Hiii everyone this is my nw story- Swasan- An unbreakable alliance ……… Rabia api this is ur surprise..this is specially fr u bcoz after reading ur ff nd ss i gain some confidence to write ff….so this is fr u…….
So coming to the story…….what is an alliance.. U all know very well about it…..but do u knw when an alliance come fr someone how they feel… yes, my story is about alliance, when an alliance come fr someone how they feel…what’s the situation of their heart….nd how they handle it… This story is a journey of alliance to marriage……
I knw its a boring concept… U r free to tell me ….i will drop this idea ….so enough of my bla..bla..
Here is shot1………
A girl is shown sleeping on her bed in her room, which has a beautiful interior of pink nd white. A lady of mid 40’s come inside nd try to wake her….
Sumi- shona,…bacha wake up see its so late nw,wake up
Swara-mom, plz let me sleep..
Sumi- shona, its so late now wake up( nd opens the curtains to allow the sun rays fr disturb swara’s sleep
Swara- mom( iirritate by sun rays)
Sumi- swara, wake up nw nd come fr breakfast ur baba is waiting for u
Swara- baba…..okk i m coming
Nd she left to washroom
Sumi come to shekar….
Sumi – shekar mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai
Shekar- haa bolo na misty, kya baat hai,
Sumi- shekhar, don’t u think swara should be married nw
Shekhar- (after thinking)yess i think u r fight her studies is also completed..
Sumi- so, do u knw any good boy..
Shekar- noo.. mein dekta huin koi acha rishta milta hai toh
(Swara hears thier conversation while coming downstair)
Swara’s pov.
Oh,god,mom- dad fir shuru ho gaye …oh god dekho na itni choti bachi ki shaddi kara rahe hai..that’s nt fair na.,…..swara isse pehle mom tujhe dekhe aur fir shuru ho….nikal yaha se
( swara silently goes towards the door without making noise)
Sumi- swara,come here nd do ur breakfast first, i will nt start marriage topic,come….
Swara- (in mind) ooh! God mom ko kaise pata chala ……mom, i m getting late,Ragu is waiting fr me byeee
Sumi- this girl is crazy..
#In Restaurant
Ragini- swara,u r late…i am waiting here from half an hour nd u r coming nw ( with a fake anger)
Swara- sry,ragu….first i wake up late then this traffic jam…ughhhh.its so irritating..
Ragini- okkk…come sit nd tell me why u called me here?. what’s the problem?
Swara- hwww….ragu what do u mean i always remember u in problem…..
Ragini- yesss…….. Nt always
Swara- hw rude( with an angry pout)
Ragini- smikes seeing him….okkk enough swara tell me what’s the problem?
Swara- ( innocently) woh….na…maa-baba r talking anout my marriage
Ragini- what? Really… Who’s the boy( teasingly) ??
Swara- ragu( angrily) they r searching
Ragini- okkk…so what’s the problem here???
Swara- the problem is i don’t want to marry
Ragini- nd can i ask why!?
Swara- because its so early… I m just 21… I m a little kid na ( with a cute pout)
Ragini- swara….( nd bangs his head with hand) swara look at u ….u r nt a kid now
Swara- oh i knw it but i m a kid from inside
Ragini- okkk! Swara( with a sweet tone) nw enough of this joke tell me the reason nd seriously why u don’t want to marry
Swara- reason… Oh ragu u knw me very well…. Actually i m waiting fr my dream boy
Ragini – (with wide eyes) dream boy
Swara- yes, i don’t want to do into marriage
Ragini- what do u mean???
