TEJVI & ISHKARA-JOURNEY THROUGH THEIR LIVES {Part-5}
[By Renima Ishqie]
Hai my ishqies…Happy Dushera to All and Advanced Muharam Wishes also…Well, ishqies am back with the fifth part of my ff as just now am free. Am glad that many of you loved Jhanvi and Om on the previous part.Ishqies….Please read this part also and comment on it…
Scene 8(Omkara’s room)
{Shivaay and Rudra reached Omkara’s room. But omkara was not there.Both of them get tensed)
Rudra : Bhaiya….Am getting scared…Will Om??
Shivaay : Rudra….Nothing will happen to Om….If my guess is right then he will be with Badi Maa
Rudra : Yeah Bhaiya,Lets go….
Scene 9(Jhanvi’s room)
{Jhanvi and Omkara were standing near the wall @ Jhanvi’s room in which Tejvi’s wedding photo was hanged.)
Shivaay: Thank God! Om….You are here…
Omkara : Don’t worry Shivaay….Am still alive….
Shivaay : Just shut your mouth….You know Rudra was much scared and I just….{emotional}
Omkara : Shivaay…..Am… {emotional}
Jhanvi : Shivaay, Rudra…really you both felt that omkara will do something which is not right…..
Rudra : I don’t know Mom….Om is right or wrong…As am not a best man like Om….
Omkara : Rudra…..
Rudra : Om, do you have any idea how much Shivaay bhaiya get tensed? And…om..whatever happened…..just because of that lady only…..{rudra cries}
Shivaay: Exactly….Om…and trust me we are with badi maa….
Jhanvi : I know my children…..And shivaay…..omkara just came here as….{she raised her hands to wipe out her tears. Shivaay noticed that her palm got injured and it was dressed up with the plaster}
Shivaay{tensed}:Badi Maa….what happened to your hand?
Jhanvi{smiles}: Shivaay…..Don’t get panic…In your style…..it is not a big deal….not a big deal[every one get emotional]
Omkara : Shivaay…..you know….when I came here I saw that mom…{Omkara cries..}
Jhanvi : When Omkara saw that the glass has broken and my hand has injured he just and….. Guys….am ok…..{emotional}
Omkara : Mom…..{jhanvi and om hug each other….Rudra also cries…..}
Shivaay : Rudra….common…..you are the dashing hero…..
Rudra : Bhaiya….It is very easy to say that am a hero…..But in
Reality….I think am only a zero…..actually I don’t know how to handle situations like bhaiya and I am not able to convince people like Om……As am dump……{three brothers are emotional}
Omkara : Rudra…..you are not at all dump……The way you approach things is really great…Rudra…..And only you can say “just move on without looking back” …..Shivaay can say “Not a big deal…” But unfortunately…..I can’t say….{burst into tears}
Shivaay : Om, Rudra….I remind you again….that we are…..
SHIVOMRU : One for all and All for One…….{Three brothers get emotional and they hug each other}
Omkara : The Great Wall of Shivaay Singh Oberoi…..
Jhanvi : Am glad at least my children are are here for a reason….But why am here???
Shivaay : Badi maa…om, rudra,prinku and me each and every one of our family are with you…….
Jhanvi : Every one ???{Om stares her and feels sad}
Shivaay : Badi maa…..{shivaay gets a phone call and he says
” excuse me” and leaves}
Rudra : Mom….dadi is really tensed…..I think we should meet her now….
Jhanvi : Rudra…..you just go and tell Maaji that am alright…..
I will be there in 10 minutes…..
Rudra : Ok, Mom…..{Rudra leaves}
Jhanvi : Omkara….pinky and priyanka??
Omkara : They have not reached home…..Priyanka msgd me
that they will be here by tomorrow only…….
Jhanvi : Omkara…..I want to say….{she stares Omkara and suddenly take her eyes from him}…..Am alright…..thats all
Omkara : Mom…..when a person lies he will not be able to talk by looking @ eyes…..Because he himself can’t look @ his heart …since his heart knows thr truth……But unfortunately people will not listen what their heart says…..And you are my Mom…I know that you are in extreme pain…..Mom….why you are still with Mr. Oberoi??{emotional}
Jhanvi : Omkara….I don’t know why am with him…..Its true that I have hurted a lot…..But as you said when I listen to my heart….my heart just says that I love Tej……{emotional}
Omkara : Then….why it happened??
