Hello again , Sorry readers for being late actually I was not able to set a storyline and now I am trying hope you all will comment as I am really depressed but decreasing number of comments please let me know that how many of you comment on it so today as I am feeling Better now writing down something and today I will not reply anyone’s comment as I wanna see how much response I get and if I am satisfied so I will continue this article or the 10th part will be the last .. Please understand readers we need your comments and want you to open up and please waste your two minutes in commenting my dears.. And thanks to all who ever commented
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Present Episode – { PART 9}
Scene 1
Friends gang..
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As usual they all were chit chatting on shaza juice recipe.. And laughed as in these five years our friendship bond was the same everyone agreed with this fact ..
Priya said humare dosti fevicol bond jese hai joh chahe bhi toh na juda ho paaye..
Ayath and jara said sahi Baat hai miss. Aachi dost.. And smiled looking at each other
Priya thrown a cushion on them and haha very funny and aachi dost main, same to you, back to you and no returns.. ( pointing her finger at all)
Jara and ayath with all others said yeh toh anika ka dialogue hai kam se kam aapne original toh bolna ..
Nithu said by clicking some photos aaj ki taza khabar .. Priya sejal Singh RU RU kar hui pagal … Kar rahi hai copy dosro ke dialogues..
Priya makes a face ???
Goms and suchi controlled her and said arre stop troubling her otherwise tap phir khul jaayega aur tsunami aa jayegi.. Everyone laughed …
Satvika said and you all forgot that we don’t know swimming… ( she saw at priya) priya said guys I am going … I will not talk to you all ..??
????? everyone got up and stopped her jara and ayath holded her hands one ayath and one jara .. Suchi was standing in front .. Satvika goms holded her from back
Nithu ananya smiled at their chupko dosti moment and clicked snaps.. Satvika said you’re not leaving dear we all apology dear .. Priya looked at her and made a face and was showing some nakhre.. At last after several requests all were angry and said ab bus ho gaya miss footage Queen by priya was still showing nakhre they all were still in that position holding priya..
satvika and goms started tu Nahi manegi na priya said aa ha no .. Satvika and goms started tickling her she falls on bed and everyone ticked her for showing nakhre …
Nithu and ananya clicked snaps of it and was continuously clicking by changing positions and during that ananya got hit by side table and Ishana favorite book ” I had a love story too by ravinder Singh ” fall down and a letter was peeking from it ananya turned and squatters to pick that book she saw the letter in it
( turned her head towards friends gang and saw them busy she opened the letter) .. It was the same letter mentioned in ( part 3) she starts reading it…
Letter content -:
HELLO HOPE AAP THIK HO , AAPKO EK BAAT BATANI HAI WOH KEHTE HAI NA LIFE IS THE BEST TEACHER TO US ITS TRUE AAJ MAINE BHI AAPNI ZINDAGI SAY SABAKH LIYA HAI KI RISHTE JITNE PYAARE HOTE HAI UTNE HI NAZOOKH HOTE HAI AAJ
MENE AAPNE RISHTO KI LIMITS KO TOODH TOH ZINDAGI NE MUJHE ..
Jara and ayath snatched the letter from ananya she had red only one para and both said in a raised voice you know what you’re reading now this letter was only the reason behind ishkara separation … The atmosphere which was pleasant something before became serious and silent..
Ayath started reading in continuity..
She adjusted her voice and said ….. SORRY KI MAINE APNI DI HUI FREEDOM KA GALAT ISSTAMAL KIYA SABKA TRUST TOOTDH DIYA AUR ISS KI PUNISHMENT GOD NE MUJHE DI AAJ MERE ANDAR ITNA KUCH TOOT GAYA HAI KI HIMMAT NAHI HAI WA PISS AANE KI AAP LOGO KE QUESTIONS KA ANSWER NAHI HAI MERE PASS ISS LIYE SUICIDE KAR RAHI HU … Kyuki main…………… Hu….. As she completed reading the letter everyone was upset or in tears and was praising Ishana guts …
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Scene 2
@ Rumya
Rudra was sleepless he was just twisting his body from here to there here to there as he closed his eyes the scene which flashed was somya smiling and talking to someone ( Sahil) giving cute pet names …. Baby …. Babu… Shona… Sweetheart…
Rudra was angry he got up with a sudden jerk and said I won’t leave that babu… Shona… What ever..
