*************Prologue*************
A beautiful manshion is shown ….there was a name plate in which it was written
“GADODIA MANSHION” ….
Inside the mansion a lady ….shown arranging the dining table …
Lady:(to servant) suresh ..
Suresh:haan Malkin
Lady:wo go n ask laksh to come …for breakfast
Suresh:okay Malkin
Just then a voice comes
Voice:uski koi zarurat nahi hai coz laksh khud hi aagaya Maa
Lady turns and looks at the person who was standing with a bright smile on his face ..
Lady:(smiles) laksh …come have ur bf
{It is laksh and the lady is sumi}
Laksh:haan . ..but where is papa
Sumi:morning walk
Laksh:ohh k …
He sits on the chair ..
Sumi:laksh ….as ur papa is not there ..
Do me a favour beta
Laksh:maa just order ….i will do whatever u will ask me to do
Sumi:k. . then plz ..go n wake shona
Laksh:(looks at her) noway …..I’m not gonna wake tat kumbarkan
Sumi:wat….just now u said tat u will do whatever I will ask u
Laksh:haan…but ……
Sumi:if ur papa wouldn’t have gone for walking ….he would have wake her …
Then y would I ask ur help
Laksh:okay okay ma I will wake her
Sumi:(smiles) tat like my son. ..now go
He smiles ..nodes and leaves from there
And a room which is beautiful decorated
With all type of pink and red lace ..paints
…sceneries etc ….
There was huge bed on which a beautiful angel was sleeping with a angelic smile on her beautiful face
Laksh looks at her ….goes towards her
And
Laksh:(shakes her) Swara…..Swara…Swara
(It is our beautiful swara)
She cover herself more with the bedsheets
He shakes his head in irritation and pulls the blanket
Laskh:swara get up I said
Swara:(sleepy tone ) oh who thz donkey waking me so early
Laksh:swara ….thz is laksh ur bro
Swara:(sleepy tone_) laksh ….arrgg oh God thz bhai always irritate me chi…..I feel to rolll him like a ball …kick him punch him …play football using him as a ball
Laksh:(anger) swaraaaaaaaa i will kill u
Swara gets up with a jerk
Swara:(looks at him) bhai…u (rubs her eyes) wt r u doing here
Laksh:I came to wake u ….and now without wasting any time just get up ….
Swara:bhai u go from here ..don’t disturb my sleep …
She again covers herself more with blanket
Laksh:swara I’m asking u to wake for the last time (anger)
Swara:_ok bye
He shakes his head in irritation …
Laksh:okay I’m leaving ….(he was abt to go but turns and) but I think from today ur clg gonna start right
Hearing thz she getsup immediately
Swara:(keeps hand on her head) omg bhai I totally frgt abt it
Looks at him .. Jumps from the bed and kisses his cheeks
Swara:(smiles)thank u bhai for waking me
Laksh:ur wlcm my sis
Swara:now go from here I should get ready. ……or else I will be late for clg
Laksh shakes his head in irritation and leaves from there
Later
Laksh ,sumi,shekar was having the breakfast…
Swara comes there wearing a hot pink crop top and a black hoodies …
She goes towards shekar kisses him on his cheeks
Swara:(smiles) good morning papa. ..
(Looks at sumi) good morning ma
Sumi:good morning shona come have ur breakfast
Shekar:(smiles) haan come ..I will feed u
Swara nodes and sits beside shekar
Laksh:papa y r u feeding she is not a small kid …let her have by herself
Shekar:laksh she is always a small kid no matter how big she is grown
Swara:right papa ……(to laksh) and bhai stop being jealous okay
Laksh makes faces. ….
Swara laughs ….
Swara:okay papa …ma bye I’m getting late for CLG
Shekar and sumi:bye beta
Laksh:swara wait let me leave u still the gate
Swara:(teases) haan come ….instead of leaving me still gate …see ur rrrrrrr
Laksh: swaraaaaaaaaaaaaa……come
He drags her ….sumi and shekar laughs
Both swara and laksh comes out
Just then a girl come from opposite Mansion which was also a huge and beautiful ….
Swara looks at her …runs and hug her
Swara:hi ragini …
Ragini:(smiles & break hug) hi swara …u know how much I missed u ..
Swara:(teases) missed me ..orrrr my bro
Ragini:(blushes) swaraaaa
Laksh:(smiles) hi ragini
Ragini:hi laksh
Swara:if ur hi hi hogaya ho tho. ..rags clg chalien
Rags smiles n nodes
Both was abt to leave but
Laksh:ragini
Ragini:(turns )haan laksh
Laksh: WO come…….