Jhanvi : I don’t know….Omkara……why I gave my own ring to swethlana….why I asked tej to put ring on her hand…the same ring which once Tej put on my hand…And now I lost the
Right to question Tej…..I lost the right to argue with Tej……
As swethlana said may be I was not able to give space for Tej…or I think am unconscious in a conscious state……As I need some…..{she burst into tears}
Omkara{hold her hands}: Mom…..Take care…..
Jhanvi : Omkara….the wound has covered and am better now….Then afterall it is just a wound only…..
Omkara : Mom….I know it is just a wound…..And it can be heal by medicines….It can be covered with the plaster….But the wounds on heart…..man has not discovered any medicine to heal those wounds…..He is not able to cover it with as heart is like a mirror which reflects what you are….It will rewind your past…The wounds will remain as the symbol of struggle where you can’t get a relief…..and these drinks are unable to convince your heart{he point out the glass}……….
Mom….The wounds of heart will ultimately reward you pain….only pain….{Om literally cries}
Jhanvi {emotional}: Beta…..
Omkara : Beta……Mom…am glad that you called me “beta”….. Now a days only…..choti maa calls me beta…..
{ Jhanvi placed her hand on Omkara’s cheek and omkara holds it and cries….Both of them hug each other and stare each other…..Their wet eyes have witnessed so many incidents in life and the pain suffered by both of them lead
them to miss so many things which actually a son and mother need…}
Scene-10{@Kitchen}
{Its morning…Three brothers are @ kitchen and all are busy with preparing their dishes.Tia and Anika are standing beside them}
Tia : Hey Shivaay baby…..i send you reikis yesterday….but baby you didn’t replied me……Everything fine baby?
Shivaay : Yeah everything is fine…..
Tia : Baby are you free now?
Shivaay : Yeah..am free….
Tia : Baby then can we go for shopping? You know I just want to purchase….
Anika : Reiki….
Tia : Anika reiki can’t be purchased…..You know universe….
{Shivaay interrupts their converstion….}
Shivaay : Tia….i have to change my dress….I will be back within 5 mints….
Tia : Ok, Shivaay baby…take your own time…..{shivaay leaves}
Anika : Tia…you was saying about reiki…you know I too want reikis…..
Tia : Really, so sweet of you….Actually reikis are capable of….
{Tia was giving long lecture on reikis…..Anika, Rudra, Omkara get bored….Amidst of these Rudra placed a glass of water near Anika and said in sign language to drink water. As Anika was really irritated with Tia and her forehead was sweated.
Anika took the glass and she was about to drink….Rudra just screamed that “snake….snake….” Anika’s hand slipped and the whole water fell on Tia….All are shocked}
Tia : Anika, what’s wrong with you?
Anika : Am sorry…Tia…when Rudra screamed snake…I just…
Tia : Snake….Oh My God! {she holds Anika’s hand}
Omkara : Guys…don’t worry….Actually Rudra…
{Pinky reaches there and interrupted their conversation}
Pinky : Oh My Mata! Tia you don’t get time for baths ??
Tia : Pinky aunty actually Anika throw water on me as she saw a snake……
Anika : Tia…I didn’t saw the snake…..
Pinky : How is it possible? Even a cockroach has no courage to make entrys without informing Shivaay@ oberoi house…..
Anika : You’re right….Snake will be scared to bite as billuji is the great Shree Shree Shivaay Singh Oberoi……
Rudra : Anika didi…..What a punch……
Tia : Universe….why damaged my dress with water?
Pinky : Tia …Just go and change…Anika just ask dadi and prepare the list for weddings….{tia and anika leaves}
Rudra : Om…Anika didi’s raita on lady baba’s reiki…
Omkara : Shut up Rudra……
Pinky : beta rudra…..I need to talk with Omkara
Rudra : Choti maa, not fair….
Pinky : Are you leaving now or I have to press your ears?
Rudra : Ok…am leaving…..
Pinky : Omkara beta……Priyanka…..
