ISHKARA FF : SEARCH OF SOULMATE {PART 9 BY RENIMA }
Hello ishqies….. Thank you all for supporting me with your views and opinions….Well guys…..hope all are enjoying weekends…..but am busy with work and work only……So here is 9th part……read it please
Scene- 20 ( @ Ishana’ Home)
{Shivaay and Rudra arrive @ Ishana’s home and visit omkara……
Mona takes care of injured Omkara……}
Shivaay : Om……its enough……I won’t allow my brother to put his life in risk…..
Omkara : Shivaay….am alright…….
Rudra : Om…..when we saw that video……@ phone…..
Omkara : Rudra……please don’t cry…….am ok…..
Shivaay : Om……can’t you see your wounds? That blo*dy siddharth raana and his goons……I will not leave them….om……and about the security of this girl…..I will arrange bodyguards……
Omkara : Shivaay……am Mona’s brother…..and am alive….so what is the need of a body guard…..Shivaay…..this is a home….not oberoi mansion…….and about her protection…..this is not the first time am saving Mona from goons….
Mona : But om bhaiya……this time they attacked you ……And I can’t forgive myself…..since you are in trouble because of me only…… Please bhaiya…….you just go with shivaay bhaiya to your oberoi mansion……{cries}
Omkara : Shut up Mona….Just shut up…..Mona……as I promised to your paapa…..i will take care of you and don’t worry……And these wounds…..it has actually strengthened my confidence……And today I just got my first salary……only…..But am sure….soon I will be able to pay the whole debts……Trust me…..Mona….please trust me…..
Shivaay : Omkara……I will deal this thing……
Omkara : Shivaay….please……I already told you it’s my own battle…..my own task…….and I will do it……..
Rudra :Om…..that siddharth is a dangerous person……He will not stop threatening people….. And he not only threatens….but also he make the videos on it and when we saw you was fighting with that goons and a man just beated you from back…shivaay bhaiya got much tensed…..Om…..please……come home…..Mona…..you can also come with om….
Omkara : Rudra……now this is my home……And now am not an oberoi……As I said you guys….let me do my work……please……
Shivaay : Fine….Om…….we will wait for you…..
Omkara : Shivaay….take care of rudra and yourself also…..
Shivaay : Yes……om……come rudra…….[Shivaay hold rudra’s hands….three brothers stare each other and smile…..]
Rudra : Om…..we will miss you……{Three brothers hug each other and shivaay,rudra leave the house}
Omkara : Mona……tomorrow you will go and pay your semester fee…….{He handover the money to her }
Mona : Bhaiya…..this is….
Omkara : My first salary……And am so happy that for the first time I have achieved something @ my own stand…..
Mona : But bhaiya…..
Omkara : {interrupts} No more questions……You just kept the money safely…..Mona…..I have some work……And I will be back within few minutes…..
Mona : Bhaiya….you are injured….and you need rest…..these wounds are so deep and it will create more pain if you will not take rest….
Omakra : Mona……these wounds can be cured through medicines…..And about pain…..am much attached with pains…… don’t worry…..I will come soon…….{Omkara leaves}
Scene – 21 {@ Sea shore}
{Omkara again started walking through the streets……He was confused……He stopped walking and finally sat @ the sea shore and closely observed the waves of sea…….}
Omkara : Now….what will I do ? Just because father helped me I was able to get the money…..But he is also helpless…..And time is less I have to earn money soon….Apart from art….I don’t think I will be able to concentrate on any other work……
{He just stared every where and his eyes went on a corner which was decorated with lights……He moved there and find a crew who were singing ,dancing, beating drums @ a temporary stage which was open and also find some people who were gathered there as the audience……..Omkara felt that stage as his platform……And when the performance was over he said the crew about his necessity and his passion towards art….And with much happiness they welcomed him…….they were not from any rich background and they were a team of member who use to perform @ various stages and earn single penny every day…..Omkara’s entry strengthened their team….As always when they will perform he will do his paintings, sketches…..etc…..And when the show will be over…..they will share the amount among members……And omkara will also get a share from it……Slowly omkara also became an earning member……@ Nights he will join with the crew and @ day time he made the foothpaths of streets itself as his workshop….And the passengers started buying his paintings and statues……without judging his surname or status as they were common people only……..And slowly he started paying debts one by one…..And 4 months passed…..one day as usual he was engaged in his work he got a call from the priest Father David}
Scene – 22 { St. peters church}
Priest : Omkara……I want to introduce you Mr. Fernades……He is a renowned craftsman from Goa….Monthly once he will come to this church…..because he spent his childhood here and his family moved to goa later…..Actually he is impressed with your work……He is planning an exhibition in mumbai for arts,sculpture and craft……And omkara this is your big chance….big platform…..utilise it…..son…..
Omkara : Father…….thank you so much…..I don’t know how…..
Priest : Omkara…..go and meet him soon…….And he will offer you big amount……
Omkara : Father….i want to ask you ….he knows me as……
Priest : He values work……And its not necessary that all rich people will go for surname and status…..just go…..
{That was really a big chance for Omkara……From that exhibhition he earned crores and he paid all the debts……And people recognized him for his talent…….not for his surname…… And those goons who troubled Ishana’s family got arrested…..And raanas handover all the papers of property which they seized from Ishana’s family…….And finally when 6 months got over and omkara’s task was completed Ishana and her dad also got released from jail…….}
Scene- 23 { Ishana’s house}
{Mona and Omkara extended a warm welcome to Ishana and her dad…..Omkara handovered the papers of property to Ishana’s dad…….}
Dad : Omkara……Thank you beta….{He gets emotional and hugs Omkara……..}
Mona : Om bhaiya….is world’s best brother…..
Omkara : Thanks Mona……
{Omkara smiles and hugs her…….Ishana stares Omkara with wet eyes……Mona observes it}
Mona : Paapa……I want to tell you something……it’s a secret…..come paapa…..{Mona pushed her dad and they walk inside and hide themselves behind curtains…..}
{Omkara and Ishana share an eyelock…….Omkara came closer to Ishana……}
Omkara : Ishana…….{he slowly hold her hand and smiles}
Ishana : Omkara…….I think…….i think….you……must leave now…….
Omkara : Ishana……{Omkara releases her hand from hold and gets shocked……}
PRECAP : Mona questions Ishana – “Why you offered pain to om bhaiya…..”
So guys that’s all for this part….Hope you will like it…….Please put your valuable comments….And sorry for not replying on previous parts…as am stucked with some office work ……And next part …..I will try to post it as soon as possible…….
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Loved it……
OMG….d ….They way om helped ishana was soooo nice….this was superbbbb…waiting for the next …n if u saw my comment on 8th part in which i asked u about how to set dp n all….if u get lil time then plz reply me …as m waiting…
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