Hey guys…this is aarion…I am going to start a off that I hope all of you would love….so let’s start..
Character sketch…
Suman Tiwari – a young bubbly girl….in 11th grade. Lives in Delhi with her parents….
Sonakshi-elder sister is suman …. Studying in 12th grade….
Shravan- a highly intelligent boy…pampered by his father..mother gave divorce to shravan’s dad….shravan and suman share a deep friendship together…studying in suman’s class…
Ramnath – shravan’s dad
Nirmala- shravan’s mom
Priya-suman and sonakahi’s mom
Nithin- priya’s husband
Other minor character’s like friends, relatives,servants etc….
Let’s start with episode….
Sun rays enter in a room…two girls are sleeping together…..someone calls…sumo…sona ….now get up…..or else you will be late for your school…..this is none other than Priya…..
Maaaa…we already woke up….(still on bed) said sumo….
Priya:now don’t tell lies and get up…nithin….please tell them to get upp…..
Nothing:(in the duos room) now my sweet daughter’s get up….
Duos(sona sumo):OK dad …..
Later they get ready and go to the school while riding their respective bicycle’s….
sumo: sona , why so you always dig in your books and study? Be like me.Enjoy your life…
Sona:if I will not , then who will finish our family debts…..
Sumo: don’t worry dad is there
Sona:dad……whoa….if he works for his whole life also it cannot be finished….
Sumo: stop stop…if I listen to you I will get maddddd…..you yourself finish it…I believe in dad….
In this short of time they reach the school….
As son a studies in 12 th grade,she has another block for her class….they finish their tata bye bye and go to their respective classes….
Sumo(in her mind):where is this shravu??????????
Just then someone comes from behind and scares her….
It is shravan….
Sumo: shravan keep bacche…I will not leave you…….
After that she runs behind him…..
Precap:secret
I think this is enough for this episode….I hope you all like it and till then bye…….
With loads of love ……
Aarion
14 Comments
Is ff mein Dev Babu nhi h kya??
Short episode but like it another time write large one.
whr is dev?
Short and sweet but where is Dev Dixit ???
nyc dear !!
but confused ..no dev babu into !!!
Nice one ???
Nice episode dear and continue but one thing dev, where is he?????
Hey hey hey….I just looked in the site and found out that my post has been apploded…..dev babu is not here because on my ff he will be introduced later…picture to abhi Baki he mere doston….don’t woryy he is there in this story…. thankyou all for loving my story… will upload next episode tomorrow itself…
With loads of love
Aarion
Nice one na naa not nice its amazing dear post soon. Little bite more qurious to know what is stored their in ur ff for us so post soon exiciteddddddddd. Is this ur first ff on tu for us (DEVAKSHI)???? I haven’t seen u before thats why, hope u understand
A very nice start keep it up..dear..
May dev ki entry abhi baaki hai????
Nice start. So ShraMan already together nd Dev is all missing. lol. Post next part soon. Don’t keep the secret to urself for too long. Hume bhi bolo yaar. So pls pls pls post ASAP
Hey guys…I have published the next episode and waiting for its review by the site hope you all love it and till then bye
With love
Aarion
nice intro and part one but where is deeeeev???
Suspence don’t worry he is there thank you for liking my ff …..
With love
Aarion…..