No bakbak… Let’s start the story…
‘supppeeeeerrrrr heeeerooooo ‘
Sanskar turn quickly… He looks here and there and close his eyes… A tear drops…
He sits on the stairs and watch a couple is eating ice cream and laughing… Newly wedded… Red white chudha is the sign of that… He smiles… Again he looks around and then at the temple… 7 months ago it was nothing but a long banyan tree and beneath that a idol of bajrangbali… Where they tied…
Sanskar looks at the temple entrance…
Sanskar : this is bad… Bajrangbali… You fulfill her wish but not mine… Why??? Every week i come here with only one hope that… As you gave her… Her love… Like that you will give me my love…
Sanskar cries saying that…
He goes to house… He enters in the room… He looks at the big photo of their selfie after marriage… He smiles… This was the only photo of swara he had…
Sanskar : swara… Today also you didn’t come… But again i hallucinate your voice…
He sits on the bed and engross in his thoughts…
6 months ago… Sanskar determined to not to think about swara… But as i said heart will not convince…
Sanskar engrossed himself in the work… He did all kind of things to forget swara… No no that means not any other girl or drinks…
But 2 months later…. Sanskar was fade up of his life… Swara’s memory… He can’t remove it…
He is exhausted now… In this 2 months he never tried to contact with her or see her…He is tired of running from His own life… He was sitting in a bajrangbali temple where he used to go… Priests know him from childhood…
Sanskar was thinking about his life when he feels a hand on his shoulder…
‘swara ‘he turns… But find a old priest…
Sanskar : oh baba ji…
Baba ji frowns… Swara??? Girl?? Who is she??
Sanskar (avoid eye contact) : no… No… No one babaji…
Baba ji smiles…
Baba ji : sanskar i know you from childhood… Now spit out the truth…
Sanskar looks at him… And breaks down… He tells everything… After saying…
Sanskar : baba ji… I did wrong… I shouldn’t think about her… But but i can’t resist my self… Ye dil manta hi nei… I did a sin right?? He cries a lot…
Sanskar : i am sorry… I am not a true worshiper… I tried a lot but… But i can’t…
He holds baba ji’s hand…
Sanskar : punish me… Please punish me…
Baba ji (smiles) : no my child… Its not a sin… You like someone… Love your wife… It’s very good… We brahmachari don’t do merriage and all… But it doesn’t mean we hate them… Or anything like that… Pairs are creation of god… And see bajrangbali only makes the pair of you and swara… You can’t control our heart… It will never listen to you… And if it wantsHer then give her… Give what it wants… Bajrangbali sirf brahmachario k nei sab k… If you fall in love with a girl that doesn’t mean that you are not a true worshiper… Bajrangbali khud ram ji or sita ji k bhakt the… Ram ji jo sita ji se bohot payar karte the… Agar wo in sab k khilab honge toh kya wo unke bhaqt hote??
Sanskar listen his words… His eyes starts sparkling…
Sanskar : that means… That means… I can love her?? …
Babaji laughs…
Babaji : pagal… Go bring her… You are giving pain to her and to you tooo…
Sanskar(happy tears) : i… I… Will go now… I will bring her back… I will convince her… Thank you so much bajrangbali… Thank you baba ji…
He rush to his car… He looks at the watch… 6 pm… He starts journey… He buys chocolate and flowers for her… He reached near her mansion and runs to the front gate… But gets shock to see a big lock is hanging
Sanskar’s heart skips a beat… He takes out his phone and calls swara’s number… It’s switched off… Shekhar’s also…
‘no no no… I… I can’t loose her ‘..
He dials gadodia group of industries number… But it’s evening right?? Office is closed… He goes to neighbors… They told him they shifted about one month ago.. Where?? They don’t know…
He goes to his house… All night he can’t sleep… He keeps on trying swara’s number… He search his fb account… Send mails and voice messages to her mail id… No reply… He cries a lot…
Next day he goes to gadodia Group of industries office…
Sanskar : i wanna meet with mr Shekhar gadodia…
Receptionist : i am sorry sir but he is not here…
Sanskar : where is he…
Receptionist : i am sorry sir… But he told us not to give any information about him to anyone…
Sanskar pleaded every person but no one help her… He tries to search by his own but no information… Shekhar has closed all the doors to get information about him and swara…
Fb ends…
Sanskar’s thoughts break by a phone call…
His friend laksh…
Sanskar (wipes his tears) : hey dude…
Laksh : saley sanskar k bachche… Where are you…
Sanskar : in home… Why??
