Hai all I’m back. Got discharged from hospital yesterday. Now another boring 15 days ahead. Don’t know what will I do. Leave it let’s go to the chappy.
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Swara got numb seeing urvashi shooting her own son, the rest were shocked and sanskar, who was checking Uttara and questioning the girls who were nursing her all these years, got panicked inside the room hearing the sound.
Raj:(shivering) what have u done u should have killed swara. U were aiming her right u missed it and by mistake u had shoot Rajath hai na.
He couldn’t even believe what just happened. Till now he had a strong belief that urvashi loves him and she was doing all these for his betterment only. But seeing her shooting her own son he was shattered. No matter whatever he did he loved his family a lot and he didn’t expect this day in his worst dreams also.
Urvashi: if u don’t want to go behind ur son, just keep quiet.(turning to Swara) so now do u have any thing to say miss oops mrs. Sanskar Maheshwary.
Sanskar who was hearing their talks from inside got revealed and some were inside his heart he felt happy hearing mrs. Sanskar Maheshwary. But got startled hearing another shoot sound and a bang on the door. He understood that urvashi had shoot on the door lock.
Some goons come inside and held sanskar before he could protest.
Urvashi: so Swara u wanted to see sanskar for a last time right? Here he is.
Swara went to sanskar and hugged him, his heart stopped beating for a second. In his next moment he took her into a born crushing hug.
(They were standing like swara’s left side and sanskar’s right side was facing others)
Swara:(whispering) sir there is gun in my right pocket. Take it and don’t worry the force have already surrounded the building, and is ready for the attack. Be ready.
Sanskar: if I take the gin then for u
Swara: I have another one with me plz we have no time be quick
Sanskar took the gun. After that Swara parted from the hug
Swara: (looking into his eyes) I LOVE U
Sanskar:(kissing her forehead) LOVE U TOO
Abhinav was gritting his teeth out of anger as he can do nothing else in urvashi’s presence while urvashi was mocking at their love
Urvashi: wah! what a love I must say sanskar u missed her, and now u are going to lose here very badly.
Saying this she hold her by her hair and Swara let out a loud screaming, which was a signal to Ramnath. Getting the signal they rushed in.
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Guys I’m stopping for today. Now I need your valuable suggestions. As the mission track is moving to an end shall I stop it here by uniting swasan, of course after a small nok jok between them. Or shall I continue. If I continue then there will be another separation track.
if u all feel it boring then we will stop after 4 or 5 episodes
Plz tell me ur opinion because I really don’t want u all to get bored because of me. For me my readers means more than my passion.
Thank u all.
52 Comments
I want their union but after Sanskaar’s punishment and Swara’s design to punish her family
sure di thank u
Plz continue but no more separations
thank u i guess sanskar deserves a small seperation
Awesome mariyajap…..!!!!!!! Don’t end it….. Continue it…… And Congo for the recovery….!!!!!!
thank u sooo much deekshu
Awesome nd plzz continue
thank u anu
Awesome ? and continue it pls and take care
thank u stg
Superb Dr….continue it
thank u shreeyu
Superb
Urvasi is so cruel ?
Plz continue but dont separate them
thank u simi
Loved it
thank u
No pls don’t unite swasan soon…. Bcoz sanskar didnt get his punishment at all….. He didn’t trust the one he loved and also dumped her in her marriage by not marrying her….. He needs punishment….. This is my view…. But ur wish….
thank u di sanky will surely pay
Ya Mariya even I would b glad if u make Sanskar suffer cause he really hurt Swara a lot and he should pay for his deeds
Continue Bt no more separation as it seems same to same…. Other than as u wish….
thank u vidhi
Get well soon…
Plz continue….sanskar n swaras family need a better punishment
thank u anitha
Awesome dear……. Please update soon.
thank u febi
Its awesome want it to go on and on waiting for other
thank u aamias
Dun unite dem soon…
Want to see sanskarz punishmnt more den dat shomi shekhar n raginiz punishmnt..
thank u arshaanya
nice..dnt end it so soon..write ur story as u want to..tc..
thank u soo much
I read all ur previous posts on this ff n they all were amazing….
This one is amazing but again a cliffhanger…post soon.
thank u will try
first punishment then anything else and nice epi 🙂
thank u rabia di
Unite them yar:) Loved it 🙂 tc dear
thank u mirna
awesome post the next part soon and continue this ff dear
thank u sneha
Awesome…?
thank u soujanya
Superb….this is unfair…. u left with a cliffhanger
thank u vyshu
Awesome thank you so much for posting, and plz continue as u like air ha apna khyal Abhi rekna
thank u guess u r commenting for the first time by the way wts ur real name
Awesome and continue it..
thank u afra
awesome
thank u anu
Fabulous.. Loved it.. Don’t unite them soon.. Sanky deserve some punishment.. Keep going dear.. Waiting for nxt..
Take care of your health..
Keep smiling?
Thank you so much
nice