[What’s this? I bawled as I saw him sleeping with another girl.
Prag…Pragya, He stammered a bit.
Amit? How can you do this? I shouted again!
Pragya you… You are getting it wrong. He tried to calm me down.
What? You slept with another women? I Sternly said.
No pragya, we… we were here for a shoot! He said in bewilderment.
Shoot? like this? Without clothes and that on bed? I again bawled.
No…No pragya… It is a shoot! He tried to clarify.
Oh! So where the hell is camera? I yelled.
He came out of bed and tried to hold my hand, I backed off and yelled again: Don’t try to touch me, You Cheap man! You….
By this time he held me tightly and shouted: How dare you called me cheap man!
Aah Amit it’s paining, I said him as he had firmly held my arm.
Yes I deceived you! I accept I slept with this girl! You understood? Got it? now go away! He pushed me after saying this.
I got a lil shock but managed and said: To do hell with you Mr Amit, ah ha no Mr Cheap man! You are going to pay for deceiving me!
His temper got raised after listening to this, he again firmly held my arm and pushed me out of room saying: Go To hell!
I was left in a deep shock but still I said: Cheap man! You will pay for this! I loved you with all my heart but you! You betrayed me? You are going to meet a new pragya after years and then you will realise whom you betrayed! You will cry for losing a treasure!
He smiled wickedly and bashed the door at my face.]
I still remember this life changing incident, 5 years Man! And I still remember every word of Amit of betraying me, he was the one who proposed me and then betrayed me, yeah right he thought me to be a toy! Actually I was always confused if he loved me or loved to keep me? It was never his love but still somewhere in my heart I do love him. I don’t know when will I completely forget him. His betryal is a puzzle which is still unsolved!
As the door knocked pragya came out of her deep thoughts and opend it.
A girl came and hugged her tightly: Happy Birthday Old school girl!
Pragya: Will you just stop calling me that! By the way Thanks bulbul.
Bulbul: O wait, I love to call you that and Miss how dare you said me Thanks?
Pragya: Thanks? Who said it? No I didn’t
Bulbul: Very well played! Old school girl
Pragya: Oh just stop calling me that.
Bulbul laughed a bit, pragya helplessly smiled.
Bulbul: Now go and get a change, we are going library!
pragya: Okay fine
Bulbul: Listen…
Pragya: What?
Bulbul: Please let your hairs grow, this bob haircut of your short hairs do not look good at you.
Pragya looks herself in mirror and smiles: I love to keep short hairs.
Bulbul: You won’t listen to me ever.
pragya: Never.
Bulbul makes a sad face, pragya smiles and goes back to room.
Screen shifts.
They both were waiting for transport at road meanwhile bulbul says: Sentimental , tell me why at your birthday you are thinking about him.
Pragya smiles and folds her arms: Woah now I am sentimental.
Bulbul laughs and says: Actually 24 by 7 I am listening to only one song.
Pragya: Which?
Bulbul sings: I might be sentimental
But don’t get so judgmental
So what if I’m an old school girl
I am an old school girl..
Pragya: No please I hate that song! Especially when she says But every time you say goodbye
I swear to god .I cry I cry I cry I cry. The way she says I cry I cry I feel like killing her.
Bulbul laughs: You are seriously , Old school girl!
Pragya: Mam, your mobile is ringing.
Bulbul: Nop.
Prgaya: Check it in your bag , I think you have became deaf
Bulbul checks her bag and finds her phone ringing, She attends it meanwhile pragya looks around and looks at a man continuously stalking her, she rolls her eyes off and looks in another direction, after sometime she finds the man next to her, she was about to shout at him but bulbul dragged her to transport so pragya remained silent and never told bulbul anything. They reached library, pragya was librarian actually so she went to her place and started checking some records meanwhile bulbul went to her university.
Pragya was irritated to core, to minimize her irritation she placed her trivex glasses over her almond shaped eyes, and took a book, she started to roll her eyes at the book when a person came and knocked table, she looked up and found same person, who was stalking her continuously at the road, she was having rage in her eyes but smiled and said: Yes?
The person: I need a book of how to become rockstar in 10 days.
Pragya scowled at him and said: We don’t have such books sorry!
The person laughed and said: I was just joking.
Pragya stared him
The person said: Well my name is abhi, Mr Abhishek prem Mehra!
Pragya flipped the page of her book and said: So?
Abhi: So will you be my Mrs Abhishek prem mehra.
Pragya had utmost anger in her eyes, she stood up and in rage kept the book at table, she in hissing voice said: Mr this is library not any park, moreover who the hell are you? Just go away.
