****#TU_MERI_MANNAT epilouge *********
~~~~~~~~~#BHANU
(thanks alot for your valuable response nd sry for late nd special thanks to my uncle bcoz he helped in writing this as he gave me his powerbank so i am writing in filght as i have no time so forgive me for mistakes plz plz plz no more blebbring )
**********episode starts ***********
swara in critical condition
Swara grabbed his collar in pain she is breathing heavily) sanskar pz don’t cry
I love you more even I die I am happy
Tu meri mannat Ho sanskar meri eki mannat tum ho woh Puri hogaya
In now I gonna die in ur arms
I am the luckiest wife in this world
U full filed my every dream sanskar
Sanskar: Noo how can you leave nee swara you promised tht you wont leave me naaa
i need you swara i cant leave without you my love
swara; no yu have too nd plz dont waste your life in revenge nd all its all my mistake to trust that sathvik soo i am paying back
sanskar;(tears) i don’t need anything i only want you swara
swara; (tears about to faint ) i am all urs sanskar
u made may every second so beautiful with ur love
Swara: ( breathing heavily) i wanna see ur smile
sanskarrr. Plz give a smile maa
Sanskar is broken down
Swara: Plz one smile sanskar plz pa….. pa patidevvv
Sanskar gave a smile fadely
Swara smiled in tears I love you sanskarrr I love you she lost the grip on his shirt
Swara dropped her hand her pulse fallen ND she dropped to coma
They reached hospital sanskar rushed with swara
Swara is taken to ICU sanskar is staring at her from glass door
Raglak gave the antidote first ND they made swara to vomit out the poison
Swara pulse is falling due to poison reaction
Sanskar is in tears both the families rushed to hospital they are trying to conceal sanskar but sanskar is uncontrollable
Sanskar seen the laptop aside he opened it ND seen a video on the screen
Swara selfie video
In video
swara : Sanskar today I gonna spoil my own like
In this whom world no-one will get such a chance
That’s the reason
You know wt I want you to be 1st nd last person to touch mee
I cant let anyone to do soo
So I have decided to die
It gives a solution to everything
Sathvik had only problem with mee if I am no more his revenge will be completed
I know I am selfish that I am leaving you alone in this work but ntg left to do now except this I cant sacrifice myself so I am sacrificing my life sanskar
You know y bcoz I love you I only love you ur my life sanskar
Even I die our love never dies sanskar
Gud bye my love I love you to the end of entity ( whispered in tears)
Sanskar broken down by seeing the video even sathvik listened the vuedo
Sanskar seen sathvik who stood infront of him
Comminsner
Sanskar: Wts left to do sathvik wts left in my life ah you spoiled everything
You hurted my swara see today just bcoz of ur stupid revenge she is in such critical condition
He fallen on his knees in tears
” my life my swara is on ventilator struggling btw life ND death ”
If ur not still satisfied kill nee also if anything happen to swara I wont leave i will die for her
She is only reason for my life
I love her she is my life I dont need anything except swara he broken down completely in tears
Sathvik:( shocked to see his breakdown he realized his every mistake which effected there life sanskar i am sry sanskar i am sry plz forgive mee
Sanskar pushed him back ND got up from floor
” ur sry will get my swara back
Can you get my old swara to mee no na say nee can you give my swara
Sathvik:( fallen on his foot in tears) I sm really sry sanskar i never thinking about this
I sm sorry plz forgive mee plz plz
Sanskar: ( tears ) I dont want ur sorry I want my swara my swara he broken in tears
Commissioner: We filled fir on Amar too ur son Is out from all
His
Two days no change in swara condition sanskar is sleeping beside her by holding her Han
Swara suddenly breathed out with one stroke sanskar got up to see swara
Swara heart had started beating faster ND faster
Sanskar runned out nd shouted rags
Raglak rushed in too see swara
Swara heart stopped
Rags : Noo my swara
Sanskar : My swara can’t leave nee she won’t leave nee she won’t she
They did all trials to save her but no use everything is in his all are busy in crying
Sanskar crying badly by hugging swara
Sanskar suddenly seen her fingers are moving
Sanskar: Swara
Raglak see swara moving her finger silty
Raglak placed the oxygen mask that swara can breath properly
After a you swara gained consciousness
Swara: ( whispered) san sanskarrr
Sanskar: Ha I am hear only swara
Swara:( silty opened her eyes sanskarr ( a tear had slipped from her eyes)
days passed swara recovered very fast this timee in one month she started getting back to routine life office nd all
