Hi guys… Thanks for cmmnting on the promo… All ur confusions will get cleared in this epi…
Zuha I m nt at all hurt infact I m happy that u tried to clear ur doubt u ll get ur ans in today’s epi…u can call anything but I prefer my name itself kyunki mere ek sis hai tumhari age wo mujhe naam se hei bulathi hai…
Aaj ka epi specially dedicated to twinjsidmim that is vassu di and aksa… I m really unable to express my happiness when u said ur waiting fr my ff…
And mahi aaj tumko cmmnt karna hi hoga… Plz sirf ek word silent readers… Ek word ki keemath tum kya jaano silent babu… Yaar pls break ur silence plz…
Thank you section… Thank you so much for commenting guys…
Ranabulbul (chulbul), baby, sidmin(mili), TRUST, piya, Rashiverma2199, zuha fathima, paavu, chiku(chiko), sidvee, adya, sushmitha, preesha, anyaali, ramya, Purnima.agrawal30, monica,
Hope I have not missed anyone…
Link for the promo… U can find my all parts in the index and promo here…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ur-wish-command-twinj-index-promo-tamanna/
Link for my previous epi…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/ur-wish-command-twinj-part-10/
Recap- kunj leaves and he recieves a phone call in train to which he responds “what”…
Disclaimer- no proof reading its just for entertainment purpose… If anyone is hurt I sincerely apologize for it…
Let begin…
Kunj is still in the train…He gets a call…
Otherside: sir twinkle ma’am ko kidnap karlia gaya hai… Kidnappers ne hum par attack kar kar unhe wahan se le gaye… Sar hame maaf kardi jiye…
Kunj: WHAT!!! Aisa nahi ho saktha… Shayad tumhe koi galat femi hui hogi…
A room like ware house is shown… A girl is shown tied in a chair… A boy is standing in front of her telling her something….
Boy: tujhe kya lagatha twinkle ke mai tujhse pyaar kartha tha… Hahaha (devilish laugh) yeh sab mera plan tha…
Twinkle: UV tu mere saath itna bada dhoka kaise kar saktha hai…. Yeh sab karke tujhe kya mila haan???
Kunj’s side…
other side: sir mujhe koi galath fami nahi hui…
Kunj: are u sure… Kyunki mujhe nahi lagtha…
other side: I m 100%sure sir wo yuvi hi tha…
Kunj: okay… I m coming…
Screen again shifts to twinkle and uv…
Twinkle: aur us din wo letter tune hi mujhe bejha tha na…
Flashback…
When twinkle scolds kunj and kunj leaves(after uv got shot)… Twinkle receives a letter… She opens it…
The letter read…
Twinkle Taneja,
mai kon hun yeh mat sochna… Maine tumhe warn karne ke liye yeh letter likha hai… Agar tum Yuvraj Luthra jo tumhara ashique hai… Agar usko zinda dekhna chahthi ho tho Kunj Sarna tumhara.sab se accha dost ko tumhe use yahan wapis military jaana hoga… Hame tum dono se koi dushmani nahi hai sirf kunj sarna hai isliye behtar yahi hoga ke wo yahan se chala jaaye ya fir tum apne saath saath yuvraj luthra ko bi kho dogi…
And twinkle decides that she will ask kunj to leave… (so usne kunj ko daant kar.wahan se bejh diya)
Uv: tune sahi kaha twinkle… Tu tho itni hoshyaar hai fir tune kunj ke pyaar ko kyun nahi samjha…
Twinkle: (shocked) kya???
Uv: (sarcastically) oo haan… Tujhe tho yeh sab patha hi nahi… Bichari twinkle
Twinkle: (angrily) yuvi sidhe sidhe keh tu kya kehna chahtha hai… Gumha fira ke math keh…
Uv: wo tujse pyaar kartha tha twinkle… Lekin tu buddhu hai twinkle… tune uske pyaar ko nahi samjha aur tune use gusse me aakar jaane ke liye kehdiya…bichara teri khushi ke liye tujhse dur chala gaya…
Uv: (continues) tune sahi kiya twinkle uske pyaar ke badle… Chal chod mai kis baath par atak gaya…
Twinkle listens this being guilty and cries thinking the mistake she have done…
Twinkle: (Thinks) maine yeh kya kardia… kunj I m sorry…. Mujhe maaf kardo… I m so bad… Usne mere liye…
Uv points a gun towards her and calls the military general that is manoher… He calls…
Uv: (call) hahaha…. Mr general Manoher sarna ur best friend rt’s daughter twinkle is kidnapped by me… If u want to save her than do as I say…
MS: (call) tu kon hai aur kya chahtha hai…. Plz twinkle ko chod de…
Uv: (call) are aise kaise chod dun… Badi mushkil se fasaya hai…. Haina baby(he asks to. Twinkle)
Twinkle’s mouth is ride so she just angrily glares at him….
Uv: (call) mujhe usse koi problem nahi hai lekin tum sab se.. Tum ne mera masum (innocent) bhai ko kaid karke rakha hai… Jiske bina mai 15 saalo se akela hun (by saying this he gets emotional) (again gets angry) wo abibi jail me hai… And I want u too release him… Otherwise I’ll kill her(twinkle)…
MS: I warn u won’t do anything to her… Otherwise I’ll not leave u..
