Okay okay! Let it be! Just.. Leave it!”
The clock struck 2:45 when Laksh felt restless. He had always been a deep sleeper. His friends called him panda because of that. But tonight he wasn’t getting sleep. He felt as if someone close to him needs him.
2:52. Laksh got up and decided to go to the terrace. Maybe the soft night breeze would ease him. His decision seemed to be appropriate to him as he felt the breeze once he entered the terrace area. He walked further. Feeling much better. His steps stopped at seeing a silhouette. Is it a silhouette or? He slowly walked towards it.
“What are you doing here so late?” Laksh asked astonishingly.
“Uhm.. I.. I was just.. Nothing.. Just.. No.. Nothing!”
“Ms. Runaway, are you crying?”
Ragini turned to the other side, to prevent him knowing the obvious.
“N.. No! I.. I’m not.. Crying! Why will.. Why will I cry? I make people cry!” Ragini tried to compose herself.
“Well, that’s true! You make people cry! That’s why I’m surprised that there exists someone who can make you cry!”
Ragini laughed a little but that didn’t stop the tears from falling down, and this was not unnoticed by Laksh.
“Hmm! So this is how trouble cries!”
“Mr. Future! Do you want me to convert you into history?”
“I bet you can’t! Atleast not like this!” Laksh mocked while pointing at her tears.
Ragini looked at him angrily and after a while started laughing heartily. Laksh too joined her. She looked different right now. Vulnerable. Innocent. Beautiful. Laksh smiled.
“So, what happened? Why were you crying?”
“No.. Nothing.. Just..”
“Don’t lie! I know I’ve been a pighead since yesterday, but I’m not that bad! You can share it with me. Moreover, I’m a really good listener!”
Ragini smiled as tears again started brimming. “I was.. Just thinking.. What is happening! I had to be in Delhi, infact, right now I would have been in New York, but here I am! At a stranger’s place! Forcefully! Against your wish! All I had planned.. Just..”
Ragini choked at her words. She knew she couldn’t pretend to be that strong Ragini Sharma anymore. Atleast for now. Tears flowed down her cheeks as she stared at the moon.
“You know, life is very unpredictable! At one time, it will give you everything, every happiness! A second later, you’ll be struggling to get that happiness back!” Ragini continued as Laksh patiently listened to her.
“Do you regret running away from your..”
“No! Not at all! I’m very proud of myself instead! I would have regretted my whole life had I married that moron!”
“Hmm! Strangest! By the way, yesterday you were saying that I kidnapped you. You also called some Veeru’s man. Why? I mean..”
“That was a misunderstanding!”
“I know. I mean.. Who’s Veeru? Sholay?”
“Hell no!” Ragini laughed hard at that until she was out of breath. “No no! This Veeru is a useless moron! Unlike Sholay’s! God!”
“But who is he?”
“My so-called ex-fiancé! Virender Chaddha!”
“But why will he kidnap you?”
“Mr. Curious Case of Future Maheshwari, I think it’s enough for today! I’m feeling very sleepy! By the way, when will your phone get repaired?”
“It’s done. I’ll pick it tomorrow!”
“Hm! Anyway, goodnight!”
“G’night!” Laksh smiled.
•••
*Splash*
“What the f**k! How dare you?”
“Morning Mr. Future!”
“f**k off!”
“Wake up! And go fetch your phone!”
“It’s my phone! I’ll go as per my wishes!”
“Do you want me to cut this into pieces?” Ragini held a green shirt and pointed a scissor to it.
“How dare you?”
“I’m very daring!”
“You..”
“Now you’re awake, anyway! Fetch your phone as soon as possible and come take this shirt from me!”
“Why are you so bothered about my phone?”
“I’ve to make a call!”
“You can use Ariba bi’s phone for that!”
“International call!” Ragini retorted and walked out of his room, with the shirt.
•••
“Here! Call whomsoever you want and just go with him or her!” Laksh exclaimed as he handed his phone to Ragini.
