Hey guys, I am here with the first part of my FF.
AT SONA’S HOUSE, DELHI:
A beautiful girl is shown, lying down on the couch. A little boy comes running to her, and jumps on her.
Boy: Sona Chachi (Hindi word for Aunt)!!!
The girl is none other than Sona.
Sona: Samar!
Yes, the little boy is Saurabh’s son, and Sona’s nephew, Samar. (You can take him as Ishant Bhanushali)
Samar: How many times do I tell you? Please DO NOT call me Samar. Call me Sammy Boy. It’s a cool name, you know.
Sona: How many times do I tell you? Please DO NOT jump on me. It hurts! Stupid Sammy Boy!
Samar: I am not stupid!
Both of them laugh, and Sona cuddles the little boy.
Samar: Come na, let’s go cycling.
Sona: Ok. Take your cycle, and your helmet. Saurabh Dada! Manasi Bhabhi! I am going with Samar to the building compound. He wants to cycle.
MEANWHILE, AT DIXIT MANSION, DELHI:
A man is busy on his laptop. Suddenly, a little girl comes, and hugs him from the back.
Girl: Dev Chacha!
The man is our Dev Dixit, who is busy doing his office work.
Dev: Sara!
And of course, the girl is Neha’s daughter, Sara (You can take her as Harshita Ojha), who has come to stay with Dev for a few days.
Sara: Chacha, come, let’s go cycling.
Dev: Oh! Sara baby wants to go cycling!
Sara: I am not a baby!
Dev: Oh ya! You are six years old. Six is a grand old age indeed! 😀
Sara: CHACHA!
Both of them giggle.
Dev: Ok come, where do you want to go?
Sara: Chacha, my friend lives in a building nearby. That place has a nice compound, where we can go cycling, and I’ll also meet my friend.
The friend is none other than Samar, Sona’s nephew, and Dev and Sara are heading towards Sona’s building after all.
IN THE COMPOUND:
First of all, the compound looks…….. Somewhat like the one in the link provided below:
http://www.matakishi.com/Afghan%20compound%20build%2014%20600.jpg
(If the link is not working, you can check my wall for a picture of the building compound.)
So, Samar and Sara wanted to go cycling around the compound.
Sona: Sammy, I will wait here. You cycle around this place, and come back here.
Samar: Ok.
Samar cycles around and comes back.
Sona: Ok, so after every round, whenever you ring your bicycle bell, I will give my little Sammy Boy a little kiss on his cheek. Ok?
Samar: Yay!!!Ok Chachi.
Samar comes back after every round, rings his bicycle bell, and receives a cute kiss from Sona on his cheek, every time he comes back.
Meanwhile, Dev and Sara reach the same place. While Samar is cycling, Sara notices him.
Sara: Sammy!!! Hey, Samar!
Samar (rides towards Sara): Oh, hi Sara!
Sara: Come on, let’s play. (Looks at Dev) Dev Chacha, you ride my cycle, while both me and Samar go and play.
Dev: I ride your cycle? Oh hello…It’s so small….
Sara and Samar leave, without listening to Dev.
Dev (thinks): Ok, I’ll cycle. Anyway, it will do me some good to exercise for a while.
Meanwhile, Sona is waiting for Samar to arrive.
Dev starts cycling, and he sees Sona looking at the sky, so he can’t see her face. He comes towards her, and rings his bicycle bell, so that Sona will move out of the way.
Sona thinks it is Samar who has come back, turns around, and without noticing, kisses Dev on the cheek.
Dev is hell shocked, and when Sona sees his face, she too is taken aback.
Dev: What on earth? Madam, how the hell can you kiss anyone who passes by? You…….
Dev sees her face, as Sona pushes back the curly locks of hair covering it.
Dev is awestruck by her beauty, and continues staring at her.
Dev (POV): Goodness gracious! This girl is not a human, but an angel of all the worlds. She is like a beautiful goddess. The jet-black hair, russet-brown eyes, perfect nose, cherry lips.
Dev, at once, was in love with her gorgeous looks. In the meantime, Sona felt like an idiot, having kissed a stranger.
Sona (POV): Sona! Tu to gayi! Mudke dekh nahi sakti thi ki kaun aa raha hai? Bas bicycle ki bell sunli, aur kiss kar diya! Pagal kahin ki!
(Sona! You are gone! Couldn’t you have turned and seen who is coming? Just heard the bicycle bell, and you kissed him! Stupid!)
Sona: I – I am so- sor- sorry… I thought……………
But, Dev wasn’t listening. He was still lost in her.
Sona: I am really sorry… (hurriedly walks off)
Now, Dev and Sona have met. But, how will they meet again, and fall in love? To know, keep reading ‘It all depends on my family’.
I hope you liked it. Do comment! Thanks for reading!
36 Comments
Hey Niki,
Aww .. you started your FF. I am commenting directly here because I was legit late and didn’t read it at the correct time.
Anyway, the episode was too good. An amazing start, indeed. Aww .. that kiss part was too cute. Haha.. I’ll be waiting for more of scenes like these and for your next update too. Try updating soon. I’m eager to know the love story you’ve planned for us.
