SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
Heyy, It’s Anjali back with the next chapter!!!
Thnxx for comments and to my silent readers….
THIS IS A SUPER LONG CHAPTER!!!! HAVE FUN!!!
Part 58
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Swalak convo, Sanskaar-Saanvi convo, Saanvi-Laksh convo
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BEFORE STARTING, PLEASE NOTE THAT I HAVE NOT WRITTEN A PART 2 TO CHAPTER 58.. HAVE WRITTEN IT AS CHAPTER 59
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CHAPTER 59
Laksh (loudly) : You do! (softer) Saanvi! I actually…. have something I want to ask you.
Saanvi : Yes?
Laksh : I would like to get to know you better and if we can be friends, I would like to spend my life with you.
Saanvi was shocked.
Saanvi (screeching) : YOU WHAT??
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MEANWHILE
Sanskaar entered the bedroom.
Sanskaar : Swara!
Swara (looking up from her book of designs) : Haan Sanskaar?
Sanskaar (smiling and joining her on the bed) : What’s up?
Swara looked at him in surprise.
Swara : What’s wrong with you?
Sanskaar (looking offended) : Me? Why should something be wrong with me?
Swara (ruffling his hair) : Nothing at all, other than the fact that you’re….
Sanskaar (curiously) : I’m?
Swara (smirking evilly) : Other than you’re a silly idiot.
Sanskaar pouted and got off the bed. Swara laughed and knelt on the edge of the bed putting her arms around a scowling Sanskaar.
Swara (hugging him and whispering) : But you’re still mine, Mr Maheshwari.
Sanskaaar chuckled and put his arms around her. He smirked and moved his hands until he reached Swara’s tickle spot near her elbow. Swara stiffened as she realised what Sanskaar was about to do.
Swara : SANSKAAR! NO… (giggling and moving helplessly) Oh no! Leave m..e…. Annoying creature.. Chhodo! SANSKAAR!
Sanskaar continued the torture and Swara fell plop on the bed with Sanskaar above her. He smiled triumphantly as she glared at him.
Swara : Why did you do that?
Sanskaar : Why did you call me a silly idiot?
Swara : Kyunki you are one.
Sanskaar (rolling his eyes) : And I did that becaue I wanted to.
Swara (raising an eyebrow) : Oh really, Mr Maheshwari?
Sanskaar (happily) : Yes, Mrs Maheshwari… OUCH!
He sat up straight and Swara took the incentive to wriggle herself under him and escape from the room.
Swara (laughing and shouting as she ran) : My SILLY Sanskaar!
Sanskaar (laughing) : Silly, Am I? Ab dekh Swara! I’m going to catch you.
Swara : Never! He chased her through the first floor hallway but damn, She was fast, not to mention he wasn’t running in his usual speed. He chuckled as she stuck out her tongue at him.
Swara : You can’t catch me! You can’t catch me.
Sanskaar (raising an eyebrow) : Oh Really?
He ran after her with renewed vigour and she squealed, moving again. As she turned back and laughed at Sanskaar, the door she was passing opened and she collided soundly with someone.
Swara: UFF!
Sanskaar (with concern) : SWARA!
Saanvi : Oh God!
Laksh : Saanvi! Swara! Are you ok?
The two of them straightened themselves and Swara looked at Saanvi apologetically.
Swara : I’m so sorry. I wasn’t paying attention at all. Are you hurt?
Saanvi (smiling) : Not at all. I’m fine, A little startled perhaps.
Laksh (rolling his eyes) : You shouldn’t be. My ELDER brother and ELDER bhabhi become kids when they’re with each other. (Swara and Sanskaar flushed red) They play hide and seek, complain to their my mommies…
Sanskaar (glaring at Laksh) : Thankfully this ELDER brother also knows how to squash the younger one.
Saanvi (chuckling along with Laksh) : Well! I think it’s cute. (looking at Sanskaar) Sorry to interrupt you both but Swara, Can I talk to you about something?
Swara looked surprised but just looked at Sanskaar and nodded.
Swara : Of Course.
They walked to a nearby room where they heard Sanskaar talking to Laksh.
Sanskaar : Swara ke dramebaaz! What did you do now?
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Swara : So, What did you want to talk to me about?
Saanvi (Without preamble) : Laksh asked me to marry him today.
Swara (eyed widened) : He WHAT?
