Guys and my dear and lovely friends… this is second last part of my ts….
I hope you like it…. and very heart full thank u to all who like my ts and also comment on that…..
Thank you so much guys…….
Now the story starts…..
In morning……
Sanskar happily get up from bed to think that swara kept fast for him….. Now his happiness has not bound… his heart say that slowly-slowly swara accept her…. and leave to washroom …’
After some time swara comes in and see no one in room… so she closes the door… She doesn’t know that sanskar is in the room… she goes towards the dressing table and start combed her wet hairs….. She then applies kajal in her eyes… and also wears jhumkas….. then she apply vermillion but someone stop her hand… she slowly look backward and see sanskar held her hand… he look towards her lovingly…. swara blush slightly… sanskar help her in sit on stool in front of dressing table… he took a pinch of sindoor in her hairline… she closed her eyes and fell the moment……
Sanskar then took mangalsutra.. swara open her eyes and look towards sanskar with smile… sanskar wear her mangalsutra…..and stand her up… he look towards her and she look towards him…. he slightly kiss on her forehead……
But swara dream break by a sound of opening a door… she itself confuse why she see that type of dream for sanskar….
She then see towards the washroom…. here sanskar comes out from the washroom and look towards swara….. he goes towards her and say: –
Swara… I’m very happy that you kept that vrat(Fast)….. it show that you want to give me chance…. here sanskar say all the things but swara continuously gaze on her….. sanskar find that swara continuously look towards him and shook her… she comes out from dream… and see towards her… sanskar smile say: – I know I’m handsome…. than say na you love me… your eyes clearly shows your love towards me……
swara make pout face in anger and start to goes from there………….. but her feet stumbled in sari… she going to fall but she closes her eyes… but found a tight grip on her waist…… and see sanskar hold her… she lost in his eyes….. but come in her sense……..
swara: – Please leave me……. and try to out from his grip… but sanskar lean towards her… swara stop protesting….. she feel very nervous because of his closeness….. he says in her ear: – swara… I know you love me….. and I want to hear it from you …
swara get out from his grip and say: – no I don’t love you
Sanskar says: – then why my closeness affects on you……swara become speechless……. looks towards him…….he comes towards her and say: – tonight I know you confess my feeling to you…..
Swara nodes in no… while sanskar says in yes…. and goes from there…. and thought to bring a gift for her….
Swara look towards him going.. and sigh of relief and goes in dilemma….. and think about his word and about her dreams…….
But side that thought and busy herself in household work…. all day sanskar teases swara while suddenly kisses on her cheek and irritated her alot… swara sometime angry on him… and sometime smile on his antic
In evening time…….
sanskar receive a phone call…. he pick up the call and went outside… while speaking on phone… swara look towards his action an notice him….. after talking on phone… sanskar comes inside with sad face …. and look towards swara….. sujata see sanskar face.. and swara also notice his sad face…..
Sujata: – what happen sanskar, who call you at this time…
Sanskar: – wo Ma… wo there is urgent meeting in office.. Actually a foreign client is coming and he go tomorrow… So he wants to sign all the deal and paper… today itself…
Sujata: – so what problem beta… you go… we all here na…. okkk and smile…
Sanskar unwillingly nodes…. and says: – okk mom… I go..
Sanskar go towards his room to get ready for office……swara look towards sanskar who going towards there room…..she feel something wrong is happening… she don’t want to sanskar go… so she said: – MA is necessary to go to office….. Sujata shockingly look towards swara and smile… and say: – beta I’m very happy that you think about sanskar but beta work is also necessary…. I hope you understand…. swara nodes silently… And also goes towards swasan room…..
In room sanskar is all ready to go… he pick up his bag and turn to go… and see swara there… he smile seeing her… And go out from room… but stop to hear: – wo at what time you come… swara say this while keeping her head down… In slow voice … but sanskar listen that.. he turns and look towards swara…. he goes towards her and say: – I come early okkk… swara look towards him… and say nothing… but her heart feels and unknown fear and some tears comes out from her beautiful eyes…. and sanskar saw this and shock..
He cup her face and wipe her tears and say: – I say na swara… I come after three hours…. so why you cry… she didn’t say anything… sanskar kiss on her forehead lightly and swara close her eyes to feel his touch… he lean towards her ear and say… tonight I want you gave me answers of my question that you love me ar not …. And goes from there…. swara looks towards him going… And feel something precious is going from her very far……….
Her thought disturb by ragini voice….
She looks back and sees ragini is there and come towards her and hugs her and say: – you know what swara today I’m very happy… you know why… because today you also kept fast… and we both doing rituals together…. ragini sees swara lost in her thought…. she shook her… swara comes out from her thought and looks towards ragini: – haaa… yes .. Ragini…. what you say….