Laksh (in disbelief) : in home??… Saley you didn’t come in my engagement… You didn’t come in my mehendi function… Today is sangeet yaar… Please come today na…
Sanskar : laksh wo… I…
Laksh : sanskar yaar please… No wo main… Jaldi aa… Warna uthake laungi…
Sanskar : ok baba… Aunga… Tell me place…
Laksh : taj hotel…
Sanskar : ok coming…
Sanskar Looks at swara’s photo…
Sanskar :swara when we will meet… I also marry you with all rituals…
He smiles sadly and gets ready in sherwani…
Taj hotel…
The whole hall is decorated beautifully… After all best heart specialist laksh kapoor’s wedding.. Sanskar comes with Bouquet in hand…
Laksh welcome him warmly…
Laksh : finally u came… Now listen tomorrow whole day u will stay with me… Yaar i am so alone here…
Sanskar just smiles… Don’t know why his Heart is beating very fast…
Laksh : sanskar what is this beard and all… You are brahmachari i know… Now wants to go Sanyas also??
Sanskar chuckles…
Laksh : a66a sun… Today there is a competition between girls side and boys side… You will lead our side…
Sanskar : what?? No laksh please…
Laksh : Please yaar… Where is our college days guitarist sanskar…
Sanskar (smiles sadly) : dead…
Laksh : no he is just sleeping… Wake up him man…
As we were talking… Sanskar’s wife with her girl’s team comes down…
Laksh smiles looking at them…
Laksh : sanskar you just stay… I will make you meet with my wife…
Sanskar nodes with smile… Laksh Leaves…
He starts to look here and there… Just then his eyes falls on…. (hi hihi what u think swara??? Nope baby… It’s not swara) falls on the big board where it’s written beautifully that ‘LAKSH WEDS SWARA’
Sanskar steps a back…
‘no… No… It’s must be any other swara… There will be so many swara in the world right?? ‘he tries to convince him…
Just then…
Laksh : sanskar look… My wife swara…
He turns immediately… But alas! His wife… His love standing there…with laksh… Laksh’s one hand is around her shoulder… Swara looks at him… Her feet froze… Both looks at each other…
Laksh : swara what happened…(no response… So loudly) swara…
Swara comes in sense with jerk and looks at laksh..
Laksh : what happened…
Swara nodes in no…
Laksh (smiles) : ok toh chalo…
Both comes in front of sanskar…
Sanskar’s gaze is fixed on swara…
Laksh : swara my best friend sanskar… Sanskar my would be wife swara…
Laksh pulls swara side wise and and hit his head with her side wise…
Sanskar’s blood boil… Swara just standing there numb looking at the floor…
That time someone calls laksh…
Laksh : you both talk… I will come… Just a minute…
Both swara and sanskar stood there… Sanskar was still looking at her with mix emotion… Love sad happy anger…
After few minutes he broke the trance and takes a deep breath… He forward the Bouquet…
Sanskar (choked voice) : cong… Congratulations…
Swara looks at himm sanskar was looking other side as he can’t ser her as others…
Swara (mind) : not a bit change… Why you send him god… Why…
Swara : how are you (teary eyes)…
Sanskar (jerks his head towards her) : why… Why are you asking…
Sanskar looks at her with blood shot eyes…
Swara (mind) : still hates me..
Swara looks down… Sanskar was about to tell her further… But compose seeing laksh is coming towards them…
Laksh : chalo.. Function will start in few minutes… (looks at swara) chalein patni ji…
Swara nodes… Laksh takes her with him…
Sanskar’s every limb even every hair of body is screaming… ‘take her… She is yours’…
Sanskar close his fist…
Laksh looks behind…
Laksh : sanskar… Come na…
Function started… Swalak was sitting there… Competition started… Sanskar was Continuously staring at swara…
Swara’s pov…
6 months… After 6 months i see him… He has changed a lot… Beard and all… He is still angry with me… Why… Am i that much bad… 3 months before when papa told me to marry laksh i didn’t agree… How can i… I am already married… Chahe jaise bhi ho… Jis halat mein ho… I am married… Whether he accept or not but the fact is we are married… And he did not give me devorce…
Swara’s pov ends… Laksh insist sanskar to sing…
Sanskar comes on stage with guitar…
‘ Kabhi gardishon ka maara
Kabhi khwahishon se haara
Roothe chaand ka hai chakor
Zara se bhi samjhote se
Yeh parhez rakhta hai kyun
Maane na kabhi koi zor
Duniya jahaan ki bandishon ki
Yeh kahaan parwaah kare
Jab kheenche teri dor
Kheenche teri dor…
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore’
