Heya everyone m very happy as many silent readers of my ff broke their silence in last Episode…. So a big thanks to them … But m really disappointed with those who earlier use to comment but now r not commenting …. May b the storyline is getting boring …. But m so glad with the ones who comment … Thnkew so much and continue commenting? ….
So let’s start with the next part
Episode 17
The next half of the way passed in complete silence …..
Sometimes silence speaks better than words but here it was nothing more than silence filled with Awkwardness and Misunderstandings which eventually led to pain …..
Sanskar was trying to concentrate on road which seemed nearly impossible as his mind was filled with many thoughts ….
Whereas Swara was busy looking outside the window trying to divert her mind..
The song which was unintentionally played few moments back was obviously completed by now but it did the work for what God intentionally played it ….
They were abt to reach when car stopped with a jerk …. With this sudden jerk Swara came back to senses and looked towards Sanskar with a questioning look as if asking what happened
Sanskar was also not knowing abt the reason for sudden halt of car so he came out if the car to check the problem ….
Swara also got down from the car following Sanskar….
Finally sanskar spoke
: I think there is some problem with the engine which m not getting ….. Its quite late so there’ll be not mechanic available …. Ur house is in the next lane only so let’s go on feet ….
Swara was abt to deny, when Sanskar said:I know u can go urself but I’ll trip u…. I don’t want to argue ….
Swara just nodded and both began to walk…
( please don’t think that it will rain and they will get shelter in some shade or hut as nothing like this is gonna happen …. It looks to filmy nd fictional …
Although its a fiction but I want to make it as simple as possible )
They soon reached outside swara’s house …. Sanskar was abt to go after dropping her there when Swara spoke
Swara: Its quite late Sanskar … U will not get any taxi …. So it’s better u take my car … The driver must have brought it by now… I’ll bring the keys…
For which Sanskar just nodded….
Swara went inside to bring the let’s when Ragini saw Sanskar outside the house from her room’s window
She wondered that y he is there at that tym and thought to check herself …..
Ragini came outside to meet Sanskar
Sanskar also saw her
Ragini: Sanskar Bhaiya u here. ?
(Look let me tell that she’s calling him Bhaiya as he is Laksh’s brother )
Sanskar: yes Ragini actually I met Swara in a restaurant then I thought to drop her as it was getting late..
And on the way my car broke so we came via Walk….
Ragini: oh thnk u for dropping Di here…. But now how will u go Bhaiya its very late right now…. U do one thing u go with our car I’ll just bring the keys….
(She was abt to go)
Sanskar: no Ragini …. Swara already went to get it…
Ragini: so Bhaiya wat r u doing here? Come inside don’t know y Di is taking so long
Sanskar:no dear m gud here waise bhi its too late it will not look gud…
Ragini: no Bhaiya..
No need to b so formal…. (She continued to request him)
Finally Sanskar agreed and went in
On the other hand ….
Swara was finding the keys in her room but she was not getting them ….. As Sharmishtha kept them somewhere when driver gave it to her and now she was sleeping so Swara didn’t wanted to disturb her…..
After searching for long finally she got it…. And headed downstairs….
And was shocked to c Sanskar in the living room talking with Ragini ….
She marched towards them and kept the key on the table…
Swara: Sanskar here is the key…. U may take the car
Sanskar nodded and was abt move when Ragini again started
Ragini: are Di … Just now he came… U two wait I’ll just get coffee for us….
Sanskar:are no Ragini… No need for that u don’t trouble urself ….
Again Ragini was again n again requesting…. And again he had to agree
Just then Ragini was abt to head towards kitchen ….. When her phone rang … It was from one of her close friend who was with her in fashion designing and now needed some help so she excused herself from SWASAN nd asked Swara to prepare coffee
Swara had no other way out so she agreed as whatever happened between them shud not affect the gratitude…. As Sanskar dropped her and was now her guest …. And being noble it was her duty to treat him well…
After sometime Swara came with three cups of coffee she prepared one for Ragini
By the tym Laksh also entered as Ragini informed him abt Sanskar’s arrival….
Ragini also came back after hanging up the call
Swara: are Laksh u here….