Like a small child, she immediately grabbed the phone and dialled a number which was stamped in her mind and on her fingers. Excited would be the most underrated word for what Ragini was right now. But soon, the excitement over her face turned into disappointment as the number could not be reached. Sadly, she handed his phone back to him.
“What happened?”
“It’s still unreachable!” Ragini replied sadly.
“Still?” Laksh asked questioningly.
“Hm. From the past two months, I’m not able to contact him. He’d informed me, though. He had told me that he would be unavailable for a few days. And now..”
“He’s your?”
“Everything! My life, my love! My Sanskar!”
47 Comments
Twist twist..excited to read next…
Thank you dear! Keep reading to unfold many more twists! 😀 😀
wth another shock aka ragini is cute her tashan masti bubbly nature i like amma bi usko apni beti ki shadi tak Allah hifazat karey ameen
inshallah u will get more than comments
ur awesum writer
Thank you so so so much lisa! Your comment made me smile widely! Thank you so much! May God bless you dear! 😀 :* <3
Awww… surprise… I ddn expect it to be sanskar… wow exciting. . I want mre raglak. It’s really a nice story
Well, I’ll to maintain this excitement in you regarding this ff! Thank you nitu! 😀 🙂
awesome
Ty dear! 🙂
amazing rag love sanskar no next part soon yaa write regularly
Sure dear! But yes, the no. of comments will surely decide how frequent I post! Anyway, keep reading! 🙂 😀
whoa!!!! kahani mein twist. sanskar is her lover….. awesome update
The story is replete of unexpected twists dear! Some are delightful, well most of them would be delightful, a few may not be so happy ones. Anyway, I’ll try my best to keep you entertained! Thank you dear! 😀 😀
Great update. Aww Ariba bi is such a cutie. The poor woman is so worried due to her fear of Ragini ?. And RagLak were just amazing. I loved how Laksh comforted Ragini and how RagLak have their own distinctive names that they call each other: Miss Runway/ Mr Future. I find that very sweet ❤️. Ohh and I like this new twist of Sanskar, I wonder why he’s been unreachable though. Can’t wait to read more ?
You know Fats? Even I like the names that they call each other! It sounds cute, no? And Ariba bi is my favorite! She’s very sweet and very cute! Lastly, the twist! Huhuhaha! Sanskar! Well, there is a lot more to unfold! Why is he unreachable? You’ll know it later dear! Thank you so much for your lovely comment Fats! 😀 😀 😀 😀
Nice update dear????☺☺
Keep your good work
Thank you so much rethu! 😀 🙂
awesome
Thanks! 🙂
awesome
Ty saranya! 🙂
nice….
Thank you dear! 🙂
Nice
Thanks Sindhura! 🙂
wow simply superb episode. I loved it. Raglak scenes are also superb
Thank you Ammu! 😀 🙂
Wow…nyc episode. But I think sanskar will cross check her and leave her . Then laksh will marry her . Ragni will fall in love with laksh maybe .
Nice thought! Let’s see what happens! And thank you dear! 🙂 😀
Superb
Thanks lovely! 🙂
I can’t believe in sanskar. I never thought that sanky’s will be d one for whom she eloped
But he’s the one she eloped for! Anyway, many more twists are waiting, so keep reading! And thank you dear! 😀 🙂
Verry good episode i realy liked it ???
Thank you so much Rashida! I’m glad you liked it! 😀 😀
U r super awsm azu loved it like hell
Thank you so much Megha! 😀
Awesome very interesting update next part soon
Thank you Lucky! I’ve uploaded the next part, by the way. Hope you like it too! 🙂
superb
Ty dear! 🙂
nyc episode
Thanks priya! 🙂
woww it is becoming interesting day by day sooo the person is sanskar lovely w8ing fr next part… update soon can’t w8??
I’m glad you liked it! Thank you! By the way, I’ve uploaded the next part! Hope you like it too! 😀 🙂
superb but i thnk sanskar married some one
Hmm.. Wait and watch what unfolds! Keep reading dear! And thank you! 😀 🙂
Mind blowing