Ragini got confuse and look towards swara direction…. swara continuously looks towards the gate…. ragini: – swara what you see towards gate… swara says nothing……. ragini look here and there and says to swara: – swara where is sanskar jiju…. hearing sanskar name… swara cry… and hug ragini… hug confuse looking towards swara…. she take her to swasan room and sit her on bed and gave her a glass of water… swara drink it and sobs silently….
Ragini: – swara what happen… with worried…. kya hua bacha…. you fight with sanskar… swara nodes in no… then what happen….
Swara look towards ragini and says everything to her…(sanskar behaviour with her from marriage… and his change behaviour from last two week and also told her about sahil and all plan) ragini first anger on sanskar and accuse her… but stop by swara…. ragini smile sees her concerns towards sanskar……
Swara: – I don’t know ragini… today I don’t feel good when sanskar leave me and goes to office and also told her about morning incident…… and say I feel happy when sanskar is near me… I don’t know what happen to me bhabhi…. what’s all this….
Ragini happy seeing her and say: – you are in love my pyari sister-in-law…..swara shock listen that and remember about sanskar behaviour last two week…… also think about her morning dreams and happy to know that she love sanskar and happily hug ragini and say: – yes bhabhi…. I love sanskar ji….. I love him…… today I also told him about my decisions… and happiness is visible in her shiny eyes…..
Ragini is also happy to look swara happy in her life first time……..
In night 8pm…
Sanskar looks towards the times and hurriedly windup the meeting… and leave from there… today he very happy…. and want to reach home as soon as possible.. and drove of the car…..
In MM
All ladies are ready… today was swara first karvachauth so sujata organise a party in mm… all the ladies are there in the hall and all men in laudge….. swara wear a dark blue and green combination lehenga….. she look very beautiful…. she wear waist chain, bangles , an jhumkas, etc.. And get ready and look towards her in mirror… and feel shy to think that today she confess her felling in front of sanskar…….
She comes out from the room….. sujata takes her with her and introduce her with all the guest…. all praise her beauty….. But swara not interested in all that…. she continuously look towards gate to find weather sanskar come or not….. but she disappointed when she didn’t see sanskar……
All the women does all the ritual of karavacuth katha and all that…..but swara every minute looks towards gate and feel restless to see sanskar not coming………… she held her mangalsutra and say: – sanskar …… please come soon… I’m feel very bad thing is going to happen….. please come soon…..
All ladies start to go towards loan to find that moon is come or not… but it start rain suddenly….. All are shocked… sujata say: – nothing is happen…. only rain na.. it stop in half hour…. at that come.. I invite the qwali group from lukhnow… come and see their performance… all says okk……all goes in hall… but swara was at gate looking outside the rain… sujata see her and come towards her and pat her shoulder…..
Swara look towards her…. sujata says her through signals…what happen… swara nodes in no…. and goes inside the hall in sat on sofa…..with sujata and ragini beside her……
Just than laksh come…and ragini looks towards him and gave smile to him… swara see laksh and ragini…. and look outside… but there is no sign of sanskar……
(in qwali group there are male and females voice… for male sing voice line I write M and for female voice I write F…. hope you understand… )
Light gone dim….. and qwali performance start… swara looks towards them….
M: – Kab Aaoge…
Kab Aaoge, Kab Aaoge
(When will you come?)
Jism Jaan Juda Hogi Kya Tab Aaoge
(Will you come when my body gets separated from my soul?)
(both /male and female voice)
Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye (x2)
(May it not become late)
F: -Aaja Re… Ke Mera Mann Ghabraaye
(Please come, my heart is feeling afraid)
(Both M and F voice in chorus)
Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
Ho… Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
(some ladies comes towards sujata and swara n ask about sanskar that where is he… and why he is not come…. swara eyes become moist… but sujata say.. he busy in work and all ladies node and goes from there)
F: -Kahaan Hai Ronak-E-Mehfil Yahi Sab Poochte Hai (x2)
(Where is the life (star) of this gathering, everyone is asking?)
Baarha Tere Na Aane Ka Sabab Poochte Hai
(When are you going to arrive, everyone is asking?)
