Hi this is VHM , i have come up with another OS may be two or three parts..please forgive me for the spelling mistakes and grammatical errors..Please pour in your comments ..
It’s based on current track of Ishqbaaz:
Anika tries to show the married pic of Tia (Daksh is not shown in the pic , only tia with vermillion and varmala is shown) to Shivay but Tia turns the cards at the nick of time and Anika again gets scolded by Shivay.
Anika remembers series of incidents occurred and comes to the conclusion that of T&D D stands for Daksh and she has to somehow expose Tia and Daksh before Shivaay gets married.
She makes a plan and readily starts implementing it.
Anika goes to Daksh and
Daksh: Hey Anika ! kya kar rahi ho? Yaha kaise?
Anika: Kuch nai bas kaam kar rahi thi aur apne dost se milne aa gayi thodi der.kyun mein aapse milne nahi aa sakthi kya?
Daksh: Tum kabhi bhi aa sakti ho? Aur mujhe aise mat dekho kahi tumhe bhi pyar na ho jaaye?
Anika: Tumhe “Bhi”? matlab aur kisko ho gaya hain aapse pyaar?
Daksh: Tum detective serials jyada dekthi ho kya? Sab kuch jasoos type kyun samjhthi ho?
Anika: apne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya?
Daksh: mera matlab hain ki mein tumhe aise dekh ke hi pyaar kar gaya isliye tum bhi aise dekh ke mujhse pyaar na kar bhetho.
Anika: Ohh..mere maamle mein itna asaan nahi..chalthi hoon
Daksh drags her towards him and Anika feels uncomfortable…but she didn’t resist..it surprises Daksh further more…at the same time Tia comes there and gets shocked..
All the three see each other and gets shocked.
Tia: Anika, tum yaha kya kar rahi ho?
Anika: mein apne dost se milne aayi hoon..kyun aapko koi problem hain?
Tia: mujhe? Mujhe kya problem hogi ..
Tia stares angrily at Daksh and walks away…Daksh gets confused by Anika’s behavior and thinks of what to do next…
Anika: Daksh mein ab chalthi hoon ..ham fir milenge
Daksh: Kab aur kaha?
Anika: sham ko mere ghar ke paas…
Shivaay who was just passing by listens to Anika’s last sentence and gets jealous..
Anika comes out of Daksh’s room and sees Shivaay standing there and looking at her
Anika: Billu ji aap yaha? Koi kaam tha kya mujhse?
Shivaay: Ye mera ghar hain..mein kahi bhi aa jaa sakta hoon..tum mujhe aise sawaal nahi kar sakthi..aur rahi baat kaam ki..aaj kal tumhe kaam par itna concentration kaha hain..apni life set karne mein jo lagi ho..
Anika: aap saaf saaf kyun nahi kehthe jo kehna hain?
Shivaay: kya..kya saaf saaf kahoon?
Shivaay leaves and Anika thinks
Anika’s POV: kaise bataoon Billu ji, mein jo bhi kar rahi hoon aapkeliye hi kar rahi hoon…mere paas aur koi rasta nahi hain aapko iss daldal se bachne keliye..mein aap keliye kuch bhi kisi bhi hadh tak jaakar kar sakti hoon..kash aap ek baar mujh par yakeen karthe…
Shivaay briskly walks in his room and thinks
Shivaay POV: Anika mere saath aise kaise kar sakthi hain..woh Daksh ke saath itni kareeb kaise jaane keliye tayar ho sakthi hain..meri Anika aise nahi kar sakthi..mein Anika ko kisi aur ka hote hue kaise dekh paoonga..Shivaay sambhal jaoo..ye tum kya soch rahe ho..concentrate in your marriage..you are going to get married to Tia not Anika..par Anika se door kaise reh paoonga..ye mere saath kya ho raha hain?
Anika does all the work for the day and was about to leave when Daksh enters…
Shivaay was standing behind a wall and listening and Tia was standing behind another wall and listening..none was able to see other ..
Daksh : chale Anika?
Anika: kaha?
Daksh: tumhara ghar aur kaha?
Anika: par aap mere saath kyun?
Daksh: aree tumne hi tho kaha tha ki ham sham ko milenge?
Anika looks here and there and then notices Shivaay and Tia standing behind the walls and suddenly changes her confusing expressions into happy ones and says:
Anika: aree haan mein tho bhool gayi..accha huan aapne yaad dila diya..chale ham..aur bech mein na ice cream parlour bhi chalthe hain aur golgappe bhi khathe hain..sach mein yaha ke golgappe ek dam mast chatpate hothe hain..aap baar baar khane keliye chaloge …
Daksh: theek hain ..jaise aap kahe Anika ji..
