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Six months ago, after Lakshya disappearance, accusing Sanskar of being the reason of her sister’s pain and his brother’s missing, Swara put a condition on their marriage… until her sister’s husband comes back, she’ll not fill her maan with sindoor… until his brother is back, there is no relation between them.
Sanskar is then ignoring that she a week ago, after he declared that their relation is over on phone, she had an accident hearing that he was about killing his brother and she lost the baby she was about to announce to him that night.
And not letting him explain her what really happened that day he fought with his brother, she doesn’t that his brother’s words announcing to him that she tried to shoot herself some days ago to prove his innocence, his mocking tone wishing that she was really dead, made him lost his control and in a mad moment he did what he till now doesn’t regret.
Then, on that night he invited her to a landing area on the top of an isolated mountain. Now that Laksh is back, moment is about fulfilling promises… filling her maang with sindoor, wearing her mangal sutra to become his wife again… putting on her SS pendant and her beautiful bangels to become his princess again… he’s fulfilling the last promise he gave her, punishing her that she broke their relation… a punishment she promised to accept and asked for after a terrible confrontation between love and hatred.
But, waiting for a punishment to her, she’s shocked to see him take his car and rush toward the void… in one moment, he fulfill the kasam he gave her when he asked her to break all relations with Maheshwaris…
Was is real? …Sanskar is really no more?… Swara has really lost him forever?… Could she be Swara again after being SwaSan?
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This the second part of my first Swasan Fanfiction named: “now that i fulfill all promises i made to you, princess… i’ll punish you!”
You can find a summary of it here with links to the 7 chapters of it:
http://www.tellyupdates.com/now-fulfill-promises-made-princess-ill-punish-summary/
NOTE:
I’ll be happy to read your feedbacks, critics and advices.
Again, English is my 3 rd language, so sorry for errors, misused expressions and orthographic/typing mistakes.
Mahira
* Shameless Swasan’s fan club leader *
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32 Comments
Nice……
thank you dear 🙂
Loved it mahira dear I was waiting for your story please do update
Thank you so much
Loved it dear I was waiting for your story
awesome..
Thank you so much
Nice
thank you so much… episode 1 is already online 🙂
nice start dear 🙂
thank you so much 🙂
Gald to c u bck…
Loved it
Continue soon
thank you so much dear 🙂
Nice..
thank you 🙂
Awesome
thank you dear , hope you’ll like the 1 episode too (it’s already on line)
Awesome
Good one
thank you tani ji (i always dreamet to say it like Surrinder sahni^^)
Awsm …
Thank you my dear, hope you’ll like episode 1 too 🙂
Awesome starting…loved it dear
thank you so much dear 🙂
hope you’ll like the 1st episode too 🙂
ugh ugh ugh… better i run to next part..*wuuuuuuuuzzzzzzzzzzzz
run Forest … run!!! *it’s an old movie famous replic*
thanks sweetheart *Sanskar’s husky voice*
awwww
mahira di!
did u uplode season 2?
omg!
im sooo hpy!
bt bt
4gv me im soo late here na!
cholly! with puppy dog eyes!
i cnt wait 4 read 1 epi. so bye bye hv 2 go!
uff im rly exited 2 read it!
dnt knw wt ll my sanskar gonna do 2 his swara!
hayeee
keep writing
be happy always
lv ya
sweet little chote… waiting for your comment na!
Hope you’ll like it 🙂
diiiiii wowww I’m so happy to see this chapter….
one more request will u in easy language explain what happened in this chappy because the English u use is little bit complicated for me… I m not able to understand what’s future what’s past or what’s his/her imaginations…. so will u explain…
Hum Aditi my dear, here it’s just resuming what happened before and introducing to the story by talking about the 1st season (this chapter is before “episode 1” :
– Their separation after Laksh’s missing
– Sanskar doesn’t know that on that day he fights with Laksh, Swara was shocked and had an accident in the stairs, she lost her baby and decided to never tell him about it.
– Laksh’ is back and Sanskar asks Swara to meet him to fulfill her promise, now that her sister’s husband is back, she will be his wife again.
– After fighting, he gives her the necklace and bangels (those he offered her before and she sold them for Bade papa surgery) surprising her by his romance.
– He makes her wear her mangal sutra and puts sindoor on her forehead
– He then dances with her talking about how bad he felt when ages ago she fell in the river (Rajjad issue) and that everybody thought that she’s dead.
– Suddenly his anger is back and he tells her about what she did after he promised to kill himself if she have any contact with Maheshwari family, he’s mad at her that she tried to kill herself to prove his innocence (by shooting herself when Durga Prasad saved her at the last moment)
– She’s shattered and tries to explain herself but he doesn’t let her
– when she thinks that he’ll punish her by harming her, he tells her that he’ll fulfill a last promise and punish her by his act, he lets her, takes his car and jump with it in the void…
is he dead???
It’s that what will the season about… episode 1 is the first chapter 🙂
thannnnkkkkk uuuuu diiii…
you’re welcome ^^