Swara:(interrupts)haan haan she will come don’t worry ..and I will accompany her. ….(to ragini) rags abb chal
She drags her ….start the scooty ….asks her to sit and leaves from there
Laksh:bye (smiles)
Swara:haan bye bro
Laksh turns and was abt to go ….but a voice comes from back
Voice:hey hi lucky …boy
Laksh immediately turns with a surprised and a happy look
Laksh:omg …Sanky …u here
(It is sanskar)
Sanskar smiles …shakes his hand and hugs him
Sanskar:yeah
Laksh:(release the hug) but how come. .
(Surprised look)
Sanskar:haa yesterday only I came from London ….
Laksh:but u dnt in from me abt ur arrival
Sanskar:chill dude thought to give u a surprise
Laksh:huh! But still can’t believe tat finally u came after 5long years …and ragini also dnt said abt ur arrival
Sanskar:wat to do coz of u my sis frgt abt me (fake crying face)
Laksh:hahaha stop it
Sanskar:hey……
His words were cutoff by a fatty boy came running and huged laksh
Laksh:(breaks the hug) shlok yeh kya karaha hai chi
Shlok:it called a hug dude bole tho jhapi
Laksh:(looks at him & Punch’s his stomach) still faty ..
Sanskar:hahahaha lucky u don’t know dude now he eats more than before he used to
Shlok:sanky …stop keeping eye on me
Sanky:hahahaha lol …my eyes r perfect for me y should I keep for u
Laksh:hahahaha lol….k sanky ..now I have to leave for office see u later
Shlok: wat yaar lucky ur frnds came after so many years and u want to go office …come let’s hangout like before
Lucky:dude its important so have to go….
But sure 2mro we will do full masti
Sanky:haa it’s k dude ….waise we r also going for office only …so come lets go by my jeep
Lucky:wat u joined office
Sanky:hahaha asked me to join….now come lets go
Laksh and shlok nodes
Trio sits in jeep …laksh and sanskar in front seat and shlok at back
Laksh:waise how many hot chicks were ur girlfriend dude (to sanskar)
Sanskar just looks at him and gives him a cute smile and turns his face
While shlok burst into laugh
Laksh looks at him
Laksh:wt happen dude y r u laughing like a mad
Shlok:hahahaha coz of ur question which u asked to sanky hahahaha
Lucky:wt soo funny in tat
Shlok:hahahaha sanky dnt have not even 1 gf u know hahaha sometimes I think sanky is tat type……I’m afraid also if he do something with me
At thz sanskar stops the car and gives him a death glare
Sanky:chii I Will kick u if u dnt shut ur mouth
Shlok closes his mouth
Laksh:hahahahaha lol ……(looks at sanky)
But dude is it true u dnt have any gf
Sanskar:yes
Laksh:(surprise) wat ur handsome and any chick would be flat for ur one look …..then y dnt have a gf
Sanskar:(smiles)coz all tat girls …mai meri wali koi nahi thi
Laksh:Aur tumhari wali kon hai
Sanskar looks at him and smiles …..
Turns and looks at the sky
Sanskar:meri wali ….(pointing to sky) whom he had made only for me ….
Who just belongs to me …who is only mine
Screen shifts to the ABC clg
Swara parks the scooty in full hurry ….drags ragini and runs
Ragini:arrey swara slowly yaar …u always do thz ..
Swara:arrrey rags u know right how eager I will be to see tat….
Ragini:haan haan I know
They stands in front of small box which is sticked to the wall
Swara was smiling breathing heavily
Ragini:(looks at her) uffo swara stop blushing and plz take it
Swara blushes ….nodes and puts her hand inside the box ….and takes a paper which is fully decorated by hearts
She opens it and reads
~~~letter~~~~
Bahut khubsurat ho tum!
Kabhi main Jo kah du mohabbat hai tumse;
Toh mujhe galat mat samjna ki merit
Zarurat ho tum;
Bahut khubsurath ho tum!
Hain phoolon ki dali ye baahe tumhari;
Hain khamosh jadu nigahein tumhari;
Hain beege laboon ki hasin tumhari;
Jo kaante ho sab apne daman me raklu;
Saja du main kaliyan se rash tumhari;
Nazar we zamane ki khud ko bachana;
Kisi aur se dekho dil na lagana
Ki meri amanat ho tum;
Meri dua ho tum ;
Bahut khoobsurath ho tum!!!
