BEFORE STARTING I WANT A ANSWER FROM U!! HAVE U EVER WENT VIA ROAD A LONG DRIVE!! IF YES.. THN R U READY TO RECREATE THOSE NOSTALGIA.. IF NOT TIGHTEN UR SEAT ? BELT IN THE CAR WHICH VIPLAV IS GNG TO TRAVEL AND BE A PART OF THIS JOURNEY..
SO READY FR MY FF.. THN LTS GOO.. 5:::4**3?? 2?? 1??
((((NOTE ? PLS DO NT SKIP THE SNG PART ELSE U CAN’T ENJOY THIS FF FULLY?))))
Bilkul nahi bikul nahi biklkul nahi!!! Says a boy ? turning back.. A fat girl ? comes running ? and hugs that boy ? Thu kuch bhi bol main nahi aane wala.. U go wth driver, I mom and dad ? will come by our own flight ✈ says that boy ? and turns front.. His face is shown.. Viplav if u r my brother then u will make my dream come true.. Shouts that girl ? turning front… No I’m not ur brother.. Sorry ? mom I had to tell this to her.. If not now then when mom.. Ohh sorry kab chachi!! Says Viplav.. Looking at a women of middle age.. She(Middle aged women) throws a pillow telling Viplav.. Y now u said that.. U r our own son na..
Viplav goes near her and hugs crying ? and says ohh!! Chachi… Yeah u r like my mom itself!!! Kanak chachi.. Viplav continues ah.. Moti u r not my blood siso.. U r my niece ?
Fat girl says oh.. Me this Shalu Tripathi will not get sad ? or manipulated by this play conducted by my mom and bhaia.. So. ✋stop this u r driving the car ? and we are going.. Yippee ? and runs ?
Viplav shouts mom,tell to that moti I’m not going to drive such a long distance.. Jab hamare pass hamara hi ek plane ✈ hai toh kyun itna long distance car ? pein.. Moti ko samjao na!!
Yahan kya ho raha hai says a man of nearly 35 years..
Viplav:: Ur cutie is mad ? she is asking me to drive from here,Mumbai to Goa.. Dad u do something and cancel this
Dad:: Y she want u to drive
Viplav:: Because she is telling it was her long desire to travel to Goa via road.. And next week is her b’day.. And she want her b’day to be celebrated in Goa…
Dad:: Then Viplav go for it!!! It will be a good experience.. And Y not.. Almost in every NH we have our own hotels ? if not in Nh in town we have our own hotels na.. So wats the problem.. Go for it..
Viplav:: But dad driving such a long distance.. Between U both are too coming na..
Dad & mom:(Together)we!! Why we? U both go and come..
Shalu:: Wat?? Mom and dad u guyss are coming!! But u both can come by our plane ✈ but bhaia and smiles ?
Viplav looks down…
Shalu::bhaia pls!! It’s my dream.. Only 2-3 days are required.. Pls bhaia can we go!!
Viplav:: Emm.. Okay then lets go… We will go by day after tomorrow.. Is tat okay??
Shalu jumps with happiness and nods a big YESSS!!!
Viplav:: Dad, u both cmng by plane ✈ na!!
Thy nod.. Smiling ? looking at Shalu..
Viplav:: We will return by plane ✈ is that clear!!
Shalu:: ah,Bhaia return we can come by plane ✈ Papa Maa.. Dekho alas my desire is gng to be true.. And the credits goes to Viplav.. And clap ?
Kanak and shambu too clap?? Shalu goes and makes a list of items to be taken and so.. Viplav and Shambu talks abt the journey.. And routes.. Viplav goes to his room and makes an enquiry about the journey and makes calculations where all to stay and at wat time they have to leave & so.. On..
Next day they did bought everything to be taken for the journey packed the luggage ???? Shalu was not able to sleep ? as her desire was gng to be fulfilled in few hrs… Viplav was deadly sleeping ? as he want to gear up a long journey… Next day Shalu had her bath quickly… And Viplav too got ready..
Shalu is wearing a simple but quite good top and leggings’… While Viplav is wearing a shorts and a top as he has to drive a long journey… Thy take blessings ? from god and parents..
Shambu:: Drive with limited speed.. Avoid jung foods.. And u’ll reach by tomorrow too na..