Abhi: I am not the hell but heaven dear.
Pragya: Just go away or I will shout.
Abhi: I won’t let you shout, 1 hour is enough to make you all mine.
Pragya: Will you just leave from here? Or shall I call police.
Abhi winks and says; Bye sweetheart.
Pragya stares him and he leaves. she sits back at her chair, and tears start to come out of her eyes, she closes her eyes and lowers her head: I don’t know what’s wrong! May be I am a girl that is wrong! She looks herself in mirror: Neither I am beautiful nor attractive than why meeeee?
She starts to sob and screen shifts to abhi.
Abhi stretches his arm and says; Boys.
Three of persons came; Yes Abhi.
Abhi: Where is van?
A boy points at a corner and says: Right there.
Abhi smiles and pats his back: Well done my boys! It’s easy to catch her from there.
A boy says: Don”t you think we are doing something wrong.
Abhi: It’s just a rape boy, nothing else.
Another boy shockingly says; Abhi have you gone mad? we can not do this to any girl. Are you…
Abhi in somewhat anger says: Look my boy, I love her
The boy says: So rape is a way of showing anyone your love?
Abhi: May be I am not showing Love but Revenge.
Boy: Revenge?
Abhi: I asked her if she will become Mrs but she denied and accepted rape, what are your veiws Ankit?
Ankit: Superb Boss, how dare she said you No, and leave this Ashok, he is always like this A Kid!
Ashok: Call me kid but Abhi you’re doing something unacceptable to society.
Abhi: Ended Ended Ended!
Ankit: What?
Abhi: Friendship with Ashok ended!
Ashok: Abhi , I am again saying you, you’ll pay for this! You are doing it wrong.
Ankit: leave him abhi, see bhabhi jee has came out.
Abhi: Oh ho, she looks beautiful in this orange top and white skirt
Ashok: Abhi listen to me just…..
Abhi including ankit go away from there. Ashok stands tensed.
Abhi ankit stand near the van, another boy sits at the driving seat, he starts the van and shows his thumbs up, abhi smiles, as pragya passes from there , abhi forces her into the van, he forcibly places his hand over her mouth , and sits in van, the van starts…
The pain in pragya’s eyes could be seen clearly, ankit gives cloth to abhi, abhi ties it around pragya’s mouth and ties rope around pragya’s hands, abhi holds pragya’s chin, the tears in pragya’s eyes were determinant they weren’t flowing, ankit shared hi five with abhi, abhi laughed, pragya tried to move but abhi placed his hand around her shoulder and said: So 1 hour was enough right?
Pragya looks away..
The three of them laugh harder.
Abhi: My Boy,
Ankit; Yes!
Abhi: Not you, but that at driving seat Rajkumar.
Rajkumar: Yes boss.
Abhi: aaj teri bhabhi aayi h koi ganna shanna nhi chalaega? (Today your bhabhi has came, won’t you play any song)
Raj: Abhi chalata hun boss (I am playing it right now)
abhi looks at pragya , pragya was struggling to get our of his grip, abhi smiled but his smile vanished when he listened to song: Hum Sarphire Bigde Hue Nawaab Hain
(We act like crazy spoilt emperors/kings )
Padh Lo Humein, Hum To Khuli Kitaab Hain
(You can get to know us easily as we are like open books)
Haddi Bhi Hum Hain Aur Hum Hi Kebab Hain
(We are the bone as well as the Kebab)
Hum Pagal Nahin Hain Bhaiya
(We are not crazy)
Humara Dimag Kharaab Hai
(It’s just that our minds are a little corrupt)
Both the Ankit and Raj were enjoying the song, pragya was controlling her laugh seeing abhi”s expressions, abhi in anger said: Bigde huay nawab, koi acha Romanchic gana chala yeh kya pagal panti wala gana chalaya hua h tu ne? band kr isey ( O spoilt emperor, tune on some romantic song , what type of song have you played? Just stop it!)
Raj: Sorry boss.
Abhi: Tune any other romantic song.
Pragya looks at abhi in rage, abhi smiles.
Raj plays another song: Wo Bachche Duniya Mein, Khushnaseeb Hote Hain
(Those kids are the fortunate ones in the world)
Jo Mummy Daddy, Ke Kareeb Hote Hain
(Who are close/near to their parents)
Aaa… Ooo… Ooo… Ooo…
Mujhe Maaf Karna Om Sai Ram
(Forgive me O Sai Baba!)
Tujhse Pehle Loonga Mummy Daddy Ka Naam
(I’ll take the name of my parents before Your name)
Mujhe Maaf Karna Om Sai Ram
(Forgive me O Sai Baba!)