Anika: theek hain fir der kis baat ki..chaliye
Anika and Daksh moves towards the door when shivaay and tia come out as if they were just coming from somewhere and says
Tia: meri reiki keh rahi hain ki tum dono date par jaa rahe ho? Am I right?
Daksh: aree aap tho lajawaab hain ham date pe hi jaane wale hain
Shivaay: ohh is it? Tia kyun na ham bhi aaj inke saath chale akhir Daksh mera sabse accha dost hain aur Anika…
Daksh: aur Anika …kya?
Shivaay: anika who ..woh meri sabse acchi employee isliye chalo ham bhi saath chalthe hain…
Tia: good idea Shivaay baby .. I hope tum dono ko ham dono ke aane se koi problem nahi hogi..
Anika: waise pehle bolthe tho kuch problem nahi hoti par ab..
Shivaay: par ab ? ab kya baat hain? Koi problem hain tho ham nahi aayenge..
Tia: aisi bhi kya problem hogi Shivaay baby..chalo na
Shivaay : ok
The four leave and go to a big icecream parlour…. Daksh asks Anika to order her favourite icecream…
Anika: Aree kya Daksh pehle mujhse nahi Tia se poochiye..
Daksh: Tia ka tho mein jaanta hoon blueberry sundae is her favourite ..haina Tia?
Shivaay looks shocked and Tia stares a bit scared at Daksh…Daksh then understands the mistake he did and tries to manage and says
Daksh: Who mein last time play dekhne gaya tha na tab Tia ne yehi icecream mangvaya tha..isliye mujhe pata chala…
Anika: Ohh ..mujhe laga aap aise fatak se bole ki aapko Tia ke bare mein sab kuch ek dum pehle se pata hain..haina Billu ji?
Shivaay: ha ..i mean chodo…lets place order..
Shivaay gets a call and he walks away to attend the call..Anika excuses to go to washroom…
Anika presses the record button in her mobile before leaving for washroom and casually leaves from there…
Tia and Daksh were alone and Tia says
Tia: tumhe badi padi hain Anika ko date par le jaane ki..ek baat yaad rakhna ye sab sirf natak hain Anika ko oberoi mansion se door rakhne ka..warna Anika ke rehthe Shivaay ko bewakoof banana itna asaan nahi hoga…aur abhi abhi jo khandh kiya uska tho mein kya boloon..kya padi thi meri favourite icecream boln ki..pakde jaate tho…
Daksh: Chill Tia..aaj mere mooh se nikal gaya agey se dhyan rakhoonga..kya karoon meri pyaari biwi ko kisi aur ke haathon kaise saump doon ..Tia iss khel ko jitni jaldi ho sake utni jaldi hame khatham karna hoga..mujhe Anika ka plan kuch samajh nahi aa raha..
Tia: don’t worry baby..Anika ko tho mein aise sabak sikhaoongi ki who palat ke Shivaay ke saamne aane ki koshish bhi nahi karegi…waise tumne acche se use daraya ..woh scary doll wala khel khel ke…ab dekhna mein aur kya chaal chalthi hoon…
Daksh: accha jo bhi karenge dhyan se bina galthi ke karenge..agey ki batein ham kal sham ko wahi wale massage parlour mein milke karenge…
Anika and Shivaay come there and ask
Anika & Shivaay: tho kya batein ho rahi thi ?
Daksh & Tia: kuch nahi bas idhar udhar ki batein…
All three chit chat and leave …
Shivaay offers Anika to drop till her home while Anika plainly refuses and asks Daksh to drop her..Tia stares angrily at Anika but was helpless…
Daksh: Anika, chale ham fir..
Anika: haan chalo Daksh.. bye Tia, Bye Billu ji
She leaves…Shivaay eyes becomes red with anger but for the first time composes himself…
Shivaay reaches Oberoi mansion and sleeps and dreams of Anika being very close to Daksh..he wakes up suddenly and shouts
Shivaay: No, this can’t happen. Anika can never go to Daksh.she is and will always be mine..
Shivaay POV: why am I not able to digest a simple fact that I’m going to marry Tia ..i have to come out of all these ..I must ignore Anika..no it’s not possible ..she is a part of my life..no she is my life.. he throws the phone in anger..
He takes his car keys and drives straight towards Anika’s house..knocks the door..Anika opens the door and says
Anika: Billu ji aap yaha iss waqt?
Shivaay drags her out of her house and pushes her in his car closes the door and drives her towards a lonely area stops the car , gets down and pulls Anika out…
Shivaay: tum mere saath aise kaise kar sakthi ho?
Anika: maine kya kiya?