Viplav and shalu nods..
Kanak:: Viplav Take care of Shalu.. Try to avoid stopping the car ?on road sides.. And try to stay in our hotels ? itself..
Viplav:: Ah.. Maa and will reach by tomorrow na.. U guyss will reach by Wednesday na…
Kanak:: No no.. Friday..
Viplav:: Vo keise aaj Monday.. Kal Tuesday.. Parso aap log bhi join karenge na.. Papa, while coming try to cme wth a driver on flight ✈so car ?can be given to the driver na!! And on return from Goa we can too join U guyss na!!
Kanak and Shambu nods.. Thy move forward and opens the door… A driver brings a red jaguar car ? from the porch..
A red jaguar car ? was waiting both Viplav & shalu to be seated ? viplav took his and shalu’s luggage and kept it inside the car.. And eatables in back… Shalu and Viplav entered the car ? pulles the seat ? belt.. Viplav pray ? to almighty and keep his feet ? on clutch and changed the gear.. Shalu bid a good bye ? and the car drove off.. Viplav switches on ? the music system and the song ? played
?Yu hi chala chala re
Yun hi chala chal raahi…
Kitni hasin hai yeh duniya?
SHALU IS SITTING WITH FACE FULL OF HAPPINESS… ? EXCITEMENT ? AND MUCH MORE AS HER LONG ?DESIRE IS BEING FULFILLED…
? Bhool saare jhumele,
Dekh phoolon ke mele
Badi rangeen hai yeh duniya
Rum dum dara rutaaru rum dara…
Rum dum dara rutaaru rum dara…?
VIPLAV WEARS HIS SUN GLASSES.. AND DRIVES THE CAR ?IN STYLE..
?Rum dum dara rutaaru rum dara…
Bhaiya
Yeh rasta hai keh raha ab mujhase
Milane ko hai koi kahin ab tujhse…?
A FADE SCENES ARE SHOWN.. A RAILWAY ? STATION… A GIRL ? (BACKSIDE).. RUNNING.. LOOKING BACK.. KNEE LENGTH ? FROCK.. BOOTS ? ? SHE IS WEARING..
?Yeh rasta hai keh raha ab mujhase
Milane ko hai koi kahin ab tujhse…?
(THAT GIRL ?)FACE NOT CLEAR.. GETTING INSIDE A TRAIN ?
?Dil ko hai kyon yeh betabi kis se mulakaat honi hai?
SHALU:: BHAIA,LYRICS SACH TOH NAHI HAI!!
VIPLAV:: KYA?
SHALU:: (SINGS ?)
Yeh rasta hai keh raha ab mujhase
Milane ko hai koi kahin ab tujhse…
VIPLAV:: LTS LOOK WHETHER THIS ROAD WLL LEAD ME TO THE DESTINATION OF LOVE ?
? Jiska kab se arman tha shayad wohi baat honi hai
Yun hi chala chal rahi…
Yun hi chala chal rahi…
Jeevan gadi hai samay pahiya
Aansoon ki nadiyan bhi hain,?
SHALU NODS HER HEAD ACCORDING TO THE MUSIC OF THE SONG
? kushiyon ki bagiyan bhi hain
Rasta sab tera take bhaiya?
SHALU SITS AND DANCES ? MATHLAB,SHE MAKES HAND MOVES.. AND ALL
?Yun hi chala chal raahi…
Yun hi chala chal raahi…?
CAR’S TIRE IS SHOWN.. IT’S MOVING FASTLY.. THN ROADS ARE SHOWN.. COCONUT TREES ARE DANCING AS WIND IS BLOWING.. PADDY FIELDS GIVES A GREENERY TO THE JOURNEY..
? Kitni hasin hai yeh duniya
Bhool saare jhumele,
Dekh phoolon ke mele
Badi rangeen hai yeh duniya?
WELCOME TO PANVEL A BOARD IS SHOWN.. They have completed 94 kms…
Shalu:: Bhaia yahan hamara hotel ? haina.. We can have our lunch ??? thr.. Stomach started to shout…
Viplav:: Ahh.. We reached Panvel.. Just 5km ahead.. Will reach within 6-7 min.. We have a hotel here.. U comb ur hair and all…
Shalu combs her hair and looks at the road..
