Hiiiiii……… ohhh my God I mean I was shoooo shoooo happy after seeing your comments and couldn’t stop myself from writing actually was writing my twiraj ff but then couldn’t control and writing this one……….
Link for Intro – http://www.tellyupdates.com/kya-inki-yeh-dushmani-shurwat-inke-tashan-wale-ishq-inki-kahani-yashu-ki-jubaani-intro
Episode 1
A big room is shown and a girl is sleeping ………………………..
Sumi – baby get up it’s too late……
Girl – noo nooo mom let me sleep , only for 2 minutes….
S – ur 2 min have become 2 hours now just get up fast………
Swara – ohhh hooo this sleeping beauty is still sleeping mom u go I’ll handle her……
Sumi – okk fine you both come fast and then wake kunj also…….
Swara – yups mom after all he’s also his partner – in – sleep……. And laughs…….
Sumi goes…….
Swara – ragini yrrr come one it’s too late …… get up fast……………..
Ragini – nooo yrrrr shona , let me sleep don’t become my second mom………….. go and wake kunj first…..
Swara – ohhkkkk I’ll go then when laksh will come college on time and will call u a late comer then don’t fight with me
Ragini wakes up with a jerk…….. and holds her head……
Ragini – ohhhh gosh because of that idiot I have to wake up……………..
Swara – awwww my ragu , just leave this anger baby and pecks on her cheek……..
Ragini also does the same and hugs each other and smiles………. Swaragini plays in the bg…….
And just then kunj also comes from behind and hugs the two……
Kunj – hawwww forget ur bro…… hiw mean……
Ragini – hey partner morning………………
Kunj – morning partner and my beautiful shona di…..
Swara – morning my Mr. bro now u both go and get ready fast , we are getting late for college……
And swara leaves and then ragini and kunj also left……
Scene shifts….
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Ap – sanskar , laksh , twinkle , come fast u all are getting late for college come on get up
She enters their room ……….. and is shocked to see the mess , everything is scattered and twinkle is sleeping on bed while sanskar is on the couch .
Ap – ohhhh God what’s all this……. I cant believe that this is a part of my house ., twinkle sanskar get up…….. she shouted………
And TwiSan got up with a jerk ….. and seeing their mother’s anger they remember the rooms condition……
Ap – what all this….
Sanky – sorry mom actually these two were fighting with me…..
Tw – hawwww bro why r u lying u were the one who started…
S – it was u…….
T – nooo it was u , and only u…….
Ap – ohhh come one u both just stop…….. and where is laksh…….
S – he was sleeping there only and sees and does not find him………. where’s he gone…..
T – I dnt knw I was just sleeping………….. how would I know……
S – ya bu he was there with us only…..
T – yes god knows where he went now…….
Just then sujata came listening the noises…..
Sujata – what happened dii , and sanskar what’s all this and look there are soo many things scattered on the bed and then shouts……. “ AHHHHHHHHHHHH !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ’’
Ap – what happened……..
TwiSan – what happened choti mom
Sujata – th…..there is a…….a bod…….body over there………..
Tw – what whose…….
Sanky – how would she know let me check……
He goes and sees below the bed and shouts…. Ahhhhh…………..
Tw – now what happened…….
Sanky – uff he scared me…… mom it’s lucky……..
Ap – what…… what is he doing there…………………….wake him up…….
Sanky – yups…… and he makes him wake…..
Laksh – what the hell, u made me slept there………….
Sanky – we didn’t u were there , I think last night when we were fighting you were there and you slept there only…….
L – ya I think sooo
Sujata – uffff thank god sanskar saw that it was laksh otherwise I would have got a heart attack……
T – dnt worry choti mom u wont get it…… u r too young for it……
Sujata – awww so sweet of u……… now u all get ready …………..
Ap – yes come fast ur dad would be waiting for u……………….
TwiSanLak – ohhhhkkkk………… command accepted……………
Ap and sujata left and And all three of them sighs………
T – thank god they didn’t come to know anything
L – yeah otherwise we three would have gone……
S – let’s hope for good……… and now no pillow fights and you 2 are not going…………..