Saanvi : Or rather, He told me he would like to get to know me better, then marry if we suit.
Swara was delighted, though she was careful to hide her expressions. She put a curious face.
Swara : What did you tell him?
Saanvi : I asked him why. Why marry me when he doesn’t even like me? Why spend time with someone knowing it can’t go anywhere.
Swara nodded. They were valid questions. Saanvi continued.
Saanvi (a perplexed expression on her face) : He said he didn’t not like me. He would love to be friends with me but the fact that I told him I loved him threw him completely. He didn’t know how to act around me.
Swara : What did you reply?
Saanvi : I don’t know, Swara! Laksh feels that we would suit each other and that we could have a happy marriage. I think that could be possible as well… But…
Swara : He didn’t mention love!
Saanvi nodded and blinked back tears.
Saanvi : He told me he wanted to forget Ragini or at least the pain of never getting her. But he never mentioned the word love… Nor did it seem like he would be happy if I told him I love you. I don’t understand…. Does he want this to be a loveless marriage? A society marriage? A marriage of convenience? I don’t know what to do…
Swara smiled sympathetically at the younger girl. She thought for a while and then nodded.
Swara : Why don’t the two of you just get to know each other for a while. Talk about yourselves, common topics anything…. Become firm friends then broach this topic….
Saanvi (after musing for a while) : You are right. That makes sense. No use in jumping to conclusions.
Swara (smiling and standing up) : Don’t worry Saanvi! Even the most difficult problems have easy solutions. As for your marriage being a loveless one, That’s nonsense. You love him a great dealand he knows it. One day he will surely reciprocate it. It may take weeks, months or even years. Men can be extraordinarily stupid when it comes to feelings. But I know that someday Laksh will confess his love for you… Don’t give up hope.
With those words, She gave Saanvi a hug, looked at her brightened face and they left to join the others.
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The 2 women joined Sanskaar and Laksh who were very curious to know what had happened. Saanvi and Laksh went in one direction to talk and made plans to go for a movie later. Swara turned to Sanskaar and smiled.
Swara: Looks like I just found my second devrani!
Sanskaar (a bit doubtfully) : You think Laksh will be able to forget Ragini?
Swara (shrugging) : I am more concerned about when he’ll forget her. I know one day he will give himself completely to Saanvi but the question is when.
Sanskaar (smiling and nodding) : You know, That is the perfect incentive for another challenge… I could challenge you that he will confess within a year or something like that. But… It seems rude to place a bet on someone’s life.
Swara (hugging her shoulders) : Haan Sanskaar! But don’t forget… We still have our game tomorrow, don’t forget!
Sanskaar (looking at her evilly) : Forget the fact that you’re going to lose? There’s no way I’ll forget that Mrs Maheshwari.
Swara (scoffing) : Accha? Mr Maheshwari, Let me tell you the truth…
Sanskaar (interrupting) : Swara! We’ll fight later… Now come with you.
Stopped mid-rant, Swara looked at him surprised. Sanskaar had planned something. She could see it in his eyes. She melted at his sparkling eyes and nodded happily. He closed her eyes with his palms and made her walk, careful to make sure she wasn’t getting hurt. Finally they stopped. Sanskaar removed his hands.
Sanskaar (warning tone) : Don’t open yet.
Swara nodded. She tilted upwards and sniffed. It smelled like she was in the gardens. She could smell flowers…. A whole lot of flowers.
Sanskaar : Ok Swara! Open your eyes now.
She did so and gasped. She was in one of the empty outhouses that were present in the estate, except now they weren’t empty. The entire place was covered with flowers. Precious white lilies, Roses of every colour, orchids in bloom, bright tulips, daisies and off season flowers like lotuses, and every one of them growing from the earth. Even the lotuses were blooming in the water
Swara was transfixed. She had never seen something so lovely. And it was. This indoor garden was incredible. She walked in front in wonder. She had always loved flowers. As she saw them in their prime, healthy and growing, sudden unbidden tears appeared.
Sanskaar (anxiously) : Do you like it? I have been planning this for almost two months now. I got the flowers imported. Don’t worry. I know each plant requires different type of care and I have made arrangements for that. Do you like it Swara?
Swara (whispering) : Why?
She didn’t tell anything else. She didn’t have to. Sanskaar would understand. And he did. He smiled slightly sheepishly which made her heart beat faster. This lovable man of hers was just too adorable.
