Hey guys …it’s alia back again ….thanks for the comments but I am expecting more anyway’s let’s start the story …
Guys just keep guessing whom will be whose obessive lover ?
That’s the story ..and I am sure u all be shocked knowing it …he he I think ….
OK so let’s start the story ,
Swara returns to the mansion .
Ragini signs a relief seeing her and goes to her smiling
Ragini (smiling) : how was your day ?
Swara (tired) : haan di good …what about yours
Ragini gets the flashes of sanskar words ..
Ragini (angry but bit smile) : ya ya …OK u know na being an ngo of girls association is not easy
Swara (signs) : this ngo and all …I mean u r just 2 years older to me …because of me u left your studies but now …hats off
Ragini hugs her
Ragini (smiling) : that’s y I left my studies …but now no one can beat me in studies …lol …
Swara smiles
Swara : OK di …I am going to room …will get freshen up then will have dinner
Ragini nods …Swara goes upstairs .
Later in Swara room ,
Swara comes from washroom and takes her phone …she finds missed calls from Nikhil …she calls him back
Nikhil : hi swara ….what your sister said
Swara keeps her hand on her forehead
Swara : ufff …I forgot about it only Nikhil .
Nikhil : what yaar …it’s OK talk with her …make sure it’s like a official collage trip OK
Swara : OK ol sure ….I will Call u back bye ….
Nikhil : bye take care
Swara hungs up
Swara : babaji give me the confidence to talk to di …
Saying this she leaves
At maheshwari mansion
Sanskar and laksh were having dinner …
Laksh : bhai …I am going on a collage trip with friends
Sanskar (smiles) : oh …good enjoy
Laksh smiles back and has his food
Sanskar : are your friends also girls ?
Laksh smiles fades away
Laksh (tensed) : hmm…..ya….some
Sanskar (smirks) : don’t worry my brother …I won’t do anything to them ..
Laksh gives a fake smiles and leaves from there
Sanskar (smirks) : even my brother is scared to introduce his girlfriends huh …to me
There at nikhil apartment
Nikhil : dad I am going on a collage trip
His father throws a book at him
Father : always trip trip (angrily)
Nikhil (attitude) : dad we r seniors …we get many trips …what do to
Father (angry) : this is last …after that no
Nikhil in mind : after that only without your permission
Nikhil : OK OK dad …saying this he goes to his room
Father : he is studying collage or always enjoying
Mother : it was you who joined him in that collage … (she chuckles)
There at swara mansion .
Swara and ragini were having dinner ….
Swara : di actually we are having an trip tomorrow ….
Ragini (stops eating) : oh …
Swara : will u permit me ? (Tensed)
Ragini (thinks of sanskar’s words) : but ….wait I will call your principal and asks is it safe ..
Swara get’s shocked ..
Ragini takes her phone …Swara close’s her eyes
Ragini (sign) : ufff…..no charge u dial and give me in your phone shona
Swara takes her phone ….he calls laksh number.
Swara (acts) : hello …principal sir
Laksh (confused) : shona it’s me laksh
Swara (acts) : sir it’s me swara ….sorry to disturb u
Laksh (confused) : shona what happened to u …I am lucky not that idiot principal
Swara (laughs) : you are so funny sir ….u r in bathroom …sorry to disturb
Laksh (angry) : shona did your screw fall down
Swara (acts) : actually sir …my sister wanted to talk to you about the trip …that’s y I called your number .
Now laksh understand her plan
Laksh (smiling) : can I talk to your sister
Swara smiles …
Ragini take’s the phone
Ragini : hello sir ….I am ragini
Laksh (mimics) : yes ragini madam ..
Ragini (confused) : what happened to your voice ..it’s a bit different
Swara slaps her forehead
Laksh clears his throat : oh …nothing it’s just I have sore throat ..
Ragini : oh OK OK …actually where u r taking them
Laksh ; oh ma’am this trip is of educational tour .we are taking them to mahabalipuram (it’s a place in tamil nadu where u can find many museums and all …it’s in net ) it’s a 3 day trip
Ragini : oh south side ..