( both M and F)
Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
Ho… Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
(Swara continues looks towards the gate and become disappointed… because she wants to confess her feeling to him today itself and shift her sight to the perform and think their each word is described her feeling…)
M: -Har Baat Ka Waqt Mukarar Hai, Har Kaam Ki Saat Hoti Hai
(Time is the essence of everything, There’s a right moment for everything) (every work/job)
Har Kaam Ki Saat Hoti Hai
(There’s a right moment for everything)
Waqt Gaya To Baat Gayi
(If the right time passes, then work/effort becomes worthless)
Bas Waqt Ki Keemat Hoti Hai
(Doing work on the right time is worthwhile, otherwise not)
(Both M&F)
Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
Aaja Re… Ke Mera Mann Ghabraaye
(Please come, my heart is feeling afraid)
Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
Aaa… Aaa…
On road
Sanskar drive the car fast… to reach MM fast…. but due to raining continuously it become difficult to him… but he is very happy and sing)
(Sanskar sing that line…)ok guys…..
Rasta Roka Kabhi Kaali Ghata Ne
(The black clouds stopped me in the path)
Ghera Dala Kabhi Bairan Hawa Ne
(And the crazy winds put a hindrance)
Rasta Roka Kabhi Kaali Ghata Ne
(The black clouds stopped me in the path)
Ghera Dala Kabhi Bairan Hawa Ne
(And the crazy winds put a hindrance)( look towards sky and then road)
Bijli Chamak Ke Lagi Aankhein Dikhaane (x2)
(Lightning struck and tried to scare me with its shiny gaze)
Badle Hai Kaise-Kaise Tewar Fazaa Ne (x2)
(Look how the atmosphere around me has changed)
Saare Waade Iraade, Barsaat Aake
(All my promises and vows, rainfall came)
Ho Saare Waade Iraade, Barsaat Aake, Dho Jati Hai
(All my promises and vows, rainfall came and washed them away)
Main Der Karta Nahin…( while singing look towards his watch) Der Ho Jati Hai
(I am not late on purpose, it happens by itself)
Main Der Karta Nahin… Der Ho Jati Hai
(I am not late on purpose, it happens by itself)
(Scene shift to MM)
F: -Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
Aaja Re… Ke Mera Mann Ghabraaye
(Please come, my heart is feeling afraid)
Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
(swara get up from her sheet…. ragini trying to stop her but she didn’t stop… laksh see towards her…. he also try but nothing=g happen… swara continuously walk and stop to gate and look towards rain and feeling restless for not coming of sanskar….. and sing…. (now this line swara sing)…)
Swara: -Dil Diya, Aitbaar Ki Hadd Thi
(I gave You my heart, this was the limit of my faith)
Jaan Di, Tere Pyaar Ki Hadd Thi
(I gave You my life, this was the limit of my love for You)
Mar Gaye Hum, Khuli Rahi Aankhein
(I died and my eyes remained open)
Yeh Tere Intezar Ki Hadd Thi
(This was the limit of me waiting for You)
( swara stand at gate and continuously look outside…)
Male voice
Hadd Ho Chuki Hai Aaja, Jaan Par Bani Hai Aaja
(All the limits have been crossed, please come, my life is on the line, please come)
Mehfil Saji Hai Aaja, Teri Kami Hai Aaja
(The gathering is decorated, please come, Only You’re missing, please come)
(Both M and F)
Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
Ho… Der Na Ho Jaaye Kahin Der Na Ho Jaaye
(May it not become late)
(Some girls goes towards swara and take her with them…. swara denied… but later she danced with them and sing)(friend please you think dance step on that line.. because I don’t know…. Kaise explain kru step…. I hope you understand)
Swara: –
Aaja Ve Mahi Tera Rasta Udeek Diyan (x2)
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path) (yearning for You to come)
Rasta Udeek Diyan, Rasta Udeek Diyan
(I’m gazing at Your path, I’m gazing at Your path)
Aaja Ve Mahi Tera Rasta Udeek Diyan
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path)
Aaja Ve Mahi…
(Come my beloved)
Aaja Ve Mahi Tera Rasta Udeek Diyan
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path)
Male voice: –
Dar Se Hat Ti Nahi Nazar Aaja
(My eyes can’t look anyplace else except the door)
Aaja Dil Ki Pukar Par Aaja
(Come, my heart is calling out to You)
Swara:-
Der Karna Teri Aadat Thi Sahi
(I know that You have a habit of being late)
Der Se Hi Sahi Magar Aaja (x2)
(Even if You’re late, please come now at least)
Aaja Ve Mahi, Aaja Ve Mahi Tera Rasta Udeek Diyan
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path)
(Indian Classical Notes Sa Re Ga Ma Pa Dha Ni)
(all female group sing in that line)
Aaja, Aaja
(Come, come)
Aaja Ve Mahi Tera Rasta Udeek Diyan (x2)
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path)
Aaja Ve Mahi…
(Come my beloved)
Aaja Ve Mahi Tera Rasta Udeek Diyan
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path)
Rasta Udeek Diyan, Rasta Udeek Diyan
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path)
Aaja Ve Mahi Tera Rasta Udeek Diyan… (x4)
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path)
Aaja Ve Mahi Tera Rasta Udeek Diyan… (x10)
(Come my beloved, I’m gazing at Your path)
Swara: –
Aaja veeeeeee…. Mahhiiiiiiiii…… Teeeraaaaa rasssstaaaaa udeeeekkkk diyaaaannnnnnnn
(And start dance in middle….. all girls around her)
Song finishes……
Swara stop dance and look towards the gate and see sanskar is not come… and tear comes out in her eyes… but she compose herself and goes towards sujata………
(scene shift….. here we saw a car is drove very fast on road that he have to reach on time… but due to raining car losses his balance….. he try to stop the car,,, but at that time a truck come towards him with full speed and in few minutes the car and truck met with an major accident and he died on spot….)
