Hi dear friends
I guess I should not simply prolong this ff,
This is second last part of this ff n tom we will see last epi
I hope u my dear readers are ok with this please let me know
Main reason is that as always the story which I had planned will get over in these two epi
I will try to make these longer n dramatic
Recap-Romi tells Raman that simmi, mihir n he has decided to participate n not quit, simmi goes to meet Ishita
Ishita-simmi how is how. …..
simmi-(placing her hand over Ishita)-Raman is fine Ishita
Ishita smiles
Ishita-Because of me all this I mean simmi am sorry u all were working so hard
simmi (angry)-Ishita y r u saying sorry u too worked hard with us n we all r at fault Ishita can u please please please participate for us in finals
Ishita is confused
simmi-we have decided not to quit we will do steps we like atleast we can do that much, this way they will not disqualify us n we can participate next year
Abhi overhears them
Abhi-Simmi she has fever she needs bed rest n finals r tom so she will not…
Ishita-Abhi please am fine I want to please atleast I feel Raman will have thar little hope to participate next year maybe I can get back his smile please
Ishita makes puppy face
Abhi is helpless
Simmi smiles
Ishita is getting ready
Abhi-R u going somewhere?
Ishita-yes, some urgent work
Abhi (concerned)-r u fine?
Ishita-yes am perfect
Abhi-I will drop u
Abhi n Ishita r in car Abhi is driving he looks at Ishita he is admiring her she looks out of window
Car stops outside Bhalla house
Ishita rings doorbell
Mr Bhalla opens
Mr Bhalla-Raman n Toshi r not at home
Ishita (softly)-Uncle I wanted to talk to u just 5 mins please
Mr Bhalla is sitting on sofa
Ishita-uncle, Raman loves u alot, He really respects u a lot, His all efforts have gone in vain our rival team has copied all our steps, but we willnot quit we will participate tom, uncle ur presence will encourage Raman please uncle he is heartbroken he needs u ur blessings .Uncle he always had two dreams to win dance championship n to get ur love ur support his aim is to make u proud hope to see u tom thanks bye uncle
mr Bhalla gets thinking
Abhi looks on
Abhi-ishu what was need for this
Ishita-Abhi I am just trying to reduce Raman’s pain
A letter falls from Raman’s hand Mihir picks it, He is dumbstruck
Mihir-Raman bhai u r going to England u have taken admission for mba in England? ?
Raman-I couldn’t fulfill my dream so thought atleast I can fulfill papa’s dream
Mihir-Bhai u willnot try next year for dance championship
Raman-no (he is about to leave)
Mihir-What about Ishita how will u live without her
Raman-Mihir I dnt deserve her not at all the way I spoke to her how could I be so rude
Mihir-Bhai say sorry to her y r u going
Raman-Mihir she means everything to me still for this dance champion ship I have hurt her made her cry she got sick because of me, am an animal Mihir n I dnt deserve an angel like her I may apologize today she will forgive me also but I will again do something n hurt her
so am going away from her
Mihir-But Bhai
Raman(tears fall from his eyes)-This is my punishment
Abhi overhears them
Abhi-Raman u should not be punished I should be
Raman n Mihir r confused
Abhi-Ishita broke engagement with me for u I felt bad so I went to Ashok n made this plan to separate u n ishu am sorry very sorry u love Ishita more than me sorry
Raman is taken aback
He sobs
Abhi-Raman she loves u she cannot live without u please dnt leave her n go please
Abhi folds his hands
Ishita is getting ready for performance
Amma feeds her dahi sakaar
Raman is deeply engrossed in thoughts he feels a hand on his shoulder
He is shocked to see mr Bhalla
n Toshi
mr Bhalla (with love)-putaar waheguru is with u dnt worry perform like a star as u always do show ur rivals u r much much better than them
He hugs amused Raman
Mr Bhalla-my putaar is born dancer
Raman’s eyes r filled with tears he is unable to believe that mr Bhalla is proud of him Raman is happy
Toshi-This all is Ishita’ s magic she has convinced bhalla ji
Mr Bhalla-she made me realize my mistake am sorry Raman
Raman hugs mr Bhalla
Announcement by host rithvik
rithvik-so people r u excited to see last team perform, so put ur hands together for dance ke baap king of round one Rsim from India Backstage
Raman looks at Ishita with guilty eyes Ishita’s eyes r moist they have painful eye contact
simmi-guys we still have same dream so
They place hand over eachother
One Team one Dream Rsim will win
performance starts with Ishita
she does laavni her grace her moves perfect as usual
Raman is mesmerized
Ishita climbs on rope, she is about to lose balance but Raman comes on other rope way n holds her firm they have intense eye contact
Chand ne kuch kaha sun le tu bhi bekabaar aaahhh pyaar kar plays
Raman does lifts with Ishita
Aayi hain chandni mujhse kane yehi ahhan haan pyaar kar
Raman tactfully holds his ears n dances he dances in pain Romi, Mihir n Simmi join
ishra Dance ohhh ohh pyaar kar tears fall from Ishita’ s eyes Raman hugs her while dancing holds her close to him n licks her tears she shivers he kisses her n continues dancing he lifts her n lip locks haan aahan pyaar kar
Audiences clap, Amma appa mihika abhi Toshi mr Bhalla all stand up n clap
Ashok smirks shagun looks on tear eyed
10 Comments
Loved it yyaar…..u r just awesome…..u …u …I have no words for u Rushi….but I’m sad …tomorrow is last episode… But promise me u will bring another ff after this….
finally simi convinced ishita 2 do finals.4 making raman happy she agreed n surprisingly she requested raman’s father 2 support raman in this pathetic condition.loved raman n his father’s scene.so emotional.raman deciding 2 do mba in abroad 4 his father…so emotional. he feels guilty 4 hurting ishita n 4 that he decided 2 punish himself by going away from her.sad.but felt rly happy abt d dance.ishra dance was so sensual n romantic.raman holding ishu when she lost balance n licking her tears to all romance was nice.dance song was lovely.abhi confessing his mistake 2 raman was nice.he is so nice that he didnt tell them about shagun’s brainwash.hope shagun too confesses her mistake n unites ishra.can’ believe that next is d last part.plz find life partners 4 abhishek,romi n mihika.plz show what happened to rinky..want to know rinky’s pov.
plz write a ff on kuch kuch hota hai too as it suits yhm cast
Just prefect! ? But why are u ending it Rushi? I will definitely miss your ff?
Nooooooo….. Pls Rushi dnt end this ff cuz its really nice. BTW todays episode is really heart touching. U r awesome!!!!!
Very beautiful story Rushi.
Shagun lost Raman!
Raman want to win Ishu trust back.
Ishu want to bring Raman smile back and goes to Mr Bhalla and express Raman’s pain.
Mr Bhalla get thinking and understand and start supporting Raman for Ishu.
Raman want to leave India to go to England to avoid Ishu pain and want to blame himself but save by Abhi to stop and confessed his separation betwn Raman and Ishu. Raman get shocked and realised that he had hurt Ishu badly.
Ishu want to ignore Raman and continue her dance but Raman save Ishu from falling and held her close. Ashok will not take Ishu from Raman and see Shagun painful watching Raman and Ishu love for each other.
U r a marvellous writer . Today’s episode was awesome. U told tomorrow is the last episode. Start another episode with ishra itself soon
this is awesome episode ucan start another ff na pls dont leave writing ffs
I don’t believe it tmrw is the last part…this one is also very best part…
lovely story so sad its ending tomrrow
Next episode plz. ..