Helloooooo myyy tu family. Remember me I m ur family part. I think bhool gye mujhe right.koi baat nhi I remember all my sissies..
Firstly I got w know that ALU and riyo bday came so belated happy bday 2 both my cutiesssss.
U guys did a good job such beautiful writingsssss well done my lovable girlssssss.
I was gone but now I m back and will be with uu allllllll..
Now my family I m back with a story.this is long one it can be short story or will be an ff pls tell what it should be.OK I may first give u character sketch of characters and story line of my new story but pls tell me to make it five shot or ff.plsss.
Sooo here I begin..
Storyline:basically its a story of couple who will love each other after marriage love after marriage.the couple no doubt r suman and shravan malhotra.actually they have married to each other for their respective familiesss.how will love will attract this couple???
Character sketch:
Suman:independent girl married to shravan now suman malhotra .she is a lovable girl and can easily make contacts and nice relations with others.she is fan of music and rock concerts.
The ques is how will she impress her husband????
Shravan:loves his family.can not mix easily with every1 but once having close relations r very lucky coz of his sweetness.married to suman.not much attracted towards
music.
The ques is how will he make her wife happy??
Others characters r shristy shravo sister.Samar shravo brother niramala and ram shravo parents priya and raj sumo father.
Promo:
A newly bride is in the room.she is removing her jewelry. The girl is sumo.Shravan groom enters room there is silence both r quiet.sumo wakes from chair and broke silence.
Sumo:ahhmmm er.so….u r shravan.
Shravo:hmm yess.OK I think u should sleep bed and I may sleep on couch.
Sumo:r u suree I can sleep on couch.
Shravo don’t reply and go and sleep on couch.
Sumo sees this.she was sad.
How will these two souls be one??
To know watch sorry read first epi of “tera mera pyaar,ishq ka gumar”
So how was this???
Do I continue???
Pls tell via ur comments.
Love uuu.
29 Comments
it was too good, girl
do continue….
five shots will be better…
loved the plot
yb
Mirruu thnkuu for commenting OK soo five shots okkkk they will be long OK.
Thnksssssss.
Love uuu
Yes obviiusly u should countinueee
Jyoti thanks dear.
Love u.
Take care
hey preeti. interesting promo. and awesome story line. please continue…. I would love to read this.
lots of love & best of luck for this one.
post soon..
Remmu thnkuu yaar I will continue thanks for good wishes.
Lots of luv.
Will post soonn
Hey di!
It was sooooo wonderful!
Loved it!
Do continue!
Love ya!?????
Anshu dearie kaisi hai thnksss I will continue.
Lots of luv
Hey preeti, it was Damn cute. The promo is interesting. You should continue.
All the best……
Lots of love….
Hey Chris thnkuu dear.will continue thanks for well wishes.
Lots of luv
Jordar hai…………………………..continue kar i want to read moreeeeeeeeeeeeee………its a diff plot…… Continueeeeeeeeeee
Ishuu thanku I read ur new ts of best of luck Nikki story wala tooo good dear.
Gud luck for that.
Thnkss.
Will continue
Love uuuuu
Hey pretty nyc start looking forward for further epis 🙂
Sun shine thnksdd for commenting.
Hope u will ilke my work.
Love u
Take care
Wow pri interesting storyline yaar
Loved it
Wow sumo loves music ???
Thanks Jo so u liked as dil hai mushkil good movie haana.
Thnksssss.
Love u
Yayyy you’re back with an amazing ff (it should definitely be a ff) ?
I missed you soooooo much. I was scrolling down to open episodes I haven’t read yet and saw this. Reading the first two to three lines which appeared there, I was like I guess it’s our Pretty preeti. So happy that you’re back now.
Introduction and the promo are very interesting. Waiting anxiously for the episodes now. Post ASAP!!!!
Love you loads. Take care ?
P.S sorry for being late. I am very busy nowadays so not able to open this site regularly. But surely gonna comment on your episodes (pardon me if I’ll be late then too)
Oh zainu apiii thanks for so sweet comment OK u said so ff I m happy that u read it taking out ur precious time I m really glad to have a sister like u.its sure a ff no doubt .
Thnkuuuuuu for ur love.
Hey Preeti..happy to c u back. .i was missing your back to back os..n finally u came with a new story..i will suggest you to go with five shots..ino problem if it will b lengthy.. post only once in week That’s it ..tmhe b problem nhi hogi..according to me shots will b best..
N thank u soooo muchhhh..for b’day wish.
Love u sweetie
Take care
Ohh ALU thnku for ur wonderful suggestion I think it can be 7-10epis that’s it don’t worry I will send u links also thnku for commenting.
Love u
Welcome.
Waiting 4 next update.. (love blossoming)
Hey moni thanks dear for commenting lucky u liked it will post asap .
Love uuu.
Kee p commenting.
Thnksdsdssd.
Awwwww cuppie I’m soooooooooooooooooooo sorry for a laaaaaaaatttttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeee comment
But finally I’m managing to comment so let’s go.
As always nth to say. too sugary with soft creamy icing cupcakes. Perfect to ruin my healthy diet.
Love u sweetheart
obv u’ll continue
nd if I don’t comment for a while just waitttt- I’ll try my best to comment asap
loads of loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
tc
Aru ur comments r sooo sweetttt always I will be fat now surely .
Okay thnkuu no prob u read it its enough for mee my sweetoo.
I m happy u get time to read it sooo happyyyy.
When u get time read my epis its enough for me.
Love uuuu .
Happy less cupcakes..cuppy
Pls continue its seriously awesome eager to read ahead… Post soon
Hey tiara thanks dearie.I will post soon surely.keep commenting and reading..
Love uuu.
Thnksss
Nice one sweety..!?
Thnku weirdy .
Love u.
Tc
Prettooooooo ohhhhj i miss u and i,m glad u r back with a bang i,m the story looks amazing i,m soooo excited that how u r going to continue it soooo post it soonnnnn
ps how r u long time that we talked how is going life and studies