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Hey guys , hope you all know me and for those who don’t know me, I am sat. I am very glad presenting you all, this ff for my ishqbaazians or for crazy ishqbaaz fans. Everyone please do tell me how my introduction is. All flowers and shoes are accepted. Silent readers, please drop your views
I am a die heart fan of ishqbaaz. And I am very happy writing my own ff(fan fiction).
All the characters are same and in my fan fiction, I would like to change Ishana’s character and Ishkara’s track.
So , now let’s stop all my bakbaks and start the track
(In the evening Shivika, Rumya, Om, Dadi, Priyanka, Pinky, Jhanvi sitting in the hall seriously thinking about how to know the truth regarding the cd .After ganapathi visarjan by the Oberoi brothers as Shivaay changes after listening annika’s words)
Dadi: Shivaay beta, I think we have to find who is that girl in that cd?, her family, friends and everything.
Om: Ha dadi, that would really help out
Shivaay: for that, we need to check…………….
Annika: Oberoi employees, workers … Hmm, I mean there might be her co-workers or friends in that.
Shivaay: right, that is what i wanted to say
Om and Rudra together say “right”
Shi: just shut up you guys
(just then Tia comes)
Pinky: Tia beta, you came at right times
Jhanvi: Tia, a pleasant surprise, you didn’t inform us
Tia: Jhanvi aunty, don’t I have right to come to Oberoi mansion at any time. Am I not your would be daughter in law
Jhanvi: nothing like that beta, I just………
Pinky: you can come at any time beta it is your wish. It is your house
(pinky holds jhanvi’s hands saying “it’s okay”, Jhanvi smiles)
Tia: Shivaay baby , I want to know when are you going to marry me. First of all, are you going to?…….
Shivaay: (with great anger ) Tia, are you mad. When my family is in problem, how do you think I can think of our marriage, I will talk about it later.
Tia: Shivaay baby, I didn’t expect this from you. You kept on postponing the wedding and now you are saying that we will think about it later. And coming to family, am I not a part of your family
Shivaay: tia , please listen to me and calm down
Tia: Shivaay baby , how many times should I listen to you? If you don’t marry me this day, I am going to cancel the contract of $500 million. And that’s final
(Shivika, Rumya, Dadi, Priyanka, Pinky, Jhanvi all are shocked)
Annika: tiaji, please understand billuji’s situation
Tia: Don’t you dare interfere (shouting)
Shivaay: why are you yelling at her now.
Pinky: “Marriage”, By today itself, oh my Mata
Dadi: how can that be done?
Om:Don’t be so possessive Tia
Rudra: He is a part of this family first.
(Annika sitting quietly because of Tia’s warning. Shivaay observed this and turned)
Shivaay: just enough Tia, more than enough.
Tia: ok, thenlet’s cancel the contract, “$500 million”. And now I am leaving, I am giving you another chance, to the least by tomorrow.
Shivaay: what the wuck, (throws his mobile and goes to his room)
Shivaay in his room thinks what to do, shall I go on with that lady for money, power and class or follow my heart for family and myself(thinking thinking ………………………..)
He says I have made a decision. Then he goes.
He calls everyone to the puja place.
Shivaay: ma, dadi, I have made a decision.
Pinky: tell it billu
Shivaay takes some sindhoor in his hand.(no one observes)
Shivaay: ma,what do you want me to marry for?
Pinky: you know that billu, I want to see you happy with your wife and children, I mean my grandchildren.
Shivaay: ok then,
He drags Annika with one hand and brings her near the gods’ idols.
Annika gives a question mark look and doesn’t know what he is upto.
Shivaay keeps sindhoor on her forehead.
Everybody were shocked and horrified.
Precap: Annika confronts Shivaay. Dadi, Rumya, om, prinku, support Shivaay and character sketches(the most important one for ishkara fans, a suspense)
This episode has Shivika because , I want to give a gun shot start. I am going to add ishkara and rumya in the coming episodes. So no worries.
And just because this is promo, it is short. I will make the episodes long.
Please comment and all suggestions are accepted
Please do tell if the track is not interesting or if it is not good. So that I can continue.
111 Comments
Sat… interesting twist…
Pls continue further 🙂
Longer update plsss
For sure, next epi will be longer dear. It is short because it is a promo
Sorry sat… It was so good that I forgot that it’s promo… 😉
Aaghaz itna acha hai.. to anjaam to best hoga
I m loving it….plz write asap……eagerly Waiting….plz plz
Surely dear, you require patience
Its really good plz can u update asap plz
Surely, dear, please wait till tomorrow
Surely, dear, please wait till tomorrow,??
