Hellooo!Guyss !!M back with my last part of my story…thnk u all for ur support… hope u all like it…
Soo here we goo –
Flashback continues :::
She turned around to ask Ragini …but to her surprise Ragini was not there n d view she witnessed make her frooze..
at some distance Sanskar was standing with a guitar in his hand…their eyes meet ,, had a cutee n painful eyelock..without removing his eye he started to sing
(Enjoy the song ;-*)
Pehli nazar mai kaisa jaadu kar diya
Tera ban baitha hai mera jiyaa,,
Jaane kya hooga, kya hooga kya pataa,
Iss pal ko milke aa jee lein zara..
(He remembers their first meet)
Main hoon yahan, Tu hai yaahan
Meri bahoon mai aa, aa bhi jaa
O jaan-e jaa, dono jahaan,
Meri baahon mai aa,, bhool jaa. . .aa
O jaan-e jaa, dono jahan,
Meri bahoon mai aa,, bhool jaa. . . . Aa
(He remembers their first HUG,,)
BABY I LOVE U ,, BABY I LOVE U,,(5)
BABY I LOVE U soo….(finally)
(He is taking steeps slowly towards her,,n swara was just standing there with tear in her eyes.)
Har duwa mai shamil tera pyar hai ,
Bin tere lamha bhi dushwar hai,,
Dhadkano ko tujhse hi darkar hai
Tujhse hai raahtai, tujhse hai chaahatai,,
Tu joo mila ek din mujhe mai kahi hoo gaya laapata..
O jaan-e- jaa dono jahaan meri bahhon mai aa bhul jaa(2)
Uuh LOVE U,,(4) BABY I LOVE U SOO,,,,
Finishing his song he kneel down in front of her,, n said lovingly “”SWAARRA””(awwwww,,guys m having butterflies)
He took out a teddy bear n chocolate with rose n extended this to her n said
Swara i know u must be shock with this sudden proposal…but now i cant suppress my feelings anymore..i just want to take my heart out to u…one thing i want to tell u from long Swara
“Taking a deep breath”
I LOVE U SWARA.
I LOVE U SOO MUCH..
You know what life counts all d roads we travel,, some are smooth some r rough, some would rather forget.. But there is one road, i won’t regret..The road where we met n become friends.
Swara i wanna travel with u in all d roads. i want u in my life…i wanna be with u till d last breath of my life…wanna die in ur embrace..
Will u accompany me?
Will u be with me?
Will u be mine for forever?
Will u be my princess?
He extends his hand…
Swara stands like a statue but suddenly
Bends down n gave him a bone crushing HUG…happiness,pain,love,care all d emotions were in that hug… they both hug as tight as they could..like their whole life depends on the hug..
Both broke their hug n joined their forehead ..Swara whispers “”I LOVE U TOO my prince…Love is our true Destiny… i cant find the meaning of life by myself alone…i can find it with u.,i wanna be with u ,,together forever…””
Sanskar again hugs her tightly..
both stayed there for some time but came into sence hearing claping sounds..
So many people were around them.. witnessing the start of a heavenly couple’s endless love…
Some were praying for their future,,some were blessing them,, all adored them..
it was just a start of their new love…new life n new journey.
They both went to chocolate shop n then ice cream shop following cotton candy shop…whole day both enjoyed n cherish their old moments…thinking about the beautiful future with each other…(but we don’t know na what destiny has planned for them ).
Flashback ends :::
Back to present:::
Swara- Kiddo,,now it’s been 2 years we r together..u know with time his love,care,respect towards me is only increasing (blushed)… I m blessed to have him as mine… I can’t even imagine my single day without him.
Tomorrow m going back to my home.. i don’t know how will i live? M gonna miss him badly (sobbing)..
But nevermind.. m going to talk to papa about him n our relation(as her mother already knows about Sanskar).
Hope papa understands me n accept us..
But i don’t know why,why m feeling restless, as if something is going to happen..God ji i hope nothing goes wrong n our relation got compl…. (interrupted)
One of her friends- Swara,, come sleep it’s too late . Morning u need to wake up fast..