T – we are bro…….
L – yes…… just wait and watch………………….
S – okkkk fine go but if dad comes to know then I’ll not handle……………….
T –u always say it bro but we know u love us……
She hugs sanky and laksh also joins them…………………..
At college
Ragini – ohhhh god , I’m soo excited to see in which class I am…..
Kunj – me too OMG!!!!!!!! Hope hoties are there too
Swara – shut up kunj….. what all this……
Kunj – ohhh come one beautiful lady……………
Ragini – you never change , partner
Swara – after all he’s the partner of our drama queen
Swakunj – RAGINI…………………
Ragini – shona…… I told u na not to call me this…..
Just then TwiSanLak arrived……………
Sanskar sees swara – Oh god whom I have seen today don’t know how my day will go……
Swara – I think better than mine………..
Sanskar – did I say u anything…….
Swara – how would I know , but I didn’t , but you always have to give importance to yourself so that’s not my problem……
Sanskar – hey you ………….
Tw – ohhh hoooo stop it bro why to waste your time , and make ur mood off just let it go na……
Kunj – look who’s saying , the one who always fight with everyone is asking his bro to keep quiet ……… siyappa queen
T – hey mr. sadu dnt call me that got it and I didn’t say anything to u , don’t interfere……………..
K – me and sadu…………… no ways………… huhhhh
L – twi , sanky lets leave why to make our morning bad yrrrr……. Vesse bhi I don’t want my first day of college to be the worst one…………..
Ragini – ohhhh hoooo , look look mr. flirter said what , making our morning bad and blaming us only…….
L – u just shut up…… miss drama queen…..
R – and what about u , Mr. flirter
Swara – guyzzz just leave why are u wasting your precious time just come and let’s check our classes
Sanskar – twiLak we should also leave to save our day from getting worst…..
Kunj – how dare you………….
Twinkle – because we are daring not a coward like you…..
Swara – kunj….!!!!!! Just leave it and holds RagKunj’s hand and takes them…………………
Sanskar – twinkle calm down baby otherwise your make – up will be removed…….
Tw – bro…… !!! I’m a natural beauty not a make-up beauty……………….
Laksh – ohhh hooo .!!!!!!!!!!!!
Precap – lots of fun……………
HEYY GUYZZZZ ACTUALLY THE TEI WRITER KNOW ME ACTUALLY I BELIEVE IN FIRST FRIENDSHIP THEN LOVE , I MEAN FIRST I’LL MAKE THEM FRIENDS AND THEN EVENTUALLY LOVERS……. I HOPE IT WAS NOT A BORING EPISODE BUT IF IT WAS THEN I’M SOO SORRY……… I’LL TRY TO IMPROVE MYSELF……………..
LOADS AND LOADS OF LOVE FOR YOU ALL……………..!!!!!!!!
YOUR YASHU !!!!!!!!!!!!
55 Comments
Awesome
thanksss dear Soujanya…
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Superb epi…
thankssss Sidhi dear…….
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Nice
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superb
thanksss Sara diii
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awesome amazing fabulous cute funny epi
thankssss dear purnima…..
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Fantastic…..
thanksss Sana
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Awsome
thanksss Divya dear..
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very cute episode.
thanksss sinin dii…………..
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Awesome, all are fighter cocks……. they knew each other. loved it
thanksss Akshata dear…..
yeah all are fighter cocks……
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Exams khatam!!!!!
Aur ye surprise!!!!
Wohoooo!!!!
Love uh my Shona????
Well, ye mera bhi nickname hai???
Chl kii na.,,
Jldi post kriyo
Awwww glad that u loved it…..
hmmm ur surprise….
ohhhh hooo ab nick names bhi same……
we have a lot of things similar….
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Awesome update ?
First time i comment on your ff.
I love raglak and swasan.
thanksss Ashnoor darling…..
yeah 1st tym……
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Nice
thankssss Sharanya……
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super
thankssss Arjuna……
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awesome episode
thanksss Ammu dear….
