Hey guyz m pretty sure u all r excited for the revelation today ? i did a lot of thinking n only then came up with this twist …m nervous how u guyz will react ..i hope u like it…btw guyz just for info i have two important examinations this weekend ..so i might not be posting till monday …though i will try my best to write …as i also have to write for a competetion on tellyupdates…u must have heard about it…m writing about kaira only it will be a diff. Storyline…dont be upset keep smiling readibg n commenting ..do check out the competition too as u guyz r given the right to vote?
Continuing from the celebrations going on in SM (singhania mansion)
naira (announces infront of everyone):everyone listen to me …today unknowingly we all have wore matching color dresses with someone or other…(everyone look at eachother n notice the same tht a particular colour is worn by two individuals)….this was a secret surprise i mishti kuhu n nanu had planned for u guyz
*flashback*
Naira thinks of this plan to cheer up kartik so asks nanu kuhu n mishti help
*Present*
Naira: so now there is a treasure hunt …no one knows about the things not even me mishti nanu n kuhu as it is hidden by chitti uncle!…. so everyone will pair up with their partners wearing same colour n a list of diff things will be given to each pair n then the pair finding all the things listed first will be the winner
Kartik thinks in mind …wow miss rishikesh is trying so hard but this tym kartik u need to show some tantrums its ur turn …n he smiles thinking this
Mishti: bff y r u smiling ..r u again dreaming about di….instead of dreaming u should have proposed in switzerland it would have been more romantic
Kartik: ho to gya!
Mishti (shocked):wat
Kartik(realising wat he said): i mean in my dreams yr
mishti:uffo bff u n ur dreams!!
Kartik scratches his head n smiles
Meanwhile everyone couples up
Nakshtara
Naksh: wow wife wat a coincidence we both r green green
Tara:ohh no …i thought i will get someone else ..it would have been easier to win!!
Naksh(faking his anger): ohh achcha …ok then m going n changing this green kurta u be with whoever u wanna be with…
Naksh was about to leave but tara says oh hello dear hubby …where r u going…without u m so incomplete..
They both smilingly hold hands n go
Gayu seeing all this thinks kash me n kartik would have been together! N gets sad
Yash n rose r together n like this all the couple r together
Kaira scene
Naira(comes from behind n whispers in kartik’s ear):lets go my prince charming!!
Kartik doesnt answer
Naira:arrey come on yr …m sorry na…u once said we r frnds first so by saying mendhak i was reviving our frndship in our lovely relationship….now its ur wish if u wanna use this opportunity of treasure hunt to be a romantic moment ..or a silent moment
Kartik: ohh wow my lovely gf is thinking so much ….ok done m not angry with u anymore…tbh i was not angry with u tht much aa i showed i just wanted to show u tantrums like u do
Naira: ohh achcha like i do..
Kartik runs n naira runs behind him…
Naira was suddenly tripping but kartik holds her in his arm romantically n they have a eye contact!!
Naira: got u!!
Kartik: u will always get me always n forever remember (winks at her )
Naira smiles n says ok ok lets go now bf if today u make me loose na then see …
Kartik: ok ok madam lets go!!
Gayu n vivan scene
Gayu searches tht who is in yellow ….n finally sees some one from behind wearing a yellow kurta
Gayu: hello excuse me
The guy turns n its…vivan
Vivan: oh hello gayatri!
Gayu: plz call me gayu
Vivan: ok …btw u look very pretty
Gayu: thnk u
Vivan realises y gayu was here seeing her in yellow dress…
Vivan: so u r my treasure hunt patner! Gud tht u must be knowing about places here …as i have no clue
Gayu: yeah
Viyu(vivan+gayu) goes to join others
All the pairs gather …mishti nanu n kuhu r the judges
All the pairs gets the list n a map of the area counted under treasure hunt…n they all start their quest
Naksh asks naira : who is ur pair
Naira:kartik
Naksh(beinh insecure): ohhh listen r u..
Before he could complete Tara noticed the insecurity of naksh n came n said arrey mr. Hubby chale ya harne ka irada h (shall we start or u have intentions to loose)
Naksh:haan haan lets go
Now karia walks out of SM
Kartik: naira i have a plan lets go n have a coffee …everyone is busy in this…
Naira: dear bf …i really wanna win this ..so stop being a romeo ryt now…be a superman n help me find these things
Kartik: as u wish miss gf
Kartik goes left n naira goes right side
Aftr a while kartik feels someone is following him
Kartik turns n sees someone
Kartik: u?
Someone: yes kartik …long tym huh!