Sanskaar : Remember the first time I came to Gadodia Nivas. The time when we didn’t like each other.
Swara met his eyes and nodded slowly. He had come to visit Ragini that day but instead had found Swara. She remembered their arguments which were further incensed when Zozo pushed Ragini into the river. She remembered all about the day.
Sanskaar : Remember when I handed you a bouquet? Your face was glowing with delight.
Swara smiled. It had been the first time that someone had brought flowers for her instead of Ragini. Of course he had got a bouquet for Ragini too but he had still thought of her even though Swara supposedly hated him.
Sanskaar : You told me that day that this was the first time anyone had ever thought of you. Or even if you didn’t, it was clear to me. I made a decision later. I never want you to run out of flowers, Shona! You never had any flowers for yourself before. But now… These are all for you. (gesturing towards the plants) I didn’t buy bouquets because I wanted something that would exist forever. Something that would completely yours. All for you.
By now, tears were streaming down Swara’s face. She thought she knew Sanskaar. She thought she knew how much he loved her. But she was wrong. Sanskaar’s love for her was immeasurable.
Swara murmured softly.
Sanskaar (politely) : I’m sorry?
Swara (her voice a bit shaky) : I was giving my thanks to God for giving me a husband like you.
She then ran towards him, launching into him with such a force that he was lifting her. She hugged him tight while he spun her round.
Swara (whispering) : I don’t deserve you.
Sanskaar (shaking his head and setting her down) : You’re not allowed to say that.
Swara : Why?
Sanskaar : That’s a break-up line… I’ve said it before, I know… But I’ve changed my mind. Unless you’re planning to leave me…
Swara (laughing slightly) : Not for all the gold in this world. You’re stuck with me, Sweetheart… (He lifted her again) This was beyond perfect. I love it Sanskaar! Thank you.. Thank you so much!
Sanskaar kissed her cheek and smiled, his chest puffing with pride at the thought that Swara loved his idea. There was something about Swara… Even after spending almost all his time with her, There was still a certain freshness to her. She was energy personified, reason personified, love personified. And he was crazy about her.
Sanskaar (whispering) : You’ll stay with me always?
Swara (astonished a little, but nodding) : I’m yours. I love you Sanskaar!
Sanskaar (shaking his head) : No… I’M yours.
They stood, Swara leaning against Sanskaar’s shoulder and watched the flowers again. Swara’s eyes grew soft as she took in the smell and colours in front of her. Sanskaar however was looking at Swara.
Sanskaar (beaming and thinking) : Oh Lord! Though Swara says she was thanking you and that she got lucky by being with me, I’m the lucky one. There’s no way I ended up with her without you helping me. Thank you, Lord… Thank you so much for giving me my angel.
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PRECAP : The big challenge
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Hey guys… Meeting you all after a long time.. I’m sorry.. First the Tirupati trip and then they cyclone…
Because of the power cuts and everything, I couldn’t finish writing even a small chapter… Only managed to finish today… Will def try to make up for this short chappie..
Hope all you Chennaiites are fine…
I’ve included a lot of swasan in here after a long time… I don’t know how it is… But hopefully you like it 🙂 🙂
Love you all!!!
63 Comments
Hiiiii… Welcome back.. Hope all is fine with you and at your place ya.. Please take care.. We can wait for the chapters.. You don’t have to feel bad.. Even in such conditions you updated… That is so sweet.. ???.. Please take care..
About the chapter.. ???.. It was beyond perfect… Just lovedddd it too much.. :).. Swasan are just way tooooo cute in your story ya.. I just love them.. And I am in love with the story.. Haven’t read anything so beautiful before… The flowers scene gave me goosebumps.. Mindblowing… ????.. What a thought.. Sanskaar was damn sweet and Swasan are just perfect… How can he be so sweet and lovedddd how happy Swara was… She finally got all her happiness.. ????.. The chapter made my day… m sooooo happy… ????.. Thank you soooo much for this wonderful story… Hope all is well between Laksh and Saanvi too.. But nothing in the story can beat Swasan and their love… Amazing and mind blowing… I must say… A biggggg thank you for writing this even thou you have so many problems… God bless you.. ??
Thnxxx nisha!!! ?? sorry for late comment… Couldn’t make time until now… ???
Hope you’re fine… And am really glad you loved the chappie….