both families are happy
sathvik got to jail but swara signed bail papers too he came out of jail as a gud person nd amar had got life time imprisonment bcoz of bomb blast of flyover
sanskar is very happy that his swara is perfect nd all problems are sorted out
Sathvik is not speaking to anyone he is feeling guilty for his mistakes so he don’t wanna show his face to swasan mainly swara so he only coming to office on Thursday ND Saturday bcoz swara wont be in office on those days she will be in raglak hospital
He is absent for all board meeting only rp is managing them
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Days passed its utmost 3months sanskar fully concentrated on work he finally completed his work ND swara too joined him in every part of life they
Sanskar planned a surprise for swara its his new invention
In evg 5 swasan came back from office ND got fresh up
Sanskar’ swara I had a surprise for you swara ”
Swara: Oh surprise ah patidev left go I am excited to know
Sanskar took swara to parking lot it private lot where sanskar car is only party
Sanskar showed a normal Honda I 20 car �
Swara ” wow sanskar its gud but ii think there is something hidden in this car
Am I right paridev
Sanskar: Wow darling ur allways right
Swara: Scanned car but couldn’t know wt it is
Sanskar: Shall I say love ❤
Swara: Ha satmy fast plz
Sanskar : I had designed this car engine
Swara: Wttty
Sanskar: Yes I purchesed this car nd modified the engine this car runs with water ND carbon
Swara:( shocked) wt with water ah
Sanskar ‘ yes come I will explain you my love
Sanskar opened the car fuel tank ND pours water ND
sanskar; So Calcium carbide and water when put together , it will react to produce acetylene gas. is produced it helps as fuel to car it is 760 cc engine nd gives 60 kms milege
(guys its a fact a normal mechnic named Raees Makrani in Madhya Pradesh he had desined this water car a sult to him he proved that education does not matter the thing matters is knowlege towards the work u can get more information in google )
Sanskar : By reaction it act as fuel now start the car he gave the keys to swara
Swara hyper excited to know how it works both got in car ND swara started it
Its working she rised the speed nd came out on road
Swara:( while driving) oh my god ur amazing my hubby ur multitalented
Sanskar: I love you swara so I am gifting this to you its my invention
I love you �
Swara stopped the car nd kissed him in happiness ” i love you sanskar ND ur invention is amazing i am always proud of you my hubby
Sanskar really i am happy
Swara : Ok when you gonna launch it
Sanskar: Still need to work more as its starting my car need to increase its mileage
Swara: I know you will do it also
Sanskar: Ha ha
Sanskar ok now I had other surprise come lets go
Both exchanged seats ND sanskar drove car to beach he took the jet skie ND droved inside sea
Swara: Where ur taking me to same island ha
Sanskar : Noo I had surprise so keep quiet
Close ur eyes for 2mins plz
Swara closed her eyes nd hugged him 😉
Sanskar : Open ur eyes
Swara rises her eyes up ND shouted in excitement
Swara seen ha ship infront of her its a medium size ship it had a room too
Sanskar slowly made swara to step on steps of boat swasan got in boat nd
Its fully decrated boat its there is cabin for driver of bost ND swasan got on top of boat
Sanskar made all the arrangement for dinner its brightly decorated with lights
Sanskar : Swara see you ND nee are in in middle of sea away from workd alone
Swara hugged him in excitement” I am very very lucky to get such a cute husband who is making my every day beautiful
After having dinner swasan where having a silly talk
Sanskar: Swara how many kids you want
Swara: Ho you say first
Sanskar: Woh I was planning to create a cricket team with our kids
Swara:( shocked) wt that many ha noo
Sanskar: Ho how many you want
Swara: Only one naughty boy like you
Sanskar: Oh really then lets start
Swara: Wt start
Sanskar: Woh we need to start manufacturing na
Swara: Wttt
Sanskar 🙁 naughty smile) I will say you ( he stated taking steps towards her swara understood his meaning ND moved back
Sanskar: Holded her
Swara: No sanskar not now Plz I am feeling weak
Sanskar: Lets try Plz its been long time I got chance
Swara: Ho really but not now
Sanskar: Y should we waste this moment swara
Sanskar pulled her close
Swara is feeling pain in her tummy due to his weight on her
but swara dont wanna spoil sanskar mood tonight so she ignored the pain
sanskar raomed his palm around her face making her closing her eyes and biting her underlip more …sanskar stopped on her lips nd started rubbing his thumb over her lips .. feeling him she shoot her eyes open and looked at sanskar ..
