“Only those who dare to fail greatly can ever achieve greatly. ”
– Robert F. Kennedy
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Episode 6
Sanskar went to mm…. Seeing him coming inside laksh got angry….
“Sanskar with what rights u entered this house??? ”
“Laksh i didnt come here to fight with you…. I came as mom called me…. ”
“Ya ya now u need us na…. Otherwise how u will live??? So to get money u came here right??? ”
“Laksh u r talking without knowing anything….. First think before u speak…. Ok”
“I know everything Sanskar….. I m not any small child…. “sanskar laughed and moved from there…. Seeing him laughing laksh got more angry….. He hold his hand and dragged him…. But sanskar released his hands and went inside…. Laksh came and raised his hand to beat him…. But Sanskar stopped him…. At that time dp came there…. Seeing this he is shocked….
“Laksh what r u doing??? ”
“Papa he came inside…. I asked him to go out…. But he is denying…. ”
“Laksh i only asked him to come…. Do u need any clarification for that??? And remember he is ur brother…. “hearing dp sound all came…. Sujatha saw sanskar and went to him…. Sanskar took blessings from her…. Then he took blessings from dp, ram and ap…. Then he hugged adrash and Uttara……
“Papa if he is my brother he wouldn’t have took revenge from me and stopped my marriage….. ”
“Laksh r u saying this??? Ok let it be even after knowing that i stopped ur marriage y did u marry ragini??? ”
“Bcoz swara betrayed me…. She ran away from the marriage….. ”
“Laksh whether there is any sense in what u r talking??? U itself told that i stopped ur marriage…. Then u r saying swara ran away from the marriage…. Its soo childish laksh…. “saying this sanskar laughed….
“Sanskar its u and swara both did the drama…. So that only she had doubt that u r not mad…. ”
“Ya ragini said right….. I didnt think like this…. So u guys both did the drama right??? ”
“Waw waw u believe ragini but u wont believe swara who u loved right??? This is not love mr.laksh maheswari….. First u know the meaning of love??? ”
“Sanskar stop it…. U r talking soo much….. I know both ragini and swara….. Ragini is a sweet girl not like swara….. To save the respect of both families she married me…. But that swara??? She ran away from the marriage…. ”
“Laksh its waste to talk to u….. One day truth will come out…. That time u will know swara is not wrong….. But remember one day u will regret and ask forgiveness from swara but that time swara wont accept you…. ”
“Thats in ur dream sanskar….. Yes i will regret not for doubting her its for loving her….. ”
“U wont change….. That day is not so long…. After that i will talk to u…. I came here to spend some time with my mom…. Dont waste it…. ”
“Haan haan u need money na… Ask straightly….. But here u wont get anything…. ”
“God…. Pls laksh i dont want to fight…. So pls shut ur mouth…. ”
“Sanskar…. ”
“Will u both stop it??? Laksh dont forget sanskar is ur brother…. ”
“Papa after he did this much u r forgiving him??? ”
“So what??? U too did mistake…. I forgived…. Then y not sanskar??? ”
“Papa but he came to take revenge from us…. ”
“Laksh i accept sanskar came here to take revenge but think whether he harmed anyone of us??? He maligned swara character only…. Infact she has to be angry on her…. Not u…. ”
“Laksh sujatha is saying right…. He didn’t harm anyone of us…. Even if he did also there is no any wrong…. Bcoz its my mistake that i didn’t accept his and kavitha marriage…. ”
“Bade papa its ok… Leave that…. Everything is finished…. Past is past….. Lets just think about present…. ”
“Ya sanskar…. Laksh stop everything here….. And sankar ur mom made ur favourite food…. So come we will eat…. “saying this all went to dinning table…. Laksh and ragini is irritated…. But without any option they went…..
