Happy birthday neetu this one is for you yaar yeh wala zada acha nai hai par gift toh gift hota hai to abhi ke liye part 2 se kaam chala le phir main aaj os bhi de dongi chal padh abhi
THE BABY CUPID~part 2~
She wakes up…
Sun rays disturbing her beauty sleep…
Yawns loudly…
Sees at her side her lovely husband sleeping peacefully like a child…
She moves her hand through his hair ,
bennirmala down and kisses him on forehead…
Suman: good morning shravan…
She gets up to move but is pulled back obviously by her flirt naughty husband…
Suman: shravan neend mein bhi shataniya kar rahe ho?
Shravan kisses her lips: are sweet heart ye neend to kabki udi hai…
Suman raises her brows seeing her husband flirt with her…
Suman: acha…
She punches his arm with her free hand…
Suman:ab plz chodo na mujhe Rashmi ko dekhne jana hai…
Shravan irritated:kya yar princess jab bhi main romantic mood mein hote hai you bring my Rashmi in middle…
Suman: oh hello sirf tumhari nahi hum dono ki ok… Ab plz chodo na shravan dekho yo yaha aegi toh kya bolegi…kya sochegi?
Shravan bites his lower lip and encircles his arms around her such that she falls on top of him…
Shravan: kya! Yahi bolegi and sochegi na ki dekho pappa uski mummy se kitna pyar karte hai…
Suman: shravan you are too much…
She pushes him back and gets up…
She knew her naughty husband wont leave her so easily so turns back and points her finger towarNirmala him…
Suman: aur khabardar agar mujhe phir piche khinchne ki koshish ki toh…
This time shravan knew she was serious so let her in to see he their daughter was awake…
Suman went out…
She directly went to her daughter’s room to see he she was awake…
Rashmi was sleeping peacefully in her bed… She goes near her and kisses her forehead…
She now remembers all that what happened since shravan got to know she was pregnant…
~FLASHBACK~
Suman’s POV….
Ye Shravan ko kya hua hai…
Jabse pata chala hai ki mein pregnant hu….
Tabse typical husband bana phirne laga hai…
End of POV…
Shravan enter’s the room…
Shravan: princess ye lo dudh pilo…
Now suman was really irritated…
Suman: just cut the crap Shravan…bas bahot ho gaya…
Shravan shocked: but mainne kya kiya princess??
Suman: tumhe kya lagta hai just because ki mein pregnant hu….
Mein bhul jaungi gi ki tumhari wajah se aaj mere nanu mere saath nahi hain…
She turns her face away….
Shravan goes near her and holNirmala her hand….
Suman wondering that why was he so calm….
Shravan: princess look jo kuch bhi hua hai who hum dono mein hua hai…to isme hamare baby ki kya galti??
Suman: matlab kya hai tumhara?
Shravan: look chilla main bhi sakte hai…lad main bhi sakte hai….par isse na tumhe farak padega na mujhe par bewajah humre baby ko saja milegi….princess agar tumhare ese chillane ke wajah se humare baby ko kuch ho gaya toh??plz princess kya bas kuch dino keliye tum bina lade reh sakti ho??plz bas humare baby ane tak…uske bad tumhe mujhe jitni galiya deni hai jitna marna hai maro…
Suman knew he was right…
She hated this moment..
Hated so much…
But deep inside she was touched…
Really touched by his worNirmala…
By his care for her and her baby…
She agreed with it…
Next 9 months passed too quickly….
Shravan helped her with all the problems…
Finally the day came…
A new angel got life on the earth…
Daughter of SHRAVAN MAHNOTRA and SUMAN MAHNOTRA….
They named their daughter RASHMI….
Just as the name so was she…
Rashmi means ray of sunlight….
She was the sunlight of her parent’s life….
The baby really annoyed suman at times…
Shravan helped her with each and every small thing…
Fights weren’t happening much as both were busy in taking care of rashmi…
The small angel had really changed the course of their life…
Shraman slept in one room just because suman was not able to handle the crying baby alone…
When she cried both made a team effort to stop her…
The distance between them had reduced…
One day 2 year old rashmi was walking with suman through the corridor…
Construction work was going on in palace…
A plywood piece ws gonna fall on both of them but Shravan came at right time..
Pushed both aside letting the plywood fall on his hand…
Rashmi fell at side and Shravan on top of suman…
Suman saw blood oozing out of Shravan’s hand….
