Hii guys, this is Mahi, i wrote this story as TS and also posted 1 chappy of this….but i think u people didn’t like it….as i didn’t get much comments….but thought to complete it…so wrote whole story again as OS…..thanku for giving ur precious time to read this story…and sorry for mistakes….
character:-
Sameer:-Namish Taneja/Varun Kapoor (or ur wish)….
Shalini:-Helly shah/Tejasswi prakash (or ur wish)…..
Janki:-Daljeet kaur bhanot (mother of shalini)….
Third person’s POV:-
He had met her for the first time in the reception of his office….He had just joined the office as manager of accounts Department leaving his old job for Better pay and benefits….
He came to office on time and waited for completing his joining formalities in the reception…
He could not help but noticed the receptionist…
Her skin had dark hue and she had jet black hair that was long and straight..her unconventional looks attracted him….And he could not take his eyes off her…
Although, dark skinned women are always looked down upon in India…
This girl seemed to have mastered the art of self confidence that exuded a unique charm…
Her svelte figure and dark brown eyes,complete with smiling approach towards every person passing by the reception or stopping by for enquiry made her all more charming….
His attention was broken by sweet voice calling out his name….
“Mr.Sameer,pls proceed the conference room for completing your joining formalities….the deputy manager is waiting for you…”☺
the receptionist called out his name with sweet smile…
He immediately got up feeling embarrassed for eyeing her without blink in his eyes….
After completing formalities, he was told to go and start his job next day….
Being lunch hour, receptionist was at her place….
He waited for her for some time…and then left feeling awkward…
For whole day he could not concentrate on anything,just imagining that receptionist everywhere….
Thinking about her eyes, smile, voice, how she called his name….
Next day:-
He came early than usual, but did not find that receptionist….
This continued for some days….
Than he thought to enquire about her….
On enquiring about her he was told that due to sudden demise of her father,she could not come to office….and that she may join after a week….
He wanted to see her somehow….
So he took her address from the security and went to her home…
He reached their house…. and he could see the crowd gathered at her place along with a police van…
He was surprised to see the police van and waited in one corner to meet her in private…
After the crowd dispersed he came to meet her…
Sameer(hasitatingly):-“Hi, I m sameer.. I recently joined your office…I m not sure if u remember…I was waiting in reception lobby for joining formalities…I came to know about ur father today morning….and came to offer condolences….”
Shalini:-“yes Mr.Sameer…I remember you…thanks for coming….”she said with her usual smile which seemed plastic….with her said eyes dried with tears….
Her old mother was sitting in shock without any movement….
Sameer felt uncomfortable there…he sat for some time and than left….
But, he just could not keep her out of his mind…..and his mind constantly revolve round her thoughts…
Her beautiful mesmerizing eyes had a strong hypnotic appeal….
With days,he became more and more attracted towards her…due to her mysterious appeal that made him weak on his knees….
And finally….one day he proposed her for marriage….
Shalini:-“But, Sameer you don’t know anything about me…you just know me as receptionist at your office….apart from that you know nothing…How can you think of marrying someone without knowing anything about them…????
Sameer:-“Shalini..,I know im in love with you…and thats all i need to know…..anything else hardly matters….i will come to your house today evening and ask for your hand from your mother….”he smiled reassuringly….
Shalini(she smiled back and said):-“my mother is mentally unstable due to my father’s death…so, she may not behave normally….
Sameer:-“its okay…i understand….i will take care of her…”sameer comforted with a warm hug…
In evening..
Sameer rang the bell of shalini’s house…
An old woman opened the door…she looked at him questioningly…..
Sameer introduced himself and told her the purpise of hi visit…
She got startled and with a gape, she told, “WHAT????ARE YOU MAD????YOU WANT TO MARRY SHALINI??? DON’T YOU KNOW WHO SHE IS????
Sameer understood the old women’s unstable state….and comforted her putting a hand on her shoulder….
Sameer:-“I know who she is…I love her….and accept her however she is….you don’t worry….”
Janki:-“No no…you are not able to understand…. you can’t marry her…”
Sameer:-“But why are u saying so…????” Sameer now became slightly hyper….
A voice said from back,”Bcoz I M A MAN dressed as a WOMAN…and i enjoy myself to treat with man’s warm blood…”
Sameer turned back and could see shalini standing there like a man…
She came there hiding her hands in her back and grinning wickedly….took out the knife with gazing shine that she was hiding…
She stabbed mercilessly on his chest…splashing blood on walls….
On seeing him die….she started crying hysterically with her whole body shaking….banging her head on the wall…
Her mother recapitulated….how shalini had killed her father and her brother that day with the same knife….and convinced the police about her split personality behavior….so, she was given clean chit….
And now this….
But with her confidence and perfect acting…she can convince anyone……….
A/N:- i know you people didn’t like it…..sorry for boring u and wasting your time….Thank you for reading…..and i only wrote this as i already had post 1 part so thought to complete it….sorry once again….and this time u can bash me to write such a crap….stay blessed…be happy….bye…
19 Comments
But why she killed
You
I was confused but stillnice
She was psycho killer who killed men….who were in her life…that is why she killed sameer also…..and act as she is suffering from split personality disorder….i hope ur confusion is clear….thanku for reading…. be happy….. stay blessed…tc?
damn confused….bt nxt part jaldi post kr do plzzz!!!!!
It was one shot dear….and about ur confusion…..She was psycho killer who killed men….who were in her life…that is why she killed sameer also…..and act as she is suffering from split personality disorder….i hope ur confusion is clear….thanks for reading…. be happy….. stay blessed…tc?
so confusion clear it in next part
still nice & interesting
It was one shot dear….and about ur confusion….She was psycho killer who killed men….who were in her life…that is why she killed sameer also…..and act as she is suffering from split personality disorder….i hope ur confusion is clear….thanku for reading…. be happy….. stay blessed…tc
Nyc
Thanks alot dear…..keep reading…..be happy… stay blessed…tc….?
Omg the story seems intresting but yet confusing
She was psycho killer who killed men….who were in her life…that is why she killed sameer also…..and act as she is suffering from split personality disorder….i hope ur confusion is clear….thanku for reading…. be happy….. stay blessed…tc?
Thnkx
awesome dear…omg she killed sameer….little confusion….tkcr dear….
She was psycho killer who killed men….who were in her life…that is why she killed sameer also…..and act as she is suffering from split personality disorder….i hope ur confusion is clear….thanku for reading…. be happy….. stay blessed…tc?
Superb
Thank you very much dear….keep reading…. be happy …stay blessed….tc…
omg soo i understood he was a psycho killer right
Yup……exactly u guessed it right…..thanks for reading…. be happy …stay blessed.. tc
superb… it’s different from other stories
Thanks Ragz…it means alot…..and yes it is different….it is based on true story…..thanku for reading…. be happy…… stay blessed….tc…..