And don’t tell thnxx to me…. I loved writing it ??
Anjuuuuu????
First of all, i hope everything is gd and u r fine!?
Now abt the chapter, Swasan????? Do i need to say any more? Swasan is love! And the way u give life to these characters…no one else can! Seriously? Flower Garden???? Can anything be better than this? Its pure bliss!❤
And Laksh and Saanvi! Its working, i guess!?
See… I’m missing Swasan so much these days, yet I find myself around them…coz of ff’s! And what’s better than ur ff to feel the magic of Swasan? and I’m not kidding at all! And promise me, u will still continue writing on Swasan!
Anyways, take care?
Love you!!!❤
Thnxxx ashu… Miss you Soo much… ??? Yupp. Everything is fine here .. ?? what about you??
U have to be kidding about my ff… But ofc ill write about our swasan… ❤❤❤❤
Swasan Fandom foreverrr…
Love you ??? lets talk properly soon….
how sweet of you, well it’s written perfectly and I truly love it. I thought you also would stop updating this story…. But I’m happy you post this chappy 🙂
I don’t mind if it’s a bit shorter than regularly posted chaps, and I enjoyed reading it.
Will wait patiently for the next post, take care…
Thnxxx rosh ??? ur words really mean a lot ❤
Am really glad you loved the chappie and this ff… ???
aww
anjali. 2dy epi is jst.,,,
huuhuuhu
🙁
im again speechless!
yup i missed u , mmai & swasan alot!
my fav part is sankys suprise.
aww! i again fall 4 him! nt his gift do dat 2 me bt his wrds!
hatts off anjali dr. u write it soo well.
still nw im in their garden! and after cmntng u im gonna sleep in there nly.
dnt knw y ur each and evry epi hs sm magic! i cnt even look here and there while reading it. even my fmly gt 2 knw when i read ur stories! cz im nt reacting 4 them! then they also asking me r u reading anjalis ff?
lols
enough f my blabering!
oh dr i 4gt 2 tell u!
dr i saw ur msg bt cdnt rply cz da 4n im using hs sm prob and cdnt rply 4 msgs. even i cdnt use wattpad 4m dis 4n.
sm1 stole my 4n. so using dis. huuuh
waiting 4 nxt epi f dis and snfm
keep writing
be happy always
lv ya
Heyy chanu… Have a lot to tell you… So wait for my reply… Will reply in the end ???
Aww…. Chanu…. Thnxxx Soo much ??
Enjoy in the garden… ?? ill name it after you like it…
And ur family knows too… Haha… ??. Sorry for replying so late…
Love you sooo much!!!!! ❤❤❤
Huh!!!!!!!
*frowning
u r saying me nt 2 apologise bt here ur apologising!!!
Sooo bad..
Rly u ll nt belive me hw much I like dat part… I read it at least 15 tyms till nw…
hawwww…
its sooo lvly…
Thank u 4 writing dis much beautifully dr..
****Happy new year!!****
Awesome dear……..Please update soon.
Thnxxx febi ??
Awesome
Thnxxx zeestum ??
Out of words to comment
Awww… So sweet of you mariya… Thnxxx ❤❤
Awesome update… pls post next update soon…
Thnxxx dharshaini..
Am half done with the next epi… Will post soon ???
Awesome….
Thnxxx soujanya ??
Heyy.. Awesome chappie.. ??
Surprise was ???
Love you.. ❤?
Thnxxx nea ???
Glad you loved it..
Love you tooooi ??
Loved it Anjali. Superb awesome. Take care. ?
Thnxxx dhara dii… How are you?? Miss you a lot..
I’ve been meaning to ask this for a long time.. Are you on fb?? I don’t remember if I’ve asked this before…
Take care too diii…. Wish you a very happy new year in advance ?????
Superb……
Thnxxx Purvi 😀 😀
awesome
Thnxxx Anu 😀 😀
Good going
Thnxx Tani 😀 😀
Simply amazing chappie!!!!
You r such a talented writer..you know what ur swasan scenes take me to a la la land…!!!! swasan…..and their love….is something beyond expresion in your ff. i simply loved it??
Since SR got over i m craving for swasan but you people’s writings quench the thirst to some extent. Plz never stop writing you are truly phenomenal…
Loads of love to u Anjali!!!!?
Take care sweetheart…??