Sujatha served all the food to sanskar….. He is teary eyed but didn’t show anything….. Then ragini came to serve the food to dp but he stopped her and asked parineeta to serve…. Ragini is shocked…. Even ram and uttara also refused to eat from her hands…. She kept the dish and went to her room cryingly…. Laksh was not at all in steady state…. He is just thinking about swara’s behaviour and slap…. So he didnt notice ragini going….. Then after dinner all stood from the place…. Ragini came down with bag….
“Ma u told me not to go…. But papaji, chachaji, chachi and uttara didn’t accept me…. I cant ma…. Swara did all the wrong but god is punishing me…. I wont stay here ma…. I am sorry pls for some days i will be in my papa house ma… Pls…. ”
“Ragini i can understand but its not the solution…. U have to gain it by ur affection…. ”
“Ma pls just for some days ma…. ”
“Ok its already night…. Dont go alone laksh drop her in badi…. But Ragini come back soon…. ”
“Ok ma”both raglak said and went…..
Sanskar went to dp room…. He was sitting there in the bed…. Seeing him dp asked him to come inside….
“Bade papa i know i did wrong…. Asking forgiveness will not make everything correct….. But still i m asking u forgiveness…. I m sorry bade papa…. ”
“Sanskar then even i have to ask sorry from u…. If at all like swara i accepted kavitha now we all would have been happy…. ”
“Bade papa past is past…. Leave it….. And i want to say u one thing….. ”
“Ya Sanskar tell me….. ”
“Bade papa vo vo i m only sm….. ”
“What???? ”
“I am sorry bade papa….. I know u might be angry on me hearing that i am sm… I want to destry u but now i realised my mistake bade papa…. ”
“No sanskar….. I m proud of u that u have reached to such heights in such an young age…. ”
“Bade papa u r not angry on me??? ”
“No Sanskar….. I always adore you…. Even now i m only proud of u beta….. And haan now no need to worry….. U stay here itself…. ”
“No bade papa till laksh’s anger go i will stay outside…. Infact i want to prove swara’s innocence….. Then i will come here bade papa…. ”
“Ok beta…. No pblm…. Anyhow u should come soon…. ”
“Sure bade papa…. “saying this sanskar went…. Dp got emotional…. His anger on ragini increased…..
Then sanskar bid bye to everyone and left from there…. He was very happy…. He stopped his car near a lake…. (guys lake is just an imaginary)….. He went there…. There he saw a well known figure…. He went near to see who is that….
“Swara…. “hearing her name she turned….. Seeing him she is shocked…. He went and sat near her….
“Sanskar u here??? ”
“Swara this is my fav place…. I always come here whenever i am happy or sad…. ”
“Really??? Even i come here whenever i am sad or happy….. ”
“Swara i know now u r sad right??? I m really sorry swara…. ”
“Sanskar pls leave that…. Even i m feeling sad ya…. But not bcoz laksh married ragini…. Its bcoz Gadodia family….. What wrong we did to them that they are torturing us a lot….. If mr.shekar cant speak against his mother y did he loved my ma??? He is such a spineless man…. I thought he will take a stand atleast now….. But still he is doubting us….. Its so disgusting….. Now i made ma married to that man….. I do no what to do….. ”
“Swara dont worry…. U thought of ur ma’s happiness….. But everything went wrong…. Its not ur mistake…. ”
“Sanskar i have seen ma hiding her pain alone…. She haven’t shared it to me or not even with dida…. I thought to lessen her pain…. But now i increased her pain….. ”
“Swara no dont think like that….. If ur ma knows this she will be sad….. Now just think to make her happy….. Forget all the things…. Start a new one….. Make ur ma happy…. Fulfill all her wishes…. She will be very proud…. ”
“Thank you soo much sanskar…. Oh shit i forget to ask u…. Y u came here??? ”
“Actually i went to home…. (told everything what happened)…. Even bade papa accepted me…. I m soo happy swara….. This is all bcoz of u….. Thank you sooo much swara…. I did wrong in ur life but u gave my family back to me…. Thank you soo much swara….. And i am sorry too…. ”
“Uff sanskar stop asking sorry…. If u ask sorry again i will beat you…. ”
“Swara dont forget i am ur boss…. If u did anything like that then u cant work in my company…. ”
“Ha ha Sanskar i dont care…. I will get job in some other company…. ”
“U r so mean swara…. U didn’t say that u wont beat me but u will go to other company haan??? ”
“Haan haan…. “then both laughed….. After having some talk sanskar dropped swara home….. At that time laksh came out from badi…. Seeing both swasan together laksh is jealous and angry…. He holded his fist and went from there…. Ragini witnessed everything…. She saw how laksh got jealous….. She is very upset…. And ran to her room cryingly….
