Thankyou so much friends for your love and support for my ff and wait for my ff..very happy to see many new comments..love you all..and also sorry if tis hurts..i have satisfied some of your wishes that you told me in tis episode..so i dont want to make you wait..read epi 12 soon dears..
Ish with family going to the city in car..car reachd nearly 2 km frm palace.
Dev in front seat..
(he thinks of sona.. today y i feel like a pain in my heart..i didnt even talkd to sona today..whether something was wrong..did she went to home safely..god what is happening..i cant wait anymore..is tis pain a signal from you..i want to see sona soon)
dev – driver..stop the car soon..
(car stoped)
Ish – what dev?
Dev – ma..sorry i am going to palace.you go for purchase and come..
Ish – but dev what happened?
Dev – please mom..i wil tel later..
Ish – ok dev..
(dev gets down of car and runs to palace)
(ish thinks when he is going to behave like a prince..whether he is going to see that sona..she fumes)
here at the same time In palace,
sona keeps the book in store room and comes..she is shockd to see the door closed..she knocks the door..
Son – anyone there..plz open the door.
(in that store room no sound wil be heared outside)
(sona thinks god y tis is not opening..whether tis is tat vicky’s plan..what i wil do now..her face is ful of fear..she sees a knife there and takes it in hand)
vicky calls servant ramu..
Vic – ramu ask al the maids to go home and you too..come in the eveng.
Ramu – ok sir.
(everyone went)
vicky comes to store room and opens the door..
Sona tries to go out..vicky holds her
Vic – o dear sona..where r u going..
Son – sir.please leave me
vic – ha..sona you thought i wil leave you..do you know how long i have been waiting for tis day..u cant escape today.
(he removes her veil)
sona..you are so beautiful..and those lips..(he tries to kiss her)
now sona takes the knife nicely and tries to attack him..but he catches the knife in hand.it hurts his hand..
Vic -aaah (shouts)
(sona pulls him wit al her efforts and run)
vic – sona dont run
(he runs behind her..sona comes to hall and vicky catches her in hand)
sona shouts dev..
Vic – wat dev..so that much close you r to the prince to cal him by his name…but its of no use sona..he wont came now
son – please leave me..i am begging you..
Vic – first i thought of handling u soft sona..but u r too much..u tried to kil me and running..so you have to suffer..
(he slaps her hard in cheeks..sona faints and falls down..he takes her in shoulder and move to his room)
dev comes running to palace..
(he thinks y there is no one..may be sona too went home)he cals vicky..but no reply..
Dev – (tells himself)may be he slept..ok let me go to sona’s home..
(suddenly he saw some beads in the hall)
dev – tis beads..tis is from sona’s anklets..whether her anklets are broken..
He takes the beads and follows the beads…it goes upstairs to vicky’s room.
In vicky’s room at same time..vicky makes sona lie on bed and removes her saree..he went close to her..
Suddenly a hand falls on his shoulder..he turns back and shockd..
Dev – how dare u..(his eyes are red ful of anger..gives him a strong punch..vicky rolls over and fals down)
dev comes near sona..
Dev – sona ..sona wake up..(tears filled his eyes..tries to wake her..then removes his coat and covers her)
vicky stands up..
Vic – dev..leave her and go..dont involve in tis..
(Dev again came to him..both anger and tears in eyes..catches his neck over the wall.)
Dev – what you done to sona..
Vic – dev leave me..she is coming to you now nly..til then she was with me..
Dev – you bledy cheap(again punches him strong in face ..then puls him and takes him outside)
vicky shouts leave me dev..
Dev – how dare you talk of sona..
(punched him again and again heavily)
vicky is shouting in pain..
Vic – you are beating your brother for a maid..
Dev – you bustard being a maid you thought you can do anything wit her..she is my girl
(beats and rols him down the stairs..dev comes down)
dev – here after u wont touch any girl.
(he catches his right hand and breaks it)
vic cant bear the pain..shouts very much..
(Dev beats him again and again til vicky falls unconsious)
then dev comes to sona..ful of tears in eyes..
Dev -(touching her face)sona please get up..sona
sona didnt wake..he immediately he takes the water jar and sprinkles some water in her face..
Sona opens her eyes lightly..
Now a little smile comes in dev’s face..
Dev – sona..(sits besides her..holding her hands)
son – dev.(she cries)
dev -(wipes her tears)dont cry sona..i came no dont cry
son -dev(she gets up and hugs him..again cries)..dev i was afraid..
dev hugs and caresses her head..both cries..
