Hello peeps I’m here again up with a new shivika os. Guys before continuing lemme clear End will be unexpected… But i hope you all will like that… So let’s start my os will start from the day.. When Shivaay accused anika That she slept with daksh fr 15 lac…after their Confrontation shivaay Was Left in room and anika went out.. But in my os she will not go to her home.. Because i think shivaay sold that huh? So let’s start…
Anika Went to A side where there’s no one except her… Near some Sea… She Collapsed there on Sand And Placing her hands on her Face She lay down on that sand And Break down… She was crying vigorously… There was just sound of Some Sea birds, cool breeze waves of sea… And her crying..
Anika’s pov..
How could he think like that…tha.. That i slept with daksh? And that too for money how could he accuse me like that… Without reason… I’m fed up i can’t handle it anymore… One day or other I’m going to die with his daily torture or With My disease why not now itself.. Yes anika you’ve to die…. Yes com on Anika Stand up and finish ur life nothing is left for u in this cruel World …you’ve to bid bye to this world… You’ve to Go away from this mean world.. Just Go ahead…
Saying this she standsup… Wipes her tears…
Scene to OM
Shivaay is sitting on his couch and With laptop in his hand… He was pretending if he’s working but he was lost somewhere else…
Shivaay’s pov..
Why I’m feeling bad… Why feeling bad for her.. Hearing her statements why i feel like she’s right.. Why… No.. Shivaay no you’ve To think from brain.. Not by heart… She’s just a middle class girl she can do this for money… Yeah… Everything was good btw us.. I wish that daksh shouldn’t have comed…
He starts getting restless he Drinks water he’s sweating…
(continuing his pov)
Why I’m feeling so restless… Why.. I feel… As She’s in some danger… Shivaay stop thinking about her i shook my head… And with same restlessness i again started working on my laptop…
On sea..
Anika is about to go inside the sea to drown herself in that sea to go in sea’s embrace she puts right leg in water…
Her pov..
I Was going in to feel that sea for forever… I was going in sea’s lap to Sleep peacefully… But when i put my leg in Suddenly i remembered about sahil… No anika…. You can’t be so selfish u decided everything By ur own And didn’t even Think about Sahil for once.. How could u be so mean… No i can’t do this i can’t left my Brother alone in this cruel and mean world… I’ll live if not for myself then for sahil I’ve to live..
Thinking this i steped back and walked lil away from sea.. I slapped hard on my face for thinking just about myself and started walking to wards the road to go home but i felt dizzY and unable to stable My self i Fall on the sand.. But i was in my senses.. because i could hear and see everything but vision was blurry My eyes were heavy …that was because of constantly crying i think my head was hurting… I heared a car stopping and someone came to me every thing was blurry so i wasn’t able to see him or her… Before i could close my Eyes that person Throwed a full bottle of water on me i came to my senses back… I was shocked to see daksh there…
daksh u here.. i asked…
yes my darling I’m here to take u… said daksh…
take me? i asked..
yes.. anika You haven’t done right by Marrying my Bestfriend shivaay… u was my fiancé right? now you’ve to Handle punishment anika… saying this he held Me by my hair And Giving me Pain he took me up He made me stand On my legs by pulling me by my Hair… I was On severe pain i was begging him to Leave me It’s hurting me but he didn’t even listened to me and gave me tight slap on my both cheeks… My mouth started bleeding … I again feeled dizzy and before loosing my consciousness last thing i saw was Call of sahil on my Mobile… And then i faint..