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58 Comments
Awesome ?
Thanks dr….. ?
Marvelous chappy di….Aww, my swasan??…Idiot laksh,huuu??… Loved it…keep it up di… Waiting for nxt..
Take care
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Thank you soo much uma….. Will update soon dr…. Take care….. ?
Awesome…it shud b happen in real anyways its superb…waiting fr next update soon
Thanks dr….. Ya even i want to happen this in real….. Will update soon dr….. ?
superb
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Woww amazing
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Finally u posted shan I am waiting from a long time..really loved it so much
Yes dr i posted….. Thank you soo much dr…. ?
Awesome…..loved it??
Thank you so much di…. ?
nice..
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I so wantef something lyk dis to happen in serial… m loving it shan
Its amazing d way u r showing evry chrctr
Thanks Arshanya….. ?
awesome.. waiting for next part… update soon.. update parts regularly and soon dont take so much gap
Thanks dr…. Ya sure will update soon…. Sorry i was irregular due to exams…. Will be regular….. ?
marvelous di . if u have known malayalam then i would have said “ADIPOLI”
Ha ha but i know only tamil dr….. ?Thanks dr….. ?
Awesome
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amazing but i want to read more
Ha ha thank you dr….. Will update next part soon….. ?
i’ll give you negative comment.. it’s tooo shoooort.. it’s too shoort, huh!
Huh mica this is not fair…. ?If u give me negative comment then even i will give short update only….. ?
ups..nooooooooooo
Ha ha dont worry…. I will give u long chaps…. ?
awesome dear,can u post next post today ???????????????????plz
Sorry dr i cant post next part today itself….. But will surely post the next soon dr….. thanks for commenting….. ?
Nice.? …….waiting for next part. …..post soon…….?
Thank you soo much dr…. Will post next soon….. ?
Awesome sis…..
Swasan scn superb …….
Thank you dr….. ?
Fabulous chapie machan.. superb..
Nanri machi…. ?
Loved it..
Swara is right abt Shekhar..thank God he is not coward in swaragini atleast now
Thanks dr….. Do no if ragini gets any pblm then shekar will change to selfish…. He is just father of ragini…. Not father of swara….. ?
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hahaha, yeah, rite, when Laksh dumped Ragini in their wedding, he made Swara suffered along with Ragini..how could he! even though he himself said that he has no problem with sanskar and trust Sanskar…so, why he demanded Swasan to separated….really he just father of Ragini…:D
Yes dr…. Shekar always think only about ragini….
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Nice dear… Continue soon
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Awsm part…
I also cmnted on fb but I forget to mention one thing…
In your ff best thing is you’re showing swara’s POV about shekhar.
In show she easily forgive him.
Swasan moments was also good specially cute fights
Thanks titi…. Ya i saw titi…. Yes i cant forgive shekar… He is going to suffer a lot in my ff…. ?
superb
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Nice…..
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Wow sema jii. DP is right Laksh married Ragini and baming Swaraaaa 🙂 loved it
Ya akka….. Thanks….. ?
Beautiful
Toooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood. Semma chapter shan…kudos to u…do ontheing send this script to the SR creaters..let them see this once then only they will think they also have brain and would have thought like this…