HIIII MY DEAR SWEETIES…………………. HOPE U ALL R DOING WELL IN UR EXAMS AS MOST OF MY READERS R HAVING THEIR EXAMS ……………….. ALL THE BEST TO ALL OF U …………….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LOVE U GUYZZZZ AND YA TODAY ON 28 September IS MY BFF’S BIRTHDAY……………. AND I WOULD LIKE U ALL TO WISH HER……………. AND YA DO TELL ME UR BIRTH DATES AS I WOULD LOVE TO WISH U ALL AND DO SOMETHING SPECIAL ON UR BIRTHDAY TOO AS U ALL R MY LOVELY READERS AND MY FRIENDS ALSO ( I THINK SO ……… ) SO LET’S START
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EPISODE 11
The episode starts with twinkle saying thank u to ishu and both of them hugged…………..
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Yunj reached the place and thanked Ishani fr her help and then were leaving…………
In CAR
Y – tw ab tu kch btaygi ???? how all this happened………….. ( tw nw will u tell something ?? )
K – ha tw kch toh bta ki yeh sab kyat ha tu waha kese pahuchi aur gunde ??? ( yes tw tell something how u reached there and wt abt the goons………..)
T – ohhh hooo mere dono bodyguards me bta rhi hu , rukku toh sahi ( ohh hoo my bodyguards wait wait I’m telling )
And she tells them the whole incident……………..
Y – tw tujhe stunts krne ka bht zyda hi shock nhi he jab dekho koi na ko siyappa krti rehti he….. ( tw u r too much fond of doing stunts , always u create some or the other prblm )
K – wahi toh sach mein tu siyappo ko rakhi banti he kya jo wo tere peeche peeche chalet rehte he….( hmm , do u tie rakhi to prblms that they always move behind u ) and yunj laughs….
Y laughing – nhi nhi kunj bhai nhi aesa lgta he ki siyappe bhi tw k one side lover he….. ( no no kunj looks like problems are twinkle’s one side lover )
T – nt very funny , tum bandaro ko kch zyada hi hassi nhi az rhi ( you monkeys are laughing too mch I guess )
And just then yuvi notices that some people are following their car…… and he asks tw abt this and tw tells them that they are the same goons which kidnapped her…
K – inhe toh sabk hum sekhanyege ……….. kyo yuvi ( we’ll teach them a good lesson………. Right yuvi.)
Y – off course yrrrrrr…………
T – bas koi zarurat nhi he herogiri krne ki ……. Chup chap chalte rho mujhe ab koi siyappa nhi chahiye..got it ………… ( wait wait no need to do ur herogiri ……………..just go home I dnt want any siyappa now , got it……. )
Y laughs off – look who’s talking………..
And twinkle glares her angrily
K – guyzzz now it’s important that hume ghar par kisiko kxh nhi btana he
Y – ya par u called leela maa and told her everything………
K – no actually I just told her that we found twinkle and will be coming home………………
T – ohhh then it’s great I’ll tell her that my phone was on silent mode and I went to my friend’s house……..
And yuvi drove to Taneja Mansion………………..
At Taneja Mansion
Leela was impatiently wait for them and when they reached TwiNjRaj managed everything………….. and yuvi left for sarna mansion and yuvi to Luthra mansion…
Next day…….. in evening..
L – tw , tw puttar …………
T- jee maa
L – tw puttar ja tu ready ho ja aaj hume wo mere business partner he na Monica unki beti Rochika ka aaj b’day he toh unhone aaj ek party rakhi he aur hume bulaya he aur dekh raman bhi nhi he toh tu chal mere naal ( tw actually today is my business partner Monica’s daughter b’day so we hav to go there , and raman is also nt there so u come with me )
T – theek he maa , me tayaar ho kar ati hu…………. ( ok maa , I’ll be ready )
Scene Shifts………
Gonn1 – yrrr wo ladki toh badi chalak nikli ( that girl was very smart )
Goon2 – abhi uski tareef chod aur soch ki jab maam ka phone ayega toh unhe kya bolege… ( just leave praising her and think wt will we say to maam now )
Goon3 – ha bhai sahi keh rhe he ( yes he’s right )
And just then someone gets a call…….