I shrugged my thoughts aside close my diary n sleep thinking about tomorrow’s blissful morning with each other where will b only Swara n Sanskar..
Next day Swara bid bye to everyone..except Ragini n Sanskar..
She was searching her life,,suddenly she sees him under a tree resting his head n closed eyes like he was in deep thoughts..
Swara-(slowly) –“” Saanskkar””
Sanskar doesn’t say anything n pull her into a breath taking hug.. after departing he captured her lips showing his love ,care n tension to loose her.. Swara also repocrated d kiss with equal passion.. when they were out of breath,,broke the kiss n join there forhead…
Sanskar was feeling restless as he is going to loose something precious..he again hugs her,
Sanskar- Shona plzzz don’t goo .. i’ll miss u…
Swara- i also don’t want to go Sanskar.. but it’s a matter of few days.. i’ll be back to be with u forever.. then this distance will also not b able to separate us.. (Both were crying silently ,, showing how much they gonna miss each other)
Soon they broke the hug n stare each other lovingly…
Now it’s time for bid bye to her sister, her best friend her soul mate Ragini..
Both were weeping,, words are not coming out from throat… they hug n cried their heart out.. between sobbing they both said together..
“” TAKE CARE OF YOURSELF””(smiled a little)(BG music Swaragini plays)
Swara finally bid bye to everyone n went to station with Sanskar…
Here Sanskar was feeling strange to let her go alone so he also decided to go with her …
Swara- Sanskar what’s this? R u also coming with me?*innocent face..
Sanskar- yes, my princess m also coming with u.. afterall our destination is one .. rit..(peaked her cheeks)..
Swara- Waise !! tell me r u scared thinking that something bad will happen with me rit?
Sanskar- Swaraaa(angry)!! (Tightening his grip on her shoulder..)
Never say all this !! Don’t dare too utter all this nonsense.
Nothing bad can happen to u, till m with u… even death also can’t touch u .. if it comes he has to face me first… Understand !!! (he left her shoulder)
Swara felt immense happiness by his words..she back huged him n said “SORRY”.. she peaked his cheeks ..
Swara- I know u r with me Sanskar.. i don’t have any fear when u r with me not even death.. n if the death comes i would love die in ur embrace..
Their half journey has passed.. just few minutes left to get their destination.. both were happy n Swara was talking with her mom…
suddenly they heard a sound “”BBHHOOMM”” n everything went black..
After sometime Sanskar gained consciousness n looked around..his heart stopped beating looking hundreds of dead bodies.
Suddenly he saw his life lying on d ground , breathing heavily n calling his name…
He gets up with immense pain in his body n walk towards her difficultly…
He takes her in embrace,she slowly opens her eyes.. both asked
“Aar..ee u.uu fin..ee??”…
Both nodes(but they know they r not)
Sanskar kissed her forehead…
Swara started breathing more havily..
Swara- s.aa.ns.kar i cca..nt se.e ann..th..ing… so..mee o.nne i..ss is.ss call..ingg me.
Wi.ll wil..ll uu c.oome w.ithh me.. I i .can..t li.vee wi.thout uu..(ahhhh)
Sanskar also started havily n said ” Princ..ess i all.soo c.an see th.e o.ther wor.ld..wh.ere u n me for.ever.. awayy f.rom all d re..lat.ions.
Saying thus both kissed each other for d last time..shut their eyes n their heart finally stopped beating..
They died..they died in each other embrace.. 1st Sanskar n then Swara… fulfilling their promises to be with each other till d last breath.
(THERE WAS A BOMB BLAST)
They r no more in d earth,,, but heaven made them again together forever where no fear if death,, no fear of loosing each other..
They r in paradise in””SWASAN’S PARADISE””
There r winds of Destiny that blow when we least expect them…Sometimes they gust with d fury of a hurricane,,sometimes they barely fan one’s cheek..But d winds can’t be denied, bringing as they often do a future that is impossible to ignore..
THE END…
Thnk u soo much for reading..
90 Comments
Hawwwwwww hayeeeee one u ended and secondly u mudererrr ???? hehehehe awesome epi kakali and chalooo finally they will be together in heaven ?