Scene to OM
shivaay was Breathing heavily and thinking about Justt anika and daksh… Statement of both of them was Hitting his head he was unable to concentrate on His work… Finally leaving his all work he went out from his room and went in hall where sahil was crying on asking he replied anika di isn’t picking his call and now her cellphone is off… She’s nowhere to be seen… He consoled him… And promised him he’ll get anika home… And he left the hall and went to daksh’s room his room was locked.. He called a servant to come he came there and shivaay asked about the keys of room soo he replied that daksh sir had took Them with him saying he will be back after some week And till then No one can go inside… Shivaay ask him to leave after he left.. shivaay Breaked the door and went in He on the lights and was Shocked to see anika’s pics and her home On The led.. He started searching the whole room.. Without even knowing that Why he’s doing that…
Shivaay’s pov…
I was just searching the room like A mad Person… And I was getting more restless by passing minutes….and soon i got what i think i wanted A diary .. I opened it .. And there was Some pics of him with anika… the day of their engagement.. I was Jealous yes I was jealous to the core seeing him Holding anika’s hand.. I tore the Pic into million pieces i think and moving on i read some pages where he wrote how he Stalked anika When she rejected him how he scared her… I Was fuming in anger… And feeling guilty… For not believing anika on that day.. Soon i Turned the pages and Got what wanted there it was he write how he Manipulated Shivaay he made That scenario … How he create misunderstanding btw them.. and on last page it was written i can Go to Any extent To get my love i can even kill Anyone.. So anika Don’t u dare to cheat me otherwise I’ll kill u tooo..
And soon Throwing diary i Called anika but mob was off i called khanna And asked to trace her location… And i got to know her last location was sea.. I got there in Couples of minutes i derived Harshly… Roughly and When. I got there.. I searched her like a mad person there but no She wasn’t there i collapsed on Floor and started crying.. But i collected my all strength stood up again… And started moving towards car and soon my foot or maybe shoe hit with something and i stopped i thought its a stone but when i looked down i found anika’s cell phone.. broken cell phone and some blood stains.. i sat there and hold that mobile… I shouted her name So aloud nearly five times.. And my phone beeps i got some MMS from daksh My anger has no boundaries… I opened that clip And was hell shocked seeing my anika… Yes my anika.. Like that she was bleeding her head was bleeding i could clearly hear her calling my name constantly… She was semi Conscious … She was tied up With Ropes on a chair metal chair… And heavy water was continuously falling on her there was several wires attached to her And then camera moved.. And He showed some different tools.. I could hear he was Saying.. These all are torturing tools.. She’s rectifying her Fault… There was a small Jar he showed closely full of Scorpion And A glass container .. He said That he’ll put her in and Add scorpion to Left her die i could clearly see madness in him he was laughing sarcastically… I abused him.. But he can’t listen as that was just A clip.. I called khanna without wasting time.. and ask him to trace daksh And after some time he tolled me That he’s in Old steel mill.. I was kind of happy as that was near… I immediately went there by car before going.. I already called ambulance with all necessary equipments and Police..
I went in…
Anika’s pov..
i was semi Conscious i was in severe pain My head will blast.. I was Unable to move… I was tied up to a chair.. and that water I was feeling cold… i saw shivaay.. Yes my shivaay… He came to save me i could clearly see his guilty face.. His concerned…
Shivaay was coming to me…
(her pov finish)
When Shivaay was going towards her… Daksh pressed a button for hardly micro seconds.. Anika got a Shock Current shock.. Shivaay shouted.. Anikaaa….
Daksh= shivaay don’t u dare to go near her.. if you’ll go I’ll again give her shock…
Shivaay takes aback… Saying ok I’m moving back don’t Do anything with her..
Daksh Laughs Sarcastically
Daksh Took hammer a small one and some nails with A Wood piece.. and went near Anika he put the pieces of wood down anika’s hand and He hit Her hand With hammer… inserting a nail in That.. She shouts in pain.. Shivaay Took a rod and hit daksh from back on his head… He turned and shivaay beats him Black and blue
*om’s Poetry were echoing in Shivaay’s ears
abhi mukammal nai hua Abi ek kissa baki hai jab dill apni par ayega Woh wala hissa baki hai…*
he shouts how dare u touch my Wife How dare u hurt her I’ll kill u he pushed him daksh falled on the Button of Current .. anika got current shock shivaay immediately removed daksh from the button and disconnects the wire… He went to anika un tied Her and Hugs her but she was unconscious… Shivaay asked her to open Eyes but no response… he was crying hugging her apologizing her And What not..
he was crying and crying.