Thats all i wanted for shivika
That’s great, I am a big fan of shivika too. But I will give the three couples equal importance
What the wuckkk… I mean in a good way what a sudden twist its superb yaar pls continue this ff post the next asap its a genuine request plss
Please wait Yar and thanks dear
Oh my Mata! you totally nailed it..
Eagerly waiting for next part. Loved it
Thanks Yar
Wonderful ff yar!!!!!!! Hope u remember me!!!!! Super Duper episode…… Shivika marriage…….. amazing yar….. just keep going……. I’m die heart fan of Shivika…… just loved this episode…….. amazing start…… marvelous episode…….. fabulous ff…….. please continue……. and keep entertaining us………..
How can I forget you mukta di I missed you in daily updates as i am not commenting there due to my exams I will return there on 30th SEO. Anyways thanks a lot di for your compliment
Awesome yaar …..
Really good
Love the story
A great thanks to you
wow star nice starting plz upload nxt part asap
sry I mean sat*
Ayath. Thanks for the compliment. And I felt happy when you said me star and no need to say sorry
oh wow so sweet Plz update your ff I really want to read it it’s out of thinking and amazing…………….
Surely, I will one a day from now and from Oct 1 I will update frequently
Oh my mata promo is creating butterflies inside my stomach. Please do post the next ASAP. But in English sat dear.?
Even I don’t know Hindi properly, and surely it will be in English. And thanks for your compliment
Wow such a interesting episode.. plz upload next episode faster waiting eagerly for next one….
I will upload it today, it will take time for uploading
Am loving it #from a silent reader
Thanks Yar. And please comment daily. It is an energy shake for me
Looking interesting..waiting for next part…I don’t know Hindi so can you please update in English…hope you remember me na…..
I remember you di, I am a part of the ishqbaaz family Na. Thanks a lot
Hey sat…u r rockngg….dhamaka hain first epi…waiting soon for d next…..post it soon yaar…its jus awesumm
Thank you Tulsi, ishana’s character sketch would also be a big dhamaka
Super yar!!!wow and that sindoor part is just awesome
Ya, I really love that sindhoor part. A big thanks dear
Awesome update sat
Post the next soon
Wow shivaay putting sindhoor was just awesome
Lovely track
Plz carry on
Thanks dear, I will post it today for sure
omg!!!! wat an episode… fantastic… im die heart fan of shivika… I cant wait for next episode… plz update soon
Me too, but I will give equal importance to every couple. And thanks for the compliments
???? promo omg satvika promo itself is heart attack I mean in first epi SHIVIKA marriage its awesome dear and please continue because I am sure that my friends gang will never let down readers as I did… And as far as concern ur ff will surely replace mine ..
Guys please agar interesting laga toh sat pe trust karo she will entertain you for sure 100% and o Jana is ending ?
Shama, you know what, I am Waiting for your comments di, and please don’t stop the ff?. And a bouquet of thanks for your comments. I am waiting for comments from the most experienced authors of ishqbaaz
I just love this serial so much
Thanks for your energizing comment
Wow amazing episode. Please post the next episode ASAP waiting eagerly..
I will surely post it today dear
love this track sat …continue…and waiting for the suspense………..and welcome to the fan ficton of ishbaazian….
Thanks pragya, I am waiting for your comments, I am waiting for the authors comments like shama, Ananya, you, jara, ayath, emkay, swati, naaginfanforever,fatarajo, kushagra, nithu, kashi,etc, etc,
Nice start sat.and open the suspense soon. Great spoiler
For sure, wait till the next part. Thanks for the lovely comment. Keep on commenting dear
Ok sat and eagerly waiting for next part.
Even we are shocked and horrified ???? too good
Thanks for your fantastic comment. Keep commenting
Wow….!!! What a fabulous ff..?? plz continue yaar…waiting for ur next ff…i must say u r a amazing writer???
Thanks so,,,…… Much
Omg wht a promo sat??
Awesome….carry on n plz be regular Dr
And nxt epi asap??keep going
A great thanks for the comments. Keep commenting
Oh that’s great thanks.
It was really an awesome episode
Waiting for more please update it as fast as you can??
Please bear my short update even in the next one as I included character sketches. Thanks for the comments
gun shot start ? yaa seriously it is….hey bagavan kya climax tha iss prt ka….
Really u should give long prt nxt time…i really like ur ff
Thanks for your gun shot compliment. Keep commenting
Waiting for epi…..dear actually I want to see this only shivika marriage
Ya …. I love that shivika marriage. Thanks for your motivating comments
What a twist sat.. Pls upload long ff.. Nd do add abt sivaay point of view why he choose anika.. Waiting fr ur nxt ff..
Pov of shivaay is there on the second epi and third epi . A suspense. Thanks for your comments