Hy guys its me shivu here I have a short story in my mind which I want to write for our raglak so I give prologue for the story if u like it then plzz tell me I continue it or not plzz now its depend on u I write further or not ok let’s start prologue
Laksh maheshwari(22): cute, handsome boys loves his family mostly his brother sanskar he do anything for him
Sanskar maheshwari(26): lawyer, handsome boy he also loves his family and laksh
DP:Big businessman father of laksh he loves his family but not more than money he only think about his prestige and class
AP: mother of laksh she loves her family alot especially laksh she is totally opposite to DP
RP: father of sanskar respect DP but he is not like him he love his son alot
Suj:Mother of sanskar she loves sanskar alot
Ragini Bose(21):beautiful Sweet girl love her sister swara
Swara Bose(24): cute bubbly girl she also loves her sister ragini
They both are their world they are orphan
A Girl and boy are fighting
Girl:listen Mr. Hoge tum ameer bapke bete iska matab yeh nahi ki tum jo chaho wo karo samjhe
Boy:tum mujhe galat samajh rahi ho
Girl:shut up
Then she slap the boy and went away
After few week
Same boy and girl
Girl: I love u
Boy kiss her forehead
Boy:I love u too very much
Again after few months
Girl is dressed very well looking very pretty then boy come there
After one hour
Same girl: I hate u I hate u very much
Then she start crying badly
Other side some other place
Boy(angrily):yeh karna bohot jaruri tha bohot jaruri
So this is the prologue tell me how’s it I’ll continue it or not
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amazing and i think the girl was rags and the boy pretended as she slapped him,,,do continue xx
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Awesome friend
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missed u and yaa hope u will be regular and again awesome no words to say actually in TU now we get only Swasan ff so plzz try to give raglak ff ts ss more bcoz raglak fan missing and this is only way raglak fan connect to raglak and raglak ff writer plzzz give us favor and yaa big Wala thank u to all raglak ff writer
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Interesting
Very interesting
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Nice concept dr…loved it
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Omg
It’s superb duper amazing
Interesting
Interesting prologue dear and plzzzzzzzzz TRY to write in English . Please continue
Thanks and sis I already written all parts
superb sooo interesting
Superb
Interesting
interesting……who is the boy and girl ??????
Thanks let’s see
awesome interesting dear…waiting for ur update…tkcr dear….
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Supppppppppppprrrrrrbbbb yr updt snnnn plzzzz
interesting
Nice. Try to write in English