Shivaay: Anjaan banne ki koshish mat karo, mujhe pata hain ki tumhe sab kuch samajh mein aa raha hain…par tum maanthi nahi ho..
Anika was about to say something when Shivaay stops her and says
Shivaay: mujhe laga tum apni self respect , attitude aur honesty sab se upar rakhti ho par mein galat tha..tum sirf paison ke peeche bhaagthi ho? Kal mein aaj daksh kal koi aur..kitni giri huin ho tum..tumse jyada giri huin ladki maine aaj tak nahi dekhi aur na mein kabhi dekhna chahoonga..
Every word of his was hurting Anika so much that she was shivering with tears rolling down her eyes as a valley of water flowing down a hill top…she was not able to bear the pain and slowly she walked away into darkness while Shivaay was talking to her turning other side…she disappeared into darkness and with great difficulty reached her house with broken heart..
Her inner sense spoke
Anika POV: kyun kar rahi ho Anika ye sab..kis keliye ..woh insaan jo tumpe bharosa nahi karta..ya uskeliye jisko tere baare mein kuch accha kehne keliye raha hi nahi….
Anika then says ek baar meine ye jo shuru kiya khatham kar doon fir mein Billu ji ke zindagi se hamesha keliye chali jaoongi…wapas mud ke kabhi nahi aoongi..aaj unhone hadh kar diya…mujhe nicha bolne keliye unko thodi bhi hichkichahat nahi huin…mujhe unse koi umeed nahi hain..par maine jo shuru kiya who anzaam tak pahunchane ke baad hi chali jaoongi..
She wipes her tears and tried to sleep
On the other hand Shivaay turns to see Anika and finds her no where…he takes his car keys and sights Anika leaving towards her house and drives back to Oberoi mansion..he reaches his room but felt guilty for what he did..he didn’t understand what to do further..he couldn’t sleep and did not want to wake up…
The next day morning:
Anika remembers she had recorded the conversation of Tia and Daksh and plays it and listens it via headphones..she understands that she was right and calls up Om and Rudy to immediately come to her house without letting Daksh and Shivaay knowing, but later realizes Daksh might have kept an eye on her house ..she calls Om again and asks them to come to temple as she has organized Pooja for Shivaay and Tia as per Dadi’s order and also for her friend Daksh..
Daksh who was watching her was initially skeptical about Anika calling Rudra and Om but later listening about temple stuff relaxed..
Anika then sends an SMS to Om and Rudra with the recording clip and asks them to come as quickly as possible as she needs their help
Om and Rudra listens to the audio clip were shocked and rushes to the temple where Anika was already waiting for them..
What will happen next ..how will Anika expose Daksh and Tia ..will Shivika unite keep reading…
35 Comments
Awesome buddy. Go for it… very excited for d next epi….
Thank you .. just uploaded second part waiting for it to get posted …
superrrr……u r rocking…….. but plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz with english translation…few people do not know hindi including me and many others….
hi Lisaa.. i have already readied the rest of my OS.. if possible i will try to translate it in English…but I promise you my next OS will have both versions as i usually do it…
Wow…loved it…❤
thank you
Awesome episode. @VHM pls post soon. Khargosh jab skate mein hota hai na, uss speed mein update karna. Isse pata chal hi gya hoga, how much I love ur ff. Am.A.Zing.
Thank you…maine poora os pehle hi ready rakha tha.. bas ek part post karke kaam mein lag gayi..abhi dekha aapka comment..second part abhi upload kiya hain review keliye..hope jaldi post ho jaaye…
Wow……amazing…..go for it and post the nxt one soon……..
thank you
Please continue writing..
sure ..thank you
Its awsome…..please update next part asap
thank you..uploaded waiting for it to get posted
Its so o good post next asap
thank you
thank you …done posting waiting for it to appear on portal
Awesome,,,,,,,
thank you
its suuuuuuuppppprrrrr yaar…….really loved it…..and update it fastlyyyyyy
thank uuuuuuuuuuuuu
great man..!!!! it was awesome can`t wait for next one….
thank you … can’t wait to read the readers comments for my next part..fingers crossed
Wow it is soo good and realistic
I loved this track
And ha when shivaay scolds anybody it will really hurt them to the core especially when it comes to his panika
And please post the next epi ASAP
thank you … i was in vacation ..just read your episodes ..was about to ping you a message
Wow nice Dr shiviya jealous so nice ..plz write little bit English Dr my request
thank you part 3 has english version too
Nice
thank you
Amazing jealousy track vhm
Can’t wait for next part
Update soon
thank you
Loving it VHM… I loved your prev Os aa well
Wish this one was for real
Keep updating
thank you.. i wish the story picks speed
Nice Vhm good content ??
thank you