Hey guys ….Dolly is back again …
Hmm …I am going to discontinue this ff now
U r not giving me good response …so low response u all gave in the teaser and the last episode ….
It shows u all r not liking it ….
But for my sister’s who are supporting….I will do justice for u all
UMA I know u r angry …..sorry …..will talk to u in comment dear
Here is the story ,
Swara goes back to her room …..she was he’ll angry on sanskar
She was not controlling herself …she threw all her things and dirtied the room
She teared all the gifts and cards sanskar gave to her ……
She even burned them …..she was not controlling …
She broke all her’s and sanskar’s pic ……all the glass pieces pierced in her hands and legs ..she didn’t care
She cried all her thoughts and memories of sanskar
@evening
(Shekar and mishit went to business trip)
Sanskar comes to Swara mansion ….the door was open ..as laksh didn’t come back from collage yet ….
He directly goes to Swara’s room …he was continuously knocking her door
She was not responding to him
Sanskar (worried) : Swara r u in there …..Swara Swara (he shouts )
But no respone ….this frightened him
At that time laksh came from collage along with ragini
Ragini : idiot u complete ur record …even I have na (hits his elbow)
Laksh (teasingly) : I am ur best friend …won’t u do this also to ur idiot …
He wraps his arm around her shoulder ….Ragini was memerised
At that time ..sanskar comes down
Sanskar (tensed) : laksh …laksh bhai Swara is not opening the door ….
Raglak were shocked ….
TRio runs up to Swara room ..
Laksh (shouts) : Swara ….Swara …r u in there Swara …..
Ragini along with sanskar bangs the door ….
Laksh : damm it ….sanskar help me
Sanskar nods ….
Both sanlak at same time …hits their shoulder on door …and it breaks open ..
They all were shocked seeing the scenario ….
Everything were here and there …it was all messed up
Some have burned up …and the most important is
Swara was lying on floor …..unconsciously
Trio rushed to her ….
Laksh kept Swara on his lap
Laksh (tears) : Swara …..Swara ………Swara open ur eyes ..
Ragini came with water …sanskar sprinkled water on her face …but she didn’t open her eyes
Laksh carries her in his arms …
Laksh : here sanskar catch the keys ..
(He throws the car key )
At parking lot ….
Laksh sat with Swara at back seat …and sanskar was driving the car (now sanskar is 17 …he is studying in 12th …u forgot to mention even Swara OK )
Ragini was continuously massaging her legs …but no response ….
Swara’s whole body was cold …this frightened everyone .
At hospital …
Laksh rushed in hospital with his sister …..
The doctor took her to ICU
Trio were pacing outside the ICU …….
Laksh (tears) : what happened …to Swara ….I am not at all taking care of her …I am a bad brother ….
He was blaming himself ….while Ragini was consoling …
Sanskar was standing numb …he couldn’t react ….he know something would have happen to her that was related to riya …
Doctor comes from ICU
Laksh (worried) : what happened …doctor …how is Swara ..how is she !
Doctor : Mr dixit …u very well know Swara I’s a short tempered girl ….
Laksh looks on
Doctor : she had eaten dozens of sleeping pills ..which is now reacting as poison
All were shocked …
Sanskar (wide eyes) : poison ?????
Laksh breaks down …..while Ragini wa’s standing numb
Doctor : we can’t say anything now …..she is critical ..better call ur parents …call ur mom first ..only she can treat ..or else …
Doctor leaves …..
Laksh : Ragini …she …she …ate poison….she …how can she ……
Ragini dont know how to console him …..sanskar was also standing there …he called mishtI and shekar……
After a day ….
She was still critical …….maheshwaris were there ……along with Dixit’s (Shekar and mishti)
Ap : what happened to her …..while this all
Mishti was crying hard …….Shekar was also crying ….
Laksh was also shattered ………..
Doctor comes …..Shekar and Mishti goes to him
Doctor : she is fine …but critical ….mishtI ma’am …u very well know that this is not easy to come out from this problem …..
But now she is put out of danger !
All gives a relief sign …..
MishtI : thanks doctor
Doctor : it ‘s my duty madam ..she is also a daughter for me ….
Shekar also thank’s him and doctor leaves …
@school
All were asking about Swara to sanskar ….but he didn’t say anything ….
Omi (worried) : at least say us na what happend …
Sanskar (smiling) : ha ha as if u don’t Omi ….
Omi was suprised and scared too
Omi : what do u mean …
Sanskar : I checked the auditorium camera …
Omi was shocked ….
Sanskar catches omi”s collar ……..
Sanskar (evilly) : u tried to save her from me na ..now see she is in ICU
Omi was again shocked…sanskar leaves Omi
Omi : u did something …didn’t u ….
Sanskar laughs evilly ……..
Sanskar : do u think I am a fool ..I was the one who changed her tablets …I know she is short tempered …and she takes tablet …I changed it to poison ..
What she said ..she will show girls power ..now she is only fighting for her body power …
Omi was double shocked and disgusted ….
Sanskar : not only this matter even that riya matter …..she escaped ..
Omi (confused) : escaped .?????
Sanskar : she is alive …..
Omi was shocked …he sat in a thud !
Sanskar : this Swara is helping her and she wanted to bring my image out but ..I won’t let her to do so …now it’s my time for tashan!
He laughs
Precap : ur comments decide’s
Hope u all liked the episode …plz comment don’t be silent it hurts a lot …m
Anyways shanthi sister prema will start a new ff here ….it is my concept …but I cannot already have some pending so ..
But plz do read it ….
If I get more comments …then next episode…otherwise forget it ….
Thanks for reading
24 Comments
Waaaaa!!!! Dolly … love it dear
.. thnk u .. it’s soo interesting. .
thnk u..
Nice …
Plz continue ur other ffs
omg!!!!!!
sanky is super se upar wala kaam karta h……….
post asap……
tc…….
plz continue it..its interesting..
plz at least continue for those who comment daily..plz..tc..
Sanky is disgusting…. loved raglak…nice update dear……
Pls dnt discontinue it dear…
Hai I’m a silent reader of urs ff….. Pls continue…. Waiting to see how swalak punish sans………
Yar don’t do this I want swasan, please yar ‘heart broken’ ????
Pls pls don’t discontibue. I loved this story pls yaar
Wow loved it hate my sanku in this ff till now ❤️?? loved raglak ❤️
AWESOME……….
Nice
Dolly do continue u told dat u wil post ur sisters.. thn nw ur skiping..
it ws superb part. Evil sanskar.. he is really cruel. Shit he made swara life pathetic.. im angry on him…
post nxt part.. soon lucky shud knw abt sans and punish him..
Omg m so shocked to see dis sanskar…
M big swasan fan bt i dun want swara or any1 to frgve him in dis story
No please please don’t stop this ff if u want then finish it in 3,4 part but don’t disconnect it
Plssss continue it’s awesome
Awesome
Please don’t separate Swasan …and plzzz swara should give punishment to sanky …how could he do this ..
Waiting for next part
Nice
superb ep….oh god! This sanky….even devil word falls short in front of him. He gave poison to swara….i hate him
Sorry!! Really….dude,tum ese kese gayeb ho sakti ho…. You know how worried I am about you….I thought ki tumari leg ki wajah se body ki aur koi part like hand, waist pe problem toh nehi hua hein…You are not continuing your ffs bcz for your personal problems, ok no problem I can understand… But at least ek teaser or authors note toh de sakti thi na that you will not be in tu for some months… But no, tum suddenly gayeb ho gayi…it’s not fair???????..
Awesome … plz continue …
Stupendously interesting