……………………………………..” aaj hum aap se milne keliye betab hain laksh , jante bhi hain kitna pyaar karte hain hum aap se apni jaan se bhi zada ”
a girl said by picking a guy pic in her hand
” i luv u laksh i luv u so much jab baba aur ma ne kaha ki aaj ap hume dhekne arahe hain then i was so happy now soon we will become one i am waiting 4 come soon ”
the girl was wispering all this ,a complete white anarkali suit was worn by her ,her eyes were sparkling with so much love and with innocence of purity to feel her feelings she close her big anglic eyes ,screen freezes on her face
name- ragini gadodia aka lado aka ragu
age- 24 yrs
nature- as pure as an innocent child but a bit brave 4 her family
suddenly she hear a girl voices ” swara ??
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:” r u blind ?? andhe ho bhagwan ne aankhe nahi di haan kya kiya my whole clothes is drench in mud u spoil brat………….
a girl was scream so loudly ,her face her hair her clothes were drench in muddy water
” pura ka pura kapra kharab kar diya pata nahi tum jaeseo ko driving license kaise mil jata hain blo*dy idiot ………………
she continues screen stops on her cute angry face
name – swara gadodia
age – 24 yrs
nature- so dairing but a bit shy 4 love
” hogaya ?? the boy said with full atitude
” kya ? swara asked
” maine pucha tumhara bashan hogaye maine kuch bolu if yes then u were wrong who was riding her bicycle aimlessly aur phir tum …………
” aur phir tum kya yahi that suddenly i arrived in front of ur car yehi na “” swara said with a red nose
” haan yahi ” the boy said
” pata tha tum jaiso ka yahi excuse hota hain phele toh accident kar te phir u guys will give u lame excuses aur agar abhi mere hath saf hote na to phir……………….
before she could complete her line ragini ran towards her with a scream
” swara ”
the boy get goosebumps by listening her voice ,he get numb although swara ran towards ragini but he stood there ,his back was facing the girls
” what happen ?? what is all this ?? kisne kiya haan ? ragini asked
” are yaar ek amir gadha tha usi ne kiya aur kya dekh wahan khara hain pith karke swara said
” achha tik hain tu chal all r waiting 4 us come ” ragini tried to calm her
before they could do anything ragini’s dupatta flew and cover the boys face was still standing there
a song in bg
khayal tera jagata hain
khawab tera sulata hain
haar jaga tu hi nazar ata hain ( here ragini start moving towards the guy to take her dupatta ,the boy heart start thumping)
yeh rishta kya yeh rishta kya kehlata hain …………………..
yeh rishta kay yeh rishta kya kehlata hain(the boy took her dupatta in his hands and keep a hand over his chest )
din main jugnoo talash karta hoon
gull main khusboo talash karta hoon
aaj kal kya hua hain mujhko
khud main usko talash karta hoon ( here boys eyes were dreaming and ragini is about to aproach him but suddenly swara tap her shoulder and gave her mobile to talk to someone so ragini turned and swara tap the boy shoulder but her foot get twisted and she fall on the boys arms………
har jagah tu nazar aata hain ( swara was still in the boys arm swara was mesmerised but the boy feel something weird so he look towards ragini who was talking on the cell her back was facing him)
yeh rishta kya yeh rishta kya kehlata hain…..(the scene continue swara in guys arm while guy looking towards ragini)
yeh rishta kya yeh rishta kya kehlata(while ragini kisses on the phone with dreamy eyes)
yeh rishta kya yeh rishta kya kehlata hain……………………………………………………………………………………………………………………../
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” ragu beta jaldi kar dekh ladke wale agayen sab tera hi wait kar rahein hain chal jaldi aur yeh kya where is swara ??””
her mother sharmishtha gadodia asked
” ma bas wo gayi hain tyaar hone aur maine bhi tyar hoon aare swara agayi ragini said
” where were u shona come fast with ragini boy’s family has arrive come fast ohk” with this sharmishta leave
” hmm… ragu aaj tu bari chamak rahi hain haan kya baat hain apne unse se milne ja rahi bol bol sharma mat” swara said in a teasing manner
” shona chup kar samjhi pagal kuch bhi pata bhi hain kitni nervous hoon main ek min”
“kya ?”
