Hi guys ! so this is my first shot at writing a two shot story of swasan ! my favourite !!here we go wiith this :
Boy: hmm now how do i look?
Girl: omg!! U loook so hot ! i cant even stay in this room ! its become burning hot for me !
Boy: oh ..then i certaninely look very very bad in this … i am going to change
After changing
Boy: now how do i look?!!
Girl: u look okay … i mean not so handsome also ..u look fine …okay …maybe just nice..idk
Boy: ah! Then i certaninely must be looking fab ! i am going to wear this for my event !
Girl: wat?? Y ask my opinion if u r going to dress otherwise ! uff
Boy: oh my swara … !u think i dont know wat’s going on in ur mind … u don’t want other girls to start droollling for me …when they see me …tat’s reason u always .say yes to the thing which makes me look not so nice … n no for the one which makes me look hot n handsome !
Swara: oh sanskar … u n ur logic … never have made sense to me not then not now … they are simply weird …
Sanskaar laughs n swara pouts
Swara: but sanskaar …i have a question … y …y do u always make me wear the same outfit whenever i meet you !oh give me a makeover ..too na !
Sanskaar: because swara … u loook more than fab in tat dress …do u remeber this was the same thing wich u wore …when i first met u …remember?
Swara: oh how can i forget tat…my sweet… tat point actually changed my life …
Sanskaar comes near her n the image starts to fade… n swara says “ bye… sanskaar … its time for me to go …. ..bye ….ill miss u a lot”
The image fades off before sanskaar could say something to her
He says to air “ and this were the same lines which u told to me when u left this world three years ago ..swara “
*/ I know i know..tat you are totally confused … tat how can swara be dead n stuff … to clear tat maybe we have to go to their past,when swara was alive n see something…….so say 123 abaraca dabbra “go to past”….n voila ! u are here /*
Three years ago :
There ‘s a big house … and a big lawn in front of it … where u can see the glimering stars in deep sea of the sky n a lone half moon looking like he is smiling at the residents of earth … it was very perfect evening …the wind blowing in the sweet scent of roses which was growing nearby the still pond until…
“sanskaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!”
“stop screming swara … i won’t eat your diary okay! I’ll just sneak a peak into it … tat’s it”said sanskaar …smirking ,looking at swara ‘ face …
Swara:sanskaar please …give my diary back to me … please
Saying this she started chasing him again ..around big hall of house …
Sanskaar: oh c’mon swara … wat is going to happen if see your diary ..huh? i am your husband right? I am half of you ..remember … more than tat i am your bff cum love ..so don’t i have the rights to read your diary … won’t it make my job easier at being your husband by knowing your innermost thoughts … hmm? Tell me !
Swara suddenly stoped running .. n came to halt … she put her head down n started crying …
Sanskaar saw that swara had stoped running behind him .. and came too a halt n saw his beutiful wife crying … he had never ever meant to make her cry … he was just teasing her a bit for fun .. but he never thought tat she would become so serious … so he went near her …n said
“ swara ! i am terribily sorry …my jaan … i never meant to make make u cry … n i would never read your diary .. i was just joking ..i am sorry .. here take it .. i will never take it from u “
Swara: promise
Sanskaar: promise
N suddenly swara took the diary n started to run ,which startled sanskaar a lot
Swara: hahaa sanskaar … u thought i was crying!!! Hahahahaha … oh my poor baby ..i was just acting so that i could get back my diary … hehehehe… u belived it … ha! I fooled you!!yeyyy!!
Telling tat she brust out laughing ….
Sanskaar: achha ! bacchu ..mujse chalaki … ha?! Wait !!u ..!
They stared running all over again … this countinued till ..swara suddenly stoped n told “okay ! now stop u r making get exhausted ! “
Sanskaar: okay ! now come lets go sleep !
*/Swara n sanskaar actuaaly met during high school … a unique freindship started between them …which led to a blooming flower of love at the end of their collage …then sanskaar joined his father n became a great tycoon n swara became a nursery school teacher .. they told about their love to their parents … n they happily accpeted … their marriage took place ..n they were gifted this beutiful house (guys try imaging the one which comes in fursat song with a big lawn)… it had been two years since their marrige … n both of had been living a very very happy life /*
The next morning
Sanskaar: i am getting late yaar …come fast ..uff! how much time u ladies take to get ready
Swara:offo!sanskaar can’t u wait for two seconds … see ..i came now chalo!
Sanskaar : abba! At last ..the maharani of my heart came down … come lets go ..
Then they went to their respective works … swara to school n sanskaar to his office
Back home …that evening ..sanskaar had come back from work a bit early to arrange a candle light dinner for his love … he had a done marvelous job indeed !!
Sanskaar: chaal sanskaar now for the final touch to this dish …n we are done ..yey! swara u r gonna love this …
He hears the door unlocking soun
d n hides behind the stairway …
Swara: sanskaar ..where r u ?
Sanskaar comes from the hiding place n says
Sanskaar: my love.. my life … my darling ..the queen n slayer of my heart … your prince over here can’t express his love for you… it ‘s more than infinty … it’s unexpressable..please ..come here my jaan n sit ..
He removes the chair for her …n points her to come ..
Swara blushes n sits down
Swara: thank you prince ..but may i know why do i owe this great hounour?
Sanskaar: simply because u r my princess
She laughs n starts to have dinner with him … this was pretty normal to them..both loved surprising each other like this … after dinner
Swara: sanskarr do u wanna dance ?
Sanskaar: sure ..shona
They turn on music n start couple dancing
Pal do pal ki hai zindagi … iss pyar ko hai sadiya kafi nahi
To kuda se mang lu …mohalat mai ikk nayi
Rehena hai bas yaha abb door tuchse janna nahi …
Hmm jo tu mera hamdard hai … suhaana har dard hai ..
And Suddenly in sanskaar ‘s arms his lady love fell uncouncious … !
”swara! Swara ! … wake up ..!!! wake up ..oh my god … swara !!”
But swara dosen’t wake up ..he rushes towards his car n tells the driver to drive towards the hospaital .
So guys ..this was the first shot of two ..the next one will be uploaded soon ..!! till then this is mini … singing off… do leave your precious comments … !!! oh n ya …the sign like – * / /* means tat’s the author ‘s voice …taking the story foward …!
26 Comments
superb
Mini i just loved it do update soon
nice
Superb
aaahhhhh will be sad ending ? but happy with their love story…
luv it Mini! ty
Nice….
Awesome dear…spell bounded..you wrote so well nd described their love so beautifully…loved it mch…waitmg fr nxt part
Ahhhh Swara has already died!!! u made me cry… thnk u Mini..
Nice
nice
Sad ending!! Why???Os is awesome dear
Waiting for nxt…
Take care
Keep smiling?
Awesome…
Plz write the next part soon
Awsm mini dr…
plz post soon and make it a happy ending somehow pls
Nyc
nyc
Nice dear.. Continue soon
Awesomee!!!
Update soon….
Aaahhhh swar why why aaaah. Soo sad yaar. Waiting for next
Awsm dear
Awesome
Mind blowing
it was awesome i loved ur writing but sad as its gonna be sad ending
Nice…. Continue soon
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