Thank you so much for your amazing response…n those who want to know tha suspense in this…read ff dailu??
Swara heads towards the room…
She goes to Wardon for her room keys…
Wardon handed over room keys…her room keys shows Room No.17….
She gets a call from unknown number…
Swara – yes…i got the keys…Room No.17
Call – What?You got the same room which you wanted?
Swara – I get everything which i needed and which is mine…
Call – But still beware of those students…they are dangerous…
Swara – Itz time to play…n i m not gonna lose it…listen now don’t call me…delete my no…n throw thay SIM card…i will do the same…if i want to contact you i will call from PCO…i don’t want to risk anything….
Fb starts…
A girl wearing full mask on her face enters the hostel staff room where all papers has been kept…she searches her name and she was allocated with room no 15…she changes it to Room no.17 and also remove her room partner from.pc…
Fb ends…
Swara smirks..
Swara in.mind- as i told you what is mine is mine…
She opens the room…she enters the room slowly…n closed the door..
Swara – This is your room and you have faced this…they snatched my favourite one from me…i m goona do the same…
She opens her bags…n in hurry she removes all clothes n stuff n then she remove a photograph from that bag..
She started crying after seeing that photo..
(SRY guyz…the face is noy shown)
Swara to Photo – Your revenge has been started…i gave them a tight slap today by disobeying their demands…now they will tortures me…n i also want that…i have to be part of their group n win their trust…
I met everybody today
the bastardsnof this college….
She remembers the face of each group member and start talking about them…al of these have snatched your favourite thing and your dream from you…they spoiled your career and i make sure they don’t have a future…
Naina Bhardwaj….the toughest girl of the college and loves to ride bikes…n wants to win the title of the best bike racer against any man…come on girl…i wil make sure ki bike chalana toh dur tum use dekh kar hi ghabara jaogi…
Asha Pandey – The scary one and the most weak part of the group…fashion and modelling is your life then i have to snatched yout life from you..just like you did
Arjun Mehra – Son of Business Ashok Mehra…wants to run a family business n make money…business lol…we will see
Ashish Lad – The one who gave drug to my…..now this drugs gonna destroy you for sure…
Karan Patel – The wrestler…wants to become famous…i will make sure you don’t have future in wrestling..
And last but not the least…the group leader
Sanskar Maheswari….the charm boys who plays with emotions of ppl and use them and throws them…you love sports right…i will give you a spl treatment…
She burns the photo in her hand…
Swara(in tears)- Sry i have to do this bcoz i don’t want any proof that i m related to you…
Someone bangs her door very hard…n she scared…but she knows that who is on door.
Swara – I as thought…they are here…
She opens the door…
Someone jerks her on the bed…
Precap : Six Members enters her room…n threatens her…also sanskar
Guyz i know that you guyz r confused about sanky character but don’t worry…as the story proceed the mystery get unlock very soon…
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wow awesom
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Nice but can u tell me if u have taken this ff story idea from some where because ur story sounds like a serial in channel v im not remembering the serial name.. well dont take me wrong i m not complaining its just that i m curious to know but still if i by mistake have hurted ur feeling than sorry… ☺
Yes…dear the idea was from serial paanch…but the basic story will be different….n itz ok…don’t be sry?
I like that serial very much….n ur ff too
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Your ff is interesting and marvellous can u give the link of this ff plzzzz and continue it dear
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http://www.tellyupdates.com/?s=swasan+ff++revenge+
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Omg superb yr actually aaj mera xm tha or bilkul bhi acha nahi hua ????stupid PU wale ?????mood bhut khrab tha BT ye episode padh k acha LG raha h thank u ????
Post NXT epi soon ???
I m glad that you liked it…n your mood has been changed…yes sure…n all the best for further exams
Awsm.!!
nice..
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god.. breath taking….
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aree niw i remember in channel v
serial paanch was coming……
concept is same i think……
anywaya loved it !!!!!!!!
🙂 🙂
post asap……..
Thx dear
Awesome dear
I can connect it with channel v’s paanch
Thx dear
Fab can’t wait for next part xx