ISHKARA FF-NEW FACE OF LOVE (PART 8 )
[By Renima Ishqie]
Hey Ishqies, am back with the 8th part of my ff. Thanks for your suggestions and opinions.About this part….well you guys read and comment on it…That’s all….
Scene-14 (@Art hub)
{Omkara is much tensed. Ishana is unable to say nothing as om was much hurt}
Omkara : Ishana….
Ishana : Omkara…..I don’t know what I should say now….
Omkara : Ishana…..Mr. Oberoi my “so called father”…..who never seriously taken any relationship…..My mom who sacrificed her life for him as she trusted and loved him a lot….But…..
Ishana : I can understand Omkara….
Omkara : You know Ishana…when I was a kid I wish I could be the glass of peg in my mom’s hands…..As all mothers will take their kids in their hands, they will sung lullaby for their kids…..but I always heard the incomplete words delivered by mom…..which were really painful and will come out when she consume drinks……If I could have be that drink…..at least I can feel my mom’s touch……And…..{Omkara burst into tears and he is not able to control it….Ishana touch his hands…..}
Omkara{much emotional stares ishana}: People will be able to see wounds…But they will not be able to…..
Ishana : See the Pain…..Isn’t it ??
{They share an emotional eye-lock…..Omkara holded Ishu’s hands….}Omkara : Ishu….will you dance for me now ??
Ishana : Now….Omkara…
Omkara: Please…..{He stared her in such a way that she couldn’t say ‘no’ to him}
{Ishana dances on “Do pal ki” from Veer-Zaara….. Ishana was unable to move well as her mind was full of omkara’s tears…..As she looked omkara’s eyes….she couldn’t focus on her steps and she lost her balance….She was about to fall…But Omkara holded her….. That moment they share an eye lock….In mind they felt so many feelings which they couldn’t express through words….}
Shivaay and Anika reaches there.
Anika : Omkara….
{Omkara and Ishana released themselves from their hold}
Shivaay : Om, Badi Maa…
Omkara : What happen, Shivaay ?
Anika : Guys, Police got evidence against Bade paapa….They have reached oberoi mansion.
Shivaay : I tried my level best ….Unfortunately what Ridhima said became true and…..all the proofs it is clear that bade paapa is a…..
Omkara : Culprit….I know it Shivaay….
Shivaay : Om…..he is a part of our family….And why you informed police to enquire …..
Omkara : Because I promised Ridhima that within two hours Mr. oberoi will be in prison……And now truth has come out.
Shivaay :What’s wrong with you? In favour of truth you will go against your family….
Omkara : Yes….I always stand for truth….though it is bitter…
Anika : Please stop arguing….Jhanvi aunty is really upset….we should go home….
Scene-15 (@ Oberoi Mansion)
{Tej has locked himself in his room. Shivaay and Omkara knocks the door. But tej is not ready to open the door.The team of police shot the door’s lock with gun and when they entered @ the room they find Tej on the bed. He has committed suicide by cutting his vein. Prinku screams….
”Paapa….”Jhanvi is unable to believe her eyes….Omkara is shocked. He calls Tej as “Paapa”……
Jhanvi {with much anger}: Omkara,…..just shut your mouth…. He always wished at least one day you will call him paapa…..
As you are his son….May be he can be the culprit…People may curse him…But he is your dad..He is my husband….My soul….And you have separated my soul from me…….{Jhanvi was in full of anger and desperation}
Omkara: Mom……{Om was unable to say anything}
{Jhanvi hugs Omkara and said ”Tej is not able to tolerate so much consequences for the sins….Thats why he decided to……”She literally started crying……}
Shivaay{emotional}: Am sorry, this time I was unable to save bade paapa….
Jhanvi : Shivaay….You have always been the great wall of this family….But this wall is weak to resist truth…..
{Shivaay also cries and hugs Jhanvi…..}
Prinku : Paapa….Please wake up……Paapa….Shivaay bhaiya….. Ask paapa to get up….{She hugs Shivaay and cries}
{Anika and Ishana also became very emotional}
Scene- 15 ( @ Ishana’s House)
Days passed and Shivaay, Omkara has engaged back to their works. Mona also wrote her exams well…..
Ishana : Mona, I feel so happy for you. You have wrote all exams. But I remember you said me that you have to pay fees for semester exams….Then how you paid it??
Mona : Well, it is actually a secret. Anika didi will explain it
Ishana : Anika??
{ Anika and Prinku comes there. Ishana and Mona are so happy to see them}
Anika : Ishana, Now Mona has become an earning member of your family.
{Ishana gets surprised and looks @ Mona. She shake her head with a smile and explain whole things. Ishana gets emotional and hugs Mona}
Ishana : Thanks Anika….You are really a good person
Anika : Credit goes to Priyanka also…..
Ishana : Of course…Thanks priyanka….
{Ishu’s dad also joins them in happiness. They take a selfie}
PRECAP: Anika is busy in preparations of Omkara’s exhibhition…..Shivaay also helps her…
16 Comments
Is tej alive …..ishkara sences were awesome and emotional…..luv your ff
Piya…Thanks…And…Tej….I will post Next partsoon….
Superb di…tej dead???
Arrey ! Suspense ko aise hi rahne do……Next part….u will get it…..
super duper ff.is tej alive
Suspense
amazing di tej dead or alive
suspense killing me
please post next part soon
I have submitted the last twoparts….Ok….tu will post it by tonight……
Ishkara scenes were good…Precap is nice..waiting for the next part
Thanks …..I have submitted the last two parts….tu will post it by tonight
Firstly ….a big sorry for not commenting for the previous episodes….and I find myself so lucky I was able to read ur 3 episodes together ?…Actually I was out of station so….
In the previous episodes ..u explained their pain really nicely ….ur really superb ……and I have a felling like Tej is alive ..idk just feel like ..suspense ???……pls post they next one ASAP….Eagerly waiting …….
I have submitted the last two parts……suspense ko waise hi rahne do…..tu will post it by tonight
Sorry d for commenting late. And to say truth your ff is mind blowing Yar. Di I don’t know how you get such interesting plot. And waiting for the next as I would love shivika scenes. And I am not a good poet like you, so I feel these lines are enough for my standard
Agreed satvika I was feeling very emotional just it you described so well that I was in my life experiences and was literally crying so good
Thanks bshama
Thanks sat