Dev – dont cry sona..i am so sorry..i didnt take care of you..
wait ..i wil cal doctor
son – no dev..no need
dev – but sona you are hurt..
Son – please dev
dev – ok sona..drink tis water..i wil come now..
(he went and take oinment and come and applies it near her lips.sona was looking at him.)
dev – sona tel me where else is it paining..
Son – no dev..
Dev – ok i wil see then
(he goes near her feet..the anklet is broken and her legs are bleeding..he sees it and cries..then applies the oinment)
son – dev..u dont cry.i am ok..
dev comes near her and careses her face..
Dev – is it paining
son – no dev.aftr seeing u al my pains went..(she again hugs him)
then she tries to stand..
Dev – where r u going?
Son – dev..i wil go home..
Dev – in this condition..u take rest..can go later..
Son – dev
dev – i said u to lie down
(she lies in bed)
dev sitting beside her and seeing her..
Later in the afternoon..
Everyone came back..
And are shockd to see vicky in very bad condition lying down..
Vicky murmers water ..water..
Radha runs to him.
Ish – what happend here..y there is no one..where is dev..dev dev(she cals)
dev hears it and gets up..sona also wakes..
Son – dev wait..i am also coming..(she tries to stand but her leg pains..dev holds her..he made her wear his coat)
dev – u cant walk sona..(he carried her in his arms)
son – dev..i can come
dev – plz be quiet sona
(he comes down with her in arms..everyone shockd..ish more and more..he makes her sit in sofa)
ish – dev..what is tis?..y vicky is like this..
Dev – (in anger)mom..see sona also..today what tis bledy vicky done u know..he misbehaves wit sona.
(everyone again shockd)
ish – dev..what r u telling
dev – s mom..he is so cheap.he plannd and done tis..
(neha,ria nikki comes to sona)
neha – (with care)sona r u ok now
sona – yes mam
(Vicky wakes now)
radh – (to dev)so..did u beat ur brother for tis maid
dev – he is not my brother..i wont leave him(again comes to vicky in angry)
ish – wait dev..(she comes in between..)
she now turns and slaps vicky..
Ish – how dare you vicky to do tis in tis palace..go from here.
(suddenly police comes)
ish – who caled you?
Dev – i only mom..
Inspector arrest tis felow..
Rad – dev..please dont do tis
ish – inspector..wait once..
(comes to dev)
dev..leave him tis time..no need police case
dev – (in anger)mom..hw u say that..she tried to rape a girl..he is a criminal..he should be punishd severely..
Ish – dev..ur anger is correct..but it is also relatd to our family’s pride..
Dev – mom..she is a girl..her pride is also more important..wil u say tis if the same happend to my sisters..
Ish – dev..i understood u ..but please think day after tmrw its neha’s engagemt.in tis time we should be calm..
dev – no mom..what ever u say i cant leave him..
(radha comes to sona)
rad – (acts with tears)sona ..what my son done was wrong only..but please dont put him in jail..i beg you
Son – dev (suddenly stops)..sir..what mam said was correct only..leave him tis time..
Dev – sona ..after he done tis much to you..hw can you talk like tis..
Son -please sir..i dont want more issue..
Ish – inspector..you can go..we wil look after this..
(they went)
dev comes to sona..
Dev – y u did tis sona..
Son – please sir..i want to go home..
Dev – ok then come..(he again take her in arms..sona looks at iswari)
mom..i wil leave sona in home and come..
Ish – (seeing tis fumes in anger)ok dev..
dev -(to radha)aunty remember one thing..no body can stop his death,if he comes in front of me again..
(he tels in anger and went)
radha comes to ishwari..
Rad – iswari..today u also beat my son for that maid..i already told u about her
Isw – u just shut up radha..already i am in anger..cant you grow your only son properly..if i didnt come and slap him,dev might have killed him
rad – but see.how dev is talking for her.
Isw – s i have seen..first i didnt thought it more serious..but i wont leave this here after..i know what to do..
(now smiles cunningly)
to be continued..
No precap..
Thankyou for reading dears..hope you like tis…if any of you feel hurt i am so sorry..please send your views(negative or positive) in comments friends.
46 Comments
Nice epi. And dev should have killed Vicky. Anyways All is well that ends well☺post soon dear. Will be waiting?
Thanku sharica dear..dont want dev to go jail dear else i would have kiled vicky.
Yeah in that case it was absolutely right what u did to Vicky.
Thankyou dear..
Really feel sorry for sona.don’t like vicky here and also in real serial. Let’s see what ish will do. Thanks again for updating ff daily. But one thing here is dev character is much better than serial
Thanks for comments ali..yes i too hate vicky very much..and also wants dev to be like tis in my ff..
