Hello Guys….. I am the writer of the FF Jeene Ki Tammanah Hai, with a new FF….. Yeh Dil Kya Kare…. Here a Short Intro the Main characters….
GUY 1:
I gave you a chance…..But you dint take it…You rejected me…. Now I have moved On for Good, With the Best Person……. I am 100% sure that I will be happier Than Ever….. I will show you What it Means to be Happy ….I will live my life in front of you, Making you regret you decision
GUY 2:
My Heart is bleeding Blood…. I never trusted him….. But You also saw me a waste…..I Loved you, Cherished You …. You always told me that I was the Best for You But I am left Behind…. What did I do Wrong??? I m well Off, Good Looking , Successful and Religious, Then why did you do this to Me…..
Well Done dear… You pulled me out of my Hideout and now left me naked…..Wait for me Dear, I will destroy your new world, with the very Poison you have created
GIRL 1:
My Family is My Everything…. Our Culture and Our Tradition really matters…..Yes I made the right decision to reject you….and hold on my Family …. Do whatever you may please, I wont shatter….. And will live my life… Even though I am hurt Hurting You…and still in pain
GIRL 2:
This World is useless….So am I….Betraying and being Betrayed, Not New, Not Old…..I have not betrayed any one…. But he said that I betrayed him…. I just loved Him….. and Her……….Now let Life take Me ….Where ever it pleases
So What do You Think Guys….. Should I Move On??
Who do you think These People are and How will they complete their relations??
85 Comments
Nice…
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nice plsz continue
Thank You Dear…. Sure will… continue
Nice concept please make pair as raglak and swasan plsss
Thank You Shilpi…. Will tell you about the couple in the next update
Intrestingggg
Thank You Dear…
Amazing start. Al the character’s POV’s were great. Can’t wait to read what happened with their relationships ?
Thank You Dear……You will get to knw about that soon
Ragsan plzzzzzzz u already writing raglak ff so plzzzzzzz make it ragsan
Lets see Dear….. What will happen
Plz make raglak
Thank You Sayana…. Lets see
Nice plot.pls continue ur both ff…
Thank You kutty…. Will try my best
Plz focus on raglak more… Btw it’s awesome
Thank You Savi…. Hmmm lets see
it is tooo interseting i think girl 1 is ragini and girl 2 is swara and boy 1 is laksh and 2 is sanskar hahaaah i know 100% it is wrong u only tell me
Thank You Jazzy…. lets See whats going to be
Nice
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Wow? it’s too interesting plzz try to post nxt part ASAP
Thank You Megha…. will try
awesome
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Hmmm,interesting concept. Plz continue dear.. Waiting for the first part☺☺?.
Take care
Keep smiling?
Thank You … will post soon
loved it want ragini
Thank You ….. ragini as girl or Girl 2??
Awesome
Thank You ammy
Swasan
Want swaru
Thank You Dear…. Lets see
Swara as girl 1 or girl 2
nice
Thank You saranya
Interesting
Thank You Malika
nice but I know u are raglak so be main lead is raglak
Nikky….. Knw me so well??? Lets see
nice but I know u are raglak so be main lead is raglak
plzzz
Lets seee…..
superb.. hope raglak and swasan be pair
Thank You Dera…. Lets seee
interesting
Thank You
Interesting pls continue
Thank You Dear
Raglak plz
Thank You Anju….. Lets see
nice dear…interesting to read ur new ff….
Thank You Asra….. read well
Nice.. But pls make it ragsan
Thank You Kanika… Lets See
Plz make it swasan… Plz…. ????loved it
All four are there….. Tell which is Swasan
Interesting dear and I hope it’s Raglak. Plz continue
Thank You Ammu….. All four are there….. tell me which is Raglak
Nice cs dear..bt confused….
Thank You …..SreeKutty….
Why confused