Swara- I want to do love marriage but with my parents blessings
Ragini- it means a love marriage arrange by parents
Swara- yes,
Ragini- what about ur draem boy
Swara- Dream boy…… Ragu i want a friend in my life partner, who loves me more than my parents…. Who cares fr me….who trust me in each nd every situation,Who respect my feelings, my decisions nd ( irrupts by ragini)_
Ragini- nd u r nt a kid anymore
Swara- what ????( looks shockingly)
Ragini- which kid dreams about someone like this( teasingly) hahahaha
Swara- ( with a cute angry pout) i hate u ragu……
# Maheswari mansion
A boy is shown sleeping hugging tightly his pillow with a cute smile on his face. His alarm is buzzing regularly. A lady came inside nd start shouting
Sujata- his mom- …arrey chore, uth..hey ram ji…ise chore ne toh naak mei dum kar diya.Sanskar! uth na ( nd shakes him)
sanskar doesn’t listen him nd his pillow more tightly
Sujata- chore uuth, suraj sir par aa gaya hai uth sanskar 10:00 baj gaye hai thare ko office nahi jana
Sanskar- oh god !!! Office mom apne mujhe pehle kyun nahi uthaya
Sujata- ( whild going ddownstairs murmurs) yeh chora ek toh maari baat nahi sunta upar se mujhe hi blame kar diya)
Sanskar came downstairs to go office
Sujata- sanskar cams have breakfast
Sanskar- no mom i m getting late( wow hw similar they r)
Ap- sanskar come here first
Sanskar- badi maa OK
Sujata- yeh loo…nahi marre ko samajh nahi aaata…..chord pehle toh tu der se uthta hai fir yeh breakfast nahi karna thare ko…..jiji ab mein iske nakre nas jhel sakun huin haa….ab toh ap iski shaadi kara do bas
Sanskar who is drinking juice spitt it with jerk nd sees his mom with a horrific face
Sanskar- mom….what r u saying……waving his hand byeee i m going
Sujata- dekha jiji dekha chala gaya
Ap- sujata tum bhi na
Sujata- jiji ap samajh na rahe hho……iski biwi aakar hi isse sambhalegi maare se naa hota bas…….nein naa abhi pandit ji ko bulati huin……maare sanskar ke liye mein ek achi marwari ladki dekungi
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A small intro of characters
Swara- bbubbly,,chirpy, naughty girl..only child of her parents…..loves her freedom
Ragini- best friend swara
Sanskar- handsome, iintelligent boy anh girl can fall fr her only heir of maheswari empire a little careless
Laksh- friend of sanskar ,mature tjen sanskar, sujata nd ap trust him
Ragini nd laksh r going to play cupid role in this story
Sry for spellings mistakes bd grammatical errors…….
30 Comments
Hayeee Allah jii omg omgg jumping happilyyy ???? i thought u will involve somewhere in your story butt here u dedicate the whole storyyy woowwww love u aliyaa ???? and dont worry im not doing jhooti tareef ?? your concept is very sweet ?? and it happens in reality some wanta to do love cum arrange marriage ? keep it up ??
Aur spellings and grammar ko maaro golii mairi tou itni hoti aksar mujhay khud ko samjh nhe aata ??? soo chilll ?
Aliya i never even press like button for someone’s dp if i not like it even for a name sakee i liked your concept thats why is said that i didnt liked because u dedicated it to mee sooo its sachii muchii wala not jhooti mutiuu wala ????
Api…stop jumping nahi toh apke parents apko pagal samjhenge…. U really like it sachi muchi wala aap mera dil rakhne ke liye toh nahi keh rahe na ……..yess it happens in reality…
AWESOME DEAR……..LOVED IT
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Nice concept dear
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Awsm Dr
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Nice continue soon
Thank u Simin…..i will
Awesome dear??.no need to wry fr spellings nd grammer. Its okk…waitng fr nxt egrly..post soon
Thank u Mahajabeen i will post it asap
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Awesome……. Continue soon……
Thank u so much purvi
superb dear…… 😉
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Wonderful dear…Continue soon…
Hii dear…
Nice concept…
Can we be friends???
yes,Manasvi u r my frnd thank u fr commenting.i m glad u like it
Awesome concept continue soon