Goon2 – lo aa gya fone……. ( look phone came )
Goon1 – hello…… yes mam………………… ok maam……………. Yes mam……………….ok ok mam and hangs out…………………
Goon1 – keh rhi he ki use aaj dhundo aur aaj hi maar dalo aur agar aaj nhi mara toh me tumhe maar dungi ( she’s saying that today find her and kill her and if not then she will kill us )
Goon 2 – toh fir jaldi chal ( let’s go fast now )
And all of them leaves…………….
Scene shifts…….
At party………….
Twinkle and leela enters and they found yunj also there and went to them…..
T – yuvi kunj tum , tum dono yha ( yunj u both here )
K – ha tw wo actually humme bhi invitation milla tha ( ya we were also invited )
L – theek he toh tum teeno yha rho aur me Monica jee se mil ke ati hu ( ok u three stay here and I’ll go and meet Monica jee ) and she leaves……………
Just then it is shown that Rochika comes in a beautiful purple gown and her hair are curled and are left open…………….
T – wowww looking soo pretty…….
R – thank u so much……
TwiNjRaj – WISH U A VERY HAPPY BIRTHDAY DEAR ROCHIKA ………………… MANY MANY RETURNS OF THE DAY………………..
R – thank u so much guyzzz………….. and u all are also looking awesome………….
K – thank u , vesse in this month there are many birthdays
Y – ya and all the birthday girls are so pretty and kid and winks at rochika
The four were talking and then two clowns also came to the party………
T – looks like I have seen them somewhere else….
R – must have seen in some other party ………
T smiles – ya…………
And it is shown that those two clowns are the goons………….
Clown1 – lets start our plan we have to do everything quickly , go make the announcement
Clown 2 – ok…, listen listen listen……!!!!!!!! Today we are going to show you all a magic………… these two boxes are magical and any two from you can come and sit in these boxes and then the two will be vanished……………..and smirks………..
And twinkle get’s a msg that leela called her at the parking lot so she went there……..
Y – wt nonsense I don’t believe………….
K – mee too howz this possible , this is all rubbish…………. U r clowns just entertain the kids don’t show them such idiot things……….
Clown1 – if u both are so think so then try it if you have guts…………….
Yunj – why not………….
R – guyzzz just leave it…
Yunj – nooo yrrrrr now we have to prove them wrong u dnt take tension
Yunj enters the boxex and the clowns throw something and a gas is released , every body is coughing no one is able to see anything and after sometime when everything is cleared it is shown that the clowns are not there and when the boxex were opened yunj were lying unconscious………..
Monica – where is rochika………
Leela – and where is twinkle……………
Just then twinkle comes there and is confused by seeing all this and then comes to know everything
L – puttar where were u
T – maa u only called me in the parking lot
L – I ….. no but I was here only……………
T is shock – then………………. Ohhhh it means it were those goons…………….
Yunj are taken to the guest room…………..
L – which goons………..
And tw tells her everything…………..and a waiter comes and tells and rochika went to search twinkle in the parking lot………………
T – bt I left from there as I got a call from my friend……………………..
L – ohhhhhhh that means……………………………………..
T – they have kidnapped her instead of me……………… ohhh god ……………….
Monica is crying – ohhhhhhhhh god today is her birthday and……………………
L – dnt worry we’ll find her soon and consoles her…………….
Precap – Surprise…………….
HEYYY HOW WAS IT ???? ACTUALLY DON’T KNOW HOW AM I WRITING………………. BUT REALLY VERY UPSET THAT ON THIS FF I USE TO GET AT LEAST 19 COMMENTS I MEAN MINIMUM 19 TOH PKKA HI THE BUT NOW ONLY 13 IT WAS VERY DISSAPOINTING MOMENT AND REALLY I’M VERY UNHAPPY WITH THE RESPONSE BUT I THINK THAT THIS IS THE MONTH OF EXAMS SO HO SKTA HE THAT MY READERS HAVE EXAM BUT WHEN I SEE OTHER FFS THEY ARE GETTING MUCH MUCH COMMENTS BUT YA IT ALSO DEPEND ON STORY AND HOW U EXPRESS EVERYTHING AND I KNW THAT I’M NT THAT GOOD WRITER SO THATSWHY I’M GETTING LESS COMMENTS…………. IT’S OKK BUT FIR BHI BURA TOH LGTA HI HE……………………
BUT THEN ALSO LOVE U ALL………..!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
22 Comments
Haye….
