Hi I guys let’s start ….
Her pov
Again a new costumer.. …. my father my papa is only responsible …. my own papa sold me to many men ….for just only some money .. how shameless….chiii
shameless….chiii
I can’t believe money cost more than my dignity for my papa ….. I used to be her princess her Swara… but now only and only a medium of income .. one day I tried to get free from this all nonsense..i run away that ….i took vase from my room skipped out and banned on my Papa’s head …he slightly tilted and saw my face …i run from there …behind me my Papa’s men
Were running ..i tried my best to escape but they grabbed me…they took me to my papa and he put me in room …he also came …and locked it ….he torn my clothes and thrown me on bed .. I was begging to him but he has lost his shame ….. when I pushed him ….he….beaten me from belt and again jumped on me ….
After he harassed me he gone out …i wore my clothes and immediately rushed to bathroom and vomited there ….
When I came out my father thrown pregnancy report on my face ..i opened it …the report were positive… I was totally blank ….who is the father of this child …..
I want to know… my father took me to hospital and aborted my child ….
I cried that whole night but my papa didn’t care. . What the hell. ..
I cried whole night and slept on floor …
Next morning … I woke up my father said a costumer wants to spend a month with you …pack your bags …. I was blank . ….i asked him who is he …he said sanskaar maheshwari . …i was hell shocked…sanskaar was my colleague….and now he will do this …. chii
Some how I managed sat in car and moved ….
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Hope you liked it short update because I am affected by rashes….
56 Comments
It was a nice start dear..
Is it a swasan ff or swalak ff???
Thanx manasvi …
It is swasan
Nice dea….feeling bad fo swara….
Thanx.. and yaa feeling extremely bad for her
interesting…!! waiting for next part…!!
Thanxxx chandu
awww feeling bad for swara
Yaa..thanks for the comment
gd start and nice storyline
Thanks…riyanjali
intresting
Thanks dear
It’s nice but feeling bad for Swara
Thanx dear
Haww kiddo….i m shocked seeing ur name…..itni bold concept likh rahi ho…meri kiddo badi ho gayi….
u got rashes? How dear?
Thanxx vyshu dii..for such a long comment…..aree voh jo Mata ji nikal ti hai .voh hai
oh…take care
Nice continue
Thanks very much dear
Awesome
Update soon
Tysm
Nice
Thanx soujanya
Wow ….nice…
Nxt part kab post karoge ?
Thankss
Kal post karugi
Good storyline dear…Continue soon…
Thanks..dear
.i will continue soon
Awesome waiting for nxt part dear
Thank u…
Wow janviii loved swara………and just hate her father…. Huhh….anyways…..it was an awesome episode……..I loved it….. continue soon….
Thanx hemanshi..loved your os do write more …
Thanks a lot dear??
Well I write ffs on swasan …..
‘SWASAN MY CRAZY LOVE ‘ AND ‘SWASAN LOVE ME THIDA AUR’
Interesting dear…..!!!!! Continue soon….!!!!!!
Thanks deekshA…
Poor girl… feeling so bad for her…
I guess hez not her real father…
Vry intrstng cncpt… liked it
continue soon
Thanks arshaanya…for your responses…i felt good when I read your line …vry interesting concept ….liked it …
Tysm
Oh man how come someone be so cruel! Hope everything gets fine soon
Keep it up!
And for rashes consult doctor he will give you some Angi alergic, don’t stress your hands if you have rashes?
Meher/ mugdha dii…you are siyali right?? Thanks for your comment…and yaa I been to doc…it is normal don’t worry
No dear m not siyali!
I have only two names ?
Interesting waiting for next update
Thanks chinna
Janviiiiiiii !!! do u have broom stick ?? waaaaa !! lets beat Sekher together…
How can he do this? ahhh!! but this kind of stuffs r happening in our society….
U choosed a awesome topic to pen down through ur story… n m sure u r gonnna rock with it….
Loved it dear…
Thnk u… ;-*
Thanks……kakali. .i have broom stick ….u can come anytime …we will together beat him…do you really think I gonna rock with it …??????thanks…loved your os too….look I am in tears after reading your comment
Awwww!!! sorry for making u cry dear…..
yoooo telll me ur address m ready with my private rocket… huhuhuhu !!! once again thnk u for appreciating my work… ;-*
interesting..
Thanks……
Fantastic ….
Waiting for next part
Thanx krysrle $
Poor Swaraa..Hope Sanskar will help her
Yaa I hope same …
Thank you for the comment
nice episode. Waiting for next episode.
Thank you Ray
Wow…Brilliant. Waiting for next update…
Thankss prakrati
My Pleasure???
Marvelous