Laksh ; yes yes …
Ragini : is it safe sir
Laksh : absolutely….when I am there nothing will happen (he smiles)
Ragini (smiles) : OK sir …thank’s I will send her tomorrow ..
Laksh smiles and hungs up
Ragini : you can go tomorrow swara
Swara smiles …..
The next day ,
All the four meets in collage .
Laksh ; swara your sister is a tough hard crack
Swara (smiles) : ya she is ..what to do …
Nikhil ; anyways …only kavitha is free from these …because she he is staying in hostel ..
Kavitha hits him playfully …all laughs
Swara and kavitha (both) : by the way where are we going
Both nikhil and laksh looks at each other and smiles …leaving swara and kavitha confused
Laksh smiles and goes towards swara …Swara was looking at him ….he blindfolds her …while nikhil does to kavitha …both the boys takes them to a place backside of their campus
Laksh and nikhil open’s the shawl ….Swara and kavitha were shocked and happy seeing it …
Swara & kavitha (shouts) : jeep !!!!!!!
Laksh (smiles) : do u like it ….
Swara (happy) : I love it ….
Saying this she hugs laksh tightly and kisses his cheeks …..which shocked him …even nikhil and kavitha …
Swara (didn’t notice) : thank you …thank u …
Swara goes and sits in the jeep …..laksh keeps his hand in the place where swara kisses and smiles ….
Nikhil and kavitha smiles ….
Swara : come fast na ….we need to go to the island na
Nikhil & laksh (shocked) : how do u know
Swara takes the magazines which was in the jeep and shows …
Swara : I know u booked it .. (to laksh )
Laksh smiles ….
All get in the jeep and leaves …..
At the maheshwari mansion
Sanskar (smirks) : did u get that ragini sister photo …
His men : yes sir …here ….
He give the photo to sanskar ….Sanskar took it and was awstuck seeing the photo….
Sanskar : omg who is this s*xy huh ?
His men’s smiles and feels sad for the girl
Sanskar (smirks) : I need this girl at any cost ….I need her to my bed ….she will be mine forever
His men’s smiles ….
There at the jeep
Laksh was driving and nikhil was sitting next to him …while on back seat …swara and kavitha were sitting ….
Kavitha signal’s nikhil something ….he smiles
Nikhil : swara why don’t u come and sit next to laksh …
Swara (confused) : why ?
Kavitha (blushes) : let us also spend some time na
Swalak (teases) : ohh ….ohhh …
Nikhil (blushes) : shut up yaar ….
Swara : OK OK come back …
Saying this swara and nikhil exchanges their seat …
Both kavitha and nikhil gets moody ….
Swara : ufff ..it’s so cold right
Laksh (smiling) : ya …take this
He gives her his jacket …swara smiles and takes and wears it …
Swara : thanks
Laksh : you are welcomed …miss swara
Swara : call me shona laksh
Laksh : OK miss shona
Swara smiles ….she stares laksh …
Kavitha (teases) : I thought only there is only one couple in our gang …but now two
Swara eyes her angrily
Laksh : shut up yaar ….come on we r just friends
Swara looks at laksh ….
Swara : ya Mrs nikhil
Kavitha and nikhil are shocked hearing It
Swalak gives hifI
Nikhil : ahem …ahem …..still time is there ….
Kavitha blushes …
Laksh : omg again red tomato …huh
Nikhil : enough yaar
Swara (attitude) : enough na …now don’t dare to tease us …
Nikhil and kavitha close’s their mouth
Screen shifts to ngo girl’s association office
Ragini was checking all the files
She gets a call
Ragini : hello
Other side : hello madam ji
Ragini (angry) : sanskar
Sanskar (smirks) : omg u found Me
Ragini (smirking) : because only cheap have these kind of voices
Sanskar (angry) : madam ji …hold your tongue ..u r on the count
Ragini (attitude) : you can’t do anything to me …just don’t over react
Sanskar (smirks) : ya ya …I can’t do anything to u …but to ur s*xy sister
Ragini (angry) : shut up ….u blo*dy
Sanskar : hey hey …calm down ….she is really damm hot and s*xy man…..I can’t resist .