PRECAP : Ishana @ Art hub…….
26 Comments
Sorry di today no long comments as guests are coming to home damn good and please continue writing for us ..
Its om dear….thanks…even am busy with dushera and today di’s wedding anniversary also
I mean its ok…{typing mistake}
Wow di it is really awesome, janvi and omkara ka Convo is superb and very emotional. Loved it. Please update the next epi ASAP???
Thanks…will update by tonight or by tomorrow…..sat i commented on ur 11th episode…and will comment on next one when i get time
You rocked again renima di…loved Om and Jhanvi’s convo…it’s so emotional…the way you expressed the mom-son bonding…it’s just beyond words…and Anika pours water on Tia…hehehe…its so funny…
Thank u so much…raita on reiki….actually i want such kind of scene in serial…
Superb episode first half so emotional om and jhanvi part and the kitchen sceane so funny anika’s raita on lady Baba’s reiki
Happy Dusshera
Disha…happy dushera to u dear…and raita spread on reiki because in serial i really get irritated with lady baba..like when shitia marriage stopped she said sso”pata nahi shivaay baby meri reiki mein kya kami rah gayi”…I mean the way she reacted on such a serious situation ….really ….damn fun…..and alwys sso hi kyun paani ka shikaar? i just change it here…..
Awesome idea DI spread water on tia to funny
Wish your di Happy Wedding Anniversary from my side too
Happy dushera renima d….d actually my net pack got over…. n i even didn’t read ur episode …for that m feeling bad d…but due to muharram even not allowed to use mobile bcz m fasting….n just turned on data on sim( which is costly so can’t read episode)….so that i can wish ur d….
Wish ur on behalf of me ….happy wedding anniversery to ur d …
I’ll comment when have net pack…byee
Same 2 u dear….abiha…when u get time comment here
Emotional di.. And next part was funny…
Mei toh sochti hun ki uss reiki ko Mar dun..
Thanks….and u enjoyed raita on reiki…..
Very nice di. Amazing bonding between them. I loved it
Thanks chetna, happy birthday sweetie
Renima, really emotional episode. The Shivomru and Jhanvi scenes were nice, and Om and Jhanvi moments were awesome. We have never seen the bond of Jhanvi and Om in the show properly so it was great to see it in ur ff. But the funny kitchen scenes were’nt necessary I guess. There is no connection btwn kitchen scene and other scenes. Rudra was getting emotional a few hours ago and after some time he is joking on Tia with Anika???? It looks strange considering the tension around the house. Shivaye saying nothing happened to Tia when there is such a big issue. It will be better if u take care of these things.
Yaar luna….that kitchen scene i just put in [that its mrng] so it is the next day only…..and dear….actually i include the kitchen scene because i felt 2 much of emotion…then i should mix some fun also…..as u felt it has no connection….i will try my level best in next part….i will try to avoid mistakes…and am glad dear…u pointed out it…..Thanks
Awesome…I read all the parts today di…really liked shiomru scenes and janvi scenes..waiting for next part…
Thanks dear
Renima, one more thing I will like to say. I think Jhanvi is being too goody two shoes. Why is she still living with Tej when he does’nt even cares for her??? It will be better if u show her having some self respect. From whatever I’ve seen till now it looks like Tej does’nt loves Jhanvi so it will be better if they take divorce. I can’t say whether Tej and Shwetlana truly love each other or not so can’t say much about that. The divorce of Tej and Jhanvi will definitely hurt Om, Rudra and Priyanka but they should be mature enough to respect their decision. Rest u can write whatever u like, it’s just my opinion.
Luna…..well dear…..u just read next parts…..and divorce….i respect ur opinion…but well i can’t say much as when i will post next parts u will get the answer …..ok?
I mean not in 6th part….but u will get a hint …….and Jhanvi….Mmm…yaar……just read it……
Matter of self respect and about why she is with oberoi…..u will get answer 2 all questions on upcoming parts….ishqie……ok
Awesome as always…..
Jhanvi omkara conversation was good….
I am Aditi…i have changed my user name to Dipali….
How are u dii??..missing your poems…
am cool ishqie…well am not getting time dear….and about poems…after ishkara track ended….2 be honest am not @ a mood of writing lines