Uv: uv cuts the call…
Twinkle remains shocked… She now got to know y he did that…
UV continues: I got to know that the officer kunj sarna has been sent on a undercover mission to protect u… Do uske baad yeh sab jaise tujhe pyaar ne fasana, tere liye wo goli lena aur fir letter… Aur mai usme kamyab bi hogaya ab ya tho yeh govt mere bhai ko release karenge nahi tho u r Gone…
Twinkle gets scared…
“ITNI JALDI NAI UV…” a voice is heard… It’s revealed to be none other than KUNJ…
Screen freezes on twinkle’s shocked cum happy face… Uv’s shocked face and kunj’s angry face…
To be continued…
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Hw was it?? Boring?? Shocked ho kya..
Sidmin- mili ur really smart yaar… Sacchi tumne kaise guess kiya fir kehthi ho u suck at guessing…
Drop ur comments whether +ve or -ve… If any confusion do ask me… Suggestions are always welcome… If any mistakes pls ignore…
Love you all..
TAMANNA
28 Comments
Tammu……superb….
I will not comment ??kya bolun kuch samaj nai aa raha
Awesome lovely epi yaar just loved it ????????
Brilliant episode tamanna waiting for next episode and it seem like some full on fight sequences will happen in next episode. and do make twinj together soon. Love it today episode.
Superb hai. But one thing I will like to say that ki after all these please don’t let kunj forgive twinkle sooo easily.! Twinkle has hurt him alot.. So now she should do something to get back her kunj!
Hi I’m reader of ur ff and os and I m from Bangladesh. Ur talk is so cute year and epi was as always awesome and emotional and plss post next epi soon coz I m waiting 4 it.and I know the kimat of silent readers cmnt coz I want u to smaile see the silent readers cmnt…. Luv u bye…take care…….
Sorry (silent)mentioned karna toh bhul gayi……
Tamanna awesome amazing
Finally mere doubt clear ho gaye
So plsss post next aasap I really want to know wt happens next dear it’s awesome loved it
Emotional but i enjoyed it
Now please post soon
hey tamanna,
Luved it.Awesome plus amazing.Mujhe yeh ongoing track bahat acha laga.No confusion.Post soon.
Lots of luv,
twinj
Amazing tamanna shocking twist tha yar waiting for the next post asap
Can you translate your ff. I don’t understand hindi
Hollaa
Woaaaah it’s awesome ??????lovely. Soo sweet. Finally kunj is back??????????Plzzzz post next soon
Love u?
Hey,
This was amazing! and finally, kunj is back. So excited to read the next part. Post soon! 🙂
awesome amazing shocking epi..,eagerly waiting for next part….
Wow….tamana awesome episode
Hey Tamanna! firstly really very sorry for not cmnenting on ur promo…sorryyyyyyyyyyy….
N today epi was superb n jhakkas… yarrr I loved it…. kya surprise diya hai…. waise mujhe doubt ho raha tha ki uv doesn’t love twinkle n look today it cleared…. n I’m happy that kunj is back to save his love his life twinkle…. pls post next asap….
Waise kya dialoge bola hai “ek cmnt ki keemat tum kya jano silent babu” n ur disclaimer hayeee yarrr I just loved it…. uniq request style…. u r mindblowing n cute…
Ba bye tc n keep smiling
♥♡♥♡♥Love uuuu♥♡♥♡♥
“Shalini/Neha”
awesone it was not at all boaring
Wow epi was superb.. i had a feeling that uv is acting to love twinkle bit wasn’t sure though.. eagerly waiting for the next ??
Hey Aishu amazing epi…ughhh hate uv to the core…feel like killing him…happy to see that Kunj is back to save twinkle…desperately waiting for next…try to post as soon as possible…
Love you ???
Oh woweeee tamu dear thank u fr posting ols oost nxt asap and bit long today’s was qwesone I also thot by ur precap dat uv is villian nic and kunj’s entry awesome live u dear
I knew this UV I felt there was something wrong with him but here tho everything is wrong How can he do this Twinkle 🙁
Thank god Kunj vapas aaya Love him 🙂
Love you 🙂
Sorry for the late comment post soon 🙂
Hey Tamanna,
Now I’m cleared about the confusion ? Well coming to the episode it was epic…You rocked it like anything. I seriously enjoyed it a lot.
But I thought that UV is a nice guy but I is so ????
Anyways post ASAP!
Loads of love and support ❤❤❤
Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂
Hi tamana actually I’m a silent reader of ur ff from starting BT 2day I’m commenting I use read all ur epi BT i never commented on it so I’m really sry 4 it n aslo sry for late comment 2day epi was fan as always n I love it n plz post next epi soon by by love u
SrySry it was fab not fan
Superb episode… this track is interesting…hate uv.. Kunj’s entry was superb… loved it
Wowwwww…!! FANTASTIC..U KILLED IT…UM SHOCKED..I READ THEM ALL IN ONE GO AND UM JUST IN LOVE WID UR FF DEAR…LOVEEEEEDDD ITTT…MINDBLOWING FF..MAH GOD..I CANT BELIEVE KE ME ISS FF KO MISS KIYA..IM JUST AWESTRUCK…SPECTACULAR EPI…LOVED ALL THE EPIS ..AND DESPERATELY WAITING FOR THE NEXT ONE AS SOON AS POSSIBLE..PLZZZ DNT END IT…I BEG…I KNW ITS SS BUT STILL YAAAR…UM IN LOVE WID UR FF DNT END IT SOOON..PLSHHHH TERI ISS PARTNER KE LIYE KARDE…
OVERALL OUTATANDING EPI…♥♥♥
SORRRYYY FOR NOT COMMENTING TILL NOW…U KNW THE REASON..AND ONCE AGAIN AWESOME…AND THANKS FOR UPLAODING THE EPI FOR MINE AND VASSIYA SIS REQUESTS…LOVEEEEE UUUU TO THE INFINITYYYYY …