Soon he heared..
Abi me zinda hon shivaay.. ( I’m still Alive) and Shivaay looks at her and hugs her again both smiled Seeing each other
i love u anika he said
Om’s another poetry flashes in his mind…..Kisi se dill lagane ko ho dill raazi zaroori, umar bhar sath rehne ko Ishqbaaazi zaroori…
shivaay immediately lifts her in His arms and started to go out.. But daksh hit him From Back with the same rod And both fall down.. Shivaay’s vision become blurr..
daksh went to anika who was Hardly shouting with lowest voice shivaay…
He held her By hair and Coming closer to her face i love u Anika.. he Took Some Small knife… Shivaay was unable to figure out or do anything…
He placed the knife on anika’s neck and moves it.. In opposite direction saying.. happy journey anika.. It moved on half neck and soon daksh got Shot on head and died on spot.. Anika was laying in blood Pool her half neck was Having deep Cut immediately some Boys And nurses came in closing her wound with some bandages.. To stop bleeding took her away to a hospital… Shivaay Was taken by police to hospital as he wasn’t injured much but wasn’t Fully Conscious they both were taken to hsp .. Inspector informed Oberoi’s and they all came to hsp seeing shivaay sitting outside OT on Bench THEY all rushed to him… And ask him But he just replied anika… daksH… He And Repeating… Soon doctor came out…
Doc= shivaay
Shivaay immediately rushed to him…
doc= go inside her last wish is to meet u..
Shivaay without any Second thought or understanding statement of doc went in anika Was laying on bed with Bandages all over shivaay sat next to her.. Hold her hand…
Om’s Poetry flashes And echo’s in his Eyes and ears..
Such me dhal jaty hai kisse, dill se duhrane ke baad, ishq par hoga yaqeen Ishq hojane ke baad..
He cried Holding anika’s hand..
Anika hardly whispered take care of sahil.. I love you billu ji
And closed her eyes with smile on her face..
He Shouts i love u too anika… Please open ur eyes no….. U can’t leave me like that anika he was begging..
But that was too late..
He holds her by shoulder and hugs her..
Song plays..
Pass aye
dooriyan pir bhi kam na hui..
Ek adhuri si humari kahani rahi
Past scene of them is flashing in front of Shivaay’s eyes…
When he hugged her..
When they done pinky promise..
There hangover confession and dances..
Their meetings
He was crying vigorously hugging her
He again Held her hand And leaned his face on her hand…
Song continues..
Asmaan ko zameen… Yeh zaroori nahi jaa millleee ja mileee…
Doctor came in and Apart him from anika.. Her hands were in his he wasn’t leaving her..
slowly slowly his hand Slipped from her last finger’s were left..
Ishqqq sachaaaa wohiiii jisko milti ni manzile manzileee….
Hands are apart… Doc covers anika with White cloth…
Shivaay falls on floor…
Rang thay ,noor tha…
Jab qareeb tu tha ek jannat sa tha yeh jahan.
Flashes of their Smiling laughing together going on in His mind…
Waqt ki rait pe kuch mere nam sa likh ke chod gaya tu kahan..
He looks up at dead anika..
With his blood red eyes. .
Humari Adhuri kahanii…
humarai adhuri kahanii….
Omru takes him out while he was crying…
I shouldn’t have met with her nothing would have happened like this.. He shouts…
Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye hum.. Chalte chalte dekho na Hum kaha agye….
Flashes of their very first and second meeting came in his minds…
They took him home And took anika too her dead body…
Doctor accompanying them.. As their family doc
they enter in mansion..
shivaay looks at hall..
Scene of their Rasam When rudy make them feed eachother flashes infront of his eyes..
he ran to hall And Move left right …
Jannatein agar yahin.
Tu dikhe kyon nahi..
Chand suraj sabhi hai yaha…
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha..
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yaahan…
He again collapsed on floor..