swara; (blushing ) sansk…..
her words remained incomplete as her lips were being smacked by sanskar ’s who just pulled her in a kiss
she held his both arms tightly while pulling herself close to him she took out a gasp as she took out sanskar grab the oppurtinity and enter her mouth and started exploring her every corner’s of the mouth passioniately
sanskar; i love you so much swara
he said pulling back from the kiss nad again in no time pulled her in a long kiss and swara also responded him with eaqua passion the kissed eachother as there was no tomorrow …
while sanskar pulled her down making her lay on the bed …while kissing her ….. and he lend over her on the top of her
.. they both kissed for eachother till they both were out of breathe .. Sanskar looked at swara who was highly panting and was looking at him .. Swara instantly turned her face on the otherside while clutching the bed sheet on her fist …. Swara felt blush on her cheeks as sanskar roamed his palm through up her shoulder … while swaras breathe stared going heavy and her heavy ..
Swara breathe hitched as sanskar moved closed toward her while still helding her wrist .. he moved close to her while taking her both arms in infrost resting on her tummy along with his’s while he wrapped his arms around her waist as hugging her from behind .. her back met with his front as his member met her’s back
… it started iricking her making swara’s breathe get stopped while she clutched the sare tightly closing her eyes .. Sanskar pressed herself more on him by her tummy nad then with the help of his one hand he took her hair and pulled it on one side … as he dug his face on crook of her neck .. placing soft kisses all over neck and placing sum bites making swara bite her underlips as sanskar moved little down toward her shoulder placing soft kisses and then spun her while she shot opened her eyes . and stare at sanskar
he placed kisses all over her bak and then in a jiffy movement he undid her blouse dori .. the only one support that was hunging the blouse together as swara felt her dori get loose she instantly spunned laying on her back covering her bare back from him .. and as she looked up into his eyes
sanskar lened close to her
swara ….closed her eyes feeling him … sanskar left her ahnd nd then moved toward her eyes … placed a kiss over there nd then moved down while kissing her cheeks nose jawline chin … and then travelled down kissng her neck collarbone throat
he used his hand nad removed her pallu from her shoulder
swara clutched the bedsheet in shy
more tightly .. sanskar moved toward her shoulder placing kisses all over shoulder .. nad then kissed all over her arms
he travvelled down while kissing her all over tummy and then rest his lips toward her belly button nad licked it
while her nails were digging his arms
(not more then this u know that next so close ur eyes let them have privacy 😉 )
they made there love again nd again nd collapsed in eachother tight embraces the slept by watching the sky nd the flowting water in the sea
its one of the beatuiful ngts they had bcoz everynight is beautiful if the person in our life loves as unconditionally so in there life both swasan love eachother unconditional
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Swasan ND kavitha feeling bad for this so they thought to talk once
Swasan ND kavitha thought to go out for lunch on dame time sathvik is in office as its Thursday
He seen swara so he turned to leave
Swara: Signed sanskar to stop him
Sanskar: Sathvik one sec
Sathvik:( stood but he did not see him he is just staring floor)
Sanskar : Arey sathvik we are going for lunch will you join as
Sathvik: No I am not hungry you guys enjoy
Sanskar: Oh really once see as ND answer na
Sathvik: No I had work
Kavitha:( holded his hand) arey yar wt work always Pl come na
Sanskar: Past is past now all are happy na
Sathvik: Noo u are so gud but I don’t deserve you so better stay away from nee
Sanskar: No sathvik its every one will do mistakes but only few will accept them ND they try to rectify them ND u had changed slot na
Swara: So plz stop blaming urself
Sanskar gave a hand for shakhand
Sathvik:( teary eyes) he hugged sanskar ” u ppl are really gud but I am stupid so never understood ur gudness ND ur love I am so sorry sanskar
Sanskar:( hugged him back) stop crying sathvik orelse ur sister will start crying again
Everyone laughs aloud
Sathvik: Ha swara u can call be bhai here after I dont mine
Kavitha: Wt u accepted this also ah.