Shalu:: Bhaia opp of a railway station is this hotel na.. If I’m not wrong??
Viplav:: Yeah.. U can nvr be wrong na moti.. Btwn have a little food else u will vomit..
Shalu nods.. Viplu{Viplav +Shalu) reaches the hotel.. Receptionist welcomes them and quickly arranges a bouquet ? as they are the owner’s children.. Thy goes inside the restaurant.. &looks throughout.. Only a table with 3 seats are left.. They moves near to that table and orders food.. And goes to washroom and wash thr hands ? and comes back to the seat ? After a few min a girl ? nearly of 24 yrs wearing knee length frock ? with boots ?? comes inside the restaurant
Panicking ? She looks for a chair ? all the people sitting in the restaurant turns to her.. Viplu too look at her.. Viplav gets attracted to her.. He feels some current passing inside through him… She looks through out and sees a chair ? left near Viplu.. She goes and sits in that chair ? and says sorry,? for sitting here.. She is soo nervous that she started to shiver.. Her face is dipped in sweat!! Viplav asks for a cup of water ?.. She takes it and drinks the water.. Goons enter inside and looks for Dhaani.. Dhaani starts to panic.. She beg to Viplav to help her.. All the people sitting there looks at Dhaani.. Dhaani’s eyes ? had tears ? by that time.. Viplav removes her tears lovingly and looks at Shalu.. Shalu gives a assertive nod.. Viplav pulls back his chair and gets up.. And looks at the goons.. Goons looks at him.. He walks forward… Thy go near Dhaani.. Dhaani looks at Viplav pleasingly.. Shalu have an angry face… Viplav goes to near by table… And… Thr Dhaani takes out her ATM ? card.. And passport and says to shalu crying? Ye mera license hai ki mein Dhaani hun.. Pls mujhe help karo.. Pls aapne bhaia se bolo mujhe bachane keliye.. Thr Viplav takes a pepper and salt bottles and throws that pepper and salt in to the eyes ? of goons.. Thy shouts and run ? away.. Dhaani thanks viplu.. Thy look at Dhaani.. Goons gaye.. Says Viplav.. She looks at him..
Viplav:: u can go now safely.. No worries ?
Dhaani :: Lekin pls could u too take me to the place u go.. Where aware I don’t care..
Shalu:: Wat who are you?? U need some cash or something else..
Viplav:: We are gng to a near by place here…
Dhaani:: Yeah,at least till thr u take me alng wth u..
There food ? comes.. Thy look at Dhaani.. Dhaani orders food.. And looks at them..
Dhaani:: This is my passport and license.. And I’ll meet my expenses don’t worry ? abt that.. This is my ATM ? card..
Viplav:: If u have this then y can’t u go alone.. No I can’t.. I’ll tell to u that later.. Bt can I come wth u.. U keep al my things.. Yeah.. Wait I’ve driving license too..
Viplav looks at Shalu..
Shalu:: Chalo,I’m okay wth having u wth me.. Bt can I hope u won’t trouble us..
Dhaani nods.. Viplav takes her license card and gets shocked and his jaws are dropped down..
Precap:: Viplu and Dhaani are sitting in car.. Dhaani says I knw u will b wondering why I’m been followed by goons na.. I’ll tell u… And Dhaani looks at Road through window of the car ?…
23 Comments
Hey Swetha di? It was such an interesting episode? Loved it.. When u asked about my experience of a long journey I already have 2 experiences? And one of them was of Goa only? U recreated those moments.. And like u even I m going to show a long journey trip.. So both of us will be showing it together? Okay ab bahut pakka liya, I m going.. Plz post the next part soon? Will be waiting for it?
U had a trip al ready to goa.. Thn could u join vidha as thy r a bit cnfussd abt road??
In btwn hw mny days u took to travel from ur place to goa??
U too going to start a ff wth a same cncpt.. Tats sound intrsting.. It’s a wndrful coincidence ?
Wl soon pst the nxt part…
Tc my sweet siso?
thankss lolu fr cmntng..
Hey sweetu..
This was so amazing! Nice concept.. I loved it and this reminded me of my pilgrimage..
Post the next part soon.
Loads of love,
Maria
Thankss yaar.. Wl soon post the nxt one?