Laksh: yes Swara Woh Ragini informed me abt bhai being here so i also thought to come….I hope o didn’t disturbed u all
Swara hits him playfully
Swara: achha now u r also becoming so formal
( Sanskar was feeling sad as Swara was talking freely with Aditya nd Laksh but not with him)
He held one cup of coffee as he didn’t wanted to stay there for long
He sipped coffee and next second he felt burning sensation in his tongue or shud I say whole mouth
(Don’t think that Swara added chilli or something just read )
Sanskar: Ahhhhh….
Swaraglak immediately turned three faces towards him as they were busy in chit chatting….
Laksh: Oh ho bhai wat happened?
Sanskar: Woh I sipped the coffee and didn’t noticed that it was hot so my tongue got burnt
Swara(worried and in a flow): Oh ho Sanskar… R u nuts ? Y u always neglect the fact that we shud b careful while drinking coffee but u…. Since school u r burning ur tongue….
Sanskar smiled as she referred him as Sanskar… On the other hand Raglak were shocked…. Laksh again became suspicious
When Swara realized what she said …. She again started
Swara:(stammering) Woh…. Woh in school canteen… I….I once saw u drinking coffee and spitting it out the next moment…. Han han otherwise I don’t know anything abt….abt …u
I think my phone is ringing …. I’ll b back
She left to her room….
Precap- Cats out of can may be
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Well I seriously don’t know what rubbish I wrote…. I know it was boring but I wanted to give at least one chapter before Rabia Di leaves …. So here it is…. I was not at all in a mood to write…. And my hand got twisted that too right hand so it took two days for me to write such a small one…
Rabia Di this is truly dedicated to u … I know u must b thinking that which boring and rubbish Episode I dedicated to u… But I was not getting tym and wrote whatever came in my mind…. Di will m is u sooooooooooooooooo much…. Go slowly nd come back as fast as possible….
I wish u get successful in ur lyf ….. And achieve all ur dreams…
Jaldi aana…..
65 Comments
Well it is Di will miss u
Shreeyu bachha it was just awesomeee???????
N take care of yourself……..??
It was not at all boring……?
Rabia we will miss u a lottttt…..I couldn’t post an episode today as I had to give some time to my hubby and my family also……so sorry dor that……..a very very all the best to you?????
Nd come back with a positive result???
N I am sure u will win
oooo God hemanshii u alreadyy dedicated to many things to meee soo there is noo need to say like thisss and u just give full time to your job and our jiju 😉 and i will surely be back :* 🙂
Thnks a lot Hemanshi Di…???
Awesome…..?
Thnk u dr…
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Cutieee !!! At that moment u was thinking about rain na alll hahhh !!!
but my brain was revolving around chaat,panipuri,ice cream shop…
it’s kinda they will go n enjoy n i can feel that sensation… haaaa !!!
Love it dear…
Thnk u.. ;-*
Haha Di…. Panipuri , chat… U r really foodie… Aren’t u? Thnkew so much Di…. M soo sooo glad u liked it… It was totally an unplanned Episode just wrote it randomly…
Yeah yeah !!! I wholebodily except that m a foody …. *spicy lover… hahh !!! TAKE CARE
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Nice shreeyu….!!!!! Continue soon….
Thnkew deekshu ….. Will post after my exams… Soon I’ll b posting an author’s note
shreeeyuuuuuuuu (angry pout) u r tooo muchhh dont u dare to say it boring u know i like it very much because today there is no song in it 😉 and i mostly like epis without the songs of lyrics 😉 because song tou we know naa actual interest was in the storyy soo epi was sooo good and thankuu soo much dear and take care of your wrist :* :*
Di wat to do I felt that its boring…. Achha sorry for saying that …. And u really don’t like songs …. Chalo its good that I didn’t added any song in this Episode which was for u ..
Thnkew so much dii… My wrist is much better now … Just a little pain
Cutieeeee !!!! Take care of ur hand okkkiiii !!! No need to write or type…. 1st get well soon ,,, n yooooo u said it boring naaaa,, hmmmm your talks has become baseless… haaaa !!! Love u…
once again take care or do nagin Dance.
Thnkew Di… My wrist is better now just a little pain… I felt it boring so said… So sorry for that … Huh my talks r becoming baseless waise its true due to exam fever … Lov uh too dii … I’ll do nagin dance with u
Gimme hifi by leg !!! yooo same is happening with me.. haaa !!! *doing nagin steps with Cutieee on stage … ;0;0;0:0 😀 😛
Hehe Di … Lov uh sooooo much. ….. U r the most adorable person on tu ….