Thnk u soo much Dii.. without ur encouragement it wouldn’t have been possible… yooo they r in paradise…
Awww kakali mindblowing awesome.. loved it. Thus it ws swasan paradise nw i got it.. alas their roads end at heaven wr rhey wr traveling togthr with love nd hapiness..:-D 😀 😀 then rags??
Rags was cupid here.. she did her work .. n now i don’t have her number.. soo don’t know where she might be…
n Thnk u sooo much Navii… m soo happy that u liked it… it means a lot… :-*
it was such a true love and damn emotional
Yeah Myna their love is true n bleesed… thnk u dear.. n yeah ur name iss soo cute…
In our Assamese language Mayna is called to our cutee ones …
Sorry for sad ending.. as i said at d 1st chappy it’s somehow based on a true story… n yeah it’s true… not only one Swara Sanskar but more then hundreds were killed in that bomb blast… now d date is again coming ,, d day which shakes me ,, shakes d whole Assam brutally… 30 October…
it’s been now 8 years that incident happened in 2008,,, though we get scared remembering d scene…. soo thought to dedicate the story to our couple SWASAN…. thnk u…
U made me cry kakali…. Sad ending tho hai…. Rulaya bahuth….. ? but story is marvelous n proposal is so nice… I loved it.
Thnk u Maha… i made u cry Awwwwww… m soo sweet u know !!!*wink
Thank u kakali for writing this story
The title is soo apt
I always considered u as a funny humorous girl but today u proved u are emotional too love u loads……
Swasan our heavenly couple love u swasan…
Awwww Simin thnk u soo much dear… u find me funny waaaaa !!! such a amazing discovery… u loved the emotional scene … but i thought it wouldn’t make upto ur expectation.. but m glad u like it.. take care dear.. 😀
I am very very angry with you. Now ask na why? Let me tell you why don’t you inform me you have written such a wonderful story.
By luck I had seen it , truly saying it’s beyond perfect. I love it very very much.
Well I don’t have many words to describe how beautifully you have written it.
Keep writing, I will wait more ff/ ss from you…
Anniya give me 2 n half seconds to find words for replying u… uhhhh !! m not getting it…
u love it .. reaooaally ? awwwww
thnkk u soo much dear… it’s a really blessfull compliment…
u r angry with me naaa !! but m too happy ,, afterall we all get angry with our love ones na… huhuhuhu !!!
Now my anger is vanish seeing your rply.
I really love it, even I mention my frnds to read ur as. I am sure they will also love it..
You know I never mention my ff to my frnds so you can imagine how much I had love it…
Aww awww awwww !! u don’t know Anniya how m feeling now !!! it’s like taking bath without shower … flying without wings… thnk u sooo much… ;-*
Why why you end. choti. Aaaaaaaaah. I will wait for you I mean for next swasan ff. Love you choti. Come back soon
Diii i end it ..bcz u r coming naa..
thnk u sooo much dii… take care !! :*
It’s beautiful… Want to cry but can’t stop feeling happy either… Vo paradise mein hain.. Then OK.. Great one sis
Sis !! awww it means u r my new Diii…
Divyaa di thnk u for ur wonderful comment…m soo happy that u liked it… thnk u 😀
emotional..
Thnk u soo much S… 😉
Oh My God..kakali..I swear if you were here with me I would have surely murdered you…You kill my SwaSan you are a killer…I will send you behind the bars…BT will also bail you soon bcz you have gifted us such a amazing story, I loved it dear, but I didn’t expect a ending like this..?? I am crying only because of you….Now you have to repent by writing another wonderful story but with a Perfect N happy ending N with That should be a bit longer…Understood..
So your case is still pending….N FROM TODAY YOUR NAME IS MISS.CUTE MURDERER…??
ITNA TOH HAQ HAI NA MUJA..