Pragya was again trying to control laughter, raj and ankit were enjoying it meanwhile abhi yelled: Ghade , Sai baba muaaf krne na kare Maa Qasam mein tujhe nhi karunga blke janaza niklwaunga, poora romanchic mood kharab kr diya, band kr yeh gana ( Stupid! I don’t know about Sai baba but I would surely not forgive you, I will lead your funeral! You spoiled whole my Romantic mood! Just trun off this song)
Raj: Sorry boss!
Ankit: We reached.
Raj stops the van, abhi gets out of van and forces pragya out, pragya comes out, but doesn’t moves further, abhi helds her arm tightly and forces her to move but pragya didn’t moved, abhi stared her and took her in his arms, pragya tried to protest but it was of no use!
Screen shifts to bulbul:
She was looking around in library: Where did Pragya went? It’s been almost an hour that I am finding her, where the hell she is? Bulbul tries to call her from phone but it was switched off , soon someone patted bulbul’s back. bulbul turned and said: Ashok?
Ashok: H…Hi bulbul!
Bulbul: Why are you tensed is everything fine?
ashok; Actually…. Is..Is pragya your friend?
Bulbul: No, she is my sister but what happend?
Ashok explains her everything.
Bulbul gets shocked and sits at sofa.
Screen shifts to pragya tied up with ropes at chair, now her tears had no limitation, they were flowing continuously.
at another side abhi was some what nervous if he is right or wrong.
The screen freezed at both of them.
Pre recap: Regrets lead to patch up! The Villian that was supposed to ruin her life turned out to be hero and beautified her life.
So guys how was it? Up to mark or below the mark? It’s clear I am not new , just a flop writer who left writing at Telly updates because of numerous college works, but Exams ended and I was free so I came up with this idea. It’s just 2 or 3 shots, I will continue it once I feel like you guys liked this update. I hope you liked it. and tell me if you want me to continue it or should I drop this Idea? Don’t worry for my name, as at last update I would tell you as may be many of you are new at TU, I have been very inactive these days so I don’t know most of you! So sorry , okay till then Stay blessed.
23 Comments
Nice update…..waiting for the next….title is very nice….waiting to know your name…..pls post the next one soon…..
It’s An Amazing Start Dude ! I wish to know u soon ! And to me you aren’t a flop writer ! Keep Writing ! Waiting for the next shot ! And I liked the whole part !
Hi..nice intro yaar..love it….pls continue…
Nice shot ……..please continue……..waiting for next shot
Please do update it tomorrow morning or tonight itself. Superb shot.
Hiiii Nice pa…
Hai…nice story….continue…in waiting for ur update….today itself u can update more
Superb…waiting for nxt part …
pls update soon
very nice shot…i dont think you r a flop…
so this is a good start…why do it with such a complex??
anyways, it was awesome and cool.
waaaaw superrrrrrb sweetheart keep writing if possible can u plzzz update two within a day plzzzz its a humble request love ur ff so much
awesome update soon
“I know you, you know me”right???? lol jokes apart this update was fantastic!!!!?????? Specially abhi’s dialogues???? and I won’t ask you to update soon take your time???? anyways I loved the update!❤️❤️
Wonderful ???and very hilarious too???! I guess it’s AA from the way this update is written butI may be wrong too….sorry if I guessed it wrongly but definitely u are not a flop writer???Waiting for the nxt update☺☺☺
It’s really up to mark loved it post soon
Ik dum flop writer …worst writer….itna bura likha hai …mai kehti hun koi likhey bura par itna bura likhey…..Hud krti hai ap ji….bhai kis ne kha hai ap se ke ap Old school girl …memories kitni qimiti hoti hai uss par likhey …kis ne kha hai ap se ke ap THANKS ki baat krey gi ….wo bhi itna deep likhey …kyun likha Flop writer …..Hun??? Uss ke baad deep scene bhi kam nhi tha WORST WRITER ne tu humour bhi dal diya … Wo bhi inn ko acha na lga tu ..Hero ko villian bna dala ….sahi bhai …tusi Ik dum bus….khudi lga le ji ..hum kiya keh sktey hai . ..Chocollaty ..nhi nhi sorry chaotically …..
