Hey guys…this is anu here…I am really happy with all your response….thank you very much..and I could not update because I had a project in my school and I was the head….ugh…so I had to run here and there for it…sorry guys….
And hey you might not know that all those who write in IB page are awesome…sorry that I don’t comment cause I don’t have time at all…but I love all the current tracks by u all…and I have one request…sat named author is there na…pls di don’t stop your story…I really love it to core…pls di don’t stop…..
And guys I have no time…since Christmas is coming I have to practise for Christmas Choir in church after some time so guys pls spare me if I am writing too short….
So here is part 2
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The camera is focused on arpita…she is a classical Indian dancer and has the highest merit in classical dancing…she knows all the classical forms of Indian dancing and her name is famous all round the world…she is a active dancer……
She is shown to practise vigorously but not at all feeling tired….her moves are so perfect that even the wind stops to admire it….her face looks so calm that the moonlight falling it enhances her beauty…..moon would even get shy by seeing her beauty…
She is practising for her upcomming dance show….
Then she sat down and is shown talking to moon….
Chand , tujhe to pata he mere pyar ke baaare me..par meri ek galti ji vahjase sab khatam…
Then she cries holding a photo in her hand..
Again talking to moon
Pandra(15) saal hogaye aur mujhe abhi tak uske saamne jaane nahi ja paarahi hu….me kya karu…tu hi bata….
Aise ek poornima ke din he mujhe apne pyar ka ehsas hua…tune hi ehsas dilaya….
Aur aisehi ek poornima me din Maine use samja nahi………..
Ab tu hi meri rah he mere pyar ki…………chandni jab hi mere chehre par past I he tab bohot dard hora he….mere pyar KO mijhe vaapas dega na tu………
Then she sits crying by looking at the photo…..
The camera now focused on a similar scene
..moon…moonlight….but three people are there….
This scene takes place in India…..
These people are shivaay,omkara and rudra….
Omkara -mat roiye…di had left you na….
Rudra-kuan…mujhe batao…
Shivaay-me batata hu…
This all was in college…..15 years before……..
I too had a love story
It is like this
I was the leader of one of the group there( I actually mean a kind of college party group)
So it was the ABC group…..
There was one great dancer in our college…I secretly loved her…her photo used to come in all newspapers daily….and I would collect it and paste it along a book gull of her memories…
We both didn’t know each other also……
Once as a prank all my friends decided a plan…
She was once dancing for college fest and in her CD was replaced by me….
The starting of the song was same but then at the end one item number of that time played….she stood there humiliated and we all laughed….she went away crying….
It became a huge issue….but no one was caught….
Then I told there were different parties in the college…so the ABC party and XYZ party had aconflict…we all sstarted to fight….eventually police came and started to beat all of us…eventhe innocent students….
She was also beaten…..
I saw this and went to save her….
I took her to lab where no one was there…..
I did her first aid and then she saw my wallet…in that her photo was there….
She then understood iI loved her….
She didn’t utter a word…
Because we were unlucky the staff had shut the lab without looking in…
We both were in a compromising state at that time ago they didn’t see us..that was our luck..
For the whole night we were together…
It was a full moon day….
Moonlight fell on us and I finally confessed….she also accepted…..
She didn’t know me…my family and that to I was an oberoi…nothing mattered more than my love to her…..
We used to often meet after that incident …there were rumors about us…but we didn’t mind…..
And you know daksh bhaiya…..
We were best friends…..he was also our college mate…….
Rudra-bhaiya…then what happened….
Omkara-leave it…for tomorrow we should keep something…so let’s go and sleep….
Shivaay(wiping his tears)-yes Rudy go and sleep…
Omru-goodnight…
Shivaay-goodnight….
Then omru went….
Shivaay then took a bell like thing(in the leg accessory of classical dancers,several bells tied together on our ankle …..)
It was one of that piece…..
He looked at that and cried….
Precap-rest of shivaay’s story…..
So how is it guys…from this you might have understood the story a bit…..pls guys I need all your support…hope you all like my story…pls guys…..pls support me and share your views by comments…..and till then
Signing off..
Your friend and loving sister
Anu Johnson
12 Comments
Good one dear its from a Telugu movie na concept? But I like it.
Hey nansshivika..thank you for your compliment..I value it..thank you…but sorry the concept is not from a Telugu movie..I don’t know Telugu..plus I am a malayalee…Yups this is a concept from a Malayalam movie….this story is inspired from it……and pls do comment in my upcoming episode….thankyou…
Maybe it was remade….its there in tamil..na
me 2 mallu.hifi
nice dear but plz make it long
Thank you Luna…I will try to make my episodes longer..I am studying in 8th and having no time…so crazy…I will try to make it longer…thank you and keep commenting
Heiii anuuuu its really nice…….plzz continueee…..iam waiting to for the next episode.
Thank you razna…whenever I will get time I will upload…thankyofor your comment….keep reading and commenting my story..thank you!
Is this a part of a Malayalam movie called chocolate ?
Anyway good piece of art ??????
No not chocolate… but thank you for your comment
Oh man classmates…..:)
Anyway nice try!!
Ya classmates..and thanks for commenting…keep reading and commenting for my story…. ..
Oops !! Got confused on pritviraj movies…. ??