Ragini gets more angry
Ragini (angry) : shut up please …don’t cross your limit …
Sanskar : ol OK ….just called to u inform u that take care of ur sister …OK …because
Ragini (angry) : I won’t let u near her OK
Sanskar (smirks) : I am not saying about me ji ..I am saying any boy can have her …..
Ragini gets angry and cuts the call ….Sanskar smiles
Sanskar : I won’t let anyone have her …she is mine .
There at the island ,
It was so beautiful 3 sides covered with water and a beautiful house on a side …with swimming pool and all ….
It was a private island …only these 4 were there .
Kavitha : wow yaar….it’s so beautiful …na swara
Swara : haan kavitha ….
Laksh : nice …OK come let’s settle and freshen up ….
They all move towards the house …or can it be a cottage …
Nikhil : guys there is only two rooms
Laksh : OK then swara and kavitha take a room ..we both boys will
Nikhil pulls laksh closer to him
Nikhil : array ..this plan for to enjoy ..lz pzl ….me and kavitha in one room
Laksh slaps his forehead
Laksh (signs) : do whatever u want ….
Nikhil hugs him and kisses his cheeks
Laksh : stay away …
Swara and kavitha laughs …..laksh looks at swara .
Nikhil take a kavitha to a room …upstairs
Laksh and swara looks at each other
Laksh : it’s ok swara …u take the room …I will be in the couch room
Swara : come on lucky ….it’s k
Saying this she drags him inside the room …with the sudden force …
Both of them falls in the bed ….laksh on top of swara ….
Both looks into each other ……
The screen freezes
Plz comment ……Plz Plz ….anyways how was the episode …Plz tell me
Thanks for reading …
Love u all ! ?
21 Comments
awesome and interesting. dont bother about comments .but plzz continue the story and dont stop in middle.plzzzzzzzzz its my request
superb
plzzzz don’t make it swara the Maha oriented just to favor only swara swaragini trp decreased and it’s off air main reason is only focussing swara so u don’t do this to ur face it’s suggestions and else UpTo u
What is your prlm.. It is just an ff .. And its upto writer that who should be lead .. And there r many ffs where ragini was main lead nd triangle love story in most swara was negative or sidecharacter but we swara or swasan or say swalak fans never comes there and comment like this.
What the hell!!if you want ragini as main lead then yaha pe bohot sare ff hain which is based on ragini.. So go there and read them.. If you don’t like swara then don’t read it,no one is forcing you..
plz keep swara as d main female lead……………………………………………………. be it swalak or swasan anyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyything v want swara as d main lead #vluvHellyShah n makers or any news channel or the channel hav not stated any such kind of fact tat d show ended coz of focus turned on swara she didn’t had alone all scenes there were also ragini scenes n ragini turned negative that z y swara brought out her truth n there r already many ffs as ragini as leading character so plz kindly read them not these ones but don’t discourage those who r writing n expressing their stories on this site abt their fav star v nvr ever said abt ragini lyk dis instead v commented on d story lyn not on d characters
Wow intersteting…waiting fr nxt
Mind blowing dear ???? loved it
awesome…..just loved it…
becoming more interesting yr……..
amazing chappy……. 😉 😉
post asap……
Plssss only swara as main female lead…weather it is gonna b swalak or swasan m gonna love it….
Superb se upper episode. Really interesting & fantastic . & don’t think about comments yaar only think about our feeling . & continue soon i am waiting for it. Nice going on. & love u so much ….take care ….gn
Plz make ragsan as a main lead plz siso?
Superb awesome waiting for next chapter
Interesting story.I know that sanskar will be obessive lover but i think that he will be for ragini but he became swara’s obessive lover.But please please keep it only swalak don’t make it swasan.
Superb epi.
Please keep it as ragsan and swalak.your story line is very interesting.Please update soon.all the best.
superbbb dear….
Awesome yaaarr… I loved this plot … But try to keep final pair swasan ..I like swalak and raglak too.. But can’t bear rags an
Superrrr chappy di.. Loved it..Aww,ragini so caring for my doll..Hehe, laksh is scared of his brother??.. Oh no,devil sanky kya karne wala hain??.. Keep going di.. Waiting for nxt..
Take care
Keep smiling?
the epi was best then ever loved it