“tere yeh bangle main kiska bracelet hain yeh kon hain
” s” ??
” mujhe kya pata hoga koi shayad ……
“shayad wo ladka jisse main takrai usse ka hoga shayad ” swara said with a dreamy eyes
…………………………….swara kya hua ragini ko leke aa beta ………………..
ji ma – swara said witha simile while ragini blushed hard
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” i cant marry her dad she is so traditional ” the boy with fullon attitude
” laksh have u lost it ?? ” the boys father asked
” but dad this is my life now i cant bear u torchers she is not my type i think her yunger sister swara is best 4 me i think i love her i want her to marry i choose swara over ragini ” the gboy said with same attitude
” laksh !!! be in ur limits u r satnding in my house so think before u …………………….suddenly they all heared a collasping sound here ragini was standing on the door with broken dreams in her eyes within a sec her dreams were shattered her love choose her sister over her ,swara was also holding as if trying to say my ragini plz be strong i am with u ur swara ur family is with u ……………………
the boy scan her from top to bottom with a disgusting smirk then her eyes get glued on her eyes which was full of pain but within a sec he broke the eyelock and start scaning the girl beside her thats swara…………..
camera rolls from ragini to that boy
“dil ki baateinchupati rehtii hoon
“shartt taroon se lagati rehti hoon ( camera was focusing on her eyes)
“aaj kal man kahin nahi lagta
roz khud ko main samjhati hoon
yeh rishta kya yeh rishta kya kehlata hain ………..(her painful face was shown here swara mind get flashes of morning incident that how she fell on his arms)
yeh rishta kya yeh rishta kya kehlata hain……………….
yeh rishta kya yeh rishta kya kehlata hain………………………….(the screen divided in both of the girls face lol )
21 Comments
Nice
Is lak for rag
Awesome update dear..loved it soo much..please reveal d pairs
Hi. Its really interesting and different. I guess another guy is Sanskar. Ragsan and Swalak are the couples right?
superb dear u r amazing
amazing rkapoor love ur work yar comments ka reply tu kia karwe r ur fans man cmon
Swasan
Interesting…..
Nice yaar keep going
Osm… feeling bad for ragini
I think sanskar was the boy who like ragini and ragsan alliance but lakshya can’t take his eyes while ragsan function
i think sanskar is still not entered in this ff, the first boy who hold swara and the boy who disgustingly smile at ragini is the same person and he is laksh only. i have re-read this update and i must say you are an awesome writer Riya. update soon.
Amazing
Ragsan or Raglak???
superbbb dear…
its osmmmm i like it bt plz make ragsan varna fir se srial ki tarah dono bhaiyo ko ek hi bandi se payr ho jayega nd ragini side ho jayegi
Superbb
By god di sau!!!its damnnnnnnnnnnnn amazngggg dr……so so soooo fabulousssssss……..ahhh!!dese lines…yeh rishta kya kehlata h…hayyy!!!main to mar he gai….dat boy ws sanky r8…oh god ragsan dupatta vala scene n dese wordng were sooooooo fantastic…….hmmm!!!i think dis laksh is doing all dis purposelyyy..m nt lykng himm..poor rags loves him sooo mucj,bt he isss sooooo bad!!!!???? ….waitng eagerly for nxt part…keeep rockng n stay bleßsed dr….n dis is such a super doooper interestng story yaaar 😉
Wait was the guy who had crashed his car woth Swara sanky or was it still lakshya as I didn’t understand… anyways loved it so post soon xz
It’s nice…But feeling bad for Ragini…And Laksh I want to kill him by my hands…Please make it Raglak…And also make Sanlak fall for Ragini not for Swara…It’s a request…And I agree with Akshata that Sanakar is still not entered in this ff…That guy who hold Swara was Laksh and the boy who was a disgusting smile on his face is Laksh only…Update the next episode soon…And do update your other three ffs too… Stay blessed…
nice
nice
superb…. loved it so much..