(sanskar sing this looking at swara with tearful eyes… His soul is screaming to hug her embrace her tightly… But can’t… He was trying to reach her heart with his songs… Swara also can’t control and starts to sing next lines)
Swara ‘ Rookhi-sookhi dil ki hai zameen
Jaane kahaan gum hui nami
Meri ummeed hai teri baarishein
Ye sahe kayi baar pyaar ke
Tujhe har baar haar ke
Seekhe phir bhi kabhi nahi saazishein’
(laksh looks at her amusingly… Then looks at sanskar… Who are sharing a deep painful Passionate eyelock…. Laksh become confused… He slightly pat on her shoulder… Swara comes in sense with jerk and looks at him… Laksh ask her what… Through eyes…swara nodes in no then again look at sanskar)
Sanskar ‘ Ho.. tere liye aaj khud se hi bhaage hain
Himmat ke tukde bator
Ho bhaage zamaane se
Chhup ke dabe paanv jaise koi chor
Jaise koi chor…
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore
Khamoshiyon ki sooraton mein
Dhoondhe tera shor
Dhoondhe tera shor
Manchala.. mann chala teri ore.. (repeats)’
(Sanskar’s soul goes to swara…. Singing this lines… Swara’s soul also gets up…. Both hugs each other tightly… Sanskar kiss her whole face… And join their forehead… Then helplessly moves back… Goes in respective bodies…)
Function got over… Sanskar looks at swalak who is now standing very close… Laksh is feeding swara with hands and giving poses for photos… Sanskar can’t take it any more and runs from there…
Next day wedding day…
Swara is getting ready… When her papa comes…
Swara : papa…
Shekhar (smiles and cares her hair) : jaldi se ready ho ja… And listen… Whom you are going to marry give him your whole heart…
Swara : papa please… You gave me your swear that’s why i am doing this merriage… But i will always sans…
Shekhar : swara… (he close his eyes and sighed) look swara… He is your past… He don’t love you… Just move ahead swara…
Swara gives no reaction… Shekhar looks at her then Left the room… Soon laksh’s baarat comes there… Girls who were making swara ready giggles and tease her and runs out… Swara was half ready.. Necklace and earrings are on desk… Swara’s friends told her to wear this herself… But swara was lost…
Just then she feels someone is making her wear a necklace… She looks up at the mirror and find sanskar… She was all numb… Sanskar continued with earrings… He completes and cover her head with pallu…
Sanskar was about to go… Swara stands up and holds his hand… She looks at the necklace… It’s a beautiful necklace but a old one…
Swara : what is this ??
Sanskar (chocked voice) : your gift… Congratu..
Before he could complete… He feels a burning sensation in his right cheek…
Swara holds his collar and pulls him…
Swara : how can you do this with me?? Kaisi pati ho tum… Didn’t your blood boiled seeing your wife touched by other… Seeing her married to other man… Are you a man even?? No.. You are not… Because a man will never let her wife marry to other… But no you are making me ready for my marriage… I just hate you… Just hate you…
She slaps him repeatedly…
She cries… Sanskar was all numb and bearing everything… Just then two girls come and takes her…
Sanskar sits with thud and cries miserably…. Swara goes to marry laksh…
7 months later…
Sanskar looks at swara’s pic with sad face…
‘i gave you so much pain swara… So much pain… I will never forgive myself for Giving you this much pain… I am sorry ‘
A tear drops… He rest his head against his fist… Suddenly he feels a hand near him… He holds the hand pulls and make fall on his lap…
Person : aaao… Idiot…
Sanskar (with concern) : sorry… Did i hurt you??
Person nodes in no and pecks his lips to which sanskar widen his eyes and close his mouth with hand ???????
Person : you can never hurt me… My superhero…
(yes u guessed right it’s swara…) Swara smirks at his reaction… Adjust herself on his lap properly and starts kiss his cheek and necks sensuously… Sanskar stiffened and wide his eyes and makes swara stand on ground…
Sanskar : what are you doing ???????????????
Sanskar left the room chanting jay bajrangbali… Jay bajrangbali… ???
Swara ???frustratedly stamps her foot and cross arms near chest… And makes a pout face and starts to curse sanskar… Suddenly a guy entered wose eyes only shown… Else full body was covered with clothes shawls muffler… Hand gloves…
He tap swara’s shoulder… Seeing him swara gets scared…
Swara : aaaaaaaa???
Seeing her shouting… That guy also starts shouting… : aaaaaa…
Swara stops and beats him…
Swara : sssshhhh sssshhhh… Stop shouting… Sanskar ???
Sanskar : you shout that’s why??? ????