Al d bst fr ur upcmng xams?
Hey Swetha! Sorry for not commenting on intro.. story is really unique like u said in title? and yes it reminded me the super long drive actually I traveled by road from Karachi to Hyderabad though it was tiring but still enjoyed a lot! I just love traveling with cousins so I’m surely gonna love it❤ it will be fun to imagine Viplav as a cool boy? and as a savior of dhaani.. I guess there is a strong mystery behind her so really excited?
Thankss maha di.. I was waiting to c ur cmnt.. I tried to msg u on tu bt was nt able to find u?
It’s ok ? fr nt cmntng on intro…?
Such a long drive.. Nvr expectd.. From nrth to south? or from pak to south india..
Hpe u had a book full of memories in tat trip.. It would had been an awe one na…
Cmng back to stry… Keep excited ? because excitement is anthr salt to this ff di?
Oh I wonder how u didn’t find me? Chalo koi nahe!! And I was talking about Hyderabad which is in Pakistan and one can travel by road from Karachi? seriously that was so wonderful trip?? oh yes I’ll be excited?
Oh.. In pak too thr is Hyderabad.. Srry ? I didn’t knw tat.. I thought u mntiond Hyderabad here in India di..??
Bt watevr the trip b it wld had been an aww one?
HAHA nice sister-brother bond man. SO they are basically cousins in this story right? Interesting. Kanakji is not the mother but still showers Viplav of a great mother love. Happy for Viplav! <3
Oh God! DO you know something? I have been into a long distance trip by car too, but it was literally tiring. But even I want to enjoy that kind of long distance journey by car which is basically a convertible, in a hot yet windy place, wearing sunglasses, listenign to music. This will never happen I know but still I wished I can. And that, with such a friends' gang with whome you can have the loudest masti.
Anyhow, let's come back to our story. So the family are going to Goa to celebrate the daughter's birthday. And they have basically a very very rich background. The number of hotels they have in their trip way LOL. They have their own jet plane xD
I loved the way you described Dhaani's features not revealing her face. First you feel like she was running to the train to catch it as she was late. But later, you understand she as actually trying to avoid the goons followin her. The way people were staring at her in the hotel. Seriously, even I would have been so embarrassed and crying all those eyes on me. And then Viplav immediately attracted to her. But he saved her by humanity. The cousins duo made it a trick to get the goons. Funny! And then, Dhaani abruptly asks them to pick her up towards their next stop. Shalini's reaction was quite realistic, and I like that. Like the way she hesitated at first because she was an unknown person, and that she was using them again and again.
Now excited to read where this trip will bring them to. Like Viplav said, "I wish I feel the lyrics (love ones) in real through this trip". He predicted his future. And I am sure, Dhaani will reach Goa with them, not going away in middle. Love in Goa, the city of parties. EXCITED!!
And you were right, I was completely wrong reading the promo. Now I got who is who.
Waiitng for next update darling.
Take care!
Love xoxoxo
Thankss Shruthy di ?
No no.. Viplav is thr on child.. As a bahana Viplav tells shalu he is nt thr son.. As shalu says If u r my bro u’ve to drive to Goa… So..
Yeah.. Bhai-behen jodi is superb jodi na.. No lve birds can destroy or create such a great jodi?
Yeah,di.. Such a long trip is tiring bt if u’ve food at correct time.. If the vehicle ? u travelling is spacious… It’s not much tiring though.. To some extend ?
And a trip with masti frnds won’t nvr be tiring as late night sleep.. Afternoon wakening up and thn splendid day it wld be..
Hpe ur dream come true one day…
Yep.. It’s some realistic that make my sweet readers involve themselves in the story na… See whtr thr trip will lead them to goa itself or some where else?
Yep.. Dhaani is nt a siso bt a strangr.. And may b this trip wl make relation btwn shalu,dhaani and viplav some thing else.. Wait and watch…
Love u too di?
Wl soon post the update..
In btwn di.. R u thr on twittr app??
Swethu….. Loved it…..???sissy bro bond is awesome….aur Viplu….. Awesome name ????????
Loved it…. And the song….. 🙂 one of my fav…. Journey song…. Superb choice ….keep rocking dear….