Sanskar: Behna 😉
Kavitha:( angry look at sanskar) dont you dare to call me soo
Swara: Acha still u had crush ah he is my husband now
Kavitha: Ahh ur lucky
All kept teasing each other nd had great time full on masti
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Next day they in mansion mrg
Sanskar grabbed swara in mrg just romantically but he could see her fce is dull
sanskar; y ur dull swara
But swara feeling dizzy she had falls week
swara; i dont know sanskar y i am feeling soo
sanskar; ok sahall i call rags once
swara; no will go in evg now they are busy in some surgery i think
Swasan left to raglak hospital in evg
Rags checked swara ND
Rags: Came out in confused expression swara followed her ND swasan sat infront of rags
Swara: Say me y I am feeling so
Rags: ( confused way) ur pregnant swara
Swasan jumped in excitement wowww
Rags: Wts this swara
Swasan gave confused look wtt
Rags: Ur pregnant by 3months ur active from one month only how its possible
Swasan kept quiet in embarrassment
Rags: Ur staring each other it means u both crossed limits before marriage ah
Lucky came running after hearing rag swasan conversation
Swasan shouted” nooooo
Raglak then Ho ahh
Swara:( blushing) voh di actually we
Rags: Say fast I will die in tension only
Sanskar: Bhabhi voh we did it in jail we had our suhgrat in jail
Raglak widded the mouth I shock ” in jail
Swara: Ha on that ngt I said I am going to kavitha but I went to jail ND I stayed whole ngt in jail by bribing police officers
Raglak are shocked ” in this whole work you got that place only to romance
Sanskar: Its amazing Bhabhi if you want u nd bhai try
Raglak fallen on feets of swasan
Swasan” arey raglak ur elders to as y ur falling on our feet
Swasan u guys are extraordinary u did not left anyplace to romance
Swara ” arey get up di its embarrassing plz
ND ur too
Sanskar took gud care of his love ND his baby too
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Days passed out sathvik had started falling for kavitha but he don’t wanna express this bcoz he still had feeling that he don’t deserve gud ppl
Swasan know his feeling as they are being with kavsath they could see there feeling
One day board meeting
Kavitha, swasan Shekhar dp namit ND rp are present
Rp: I wanna sell my shares of this company
Swara: Y all of sudden
Rp: Actually sathvik wanna go away from all this things so he Is leaving to London permanently
Kavitha:( shocked) nooo how can he leave
Rp : Y can he ah
Swara: Ha y should he bee here who cares him ah
Kavith: Wt how can you say so I care na
Swara: Really kavitha
Kavitha : Ha I care
Swara: Ho say him them he is leaving today only in 2hrs
Kavitha: Only two hrs ha ( she runned out by throwing all files
Swasan ND rp smiked by seeing her hurry
Kavitha runned out in hurry but accidentally she hurted a person with a force both fallen on floor
On each other
Kavitha seen the eyes of persons she sliwed seen down to watss face
Kavitha: Sa sathvik (Yes its sathvik )
Ur her only ah
Sathvik: Ha its mee only ( he moved her hair on face )
Kavitha: Ur leaving to London ah
Sathvik: Ha y
Kavitha: Y ur going
Sathvik: Get up first if anyonesees its parking lot ok
Both got up
Sathvik: Actually I got new opportunities there so I am shifting
Kavitha: No plz
Sathvik: Y no ah
Kavitha: I said no na then no
Sathvik: Y noone feel bad for this its right
Kavitha: Arey idiot cant you see how I feel
Sathvik: Wt you feel ah ntg
Kavitha: ( pulled him by collar) look in my eyes u stupid idiot I love you ur hearing na I tried slot that you also feel so but u stone heart na never cared nee listen I love you
You know how I feel when ur near mee my heart just stops beating for a sec
Chi y I am saying to you
You don’t care na go ND marry any white girl in London.