Humari adhuri kahanii…
Humari adhuri kahanii…
they Put anika dead body on some wood plank type…
Shivaay rushes towards her…
Held her and smiles…
Pyaas ka yeh safar khatam ho jayega… Kuch adhura sa jo tha poora ho jayega…
He closed his eyes and falls on her
Everyone rushes to him..
They tried to apart their hands but grip was so tight doctor checks him Right there…
Checks his eyes, his Breaths.. His Veins..
Sorry He’s no more…
They all cried…. After Some time They covered Shivaay In white Cloth their dead bodies was Next to each other… Holding eachothers hands..
Everyone was mourning for their deaths…
Jhuk gayaa asmannn..
Mill gayeeee do jahannn…
Har taraf hai Milan ka samaa…
doliya hai saji, Khushbuein har kahin…
Padhne aya khuda khud yahan…
Humari adhuri kahaniiiii…
humari adhuri kahaniiiiii…
...*THE END*…
Ufff i don’t know from where this idea came in my mind…
Not ever ending is happy endings… If it’s true That true love exists in this mean and cruel world… Then This is the great example of that love.. whatever it may Go through It will just get stronger only If It’s true.. This happened If one dies Other died too Their heartbeats are connected to eachothers so how is that possible that one’s heart stop and other one is still beating… Point is that If You truly Accept that u love and Proved Than U can’t live without person God himself make ur promises true.. That we’ll live together and die together… This Last scene Where shivaay died because he can’t live without her…actually this scene is Happened infront of my eyes.. In my Family Not close relatives but door ke rishtedaar.. there lOve got Amaar they both died together her wife died due to heart attack and husband died after seeing his..love dEad…
I’m sorry if yOu don’t like it.. .. But still i hope you’ll liKe….
so drop ur views down.. Please…
bye take care…
Regards
# annie
26 Comments
Awesome Annie.
It’s amazing doll..
It was so heart touching i was crying in whole part oh ur awesome yar it was fablous
Awesome. U made me cry.???
Write another one with a happy ending. Waiting for it.
???? u r absolutely true love is juz amazing…..u nailed it…..the bestest os ever…..i can’t stop my tears becoz i also experienced this through my own eyes in front of me…..
It’s was wonderful yaar u made me cry
this was………………AMAZING!!!! very emotional especially the last part. I loved it sooooooo much, I must have read this at least 30-40 times. you are such a superb writer. toooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo goooooooooooooooooooooooooooood.
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Awesome it make me cry
Annie i just luv it its so heart touching
Amazing can u plzzz come up with a sequel (recarnation) plzzzz
It was amazing dear and u make me cry ???????????
How creative you are Annie …superb !!!
It’s fabulous Annie I am still crying??????????? just love it.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤. And the bg song perfectly match the scean.
You really made me cry such a emotional episode… ?
I am a silent reader of all ff. I never comment for ff. But this is heart touching . I can’t control my self for to comment here . amazing really very very good for it .
U left me speechless dear…. I can only sayy tha…
Sach me dhal jate h kisse
Dil se dohrane k bad
Ishq par hoga yakin
Ishq ho Jane ke bad???????
When i read this for the first time.. i was out of words to write a comment..
It’s that good..
An os worth reading..
It can be read multiple times and will not bore anyone..
I simply loved it to the core..
Amazing work 🙂
Amazing…emotional
ohh.. just loved it. its very rare to see such kind of love in real life. i just can’t find words to explain how much i loved it. too good,
Ekdum heart touching os tha…. I literally cried yar….. this is what a true love story…. though I’m sad ki dono is duniya mein nhi mil paye but happy ki mil tw gye…. I honestly, loved ur story very much!!!!! Hats off to u???
Wonderful….. loved it….
Its awesome………loved it…..
This was so amazing. Its so touching
Awesome ??????????????
What you have written its absolutely True Annie….(at the end)…..Nice story amazing…It truely touched my heart…????????
It’s superb dr i think u r too senti types but i liked ur os very much it’s different and difficult to wrote this type of fan fiction dr i just loved it