Aur those goons…. Shukriya unka who led Dhaani to Viplav…. Tumlogon ka kaam ab khatam hogaya…dafa hojao…????viplav and his hero giri…fantastic….loved it dear….sorry for commenting late…..
Made me nostalgic …..Goa toh Nahi gayee….but I have been to touristic places out of my town… Toh you made me remember those moments ???
Love you sweetie….keep going….. Aur Haan…..do read it http://www.tellyupdates.com/soulmates-ikrs-episode-5/
Thanks sujie di.. Yeah.. Ne too di.. It’s my too fav sng fr a jrny.. Hi-fi ✋
?? goons.. Lagtha hai pehli baar koi goons ko praise kar rahe hai..
It’s ok di.. Bas cmnt kiya na.. Ye hi kafi hai…
Tats cool u’ve been 2 mny tourists places..?
I’m a nostalgia author it seems??
Aankhe math dal viplu jdi ko??
Haan.. Srry fr nt reading urs.. Wl surly catch up ur ff?
Nice start Swetha! ? It’s always been fun to read Viplav-Shalu nok-jhok. ? Bohat zayada hi nahi rich jo gaey ye. ? Har city me hotel to PM k bhi nahi hoty haan protocol zaroor hota hai. ? Khair, achi baat hai. ?
The road trip has began with good fun, hope it continues.
Dhaani’s entry was portrayed well. And the sudden current Viplav had. ? So, Dhaani is going to accompany them. Means I guessed right, It was Dhaani only. ?
What’s with her license card. ? Is she some Police, secret agent or princess of any dynasty. ? But will wait to read what she is really is, or is she gonna lie to hide her real identity. ?
PS. I had travelled on roads.. ? but to the cities only.. ? Never gone for a long long long trip. Yet have travelled to many cities in one day, it was family picnic. And I really don’t like traveling much, so hectic and tiring, but ya, once you gave good company, then the path shall not end, I believe. And I wish the same, tho I never got such company. ?
PSS. A little correction. If KT was Viplav’s Chachi then Shalu was to be his cousin not niece. ? Khair, it was still funny, the way Viplav tried to husshh her. ?
Thankss areeb di fr yr supr cmnt.. Ahh.. Stry mein hi itni ameer kar sakh thi hun???
Yeah ur guess was correct.. Wait and watch again u gave a correct guessing or not
Di.. Evn I hate long drives.. Though I usd to go fr it.. Yeah though tiring it’s awesome..?
In btwn di.. Viplav smpy told that he is nt her son as a bahana fr nt driving such a long drive… HE IS REAL SON AND VIP HAVE BLOOD RELATION,?? with shalu..
Tats y at last shalu saud ye drama mera pass nahi chalega.. Kisi aur ke samne kar de..?
Hpe it’s clear nw di!!
Hello Swetha dear? & sorry for late commenting. Well, everyone seems to b quite a traveloholic here??, with me only left. Well, i haven’t travelled like this but i think that if the company is good & facilities r also there, then it might b fun. Coming to the episode, Wonderful start. And the Sweeeeet bond of Viplav, has been described also in a very sweet way. ??. And the fun they have on the way. Though i haven’t listened to the song but it fits the situation perfectly. Vips in sunglasses, ohhh, i cud imagine him in the killer look?. Dhaani ‘s entry & Vips’ instant attraction to her & the way he wipes her tears was????. So Dhaani is going to accompany them, so my silent guess of the promo that the girl at the back is Dhaani has proved to b right☺️. Seeing Dhaani ‘s license, Vips is shocked, so i guess that Dhaani also belongs to a rich & well known family. Just a guess. Let’ s see if this also comes to b true or not & now so many more silent guesses & questions. Oooooh, now i can’t control myself & my excitement, POST THE NXT SOON DEAR??. LOVE to U??. God bless u.
Thankss Anaya didi.. Yeah.. A good cmpany is thr thn trip can’t b described ?
Happy that though u haven’t lisyend to this sng u could undrstand and feel the lyrics…
Yep.. Ur guess was right.. Opps.. Right gusses math maro??
Hope this ff wl cmplete ur dream of gng to a long jrny or at lst u cld figure out hw a long jrny wld be…
Wth hope that u wl enjy this ff.. Through out..? Love u..
Wl pst the nxt prt soon..
Was waiting fr ur valuable cmnts?