You wont suit me go ( she pushed him back in tears its all due to her love )
Sathvik:( stood numb he never expected this a girl is loving him more then anything
She is ready to accept every mistake of him
Kavitha is about to go but sathvik holded her ND whispered ” u really love mee ah
Kavitha: U have still doute
Sathvik:( hugged her in tears) I love you too but I thought you wont love mee as I am bad
Kavitha:( hugged him back) I love you even ur bad boy now ur changed too na I am more love with this
Sathvik: Thanks for coming into my life kavitha
They lost world in Hug but the got disturbed by claps its mm family swasan Shekhar dp ND rp
Kavsath moved apart in embarrassment
Sathvik: Dad voh k ka
RP: I dont need ur explanation we know everything its all swasan prank to get ur love out
Kavsath are happy
RP: I will talk to ur parents kavitha
I should thank your family that they gave there too daughters to my twin sons
Anyways you can recognize difference between sathvik nd ur jiju na
Kavitha:( blushig hard) ha I can
Swara: Finally my bestie in love wow ur being my Bhabhi now
Kavitha hugged swara in happiness ” I love you bestie
both got married after 2months
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Seven years leap
A cute little boy came out running from door in excitement ” partner get up fast fast
Saskar opened his eyes he is sleepy” kya Hua partner
Sohan : Woh see mom they are irritating ne to go school plz say no for today plz Plz
Sanskar: Y noo sohan
Sohan : Plz say mom na
Sanskar: No u go ND get ready I will drop u
Sohan: Noo plz convince mom plz plz ( he mad puppy face)
Sanskar: Ok but on one condition
Sohan: Wt say
Sanskar: Promise me that you wont skip school for next 2 Months
Sohan: Ha ok will try now convince her she is coming to catch me plz
Sanskar: Go run away then
Sohan runned out from other door sanskar got up from bed ND just wided his mouth
A girl in red saree ND lose hair walked inside the room ND she stood infront of sanskar by folding her hands upto her chest
Mr sanskar maheswari where is my son sohan
Sanskar: Sohan ahh I don’t know Mrs.swara sanskar maheswari
Yes its our swara ND they cute ND naughty son is sohan maheswari he is Xerox of sanskar
So sanskar ND sohan are like frnds partners in crime too
Swara: Stop lying ok I know that he came to you
Sanskar: No I said na he not came
Swara started searching sohan she went towards bed ND seen under bed she did not found sohan anywhere
Sanskar pulled swara on to him she fallen on top of him ND sanskar turned her down ND he came on top of her
Swara: U idiot just leave nee its 7 u still sleeping ND its being late to school
Sanskar: (naughty smirk) y school baby let him enjoy ND let nee too
Swara: Wt ur spoiling him sanskar
Sanskar: ( angry) I am spoiling my son ah
Swara: Yes y ur pampering him ND supporting stupid things its wrong sanskar
Sanskar: No my love I am just helping him in knowing the world it wont be in books
Swara: Stop ur stupid logics get out from nee first someone may come
Sanskar: Noo I got hurted now so u need to be pay
Swara: Wt I hurted ah
Sanskar: You said I am spoiling Sohan na so I got hurted
Swara: Its truth Ni doute
Sanskar: Ho really let me see how truthfulit is ( he kissed her neck onces
Swara: Idiot leave nee u had not even brushed but you need romance in mrg
Sanskar:( pinned her hands on bed above her head
(” ha its alright my wife lions won’tbrush ok
( by saying this hebitted her neck sensuously.
Swara: Shouted in pain “arey its paining ”
Sanskar kissed her nape to suppresser pain swara lost in his romance her hands automatically driven into his hair
Sanskar hands are pulling swara close towards him by her waist his hand is below swara which is ready to unhook her blouse dori
Swara felt his hand on her back ND pushed him with a force by which her dori had opened out completely
Swara shocked by this she covered her self in bed sheet
Sanskar winked at her ” plz only once
Swara:( trowed a pillow in his face ) dont you have time for this goo get lost
Sanskar: Just hslf An hour plz
Swara 🙁 angry ) get out I said
Sanskar: No plz just 20mins
Swara: No plz sanskar ur not a kid ok now get up ND goo some one may come plz
Sanskar got up ND went to washroom in disappointed face
Swara got up ND removed bed sheet ND adjusted her blouse ND saree but while she tiying back her dori she found a senous tounch on her back she seen from mirror its sanskar
Swara: ( about to turn back but sanskar hugged her tight from back bu wrapping his hands around her waist
Swara” sanskarrr wt your doing
Sanskar 🙁 naughty smile) I came to help you sweetheart let me help you
Swara: Wt help ah
Sanskar he moved his fingers on her back senously swara Is blushing hard she clushed her saree in shy
Sanskar kissed her milky bak ND tied the dori of her blouse
Swara closed her eyes in shy
Sanskar whispered in her ears ” now you can leave but night I wont leave you ok
Swara: Acha will see now get ready we need to leave for office
Sanskar: I am not interested today
I wanna spend my time with my partner so u go ND do ur work
Swara: Wt no way sohan had school