She quickly pushes him,gets up and runs from there…
Now Shravan was really angry…
He saved her life still…
But his anger vanished as soon as he saw her run back with a first aid box…
She wiftly takes his hand…bandaging it…with her continuous blabbering going on…
Suman: ofo Shravan ek rashmi to samhalti nahi mujhse uparse tum bhi…
He was very happy today…
His princess after so many days had freely expressed her feelings to him…
Days passed and the baby bought them more closer…
A day the whole tiwari and mahnotra family went to mahnotra mansion for dinner…
3 year old rashmi running all over followed by suman…
Rashmi stops in front of NIRMALA’s room and suman stops too…
Shravan was talking to Nirmala…
Nirmala : shravan beta 5 saal se main dekh rahi hoon Suman tumhare saath kaisa behave karti hai tum use sach kyun nai bata dete ki aditya ne tujhe black mail kiya tha ki agar tum use nai nikalte toh vo uski jaan le leta
Shravan:nai maa main suman ko ache se jante hai… vo ye sachai bardash nahi kar paengi….
Use bahot taklif hogi…
Nirmala: par beta jo taklif apko ho rahi hai uska kya??
Shravan: main suman se pyaar karte hai Maa bhale hi woh Mujhe nafrat karti ho par main use taklif mein nahi dekh sakte…
Nirmala: thike beta aap jesa thik samjhe…
Shravan noMaa and is about to leave when he sees suman standing at door with rashmi….
Suman was shocked her eyes filled with tears…
She runs from there and Shravan runs behind her while rashmi goes to Nirmala…
Suman in her room crying…
Shravan comes from back…
Shravan: princess…
Suman turns back and gives him a tight slap…
He was shocked at her reaction also very angry…
But suman suddenly hugged him….
Suman crying: tumne mujhe kuch bataya kyun nahi Shravan??? Itne saal Shravan 5 saal tumhe mein kuch bhi kehti gayi…marti rahi..or tumne muh se ek awaz nahi nikali kyun Shravan kyun?? I’m sorry…
Shravan cups her face: nahi princess maine maaf kardo…maine shayad tumhe sab pehle hi bata dena chahiye tha…agr main tumhe pehle hi bata dete toh…
Be4 he could complete suman pulled him in a kiss…
At first he didn’t respond but then kissed her back with equal passion…
Shravan breaks the kiss realizing she was out of breath…
He kissed her forehead..
Shravan: I LOVE YOU PRINCESS…
Suman: I LOVE YOU TOO Shravan …
~END OF FLASHBACK~
Suman is still lost in her daughter’s thoughts while Shravan comes and hugs her from back…
Resting his head on her shoulder…
Shravan: kiske khayalon mein khoyi ho princess??? Apne handsome pati ke??
Suman: kuch nahi Shravan bas…
Shravan: main jante hai tum kya soch rahi thi…
Then she turns to face him and snakes her handsome around his neck…
Suman: sach batau Shravan… humari beti humare life ki cupid ban gayi…
Shravan kisses her cheek…
Shravan: Han nahi toh… THE BABY CUPID…
Suman caresses his cheek..
Suman: I LOVE YOU SHRAVAN…
Shravan: I LOVE YOU TOO PRINCESS…
BOTH HUG EACH OTHER LOST IN THE WARMTH THEIR ARMS CREATED…
LOST IN THE BEAUTIFUL MOMENT…
~THE END~
Toh kaisa laga theek thak tha chal tere os ki bhi tayaari karni hai and everyone comment zaroor Kar diyo
11 Comments
Too good!
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Thanks sis
Boht accha..i loved each and every line..each n every scene specially that one when something fall on shravan and suman rushed to take first aid?? N the one where they were kissing ND shravan breaks the kiss after realizing that sumo is having difficulty in breathing??????
Thanks alina
Hey I am so happy u r Back because i love ur one/two shots a lot and i read them even more than once sorry i couldn’t comment the first part as i didn’t know that you posted a two shots and I also didn’t visit the website for the last 2-3 days
Oh so it was Aditya who did all this misunderstanding thingy and it’s so cute when Shravan calls sumo princess and so Shraman’s Daughter brings them closer rashmi one of family Friend who is 9 years old so i was imagining her instead ???
Thanks appi
Wonderful!! The ending was superb. Post ur other ff soon. I can’t wait for that anyone ?
Thanks bes and I will try
Riyoooo yaarrr itni aachi ts mei sach mei jabra fan.too good girl specially ending part.
Tooooo gooood.
Soooo sweeeettttt.
U rocked.
Posy moreee
Amazing!! Loved it. ?
Riya!!!!! Sry for a late comment.
It was soooooooooooooooo cute. I was wondering at the beginning how can Shravan b wrong but obv it’s tht stupid aditya.
pls write more shots
looooovvveeeee u