Thnxxx soo much DA.. La la land.. haha 😛 😛
Loved the movie… <3
Am really touched by ur words :* :8
Ofc.. Will never stop <3 <3 LOTS OF LOVE TO YOU TOOO 😀 😀 😀
Do keep in touch 😀
Amazing chapter ?
Swasan ❤️
Thnxxx Simi 😀 😀
SWASAN!!! :*:*
Onve again u created magic wid swasan babies ???
Loved swasan n dat surprise of sanskar ???
Aww.. thnxx Arshaanya 😀 😀 Glad you loved it… <3 <3
hey no need to say sorry dear… We can understand your situation… I’m happy that everything is fine now… take care of yourself… now coming to the chappy, it was just ( what should I say) I’m speechless yaar… In your ff SWASAN have a divine love story… eagerly waiting for the next part…
Ty so much Namra 😀 😀 It’s awfully sweet of you to understand….
And am really glad you liked the epi… Divine 😮 😮 Lol.. Idk about that… But am glad you read it…. 😀 😀
Awesome….loved sanskar’s gift. It just brought tears….touching.
Yaar….i m gonna burst into laughter if i see the words “will suit “…all the Bridgertons r obsessed with the phrase.
Waiting for d next ep already….will they play pall mall again?
Thnxxx vyshu… ???. Haha ikr.. Will suit ❤❤
Yess they’ll play pall mall… ???
n thank u ANJALI for giving me MR AND I chapter 59
Aww… So sweet… Thanks sanji…
Don’t know what to say..
speechless..d last garden part was soooo beautiful..loved it..tc..
Thnxxx so much kumu ??
It’s.. No words.. Loved swasan scenes and sankys surprise.. It’s beyond awsm..Hope laksh and sanvi come together.. Thanks a lot for giving swasan lovely scenes..I am missing them…Keep going dear.. Waiting for nxt..
Now coming to you,how’s u??Do you know about Eva??Eva ne tu chod dhi kya??
Take care
Keep smiling?
Love you loads..Muaaah???
I’m here nanand ji….i’m so lazy ki mene login bhi na kiya….soo..hn mere TU chod diya…Anji ne btaya ki tujhe meri yaad arahi thi…so isiliye….agayi 😀
Evuuuu…I missed you so much…Aww, cho cweet of u???..What!!tumne TU chod dia hain…But why??Don’t tell me basher ki wajah se,urghhhh..
Missed u too..Eva na sunti kisi basher ki baat?? and I left TU becuz padhai ka khub saraa pressure h??
Aww,cho cad.. Koi na kabhi kabar comment section(anjalis ff) pe bathe karlena…
Thnxxx nanandji… ???
Glad.you l9ved it…. Aur eva se bhi baat ho gyi na ????
Love you…. ❤❤
Awesome dear……loved it so much……
Thnxxx milestone… ??? am glad you loved it.. ???
Awesome..
Thnxxx afra…. ???
Awesome like always.. hope ur fine anjali
Thnxxx navi ?? am perfectly fine… What about you??
internet came? today morning only it came didi. two weeks i did’nt come to TU *pout* well didi, coming to the chapter, it was soooooooooooooooo beautiful. it was so nice. i loved it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much, even more than pani poori *wink* haha… sorry for comparing with pani poori didi, but thats my most favourite. well didi, how was your journey? where is my laddoo? don’t give reasons, i already commented that i want laddoo in the previous chapter itself. you have to give it to me, otherwise i will
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think think think, urgh i dont know *pout* i am very bad in giving dhamkis.
once again, chapter was just toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo amazing
Haha… Raina… Ur sooo cuteee… I wanna pull ur cheeks.. ??
Am really glad you loved it more than pani poori… It means a lot ???
And laddoo… Ummm I don’t like laddoo… What about gulab jamun or rasgulla??
Love youuuu. ❤❤
Love you too didi. You told that you went to tripathi na? That’s why I asked ladoo coz its famous there. But even I don’t like ladoo more than it I like kaju katli
Totally loved it❤??
Thnxxx ariba…. Glad you loved it… ???
Love you ??
Love u too?❤❤
Anjali di…after months i read ur ff?missed ur ff sooo much….n u rocked asusual…u made me cry???waiting for next chapter?n pls dont leave swasan ffs?like swasan left us?love u so much?happy new year?stay blessed?❤