Lunj!!!
Yuvi!!!
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Tune teen sweethearts se milwaya hai mujhe…haye!!!
I love u meri Yashu???????????????
Jaldi post karoyo…aur comments ki no tension..,
Love u?
Awwww i’m shooo happy that u liked it.. ????
will post asap….
Keep smiling and stay blessed????
LOVE u infinity mera gol gol laddoo !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????
Aww yashu plz don’t feel bad.. you are a very good writer and ur ff is one of the best.. and coming to your ff it was amazing as always.. loved yunj’s funny talks in the car??.. and wishing a very happy birthday to your friend.. may God bless her always 🙂 .. well, my birthday is coming soooon! On 6th Oct.. love you ❤❤ keep smiling always 🙂
thanksss thankss yrrrr dear
kya kahu ab itni tareef kar di…
i”m very happy that u r enjoying it sooo much
Keep smiling and stay blessed????
LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????
Haye yashu!!!! Kya kahu yrrr….itna pyaar mere birthday par sirf aap hi de sakte ho…matlb i was totally zapped when i saw my name and my mom’s name in your ff….U r the bestest yrrrr……Luv u infinity!!!! Maine aate hi net khol ke aapka ff pada and i saw your gift , it was just awesomeeeee and coooooool!!!!!! Thank uuuuuuuu sooooo sooooo soooo much!!!
And coming onto your ff, it was just awsm and amazing like everytime!!!!! Matlb PAISA WASOOOL!!!!! AND FULL ON DHAMAKEDAAR!!! DONT WORRY AAJ QURBAAN NHI KR RHI….CHILL..
AND POST THE NXT ASAP !!!!! EAGERLY WAITING!!!
awwww that indeed was a very cute comment but a short one
evermind today u r a b’day girl so sab maaf he…..
i’m very very very happy sweetie that u liked it soo much….
Keep smiling and stay blessed????
LOVE u BFF !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????
Yashiiiiii…You got it right? Nahi samjhi? Budhoo Yashi matlab Best se bhi Uppar? Amazing dear…And also dear Rochika Happy Birthday and many many happy returns of the day ???? May u have a blessed year ahead ????
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Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
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-Zuha
me toh pehle hi samjh gyi thi….
ab itni jhalli bhi nhi hu jitna tu samajhti he….
Keep smiling and stay blessed????
LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????
Loved it The episode was so cute but want to know who wants to kill Twinkle 🙂 Post soon 🙂
Happy birthday to your best friend Rochika 🙂
thanksss dear SidMin…….
hmmm mystery will unfold soon
just wait and read n cmnt too
Keep smiling and stay blessed????
LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????
Loved it yashu…..post soon….
Happy birthday rochika…. May allah fulfil alp ur desires
awwww darling thank u ……
will post asap
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LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????
It was really good! Dont think that you write bad, you write amazingly! Also, a happy birthday from my side to your bestie. Loves xx
thank u shooo much Monica dii
thanks fr ur support……..
Keep smiling and stay blessed????
LOVE u dii !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????
Wowwww?????????
It’s awesome
Loved it
Mazaa agayaa
Kitna superb thain episode
Loved it❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!
Soooo happy someone new commented……………
God really very happy…………….
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Hii yashu
Awesome episode
N YUNJ ki Jodi tho kamal ki hi
Don’t know twinkle accept whom
Bt story is amazing
Loved it
Love u
thank you shoo much Ramya dear…..
this cmnt really means a lot……….
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Wow.
That was good .
Next one soon.
N I cut my cake on 28 February.
thank u partner… ( hope i can also call u dat )
will post asap….
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LOVE u !!!!!!!!!!!!! ?????
Your Yashu !!!!!!!!!!????????????????????
Yashu amazing ohh goodness luvd it……..rochika is kidnpd instead of twinkle ohh god wt ll hpn nxt cant w8…