Swara : what is this… Why you have covered yourself…
Sanskar : to save my dignity from you…
Swara : ????sanskar…
Holds her cute baby bump and starts fake cry…
Swara : look baby… Papa dont love your mamma anymore…
Ye swara is 5 months pregnant…
Sanskar (slaps his head) : baby tell your mamma… It’s because of you only… When you will come out na then again papa will not let her sleep at nights…
Swara widen her eyes and blushes hard…
Both hugs…
Swara : my super hero…
Sanskar : woh toh hu… That’s why toh sadi k din uthake laya tha mandap se…
Flashback…
Sanskar was crying and listen priest is chanting mantra…
Sanskar : no no this can’t happen… I will not let her go…
Sanskar runs and sees laksh and swara are exchanging garlands…
Sanskar runs to them and throws the garlands… All become shocked for sudden action… Sanskar takes the vermillion and and mangalsutra… He makes her wear them and picks her and makes her fall on shoulder… It’s just happen in some few seconds… When all comes back in sense then already sanskar has gone locking them in that big hall…
Sanskar makes her sit in car and drive back to his house… Then picks her in bridal style and looks at her who is already looking at her painfully yet lovingly… Both Share an eye lock…
Sanskar takes her to their room… Swara smiles seeing their photo of 1st marriage wala selfie…
Sanskar makes her stand… And stand in front of her with guilt and pain… Swara looks at him for some time…
Then…
Swara (irritated) : ???what… You bring me here to stand like this??(no response) Will you not do anything?? (no response) ?
Swara (frustrated) : ok… Then i am going to laksh…
She starts moving… But before she could understand… She was pulled and feels rough hot flesh on her lips… She takes full half minutes to understand that actually sanskar is kissing her hungrily… She becomes and happy and response back… Both were crying… Both departs due to lack of oxygen… Both looks at each other… Sanskar again take her in a hungry kiss… And starts to push her towards bed… Both falls…
Swara is beneath sanskar… Both again departs…
Swara : not bad mr brahmachari… You are a good kisser…
Sanskar smiles and buried his face in her neck both dropped in to a blissful moments… 2 souls actually met…
Later shekhar forgave sanskar… Laksh smiles at them and later married to ragini his co doctor…
Fb ends…
Sanskar kiss her forehead…
Sanskar : love you…
Swara : love you too my superhero…
End…..
Guys i am sorry… Wo i slept at night… And its a super long chappy so… I am sorry….
(… I want to say that… Priest Sayings … It’s my opinion… I don’t know whether it’s right or wrong… If you feel it wrong then please ignore… I don’t hurt anyone’s belief… So please please please forgive me if i say any wrong word….)
And now…
I AM NOT ANY A. S… I EVEN DON’T KNOW HER… IN EVERY CHAPPY… KOI NA KOI A. S… A. S BOLTE RAHTE HO… STOP IT YAAR… I AM PIKACHU… UNDERSTAND… IF ANYONE CALL ME A. S NA THEN I WILL ?????????????????
my new ss… Which will complete in Christmas holiday…
http://www.tellyupdates.com/life-partner-ss-part-1
http://www.tellyupdates.com/life-partner-ss-part-2/
43 Comments
swasan’s marriage was so funny……..loved it
Wow.. Superb
Awesome… Amazing…
So good n funny…loved it.
Awesome…finally u complt…n abut a.s. she is also a writr here who wrote give me ur hand to hold… n maybe who r saying dat u r a.s. coz ur n her writng pattrn n thot matches a lot….n plzzzz dont blast….n chappy was vry nice…come soon wid anodr story pikachu….
loved it pikachu
Pikachuuuuu !! how could u use that song ” MANCHALA”… it brings tears in my eyes.. !! i can’t describe my feelings after reading that song, i could only remember my SwaSan.. !! only SwaSan.. !! Love d part… LIVED d song.. !! Thnk u dear.. !! stay blessed.. !! ;-*
Me too Di… Manchala is very special for me also…
aww!!!!!!! just too cute, funny, amazing, romantic……. it was too good dear
Awesomee dear ??
Awesome dear…
Amazing
awesome
Awesome ??
Superb
awww…..i love this song …..nice ts…..loved it
Superb
More than awesome
awesome and soon come with new ff
Wow ..how cute it is..I loved it yar….
wow !!!!!!
loved it !!!!!!
finally brahmachari got some akal 😉 😉
Awesome pickachu….!!!!!!!! Loved it dear…..!!!!!!!
Just loved it dear….
Love u for this lovely update n yar pikachu plz write its eplouge also its a request plzz write it…. Urs all time silent reader n plzz soon update ur new ts love u loads
shadi ke din uthake laya tha mandap se
sanskar locked them in the big hall
i am going just rofl over it
everything was so emotional and then suddenly this tadhka but i loved it
sorry for not commenting before
Awesome….loved it
awesome..
Awesome…..
Piku loved it…swasan was so cute…sanky saving his dignity after making swara pregnant..really sanky..
awesome
Nice one dr