Hey Guys Maryam here…. So sorry for not completing my ff…actually I was a little busy n totally forgot about my story…but when I remember I realised it was too late to update…so thought to come up with a OS for u guys…it’s my first ever one shot…so plz encourage me…n leave ur valuable comments. ..
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It’s a story of two besties….I hope u will like it….
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Sanskar and Laksh were friend since childhood…not just friends but actually they were like two brothers of different mothers…they were students of same standard and were living together for their studies….
1 JULY 2015….
Sanskar and Laksh were on the way to their college.it was the first day of college and both of them were very exited….Sanskar saw an old man crossing road near the college,And a car was coming from the backside of that old man.The car was about to hit the man,But at the mean time Sanskar ran and pushed the man away….Abhi was left open mouth when he saw a beautiful girl inside the car..Suddenly the car stopped N the girl came out. She looked terrified, Quickly she ran to the man..
Girl: I am so sorry Actually my phone rang N I was just trying to receive the call but suddenly……..I am sorry…
the girl explained with a terrified voice..
Sanskar: wait..wait…it’s okay…He’s alright, no need to worry….. ( N help the man to cross the road).
The Girl smiled N said”Nice Guy” with low sound….Laksh was still watching her, he noticed HER SMILE, HER EYES,HER LIPS, THE WAY SHE TALKED,N THE WAY SHE MOVED..
Suddenly from other side of the road..
Sanskar: where are u lost Laksh.. We’re getting late,let’s move..
Laksh:no…nowhere….huh, let’s go…
After Dinner…
Sanskar served Abhi his Medicines and a glass of water…Laksh knew he was a patient of heart disease but he didn’t know that he had a very short life….ONLY SANSKAR KNEW….HE KEPT IT AS A SECRET..
Sanskar: how are u feeling nowadays??
Laksh:…………
He didn’t reply…
Sanskar: laksh?? ( he called him)
Laksh was silent.. Sanskar turned N went to Abhi.. Sanskar saw him hiding something under pillow,
Sanskar: What’s that??
Laksh smiled N said ” A Sketch”…
Sanskar: A sketch?? Of whom.
Laksh: A Girl….
Sanskar: Amhm…What’s her name?
Laksh: I don’t know, but I felt something awesome when I saw her, I think I’ve fallen for her?
But Tring Tring… Telephone rang sanskar wenter yof receive the call….
In college…..
Sanskar was searching Laksh…He looked everywhere but couldn’t find him…Finally, he decided to check in library…Suddenly he strike with a girl at the door of library N All the books fell down from her hand….Sanskar helped her to pick the books..They looked at each other. ..
Sanskar: Sorry!!
Girl:(smiled) it’s okay…
Sanskar: but…..you here??
Girl: Yeah, I’ve joined this college yesterday..
Sanskar: Oh, N your Name…
Girls: Swara,…..N your’s.??
Sanskar: Sanskar…..Amm..Actually I am hurried, looking for my friend.. I’ve to go.
Swara: Oh, okay..
Sanskar went to the library..But she was still smiling….☺ A strange Feeling born in her heart…
Laksh was never interested in studies, But that day, sanskar became shocked when he saw Laksh in library..
sanskar: Laksh….. you here?
Laksh: Yah..why what’s wrong.. ( trying to cover)
Sanskar: I never saw yoy in library before..But today….
Laksh: Amm…Actually I am here just to see her …n u know what she was here beside me..
Sanskar: wow… did you talk to her?
Laksh: No?…I tried but I couldn’t..
Sanskar: Why??
Laksh: I was nervous..don’t know what happened to me….Whenever I see her, I feel amazing….My heart starts beating Faster..Mind stops working…N………..
Sanskar: wait wait….I know how much you love her..I wish you’ll get ur love Bro, ….I’ll pray for you…
Laksh smiled..
August 5 2015..
Abhi used to see her secretly all the time…it became his habit to go to library to see her…it was hard for him to stay without looking at her …
After a long time Laksh talked to swara….They became friends…..That was the great day for him..Sanskar was also happy seeing him happy…
10 September 2015.
In morning Sunshine Park…Swara saw sanskar sitting alone..She went near to him with two cups of coffee in her hand….
Swara: Hey Good morning.. ( she gave him one cup of coffee)..
Sanskar: Good morning N thank you. .
swara: well you know one thing? No thank you in friendship….
sanskar: Oh sorry..
swara: Uff…No sorry No thank you….
……..The looked at each other N smiled……They talked for several minutes…
Time made them closer..They spent their maximum time talking to each other….Texting, Chatting, N phone calls. ..From morning to evening N evening to morning…..They share each N every small things about them…..it became their habit to keep in touch for the whole day….Their Feeling for each other got more stronger….By the time they FELL IN LOVE….Sanskar usually used to see her in his dreams. …They liked each other very much but afraid to express their Feelings…they thought that it can ruin their Friendship..
13 February 2016..
A Day before valentines Day…..Sandkar phone rang…
Ssnskar:hello..
swara: hi sanskar it’s me swara
sanskar: Oh. .hi swara..
swara: I want to meet up with you Actually I’ve to say something
sanskar: Yeah sure..I also want to say something to you swara..
She smiled…
swara: really…
sanskar: yeah..
swara: okay then tomorrow morning I’ll be there waiting for you at sunshine park…
sanskar: okay! See you there..
swara:Bye..
sanskar: Bye…
Both hangs up….