superb story with awesome start I felt so funny while reading I am excited for the next update
yes i am scared… i am scared of loosing this again, i am scared of loosing this master piece again i am scared that this is just a story of few shots i am scared that this writer will never be back again but i want this writer back you will feel i am buttering you i can’t do so because the words i am saying you deserve them i am telling you loosing yourself in someone else writing so immensely and deeply is not easy it wants selfless love towards something and so you have, my dear you have the power to attract everyone towards yourself through your masterpieces and this was the master piece i don’t know why the hell i didn’t came here often but when i am back i am able to see this Gosh i don’t know whether it is Abhi Pragya or someone else i am just admiring your story and believe me where ever you will write i will read them i am ever ready to read them even if you write on the worst serial than this then also because i am addicted to your writing s not the characters of a story characters are always made alive by the writer or narrator only and here in your case you make them alive a simple girl who was betrayed and a boy who is arrogant that is something which only you can plan okay i think i am blabbering a lot but let me do so because i want to first of all a new concept no one gathered courage to write upon this sensitive matter but you did it and then you rocked it to i know it is just a shot one and you will write it further too but the first shot it self was killer then how can i say that you will not rock in other shots Damn!! i mean making a story alive can be learn from you only those dialogues lovely super lovely that determination lovely and one more thing the use of worst songs in such a funny manner lol awesome yr unbeatable hahaha well i need to go because i think i have wrote it more then enough if i wrote it more then you will think literally i buttered you haha so again i have to say it was BINGO SUPER DUPER NEW YEAR GIFT love it and love you
Okay DIDI I am commenting again as I started missing you ! Fine pls update fast as I can’t wait to feel your presence atleast through your writings ! Your Unree still did not forget u . (Finding Cac Mission is All time Switched ON ! )
DIDI The biggest mistake you did was …. Guess what ? DIDI This is Torture ! Yeah you read it right DIDI ! This is Torture . Made me crazy before , and when i consoled myself knowing the fact My Fav Writer won’t write anymore …. this came up and contradicted my thought ! DIDI I am Thankful to you for making me crazy again ! Torturing me this way is the pleasant happiness to me !DIDI I Loved you , Still Love u and will never ever forget to Love such A Wonderful Person in My Life !
I missed you sooo freakingg much yaar ! Pls Ms.FAB Writer … Plsss go check your username its actually “Fab” and not “Flop” ! Got it DIDI ?? I think My DIDI has became a DADI (having memory loss at this age #sosad ) Don’t make me go mad on you again !
And yaaaa Happy NEW Year Didi (by now you should hav felt irritated seeing DIDI na? Well thats what i wanted till you change your name I will address you as Didiiiiii Only ! 🙂 Take care . I will stay blessed always if I have the wishes of My Cac forvever ! So depends upon that person’s wishes ! Anyways Happy New Year once again ! Let Love, Happiness , Prosperity is with you always and forever making your Life Beautiful and Ek Dam Perfect ! 🙂
Okay DIDI I am commenting again as I started missing you ! Fine pls update fast as I can’t wait to feel your presence atleast through your writings ! Your Unree still did not forget u . (Finding My Cac Mission is always activated ! )
DIDI The biggest mistake you did was …. Guess what ? DIDI This is Torture ! Yeah you read it right DIDI ! This is Torture . Made me crazy before , and when i consoled myself knowing the fact My Fav Writer won’t write anymore …. this came up and contradicted my thought ! DIDI I am Thankful to you for making me crazy again ! Torturing me this way is the pleasant happiness to me !DIDI I Loved you , Still Love u and will never ever forget to Love such A Wonderful Person in My Life !
I missed you sooo freakingg much yaar ! Pls Ms.FAB Writer … Plsss go check your username its actually “Fab” and not “Flop” ! Got it DIDI ?? I think My DIDI have become a DADI (having memory loss at this age #sosad ) Don’t make me go mad over you again !
And yaaaa Happy NEW Year Didi (by now you should hav felt irritated seeing DIDI na? Well thats what i wanted till you change your name I will address you as Didiiiiii Only ! 🙂 Take care . I will stay blessed always if I have the wishes of My Cac forvever ! So depends upon that person’s wishes ! Anyways Happy New Year once again ! Let Love, Happiness , Prosperity is with you always and forever making your Life Beautiful & Ek Dum Perfect ! 🙂
Sahi hai bhai …logo ne tu naam badal badal kr kr comment kiye hai …Masha llah …???? Chliye ye tu clear hua ..log jantey hai ap ko…flop writer…
Woow! It was so amazing I loved it you aren’t a flop writer
Mein phir a gai??? wo actually kya hai na k meri fav writer itney time baad likh rahi hai tu mein pori tarhan crazy hogai hun???? bhai pehly mein ne kah tha k take your own time but mujhe kya pata tha k tum itna time ley lo go???? ho sakey tu zara jaldi update de do tumhari Alfa ki ek chotti se request???
plzzzz di update next episode sooooonnnnn