In MM…
Rain stop…. all ladies goes out to break there fast… because moon is seen…. sujata ask uttara to call sanskar phone….. but his phone always show switched off…. swara is very sad because sanskar is not come…. he promise her that he come home earlier….in hall there is sujata, uttara, ragini, laksh, manju and swara…… all ladies goes out…..
They also start to go outside…. but there is a phone comes….. swara is very happy to listen ring of a phone… he run towards the phone and pick the phone… all are happy to look towards her….swara also thought that call was from sanskar…. but her life goes upside down …
On phone….: – hello…. is this Mr. Sanskar Maheshwari house and who are you…
Swara: – yes… and I’m his wife
Phone: – listen Mrs. Maheshwari… we found his car on road also found some id card from that we call you… it’s a bad news for you…swara heard beat skipped…. he says… that Sanskar Maheshwari car Met with and huge accident and sorry to tell you that he is died…. he died on spot……
After listen that swara sit thud on sofa become lifeless……. all look shock see her… laksh goes and pick the receiver and his eyes open wide and painfully look towards swara
Sujata: – what happen Laksh… who was on the call… what happen to swara…. tell us…
Laksh in cry tone….: – sanskar car met with an accident and he… he…
Sujata: – come towards him and hold his coaler…. what he tell me…. laksh with broking voice… that he… he.. d..di..Died and cry…
All look shock… sujata cry loudly… ragini and uttara also cry…. ragini see towards swara and goes towards her…. she is sitting like a lifeless boy……
(Now this is the end of this part…. I hope you like it…. I know you all think that this is last part…. but what to do…. when I start writing… it become lengthy… so I upload rest part after two days… okkk guys….)
30 Comments
superb
plz don’t separate sswasan
Wow loved it but plz don’t seperate them and don’t kill my sanku❤️????
nice..
wow so romantic and sweet iin starting and shocking at end
Pls.don’t let sanskar die pls
It’s a big shock….please don’t separate swasan
Please don’t kill sanskaar…..
Awesome…pls dnt kill sanskar
So nice…bt plz don’t sanky
Nice
superb chappy…But pls don’t separate Swasan..
Please don’t kill Sanskar…… I know u will not do that…..please don’t crush my hopes….. I know I am commenting after long time cause I read all updates today only as there was no internet service provided in our city due to some political issues….. And was curfew in city….for whole week ?… So I read them today… Thank you for this beautiful ff.. With lots of love ❤…..bye…
Plz don’t separate swasan……
i rarely like ur ts but plzz don’t kill sankar
Nice
awsm Dr …. waiting for next part
No this can’t happen.
Omg it was awsome dear you cant belive this is my favt…Songs oh god you Made me cry swara sadness waiting for sanskar ohhhhh Amazing yaar….
But plzzzzz dont seprate them cant See their sepration
awesome…!! waiting for next part..!! I hope that phone call wrong…and sanky is alive…!!
Awesome.. Don’t seperate them
Awasome
Superb
Nyc
Oh God….curiosity to charthi hi jaa rhi hai!!!
Superb yr I LV the song ??
Perfect for the situation
Or plzz sanky ko sahi salamat ghar phuch Dena I think sanky ki car choti ho jati h ya phir khrab ho jati h to vo repair krne k liye mechanic ko deta hoga m sirf assume kr rahi hu ???
Aab story kya h vo to 2 din k baad pata lagega ????
Plzz happy ending krna yr ??
Lv u??
awesome……bt no…sanky can’t die…..time for miracle
Awsm yr …plspost nxt part ..
plz post nxt one
Please post the episode fast. We all are waiting for this from very long time . Plzzzzzzzzz
Please upload the next part