Hi All,
I am back with a short story here in for Swasan. Thanks for supporting me in Hatred ends with love story and hope expecting the positivie responses for this one also. With no more blabbering, lets get into the first short
Swasan – Unconditional Love (SS – CH 1)
It is a very big multispeciality hospital. One of the most reputed hospitals in the city which treats the patient with atmost love and care.
Now the scene shifts to Room No 305 – inside the room, a patient (girl) is in unconscious state who has bandage on her head and hands. Nurse is appointed to monitor her health. she sits at the corner and takes notes of her each and every improvement. She hears some murmurs from the patient. she goes to her and checks her pulse and BP, BP is getting higher and she gets panic. Immediately she rushes out to call the doctor.
The girl is started murmuring something continuously and nods her head left right and gets tensed. She shrinks her forehead due to some pain and closes her eyes tightly and says, “Help me…help me”. Soon she gets some flashes on negative that some one is running on the road…3 4 people chasing…A car hits a girl…she is getting these flashes continuously and suddenly she gets jerked off and gets up and screams, “NOOOOOOO”.
At the same time doctor too comes inside and tries to calm her down. The nurses helps her in becoming calm and the doctor checks her health and injects her a sedative so that she can rest for some more time. Soon she gets dozed off and they all went out by leaving one nurse there itself.
The doctor name goes to his cabin named as Sahil and calls to some one, “Hey…she woke up but she is not in normal condition. She screams badly as if she gets scared of seeing something. you wanna see her?…ok now i gave her sedative..you come after 1 or 2 hrs she will be in conscious by that time..so that we can talk to her to know about her whereabouts.” By saying this Sahil disconnected the call and continues his work.
After few hours, his cabin door is knocked and replies, “Yes come in”. A 6 feet tall guy entered in his cabin with a small smile and asks, “Shall we meet her?”
Sahil, “Sanskar, u not even greeted me and you want to see that patient…you know her already or what?”. yes it is our hero Sanskar.
Sanskar, “No..but she is in this position because of me. I have that guilty with me…and whatever you told me sometime back it really makes me worry about her”.
Sahil, “Acchaa… leave it. Come i ll take u there”.
Both goes to the room no 305. Sanskar enters with heavy heart and looks at her worriedly. Sahil, “Don’t worry, she is still in sedative mode only. It will take some more time for her to come out from that”.
But before he finishes off his sentence, they noticed a small movements in her body. She did not open her eyes but they can see her eye balls are rolling here and there and she finds difficult in opening her eyes. She tries to clutch the cloth in the bed. Sanskar notices this and sits beside her and holds her hands for support. She becomes calm once she feels his touch and slowly opens her eyes.
Sanskar eagerly looks at her face and starts admiring slowly unknowingly. That girl opened her eyes slowly and the first face she saw is Sanskar’s. she tried to get up and sit straight. Sanskar helped her in arranging the pillows and looks at her lovingly. She stares him continuously and tries to recollect her past but she winces in pain while doing so. She looks the surrounding with fear and slowly bows her head down by holding it to soothe the pain she has and she looks at the mangalsutra in her neck and gets shocked. She takes it in her hands and holds it in her both hands.
She gets shocked and did not understand anything and looks at Sanskar asks, “Did i get married?”
Sanskar & Sahil also shocked and looks each other. She continues, “Why are you not answering my question? did i get married? Who are you?”
Sanskar thinks for a while and tries to answer but before him, again she asks, “Are you my husband?” this shocks both Sanskar & Sahil equally and did not expect this encounter from her and looks blank.
The screen freezes on trio’s shocked face.
Precap: Sanskar mesmerised seeing her playing with the kids and calls her “Swara” but she did not respond for his call.
———————-End of 1st Shot———————
How is this chappy guys? Hope u all like it. It is a Short Story only and will end up around 15 episodes. Hope you all enjoyed reading and pls fill the comments box with your comments.
@ KAKALI – Kakali dear, see i came to meet you here with this new swasan story? You remember what word you gave to me, if i come with a new swasan story? Hope u will fulfill that…. 🙂 🙂 🙂
45 Comments
amazing start yar i loved it
Thank you Rosey dear 🙂
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So happy to see u with swasan story
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Thank u so so much deeksha dear 🙂 Yes Sahil is a doctor and friend of Sanskar.
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