Baccha take care of yourself
Swara still worries for him
And after a long time she reffered to him as sanskar wowwwww
Thnk u dii … Will take care.. Ya she’s just trying to act rude or behave cold but in her heart she’s most concerned one for him
Concerned for him#
Awesome ? and take care .
Thnkew Dr… M glad u liked it… Continue reading dr
Awesome dear. Please update soon.
Thnk u Dr.. Feeling gud to c ur comment… Continue reading …. Can’t say abt posting soon as my exams r coming but will post an author’s note soon
Awesome…… Loved it sweeto…. No need to strain too much sweeto….. Take care
Thnkew didoo… Ya Di I’ll not stain myself… U too tc.. I have a request Di that can u pls upload my heartless queen first… Actually my exams r going to start so wanna read it before them
Sweeto i saw this reply…. So that only i updated mhq first…. ?
nice..
Thnkew dr… ??? Continue reading
Awesomr..
Take care for sure
Thnkew Tvishu …ya Dr m taking care of myself and my hand us gud now… Waise where u disappeared Han… Check my message on fb
Superb shree.. it ws not boring… actually i was waiting for u to upload.. bt u revealed ur hurt.. so take cre… get well soon… swara is always swara and sanskar too.. whn we are so connecred we cnt shut our mouth even thou we are in war ie fight.. hahaha..
Haha thnkew so much Dr… M well now… U too tc
Awesome…loved it
Thnks a lot Dr… Continue reading
OMG… finally u r back… missed u n ur FFS…
Thnks a lot aditi… M sorry for uploading it late but m busy with my studies so m not getting tym… And a saw ur comment on previous Episode but couldn’t comment
it was not boring… but I didn’t understand the precap….
n please post the next soon….
n I really liked ur thought of simplicity….
finally I got something to read today…
M glad u liked it… Precap means that the truth can come out before Laksh … I’ll try to post soon but could not promise … But will b posting an author’s note soon … So do read it..
And thnkew for liking my thought actually I don’t want to make my ff too dramatic
Nyc chappy shreeyu n take care dear
Thnkew so much dr
Awesome bachu…..loved swara’s care towards sanskar…i m excited to know how cat will come out of the can.
Dhyan rakhna chahiye na? Hope ur hand gets better soon.
Thnkew Vyshu Di… Hehe u will come to know it not so soon but ya I’ll upload after my exams not now
My hand is gud now di… M fine U too take care
Shreeyu that was awesome
Thnx a lot Dr… Continue reading ?
Awesome dear its not boring so cill and get well soon
Thnkew dr… M well now…. U too tc
I like ur ff but it too short dear…
Please update soon
Thnks Dr… M sorry for giving short updates but m hardly managing nowadays so will give long ones December onwards
nice
Thnkew Dr…. Continue reading
Nice..sry I wasn’t able to comment in few of u’r previous parts..take care.
Thnkew dr… Its oky… Continue reading
Awesome dear continue soon.
Thnks a lot Dr….
Continue reading
Awsm part…
Omg am I dreaming swara called his name.
Let’s do party then…
Take care….
Don’t need to update soon( don’t take it seriously orelse your fans will kill me)
Haha thnkew diii…. And u r not dreaming… *pinching u
Chalo let’s do party m always ready for that but after my exams … *let’s nacho
Thnk u …. AbdAnd now I’ll update after my exams… Hehe how can I disobey u… Han??
Awwwwwwwww loved it dearrrrrrrr sorry for commentng late dear was tooo busy 🙂
Thnkew so much …. Mirna… No problem… Don’t say sorry … That is something which I shud say as m not able to comment on ur ff nowadays… Sry Dr I’ll not b able to comment till December… I’ll not b regular on tu from tomorrow onwards due to my exams
aaaaaaawwwww.. finally swara..!!! huh! seem i missed so much part
Well…. To b true Micu I didn’t got much of ur talk… But ya whatever I got is that u missed previous episodes… Is it? So for that u may visit them with the help of the links I gave in this Episode and don’t worry nothing much happened in this ff
Wonderful
Thnkew dr… Continue reading