N ya thank you so much for adding my crush (my first love) song, Pehli nazar,I just love ATIF ASLAM..so thank you so much…
Hahahaha Maryam !!! u can’t do anything to me as m wearing helmet n bullet proof jacket…
n u r thinking to put me behind d bars… hmmm i don’t have problem… but i’ll send u my fav food list .. soo send them in jail… i’ll perfectly live there… n yeah also my phone’s charger… plzzzz…
once again thnk u for the oscar winning Tittle… awwwww it sounds soo cutee…
Thnk u sooo much dear for ur support… love u.. m waiting for ur nect chappy…
Atif Aslam is also my fav singer !!! n this is one of my fav song…n u liked his song na ,, i read it in other’s ff .. soo thought to add it.. for u specially…
Awww..thank u so much my dear Miss.Cute Murderer…for adding my favourite song..love you for that…N don’t worry I’ll make sure that you receive five-star service in the bar..after all you are such a amazing writer…but I’ll also make sure that you should fulfil your punishment by writing an other amazing story…
N thank u for reading N liking my work. .??
Waah !!! waaahh !!! Maryam… tussi great hoo ,,, both sides have punishment… huhuhuhu u r sooo smart … do u prefer almond so much ??
n love u toooo… r u from India or other country ??
Nice dear…. But a sad ending…. Everyone there can’t be a happy ending right!!!!!!! Continue writing!!!!! And do infrom me if you write an ff or one shot!!!!!
Thnk u sooo much Deeksha… n i’ll surely inform u if i write anything… but can’t promise… take care dear .. :-*
Thnkew so much Kakali for this wonderfulwonderful story …. I loved it … And ya it is the bitter reality of this cruel world …. And don’t understand how can a person b so heartless that they don’t even think once before killing so many people so mercilessly … So brutually …. RIP to the victims who face such miserable death..
Cutiee !! u r too small/tinny but can understand everything… it’s soo nice of u.. n yeah thise people r like that .. what can we dooo ,,, sooo i pray God to make them mosquitoes .. n i wanna beat them with tennis racket… huhhhh !!!
Thnk u sooo much dear… ur comment means a lot to me… take care ;-*
U r really funny diii … U know how to make someone smile when u r speaking something serious even … And that’sthat’s wat a reason I love u so much …. And sry I wrote the comment in hurry so by mistake I wrote just Kakali instead of Kakali dii … Chalo a tight hug from my side diiduuuuu … Lov u
U r really funny diii … U know how to make someone smile when u r speaking something serious even … And that’sthat’s wat a reason I love u so much …. And sry I wrote the comment in hurry so by mistake I wrote just Kakali instead of Kakali dii … Chalo a tight hug from my side diiduuuuu … Lov u tc
Ab I don’t know ki wat happened to telly updated they r posting my comment twice … May b I write soooo well?????…
Seee !!! i told u ,, u r soo smart … even TU also accepts dat…
A tighhtttttt huuuggg from my side also ,,, love u tooo cutie….
Woooooowwwww dear it was awesome I cant describe ????????????ahhhh I love swasan ?????
Thnk u very much Rabia !!! m sooo happy dat u like it… n i love SWASAN too… :-*
i love u di, i love u so much u know what u made cry wowwwww awesome ff di i love it to the core . tight hug to u di
Maha i made u cry !!!chorryy*puppy face…
But don’t worry i’ll eat two chocolates more today for repentation…
Thnk u soo much dear.. u r such a sweetheart… love u tooo … take care.. :-*
Ohh kiddoo… U made me cry…. ???come with new ff.. Enterain TU people! ??????????????
Diii i made u cry !!!! okkk for that i’ll eat two chappaties more today..
Thnk u soo much dii.. may i know ur real name if u don’t mind??
I vl message u
YeHh !! dii u msg me… but i,, huhh i can’t .. i have sooo many problems with this account… can’t even change my profile .. can’t msg…
nothing nothhiinnggg !!!
Why choti I have many thing to share with you. ????????? .
I also have lots of things Diii… but what too doo… it’s sooo annoying…
i don’t have any rivalry with TU though they r punishing me with their hilarious act… huhhhhh !!!!
Kakali…. I messaged u… Check it baby!