Kartik: wat do u want mr. Dixit…how did u got reminded of me..?
Mr. Dixit: oh kartik y r u being so formal …call me by the relation we have… or r u shy to call me by relation?
Kartik: shy!! M ashamed n watevr relation we had in past i left in past..
Mr. Dixit: oh my god ..so much anger …there shouldnt be so much anger between mamu n bhatija
Kartik: just stop! U r not my mamu …u r my step mamu…n ur actions in past made this more clear!!! I dont get it …i stopped comming in ur way long back…then y r u comming in between my path..
Mr. Dixit: i was happy wen u stopped comming in between my path but i think its in ur blood tht u again r trying to come between my path…so this is just a warning to u .
Kartik: ur path??
Mr. Dixit: u r trying to take the deal of vivan group of industries to singhania jwellers….stop it ….it was going to be my contract n it will be mine contract….so stay out of it …n yes tell ur girlfriend she is pretty but is not smart enough to know the actual kartik sharma yet..do u wonder will she still be with u aftr tht!!
Kartik gets enraged by this comment about naira n says shut ur mouth …u say watver u wanna say about me but dont even speak anything about her!!
Mr. Dixit gives a wicked smile n walks away
Kartik feels very disturbed n tensed….just them naira comes ohh kartik did u get anything…
Kartik: yes a big shock( in a low voice)
Naira: wat r u saying ..say loudly na
Kartik realises n corrects himself arrey nothing ..n no i didnt find anything
naira: but i found two things….
Naira notices the change in mood of kartik n asks wat happened kartik…i can get it from ur face something is wrong!!
Kartik: no no nothing
Naira: no u r lying..
Kartik: no naira its nothing come on lets continue
Naira: its ok kartik…i know sometimes there r things which u urself havent accepted but it keeps on haunting u …its a situation where u dont know how to share it…i can understand tht..so dont worry i wont force u ….u r always welcome to share it with me wenever u r comfortable ..n no matter wat it will be i will always be there with u …always n forver!
Kartik suddenly gives a tight hug to naira….
They release the hug
Kartik: m so glad tht i have u as gf ..u understand me so well…never knew u had this side too naira singhania!!
Naira:naira singhania is full of surprises..
Kartik n naira smile n continue searching
Precape:the game goes on….viyu n nakshtara scenes….next day kartik gets a text n behaves pretty wierd
So guyz how did u like the reveal of the follower someone…..as i said i would reveal who tht person is i did reveal it..guyz tbh m pretty nervous about wat u readers r thinking about the revelation coz trust me it took me so many days to decide how to bring out this new someone in a way u guyz would love….u all can even suggest for any change if u think any is required …so plz comment..i hope i made a correct choice of revelation ?
Btw there is a bigger secret n twist …how will these twists affect kaira…keep reading to know….n do comment on ur views about this revealation …n suggestions!!☺
JUST A REMINDER: do vote in the compition for whichever u feel like …each of u can vote for three stories at max…dont be sad will surely post next part on monday!! Wish me luck for my exams guyz!!?
10 Comments
Dear this was unexpected twist never thought of Karthik uncle .i was expecting Karthik past gf or Naira stalker.pretty good Yaar …I loved the dialogue stop being a Romeo be a superman good one….n how Naira understands Karthik …u didn’t disappoint us atkeast me dear.
All the best for exams dear studies are more Imp…we will wait for the next part
All the best for ur other competition too
Thnk u so much shilpa …..m glad u liked it…n btw ur thinking was nyc yr kartik’s gf ….maybe in future?
Omg twist pey twist
Good one dear
Chill all the best
Thnks a lot anjali….n dear abhi there r more twists to come…its just the beginning …m pretty sure u all will like them too?
It was superb
And all the best for telly update competition and exams
Thnks a lot namrata …keep reading ?
its an interesting twist,don’t wt happens next but don’t separate kaira by misunderstanding hales… continue the understanding btw kaira till end……
and ALL THE BEST for exams and competetion too….
Thnks renee…n Dude even i cant see kaira separate yr….tht was one of my reason to start this ff…kaira can have fights as fights increase love but can never be seperate atleast in my ff thts my guarantee …so chill n enjoy?
It’s awesome.
But don’t separate kaira.
AND BEST OF LUCK FOR YOUR EXAM..
Thanks anyan!! ☺ btw i would say the same thing i told renee tht in my ff it is a garuntee tht kaira wont seperate…they might have nok jhoks or a bit fighting as it will increase thier love and understanding…so chill n keep reading ?