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awesome all r fighters loved their tashan
thanksss j. ……..
yups all are fighters here…..
this ff is full of tashan…..
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Omg!!! Yashu wt an episode!!!!! MAAR DAALA!!!!! itna tashan itni masti!!!!! I have become a die hard fan of your ff!!!! SAME USS WALE FF KI TARAH!!!AB AAP BACH NHI PAOGE!!! BECOZ AB MAIN ISS FF KE PEECHE BHI PAGAL HO GAYI HOON???????????? bht mast concept hai yrrr!!!! FULL ON PAISA WASOOL!!!!!!
JHAKASSSSSSS EPISODE!!!!!! KYA KEHNA AAPKA!!!! AAP PAR TOH MERA EK STORY LIKHNE KA MANN KRTA HAI KABHI KABHI!!! Matlab kahan se laate ho aise ideas?? Soooooooooooooooooo amazing ?????????????words are less to praise your writing!!!!! ????? and main toh kehti hoon U SHOULD BE A WRITER OF TV SERIALS…SACH MEIN…JO SERIAL LIKHOGE USKI TRP NO.1 PAR HOGI….MATLB BAAKI WRITERS TOH HAATH JOD LENGE AAPKE AAGE!!!!! and eagerly waiting for this ff and mera vo wala ff..samaj gye na.?..soo write both ff’s asap….??
thank you shooo much BFF !!!!!!
ohhh hooooo jiska darr tha wahi hua……
now i’m surely gone……….!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
God save me……………!!!!!!!!!!!!!hehehe
yrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr bas ab rulayegi kya pagali ……..
itni tareef wo bhi mapni iss jhalli BFF ki…… not bad not bad ha…….
good going…………
ya but i think 2morrow you’ll get a shock…….
but will wait for your reaction……..
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very nice epi n want swasan friendship soon
thanksss mona…… yeah i’ll try to make them friends asap…..
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Awesome yaar Yashu!! Too good! Sabke beech mein tashan hai!!! Hot!! Loving it dear!!! Love u❤️❤️
thanksss Ayu babes….. hmmmm after all it’s their tashan wala ishq……
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Yashu waiting for ur msg….❤️❤️
Love u too❤️
which msg babes…..????????
love u infinity …………?????
Yaar inbox check kar..msg choda hai?
ohhh that one that toh i replied also….??
Hey yashu
Awesome episode
Loved their scenes
N yes frndship is first stage
I’m eager fr next one
Loved it N love u
Thank you shooo much dear Ramya…….!!!!!!
glad that you liked ……….
me too , also think that frdship is the 1st stage
will post asap…………….
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nice
thanksss Ragzz ki Teju darling……………….
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Hey Yashasvi,
Dear u write so well 🙂 Keep it up dear!
Actually Zuha is busy with her projects so she will off site for few days but we will be commenting on her behalf. Dear u rock!
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-AnusheyRafaya (including Zuha?)
Hey Anu and Rafu……..
thank u so much guyzzzz……..
ohhhh is that soo , koi ni all the best to her from me…..
thankss fr commenting guyzzzz………………
yehhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i rocked…….hehehe………..
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and ya only one problem that …….that call me Yashu guyzz……..
i told u before also……
why so formal…..
take a chill pill yrrrrr
and be friends……
Wow yashu …… kya episode tha??? …………………
……………………………………………………………………………vahi pooch rahi hun ……kya episode tha……..chal main hi bataa deti hun ……… jhakaas episode tha yaar ……. amazing……..great job …..keep writing like this my baby ……… love u a lot ?????
Awwwww that was a shooo cute wala comment………..
hmmmm ab agar me btane lag gyi toh to TU wale moderate hi krte rhte…
isilye better tu ne hi bta diya…..
Haye i’m very happy that u liked it my babes……
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Loved it yashu!!!!!!!! Just awesome….. Sorry I couldn’t know that it was urs….. Continue writing….. I am in hurry so I can’t comment a longer one….. Continue writing….
Awwwwww deekshu………….. glad that you commented………..
it’s ok babes…….
will continue dear……………………..
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Superb
thankssss dear tani …………..
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