Sanskar: Acha if not sohan I will spoil you noww ( he placed his hand on her belly inside her saree
Swara:( busy voice) sanskarrrr try to understand plz
Sanskar: Just one day leave u understand naa
Swara: Tomorrow its leave only na ND we planned for picnic too
Sanskar: Ha its forr all nd today its for mee nd my son only
Swara : I cant change you both but not today papa will also don’t allow this
Sanskar turned swara towards him ” y can manage my dad na do
Swara: Nooo I cant ND wont
Sanskar moved close romantically by nuzzling his nose on her cheecks ” manage na ”
Swara losing herself in his touch she got adopted to him ” haaa
Sanskar lened to kiss her its a small kiss but sanskar bitted her lips swara got angry this time
she pulled back from kiss nd bitted his checks hard
but its seen by sohan
Sohan stared swasan in confused way he don’t know wt is going on between them
Swara pushed sanskar in embarrassment
Sohan: Partner wt ur doing with mom
Sanskar: Woh I am convincing her for ur leave beta
Sohan hoo but she bitted you na
sanskar; its way of convencing only beta
Ap comes in back of sohan
Ap: Wt all are discussing
Swara: Ntg naa
Sohan: Nani maa accepted my leave no school
Ap: Wt swara you accepted
Swara’ no maa
Sohan: Angry dad u said she will convince na ( sohan pushed sanskar on swara
Ap is shocked wt convincing ah
Swasan are embarrassed they turned there face
Sohan : Woh nani dad hugs mom ND convinces her ND he even bitted nd Ki…( his words are cutted by swara
Swara closed sohan mouth in embarrassment” ntg maa woh woh
Sohan pushes swara hand maa I seen
Swara: Arey plz shut up dont speak
Sanskar winked at sohan ” oh then schoool
Swara had no option left she nodded yes ” no school”
Sohan jumped in excitement he runned towards sanskar ND hugged him ” love you papaaaa
Sanskar lifted him nd kissed his cheeks love you tooo
Now come we will have fun full day
Swara ” chi its my time waste to change you ”
Sanskar sohan laughs alot
Sohan : Mammy ur going to office naa say sathvik mama to get saanvi
Swara : No I wont say
Swara left room in angry
Next day ints day out raglak swasan kavsath left to island in boat ( same island where swasan went for movie date 7yrs back )
They spended day with happiness
Sohan is on back of sanvi ( sathvik ND kavitha 5yrs old daughter)
Regan raglak son 6yrs old but so descent like lucky innocent too
Saanvi does frndship with Regan but she wont talk much with sohan
They both keep on fighting
Sanskar: Kya Hua sohan y ur dull
Sohan’ woh sathvik mama ka beti jai na sanvi she is not talking to nee always being with Regan only
Sanskar: Acha y u did anything wrong
Sohan: No dad she is only wrong
Sanskar : Come I will talk to saanvi
Sohan ND sanskar left towards sanvi ND sathvik they are playing
Sanskar: Sathvik
Sathvik; ha kya hua sanskar
sanskar; y ur daugether is avoiding my little champ he is feeling bad
sathvik; oh really but ur son
ur soo much sanskari son pinched my daugether she is crying from hr
sanskar; (whispered ) u did so
sohan ; haa dad
sanskar; y
*****flashback *****
mrg 10 when they came regan nd saanvi are playing in sand on beach shore sohan joined them but he feelt game boring
so for thrill he started collapsing the sand houses made by sanvi nd regan
sanvi got angry he beat sohan sohan got angry nd pinced sanvi sanvi started crying
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raglak; u always played pranks on me nd ur son is doing same on my innocent regan
sanskar; dont blame my son ok he is sharp so ur jelous of my son
sanskar by cupping sohan “dont worry beta i am here na ”
swara; ur spoiling him sanskar
sanskar; noooooooo he is innocent like mee
sath; see ur son how innocent he is
sanskar; he is kid yar
sathvik; he is kid but he is xerox of you so better i should be careful my daugether is pericous like my sister swara
sanskar; ho really one fine day you urself will give ur daughethr to my son
sathvik; really noway i wont
sohan; u will sathvik mama
sathvik; (shocked ) ho hello no i cant risk ok first impress me later will see about my sanvi
sathvik took sanvi with him to sleep
sohan; papa see that hitler sathvik mama
a new story begains from this silly fight
They enjoyed alot
all slept sohan nd regan slept together sanvi cant sleep without her dad i.e sathvik
swasan ,raglak ,kavsath had great life here after as one family
END OF MY STORY TU MERI MANNAT
THANKS ALOT FOR THE RESPONSE
Commenting or not ur wish if you like then only comment orelse ignore
ND I will get back soon with another ff on Nov 2nd week I will name it as mannat with some tag 🙂 sanskar will be more naughty then this with loads of pranks nd romance
so still then bye
Take care
Keep smiling �
30 Comments
Nice ending dear…
Amazing…..u should upload tu merit mannat on watttpad ….plz…tomorrow I’m leaving for college ….I WS praying all these days to god to make u upload epilogue before I leave nmy home and wifi and reach my hostel….year plz take wattpad request seriously …
Ha sure I will try anyways I had account in wattpad Bhanu mitra
ND thanks alot for ur love towards my work ?