Dii , i got ur message… n i also reply u…
but i know u’ll not get my msg as always…thnk u for d reply… 🙂
Oh my God, Kakali. This was damn too emotional for me to even handle but I still loved it. You are an awesome awesome writer. <3
Sanya m going mad for ur comment…
woooowwww !!!! m a writer !!! yaaahooo !!! m sooo happy…. thnk u soo much dear… <3 …
To emotional per last episode q?
To emotional per last part q
Sorry dear for d sad ending… i just wanted to show their endless love … which is gonna continue on paradise also…
Thnk u soo much for ur comment… :-*
Awesome story,come with another.
Thnk u dear…. 🙂 .. will surely try … :-‘
Wat u killed dem???
I luvd ur story… u justfd its title
It was emotional yet beautiful
Thnnkk u soo much Arshaanya… u loved it… awww m soo glad… take care :-*
U nailed it dear, can’t forget that incident even today waiting for ur nxt ff
Thnk u soo much Mirna.. yess ,,i cant forgot the incident.. infect no one can can ,, that day there were 4 back to back blasts in different places…
??? death shows their eternal love… nice,,, can’t wait for another ff.xx
Thnk u soo much dear !!! m glad u like it… n i’ll try for another one but can’t promise..
u all superb writers are here.. i’ll will wait for ur next chappy… :-*
Nice one…
Thnk u dear .. 😀
I am new to this site, can you tell me some good swasan ff.
your story was beyond superb.
Thnk u soo much dear for ur comment…
there are lots of SWASAN ff like,,,
*love between SWASAN
*love is a beautiful emotion(season 1,, 2 is running)
*it’s not revenge it’s love(season 1,2 is complete 3 is runnung)
*accidentally urs
*kuch toh hai tere mere darmiyan
*hidden beast
*beauty n d best
* tu meri mannat
*falling for u
*swaragini broken relations is ut oure or impure
*knowing u
*true love never dies(season 1-2)
*SWASAN u r my life (sesn 3 running)
*new relations begins
*i m sorry swara i hurt u…
n lots of … now i don’t remember more.. soo hope u like it all…
aww…so emotional
Thnk u Vyshu … :-*
its awesome u made me cry
but happy that our heavenly couple r in paradise
just read all parts now
actually I was a silent reader but by reading ur name I thought to read & break my silence
finally thanks for wonderful ts
sorry for not commenting on previous parts
Ommggg !!!! Sri u broke ur silence for my chappy… u don’t know dear what a big compliment it is !!! it’s feel like heaven…. i m soooo soo sooo happy…
Thnk u sooo much for urr wonderful comment… it really means a looot to me… stay bleesed dear 🙂
Kakali just read it now
All the 3 parts are awesome
Why don’t u write more shots on swasan
It’s too good
Thnk u soo much for reading … i’ll try but can’t promise… as u all r here na.. i will read only… take care dear.. 😉
Stupendously nice
Thnk u Tani… ;-*
omg..!! Kakali… you killed my Swasan.. but uughhh.. huhuhu
Thnk u Mica… !! no they r still together n will always be together…
Bdw how was ur trip ?
trip ? what trip babe?
Hmmmm… !!!! today u were missing na !! so thought u went to trip..
at first i thought somebody kidnapped u ,, but thn drop d idea ,, coz kidnepers can’t take risk on lif.. sooo…
u damn rite,, no one will kidnap me, since they should provide me a tons of chocolate :3
just lil bit busy for reunion party and sick also.. huh! made me late to read my swasan’s death huhuhu
Oohhhhooo !!!!! take care dear…
hmmm reunion ,, sounds yummyy… <3
Nahi ii! !! Ye kya?? I read this episode yesterday but forgot to comment!! Sry!!!
Nahi iii. .y did u make my SwaSan die??????????!!!!!well I’m crying now also after reading it for 2nd time…
Wowwwww great ending!!!!
Will u come with a new FF?????
Thnx xx for supporting me always dear!!!!!luv u
Awwww Shrinjall !!! don’t cry dear … well i’ll but can’t promise
. afterall i need to read ur chappies … u all r here … huhuhuhuh…
Welcme baby … love u too… ;-*
aww kakali it was damn awesome u made me cry yr
Awww ,, i made u cry !!! Sryyy dearr… n thnk u soo much Kaynat… :-&