But suddenly Sanskar heard a sound of thinges falling down on floor in his room….When he went there, he saw Laksh was lying in floor N bleeding ftom his mouth,,….sanskar quickly called ambulance…..
After spending 5 hours in hospital Laksh opened his eyes…Sanskar went near him..Laksh looks at him..
Sanskar:How are you Feeling now??
Laksh: (faintly) little Good….
Laksh replied n smiled…..But sanskar was still worried fir him
Laksh: I know I don’t have much time to live.. I think I’m taking my last breath sanskar..
Tears rolled out ftom Sanskar eyes
Sanskar: No laksh, Don’t say that..Nothing will, happen to you. .Doctor has told me that you’ll be fine soon…
Laksh: how many times you will lie sanskar? I have seen my report and I know I’ve a hole in my heart and I don’t have much time to live..
Sanskar held him tight and started crying
Laksh: sanskar plz don’t cry.. stay strong…I need to tell u something before I go….I have a important work left,, Will you help me to do it?
Sanskar: Yeas laksh…I’ll do anything for you…Just tell me I’ll do it…..
Laksh gives a rose N ring to sanskar
laksh: You know tomorrow is valentines day..and I have this rose n ring for her…. .But how Unlucky I am…I can’t give this to her… ( tears rolls out of his eyes)
Sanskar: dont worry I’ll take this to her….But what’s her name?…I haven’t seen her..
Laksh: here I’ve a sketch of her, Take it..
Sanskar get shocked when he saw the sketch..he couldn’t believe his eyes…IT WAS SWARA…
Laksh: Her name is swara. She is our classmate, you may know her..I always lover her Now u have to take this rose n ring g to her on mu behalf…
Sanskar couldn’t say anything he just said, Okay I’ll. ..
14 February 2016..
Swara reached the sunshine park an hour earlier with a rose in her hand…..
2 hour passed..
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3 hour passed
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4 hour passed
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Sanskar didn’t came…
She threw the rose..When she turned, she sw sanskar was coming with a rose in his hand…..She became do happy and Excited..
Sanskar came
Sanskar: Hi, I want to say something…
she smiled…
swara: I know what u want to say…but first tell me why are u late?
This is for you” sanskar gave her the ring N the rose..
Swara became soo happy..She hugged him tight….Sanskar eyes became Full of Tears. ….He moved away..
Sanskar:..That…..that rose n ring are from Laksh ( choking )
She just froze
swara: What??
Sanskar: Laksh has sent those for you…He…he loves u so much. …Much more than everyone… (trying to hold his tears)
Swara: And don’t you?..
Sanskar couldn’t say anything…
Swara: tell me sanskar don’t you Love me. ..
Sanskar: No I don’t. …I don’t Love you…
Tears rolled from both of their eyes…
Sanskar walked away….
She ran like mad….
But suddenly..
Sanskar heard a noice of people….He turned back n saw a crowd of people on road beside the park…
his heart started beating Faster. …he Quickly ran to the crowd…N what he saw shattered him completely…..he saw swara lying on the road in the pool of blood….he hurriedly look her to the nearby hospital…..She was admitted in ICU…..
After an hour doctor came out n said “she will be fine.she needs some rest now…you can meet her after few hours…..he smiled a little N thanked the Doctor…
But…Tring Trin..his phone rang…
Caller: Mr. Sanskar, your friends condition is getting more serious, plz come fast..
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He reached the hospital where Laksh wax admitted and looked through the window…..And he aw Laksh was bleeding drop his mouth N was crying. ……watching him in this condition he broke down and cried our loud…Laksh was taking his last breath,He was Fighting Against Death……
And……
After few minutes he slept FOREVER…..He left sanskar he left the world….He Died…
With tears in his eyes, Sanskar sat there with a thud motionless for Hours…..He Felt as if he had been soul sucked…
After a Few hours, He went to meet Swara…
But, Once Again…
He was shocked when he saw bleeding ftom Swara hand..she had cut her vein….It was too Late….She was No More……
He shouted liked a mad…
He felt as if his whole world had come crashing down. ….
He found a piece of paper in her Hand…And there it was written.
Sanskar you have been my Best friend since a long time…And I’ve been so lucky to have you in my life…i love you sanskar..i’ve always loved you…..n i thought you love me too….but i was wrong…..you meant my world to me…there was no meaning of living without you, so i left the world..
but my love will be forever…
tears fell continously from his eyes…..
he lost his brother like friend and his love too….
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Thank god…finished with the story…..I hope you guys will guys it….plz plz plz leave your precious Comments..they really means a lot. …
Love you guys….
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GOD Bless you
13 Comments
nice os..
Hey guys I am the author…Maryam…..so sorry for the mistakes…actually I wrote abhi instead of laksh…I am so sorry…actually I was watching Kum Kum bagya..while writing this ……
Dear sorry but I already seen this story video on youtube
Ya even i have seen the exactly same story on youtube reymon was the name of one character
Maryam… its so nice.. written beautifully .no matter where u get d concept but writing it, is difficult job….. love to read much more…. keep writing
Hey! Awesome!!.. No words!! ???????
Awesome
Nice one dear…. Loved it ???????
It’s so heart touching.Loved it.. Keep writing like this.
Take care
Keep smiling
awsm
Nice story dear
unnecessary sacrifice 🙁
Its really emotional