awesome Bhanu i am silent reader of ur ff but today i was not able to be a silent i will really miss u and ur ff come back soon with another i really loved each and every episode of ur ff.
Superb
Superb yar ….loved it alot…..I’ll miss you… Plz come back soon…..
Thnk u soo much Bhanuu for this beautiful ending…
ur journey with this MANNAT to always make us happy complete today…
U have fulfilled ur MANNAT towards ur fans soo beautifully…
It’s memorable dear !!!
Thnk u once again,,
will be waiting for next move …
God bless u…
Amazing dear not only the chappy but the entire ff
I wonder yaha sanskar itna naughty hai next mein kitna hoga*wink
Hey Bhanu…..am one of your silent readers….?Ur ff is just awesome yaar….???
It’s full of Masti,fun,emotions,love, what not u carried every emotion so well……????
Come back with a new ff….will be waiting
Wat an epilogue. Vry nyc. Specially dere kids. Wat an amazing kids. God. 2023 ki kids aise hoge?
Awesome
Super ending
Awesome dear..
Super duper
Superb ending……
Loved it alot ……
Awesome……the whole journey of ff was mind blowing.. …..and what an epilogue…masth ayaa…loved it to the core…..and come back with another bang……
Nice ending..
Fantastic epilogue bhanubhanu cmback wid another great ff
Awesome….. Love this ff so much. Swasan’s love, sanky’s pranks, him teasing swara, all the shocks u gave us, all swasan surprises…..this ff will always remain to be one of my favs.
Thank you for this ff and yayyy….u r coming back with another ff. Stay blessed
Awwwwww…Lover it so much Di…I loved your whole ff..Each and every episode…
You are such an amazing writer…I will miss this ff so much …..Love u loads and all the best for your future life…May you get all the happiness in ur life..
AWWWWW
rly sweet beautiful one di.
yaaay yaaaay its a happy ending.
😀
i lv ur ff 4m da begining dr. and i ddnt lost da intrest till nw. want more. 😉
wow dr 2dy ws awsome!
sathvik also bcm gd!
he he the kids r amezing.
specially shohan.
he is naughty as his papa.
lv all the things dr.
waiting 4 ur nxt ff!
oh! say thanks 2 ur uncle. if he ddnt gv u da pwr bnk na! then u ddnt write it na. i ws eagalry waiting 4 dis 1.
keep writing
be happy always
lv ya
god bless u
all the best 4 ur future!
ur fanfic its really amazing dear pls come back soon I have always been a silent reader bt I just can’t stop my self today from commenting dear we will miss u
It wz amazing dear….thanks fo epilogue…..at bgng my hrt wz beating fast to while reading swara’s part…bt ltr on i just enjoyed…..it wz one og my fvrt story……loved sanky’s naughtines…..n hope he w’d b more naughty in mannat…..vl b waiting….till dn tc….
Awesome
Wow loved it ❤️ Gonna miss it a lot waiting for you’re another ff??
Amazing one
waaaa,, you did it Sanskar! you are real man.. first work and success 😀
Sohaaann.. omg! no wonder, he made in jail na! 😀 😀
Bhanu…. thank you soo much for such beautiful ending
Awesome perfect ending. And u made sathvik character into positive too..
tremendous ff..
U nailed it.
Loved it to d core.
Bestest epilogue I have ever read
Will miss u yaar
Pls come back wid another swasan ff
U r stupendously brilliant writer
Nice
1 request plz make swara a naughty,prankish,cute bubbly,innocent,sweet girl. Reversing d characters.haha
it was awesome..perfect ending..last part was so funny and cute..tc..