**I LOVE U ****
Yours n only yours
Admire
Reading thz she had blushing smile on her face …ragini also smiles looking at her
Just then they hears a voice
Voice:ohhhoo again secret admire ka letter hai huh!
Ragini:(turns) hi kavya ..
Kavya:hi rags (to swara) Aur swara tera secret admire is sending thz love letters for from 7 long years but still he dnt met u but still u love him
Swara:haan(blushes) coz my love is not for his physical present ..I love him from heart and he also does so …actually his love is more than my love to him…..coz each of his letter he had always expressed his love
Kavya:okay stop giving Bashan on love or else faint
Swaragini laughs
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Hi guys tanu is back with a new ff
My exams r over now I’m free yaar so thought of new ff
Hope u all liked it
Plz give ur views should I continue thz or not
Thank u all guys. .bye love u all
64 Comments
Awesome
Thank u dr
Awesome prologue….plz continue soon..
Thank u dr for liking it
Hi tanu dear seeing the title itself I understood that it will be u for sure.I checked the name first before reading.I liked it so much…I guess that secret admirer is our sanky because other than our sanky no one could dare to write letters to our swara right..Hope my guess is correct???..Try to update you r my life soon as you made me waiting for so long…BTW how did u write ur exams????Love u as always????
Thank u soo much dr ….haha i know abt the title ………and abt ur guess of sanky being secret admire let’s who will. Be it .u will come to know soon
And haan i will update you r my life!
Asap inshallah thank once again dr
nice
Thank dr
goonaa be interesting ……..
post asap 😉 😉 😉
Thank u dr ….keep commenting dr
And sure will post ASAP
awesome
Thank dr
Wow dr…..just fantastic….
Waiting fr next part
Thank u dr for ur lovely comment
Awesome…
Thank u dr
nice
Thanks yaar
awesome next episode soon
Thank u dr and haan will post next part asap
wen u will write swasan you are my life
You r my life ..will update soon dr but don’t know when
Hii tanu I am a silent reader of your ffs and they all are just amazing…truly you are a fantastic writer..the way you describe each scene and using of songs according to the the scenes is just commendable….and even your new ff is also looking interesting… I know you got stuck in your exam and I wish you get good marks but now please post your you are my life…please please
Thank u soo much yaar …for ur lovely comment I’m glad tat u love my ff …..
And abt you r my life inshallah will update soon dr and thank u once for not being a silent reader any more
Wow its awesome…..loved it….
Thank dr for loving it
I guess the secret admirer is sanky.waiting for next update.
Thank u dr amd haan the next part will update soon
Wow awesome dear
Thank u ani dr
Welcome back tanu dr… Awesome update n start…. Keep writing… Keep smiling…. Plz update ur my life sooooooon…. All the best for your results
Thanks yaar sweety ….and
Inshallah you r my life will update soon
But not sure when yaar ….i get time i will write it ……and thank u for ur wishes for my result ..
Good story
Thank u dr
heyy after sooo many days prolouge was beautiful i guess screate admire should be sannkkkyyyyyy plzzzz i want screate admire as sannnnkkkkyyyy
Thank u dr ……hahaha hmm
Secret admire …u will come to know
Soon ..whether it is sanky or
Someone else ….but not so soon
Secret admirer!!!! lalalalalala it’s Sanskar..((i guess)). from 7 years she is getting those letters…. n now Sanskar has returned from London after 5 years… i think he loved her from 7 years… but couldn’t tell her… **me n my silly guesses*
thnk Tanu for ur beautiful n funny chappy..
Thank u sooooo much yaar ….hahaha abt secret admire lets see is it sanky
Or someone else …and I’m glad tat
U loved it
Awesome…!! Continue soon
Thank u dr ….will continue soon
Awsome
Thank u paru dr
Wowwwww…..superb tanu…
Plz nxt update asap….rly miz u dear….
Thank usooooo much yaar and haan will update next part asap ….miss u too dr
Soooo nice just can’t wait for next 1….sanky is swara’s secret admire naa??
Thank u dr. And abt ur guess hmmm let’s see dr
nice..
Thank u dr
Amazing
Thanks yaar
Loved it
Thaanks yaar …..im glad tat u loved it
superb
Thank u dr
More than awesome
Thank U dr
Awesome dea.., but 1st tell when u’ll post swasan u r my life..,I’m waiting 4 dat from too long,plzz post it asap,bcoz dis ff is one of from my d most favourite ff,I’m eagerly waiting 4 dat..,
Thank u soooooo much yaar
And you r my life i will surely post it if I get time …thank u once again
Amazing!!!