And how can my Somo do this… And walks like pendulum and started thinking maybe he is rehaan ….. Or someone else who came in between of our pair Rumya OK now I can’t take it anymore I will straightly ask Somo itself..
He walked to somya room he was on entrance he saw somya was messed with a book.. And her phone rang and she looked at the phone and smiled it was Sahil…. She lifted the phone and said how is my cutie toothe fruity …
Rudra holded the door tightly in anger and said in an irritated tone uff iss ka naam karan kitni bar karogi Somo ..
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Sahil..
Hello soumi ..?? mene aapko disturb toh Nahi kiya na.. Actually mujhe na needh Nahi aa rahi hai toh I thought aapko call karo
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Somo
Oh!! Toh yeh Baat hai no you didn’t disturb me at all dear tumhe paata hai I was thinking about u shona.. .. You know I was making notes for Rudra and checking his notes
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Rudra was oooo…. Thinking about him???? and not me I will kill him
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Sahil said soumi how is Rudra bhaiyya in studies like you superb or pos rocket…
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Somo
He had made many mistakes like a duffer guy he is brainless so called lady killer and if I compare you with him you’re so adorable cute ,intelligent, and attractive like a magnet
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Rudra was like I am duffer , brainless so called lady killer so…..mo
And he is cute intelligent adorable intelligent and attractive ??? bhaiyya shivaay o kya ho???? o dekho apki sissy mujhe rola rahi hai….
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Scene 3..
@ Anshi
Shivaay hugged anika tightly and after few minutes anika came back to her senses and broke the hug and said sorry..
Sorry for what anika dear shivaay stated…
WO…WO.. Hug…. Anika said Shivaay moves closer to her and keeps his hand on her cheek and adjusted her hair back of her ear and said anika we are still in relationship dear
Anika nods her head in no…no we are not in relationship billu ji..
Shivaay was aback from the reply and said I know I have done mistake by keeping you at last actually I used to think that you’re mad silly but cute …
Anika gave a deadly glance folding her hands hmmmm…. I am mad silly ha…
Holding her collar and shivaay cupped her mouth and said you heard mad silly but not cute…. Ha
Anika looked down avoiding eye connection and said yes… I know but how dare you me that billu…
Offo… Who will marry you ha ….
Shivaay said oh hello you know mere liye ladkiyo ki line lagi hui thi I had many girlfriends …
Anika said oh really good so why you’re here go marry anyone and I will dance in your wedding on my song…
Which song??? Shivaay asked…
Billu ki shaadi hogi , billu ka sehar sajega ,billu ghodi chadega , billu dhulha banega …
OK stop !!! Panika….
Don’t spoil my Name billu.. Anika said
Same to you anika don’t call me that… Shivaay same…
Billu billu billu billu billu….
Shivaay cupped his ears and said panika panika panika panika….