Waiting for dev to change in serial also.
So sad yaar! I hate this Vicky! Dev should have really killed him! I would have been the happiest person on the earth!?
But loved it when Dev took care of her…??? What will ishwari do yaar! I’m so restless… Please please post the next part soon!! Waiting for it!
Love you di??
Thankyou so much maria..and sorry for making you sad…i want that vicky to die but not thought to send dev jail..so left him..
She wil be cruel in my ff dr..u wil see in further epi..
Love you too.
Great episode. One request please don’t make dev to break up with sona listening to his mom’s crap. Make him fight for his love. Waiting for next episode.
Thankyou so much sgatik..i wil try to make everything good..and here our dev wil surely fi8 for love.
Nice episode. Eagerly waiting for next one ??
Thankyou so much dolly.wil post tmrw.
poor sona i would really kill that vicky if i was dev
S rithika me too..thankyou for the comment..and ur dp is super its like the scene in my ff
Superb episode..but plzz give precap from next time..
Thanku so much aaru..wil accept ur request
Awesomeeeeeeeeee ????❣??❤️??my wish came true ?Poor Vicky and Ishwari also insulted Gkb???and I was laughing hard when Dev came down with Sona in his arms and when I imagined ishwari’s face ?And that dialouge too no body can stop his death loved it ???post soon ?
Thankyou so much manya..i am happy that i made u laugh.
Episode was amazing as usual u tried ur level best to full fill our wishes
Wow Dev’s care ???
I hate ishwari (nothing can be done to love her)
Bottom line again waiting (dying) for next part ???
Lots of love
Thankyou so much dhira for the compliments…
I hate iswari extremely so that i made her cruel as possible in my ff..
Wait for tomorow dear..
Good ishwari usika layak hai (she deserves that) I am with u and Vicky bi (he deserves same)
? Will wait for tomorrow
Lots of love ?
Yaa thanks for posting and considering our requests
Thanks a lot ????
Thankyou so much dear..love you too.. Wil post it today..
Again an heart touching epi sakthi. While reading i was scared nd praying no no no plzzz kch v na kre vo cheepoo but thanks to u dear for keeping sona in safe hand.
But seriously when i was going through this i felt that i’m watching this in tv so beautifully described. Today i was scared nd shievering in starting. u made me scared again through ur precape?????. Seriously my love for u is increasing day by day ?????????nd same pinch i also completed my study, give me ✋✋✋✋✋
With lots of love
@Erina
Thankyou so much erina..wow so happy to read ur comment with so much compliments..
And dont get scard dr everything wil be ok in end..with loads of love same pinch dear..
Thank you so much for not doing anything wrong with Sona thanks a lot an awesome episode keep it up.
Thankyou so much princess..s i wil kept sona safe atlast
Superb episode
Thankyou so much devakshi.
Hey sakthi ur FFis really good. continue the way u are continuing… it’s jst awsome.. seeing my comment for the first time right.. this is my first time commenting on krpkab FFs… lol any way this is jst awsome dear… keep writing…
Thanku so much deeksha for commenting first time…al the best for ur ff too..
I like ur name.r u from tn
I’m from Hyderabad…. where are u from..??
I am from TN dear
great episode,entry of dev and how he protect and care for sona is really amazing..plz like serial don’t make them broke up and update soon eagrily wating for next
Thankyou so much nida..actualy here no broke up but a smal seperatin wil be there..forgive me for that..
Yaaaaayyyyy???…….Dev saved Sona ????……main tou khud imagine kar ke khush Ho rahi thi….Vicky ko jab Dev say kutt parh rahi thi ???….loved it ??☺️
Thankyou so much maleeha..waiting for ur next dear..
hi sakthi! I am nikki.i was so worried abt sona. I hate the b**** vicky.i hopes ish wl accept devakshi in ths epi:-((
Thankyou so much nikki for the concern but tis iswari is such a witch dear.hw she wil acept sona..
Wow awesome Dev saved Sona!!! Waiting for next part.. Post soon?
Thankyou so much niki..wil update today.
Hey!!! Shakti…its sammy….ur ff are awesome bt plzzzz give the precap details also so that we can wait for next episode..otherwise we can depend only on guesses…plzzz
Thankyou so much sammy..i wil accept ur request and provide precap..
Real thing is i wont write recap and precap because i dont know to write short..and tat u can see from ff also..sumtimes i have thought i am writing al scenes big..anyway i wil provide smal precaps for you..
Nice episode, i like dev the way he is taking care for her lady love….. love u dev
Thankyou so much sis..