Love,
Ria.
Hey Ria di, thank u so much!!!!!????
I will post soon!!!!!???
Loads of love❤️❤️❤️???
Hai Niki645 i read ur FF its quite intrstng..
Waitimg for nxt epi…
I want an help frm u can u plz tl me how to give Link..??
Thank u so much di!!???
Will post soon?
To give link, you go to the image, then click ‘copy link address’ and then paste it..
Awesomeeeeeeeeee niki❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Sona????
And yeah Sona Samar ki bhua lagi and Dev Sara ke mamu?Okay????
Post soon
Love love❤️❤️
Thank u so much Ayushi!!???
Ya understood!!?
Sorry…. I put Chacha and Chachi by mistake??
Will post asap????
Lots and lots of love❤️❤️??
Heyy…gud strt…loved the part when sona kissed dev…i visualized that…agr aisa show me bhi dikhate
Bt i hv one doubt or confusion…why samar is calling chachi to sona…if he is saurabh’s son he should call her bua…
Nd sara should call dev mama not chacha..
Chachu is father’s yoynger brorher
Nd chachi is wife of father’s younger brother….
Sry for pointing out this…bt it is confusing
Thank u so much!!!!???
Sorry di! That was a mistake???
Will rectify it in next episode???
Thanks for pointing out??
Lots of love??❤️️
Akku, d pic in your dp is mesmerizing..can u tell me d date when dat episode was telecasted?? Plzz..I was in Delhi for attending my cousin’s wedding, so couldn’t watch KRPKAB for 10 days..plzz tell me d date if possible
Thankyou arti…This is episode no 203 …8th december…
Thanx akku dear..
Hey Niki this was awesome loved it post soon?
Thank u so much!!????
Will post asap???
Awesome episode..N d kiss?? hayee
Thank u so much di!!???
Awesome episode dear. But some mistakes was there dev is not chacha of sara he is a mama of sara and sona is a phupi not chachi.
Thank u so much!!!!!!
Yes di, I am so sorry!! Will surely rectify them in next part…??☺☺
It’s ok.?.post the next episode soon.
hey Niki… its too good dear…
and as Princess pointed out some mistakes… its true dear… I hope u vl correct them soon…
BTW… this was superb…. and the kissing scene was hilarious… while reading Dev is riding on Kid’s cycle, I just remember Hritik Roshan in sona “dheere dheere se meri zindagi mein aana – sung by Honey singh…. in which Hritik also rides a kid’s cycle… after imagining Dev like that, I was laughing like anything…
Thank u so much Asmita di!!!!
I will definitely rectify them in next episode…????
Lol???
Lots of love, and thank u veryyyyyyyy much for ur lovely comment???❤❤❤
First of all sorry for the late comment.. Secondly the picture of the compound provided on the link is awesome ??.. Thirdly the episode was awesome awesome.. Just rocked it at the first episode itself..
No probs, and thank u so much???
And I’m very happy u liked the picture ??
Thank u veryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy much once again??
superb…yaar…!!
When dev said Oh hello…It’s so small….h ahahaha????
And the kissing scene was too funny….?
1st episode is Bang on …..Lovely starting…
Thank u so much Priya di!!???
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I am so happy u liked it??
Lots of love❤️️❤️️???
Sorry niki for the late comment…..I’m was quite busy……
Episode was hilarious and superb one…..worth reading…..loved it….. Especially the kiss scene…..? rest the episode was amazing dear……
Keep rocking,
❤❤❤
No probs di!!
Thank u so much for ur lovely comment?????
Lots of love to u❤️️❤️️??
Niki the episode was awesome….?????????
loved it yaar,at the very first episode sona kissed dev ….amazing
post soon
Thank u so much Pari di!!!???
Will post asap??
Love??
Hey Niki di!
Firstly, I’m terribly sorry for the late comment. I had come a bit late from school and then went out to the mall with my family, so I was pretty occupied the entire day. Also, I might not be regular in commenting for a few days since I’ll be out of station. Tomorrow morning, that is the 20th, I’ll be leaving to Mahabaleshwar and I shall return on the 22nd. After that, I’ll be going to my hometown, Agra, on the 25th and will only be back by the 3rd or 4th of January. So basically, all I want to say is that please don’t mind if I don’t read or comment on your articles. I’ll surely catch up with ’em once I’m back.
Secondly, this was damn fabulous! Like, this being the very first episode was superb! Sona kissing Dev was awwww<333
Post soon!
Love ya!<333333333
No probs Anshi!!!???
Enjoy dear??
Thank u so much!!!????
Will post asap ???
Loads of love??????
Sona kissing Dev was just awesome ……I was smiling throughout the episode……. Please post the next part ASAP…..?????????
Thank u so much Vriddhi di!!??
I am so happy u liked it???
Will post soon????
Love??????
awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee epi dear loved the scene of sona kissing dev eagerly waiting update the next epi asap………………………………………………………………….
Thank u sooooooo much di!!!!????
Will post asap??????
Really nice episode Nikki…loved it
Kiss scene was amazing
Post next part soon
Thank u so much Anjali di!!!!
Will post asap!