While fighting they moved slowly slowly near bed…
While fighting they fall on bed
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Scene 4
Ishkara…
Ishana and omkara entered through the gate as he gate opened their memories too opened… Ishana said omkara to drop him down on the floor from his arms he did the same made her stand still they slowly walked … Ishana was walking and remembering her moments with omkara … She saw ishkara running and chasing each other in garden … She saw a swing in the garden and saw omkara pushing the swing high and Ishana on it enjoying…
She saw lights there and remembered that how they both used to light the place with lamps …
And sometimes lighting a hot balloon and writing their wish on it they used to leave that in air
Omkara too remembered the same … Both looked at each other and there was only silence around them…
Joh na kahe sake tum joh na kahe sake hum joh na kahe sake tum joh na kahe sake hum kahene lagi dono say woh khamoshiyan oh saathiya… Kahe ne lagi dono say woh khamoshiyan oh saathiya, saathiya saathiya…. Plays
Omkara was searching for the key and Ishana said WO…WO… Chabhi flower pot ke niche hogi … Omkara looked at her and thought she remembers…
And went and opened the lock…
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As he opened he saw old sweet Ishana in front of him she said… Oh aap aa gaye Om … Keeping her hands on his shoulders and said om we are here to spend time with each other not with meeting dear jab ghar me itni khubhsurat wife wait kar rahi ho toh kaam ko side me rakhna chahiye…
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Ishana entered the house and saw omkara sitting on the sofa he was having headache and Ishana was giving him head message… And omkara was showing nakhre…
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So guys this is it for today sorry I know it is boring and short but please as I am very depressed with the comments I am dropping this OS on part 10 and sorry for hurting you all suddenly but I feel if I am not good and you all are not happy so why am I writing for only just 10 comments or some more… And I thought to post this one short…
Precap
Omish fighting about their broken relationship and at time he said you’re a cheater you got ……. Pregnant with some other child… Ishana was silent…
Rudra broke in tears and confronted Somo for having an affair…
Anshi closeness……….
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Bye… Will be back with the last bakwaas episode please tolerate me my friends…
15 Comments
Cool shama di, and shivika scenes were awesome and Rudy really funny and our talk and cute teasing of Priya is very nice, very very nice and coming to ishkara, it was really very emotional,loving them
And di, as you said our writers emotions and feelings are expressed through our ffs, then why stopping, there will be many who will be missing your ff, so don’t be disappointed and continue the ff, please and bye for now
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Hii shama it was really very nice
plz dont discontinue it.
Dont stop at 10.
plz plz plz
Awsm….evrytime i read ua ff i feel ill definetly bcome a photographer
Cool Di post the episode ASAP
Amazing shama di..
Frns part was amazing… My schl started di.. Soo I think I can’t cmnt big…
Pls don’t end this ff di…. Pls…
Plz don’t end it cz there may be few commenting on it but many like me wait for it…. plzz don’t end it plz plz…I hope u don’t stop writing this ff and plzz post the next asap…will be Waiting for it eagerly….coming to the episode the precap is making me crazy I so wanna read the next part…. Plz if ur reading it plzz update it today as I can’t handle more of suspense….ishkara track is amazing…Audra getting jealous is so so cute…
Hi shama. …..i respect your view as a writer….some time we get depressed that much that we think of dropping our ff….but it not a correct option I guess…..as someone will miss that ….so plz reconsider for silent readers…….
But I respect your decision…….
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Coming to llot….
Rudras jealousy was awesome…..
Shivay hugs s with Anika…..sooooooooooo cuute? ??
But I hate omkara in precap……how dare hre hurt ishana……
But loved shivika part???
Loved Shivika part & Rumya’s part. By the way I am ‘Shivika Fan’ .(my first username)
awesome part,….dear this is not at all boring i loved shivika scene
Super one cutie pie I will be really angry with if u discontinue… And big sorry for not commenting in prev ones..
Bshama…u are really very creative dear…and again am telling u dear don’t underestimate ur talent….And don’t stop writing….dear…..ilfe we get very less opportunities to express our imagination…..some times we forget to express ourselves also…as soon as we join collsge…the era of college days offers so many things….and when we miss them we really find that how much we have limitted our space for sake of job, for work,for family……You will feel like you git every thing…..but still you are missing more…i mean….friends…..masti…..any thing which you actually get in college life…dear…..so, no need 2 bother….pls continue ffs…
And about this part….i loved the letter ….i mean that words in letter somethng rare and special
And loved the way u presented Rudra…walking like pendulum and thinking of somo…
shivika scenes…awesome…dear..billu ki shaadi hogi..u reminded me the scenes from ishqbaaz
Keep it up dear
Wow loved your episode…Plz update next episode sooner
Eagerly waiting for next one Di, this episode was fantastic.. especially anshi hug.
Its awesome dear
Shivikas moments r suprrr diii…..dnt stop it dii..continueee ittt…