Hi guyz how are u all I am just pissed I am ? writting it 4th tie s
Let it be what can I do now so lets start our chappy
A car is shown which stops near a big mansion it was very beautifull mansion decorated beautifully a gir stepped out of the car she was looking vary beautifull,she was wearing a crop top and blue jean.
GIRLS POV
Ohh finally I came home after 15 days of tireing trip it oh sorry sorry first let me introduce my self I am Swara, Swara gadodia(yeh she is our beautifull Swara) u must be wondering hiw I came here so it is my house I have gone to my materna grandmother house ? for vacation Ya I know vacations are not over but I came here as I was feeling bored there my mum is there only she wants to live there some more days so I left winth my papa my brother is with mumma only as u know how boys are mumma stooge so he is there only my papa also dropped me here and left I am alone in my house but it is common forme as my mumma is working woman so when she goes to office and by chance its holiday than I left alone in house but honestly speaking I enjoy this time because there is nobody to stop you ? ok now I stop my blabber and take some rest as i am relly tired so bye guyz meet u later………………stop Off oho I forgot my my car keys in my car only ? ?? now what should I do papa has neither I have mob because it is also in my caronly ??…………oh now I remember there will be spare keys which mumma give to Annu aunty I can use them see I am so genius ?? oh u must be wondering who is Annu auntu so lemme tell she is our neighbour cum mumma’s frnd mumma trust her so shehas given spare keys to her I will take from her lets go……… Here we are I rang the bell and a servant opens the door let me comeI came in the hall and there I saw a boy sitting and studying millions of question came in my mind about him who is he what he is doing here etc just thaan tannu came oh she is daughter of Annu aunty she is of my age and we are like best frnd and hugged me i toohuged her and than she asks me I here but we were supposed to come after some days na than I told her that I came with papa an..d than I narrates whole incident amd ask for keys she brings than give to me than I asked her about the boy than she tells that he is her cousion and he has came here for study and will live with them only honestly speaking when I came to know that he will live here only than i got upset that from now onwards I cannot came tannu home frequently as I was doing before because I have phobia from boys I just dont like them but than I take leave from there because I was really tired of trip
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CHARACTER INTRO
SWARA GADODIA : A CAREFREE GIRL OF AGE 13
SHEKHAR AND SHARMISTHA GADODIA PARENTS OF SWARA loves thier daughter
SHAN GADODIA YOUNGER BROTHER OF SWARA naughty boy
RAGINI GADODIA : OLDER SIS OF SWARA STUDIES IN COLLEGE
Shivanya, Neha Isha frnds of Swara
Supporting actor dada dadi chinki bua dida
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Thanks for reading this boring story pls drop your comment and tell me I should continue or not
ok bye take care
28 Comments
Good start… Continue writing dr……
thanks dear…….?
Awesome dear nd plzz continue
thanks Anu
Wwooww????
Interesting post the next part soon waiting eagerly for it……….
thanks Anurta btw 1st epi is posted
Awesome adi…
Nxt one soon..
thanks dear 1 epi is also posted u can check it out
nyc
thank u so much Anu
Even I am 13 I can understand her well.. Awsm
thanks liya
nice..
thanks for commenting dear
Nyc
thänks Arshaanya
V.nice concept dear.. Plz continue.. BTW, why are pissed off??Any problem??
Take care
Keep smiling?
thanks Uma……?
She is pissed of because..she is writing the entire chapter 4th time..
Nice. continue soon.. TY.
thanks kakali btw 1st epi is also posted do read
Continue…its great….i will love to read teenage version of swaragini…
thanks Neha…. u r that only na with whom I have played
yep…yes
Hey 2 amazing dea..plzz continue..I wud luv 2 read it more
Thank u so much sanswa di (I can call u dii na) 1st epi is also posted if u have free time do read that
Wil u plz send me link den..cz I jst cnt search n all due 2 some lack of tym..?
Well if u r younger dan me den u r free 2 call me Effie di..
Ops my silly mind..myself Effie yr..Nam to suna hoga..arey don’t u read newspapr..or else don’t u hv TV box at least?
YEP I WATCH TV BUT HAVE HEAR YOUR NAME THEY WERE SAYING A MAD HAS BROKEN THE JAIL AND IS MOVING OUTSIDE ? U R THE SAME NA
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……….JUST KIDDING DI DON’T TAKE IT SERIOUSLY IF U WILL TAKE IT SERIOUSLY I AM READY WITH A GUN WELL THANKS DII HERE IS YOUR LINK
http://www.tellyupdates.com/swasan-love-teenage-love-story-episode-1/#comment-3101383