Hi guys this is Kavya again. I am so sorry for not being able to post this sooner. I didn’t get te before because of school work. And i was not even able to comment for your ffs. A big big sorry for that. And all the episodes all the ffs are awesome. The members who started the new stories a heartly welcome. And all the friends, once again a big big apology for not beings in contact.
So, moving to my story( which i think is getting boring) , I know it’s super duper late and I am not even sure whether you all remember my ff or not. So here is my AB TAK KA SAFAR ???-
In my ff, its been three to four months since Ishkara confrontation. Ishana is not a con girl anymore. She has started a new life. She is dance teacher in a school, Her father died two months ago. She still has to pay some debts of the goons but asked them time for it. Here, in oberoi mansion everyone especially OmRu are happy about Shivika marriage. One day, while Om was heading out for his gallery, he again bumped into Ishana. It was totally a coincidence but Om thought that it is her some other plan and fought with her in middle of the road. Ishana tried to make him understand but failed in doing so. Later, for the whole day he was lost in her memories a d thoughts. Shivaay Rudra teased him on this a lot. Om was unable to understand why is she affecting him this much… later he again meet her in the school when Om went to pick up Sahil. There he saw ishana dancing on ‘sun saathiya’ ( from abcd 2) Om again thought that ishana is trying to trap him and again accused her. Because of that Ishana lost her job and Om was totally unaware of it. Ishana was very much disappointed and thought that Om is just a selfish, stone hearted, spoiled Oberoi like his dad. Ishana saves dadi’s life in a temple and gets friendly with anika and dado. Later dadi comes to know about a girl named Ishana once entered her middle grandson’s life(she doesn’t know that she is the same girl who saved her life). Seeing Om’s changed behavior dadi thinks that Ishana is Om’s ishqbaaz, his someone special, but he denies it. Later, when Daksh kidnapped Anika, helpless Shivaay asked acp Randhava to help him. When shivaay reached acp’s home he was shocked to see Ishana there. His shock increased when he came to know that Ishana is a specialist in computer sciences and management as well as a brilliant hacker. Ishana helped Shivaay in tracing Daksh and save anika also made him realize his love for her in just 20 minutes. This made shivaay change his point of view towards Ishana. (Om knows nothing about this matter).
Ishana thought that she won’t meet the oberois again but she was wrong. The company she went to give a new job interview turns out to be Om’s new art company ‘Blossom’. But luckily Shivaay was interviewing the applicants. Shivaay gets impressed by Ishana’s talent and finds her perfect to work under Om. He hires her. Shivaay wants to tell om about this at night but he could not. The next day, shivaay was not present for breakfast. So Om didn’t inquire him about the new employee. Due to Rudra’s and Dadi’s little prank, family misunderstands that Om has a girlfriend named Ishana. They teased and questioned him a lot about her. Om gets angry and asks Rudra to clear this confusion before he comes back from the gallery. Om leaves to the gallery and ishana too. Both don’t know that they are going to work with eachother. At home, Shivaay finds out that Om left for gallery and gets tensed thinking that he will again start blaming Ishana. ShivRu along with AniSoumPri leave for gallery in rush. Here in the gallery Om has to attend a meeting so for preparation he searches for the new employee. Om finds her working and gets impressed by the way she turned the painting section to a living collection of his passion. She is facing her back so He does not know that it is none other than Ishu. Ishana was trying to adjust a painting but in doing so, she slips from the stool but our handsome Artist holds her causing her to fall in his arms. Both share a moment full of intensity. Screen freezes on their surprised facea….
Now let’s start episode eleven-
In the car-
Shivaay was driving very fast as he wnted to talk to Om asap…
Anika- Oh god Shivaay aaj aap humara antim sanskaar karayenge shayad ( oh god shivaay looks like you are going to take us to our funerals today)
Shivaay- shut up anika and i already told you this is not a picnic we have to reach om asap and tell him the whole truth. Otherwise he will again hurt that poor Ishana…
Anika- wow billuji… aap ko kab se middle class logon ki fikar hone lagi…
Shivaau-( in mind, thinks- because she saved u, the precious part of my life) because she deserves this job and i am the one who hires her. And FYI, Shivaay Singh Oberoi never regrets or changes his decisions.
Anika- Shuru ho gayi tadibaazi…
Rudra- bhaiya, bhabhi stop it yaar i want to capture everything in today’s day finally something interesting is happening in our boring artist’s life???
All- Shut up Rudra…
Here in the gallery,
Ishu was still in Om’s arms and both were lost in the moment. Ishana was the one coming to the senses first.. she slowly takes back her hand which was circling around his neck. Om softly placed her on the ground still holding her hand. But once the moment was gone, his eyes were again filled with the rage and anger “people never change” he thought in his mind. Ishana was scared to see him like this. Still, gathering courage she opened her mouth but Om din not let her speak…
Om( sarcastically)- oh so looks like again a coincidence… wow…our life is like a movie or a novel. Where we keep bumping into eachother all the time without any reason…
Ishana- Listen Omkara this is not some coincidence.. i actually….
Om- yeah..i know this is not a coincidence. It is again a plan. Am I right?
Ishana- no..this time i can gladly say that this is not any plan. Didn’t already told you that i started an honest life…
Omkara- Yeah…as if i am gonna believe this after all those lies.
Ishana- believe it or not…i don’t care. I already apologized to you. I know one sorry cannot fix all that but i right now, i have many more important thongs to focus on
Om- oh then why are you here in my gallery..
Ishana- i am here for the job. I qualified the interview.
Om- well…nice trick…but just so you know my brother took the interviews and there is no possible way that he will hire a lier like you…
Ishana- well..there is because i think that no one except you thinks wrong as right and right as wrong.. people understand that persons can change… not everyone makes a lifetime judgement for someone based on just one experience.
Om- oh..again a philosophical and emotional speech… you know what, that day my heart believed that u really started an honest life. But once again u prooved that i was wrong. Now before i loose my calm, just get out…
Ishana ws shocked at this gesture. But she decided that she will not give up so easily. She already lost one job because of this guy and This job was her last chance to save her sister’s life getting spoiled.
Ishana- no i won’t… i am elegant for this job. I deserve it and i have prooved it. Now you don’t have any right to fire me.
Om- i don’t like to behave rude, but yes i have…because i am the one who is the boss.
Ishana(angrily)- ohh…so here comes the oberoi out. Looks like i was right the other day.. you are just like your father….does everyone in your family has this problem….
Om totally lost his cool now. He glared at her angrily….
Scene shifts to the car
Shivaay- oh god…this traffic jam now only… don’t know what will om do there?
Priyanka- Om bhaiya hates lies the most… they make him angry more than anythimg else..ishana is going to have a really bad time
Rudra- even i am scared now…
Anika- what nonsense…. i know Om. He is so calm so composed. He is not angry bagad billa like you billuji. He is so silent. He can never ever hurt anyone. Even his eyes are deep and silent like sea. I think he is the best among all of you oberois in fact all the bkoys i have seen.
Soumya- i agree anika bhabhi. Bade baal vale bhaiya is very mature and sensible. He thinks about doing anything. It’s impossible that he will hurt someone…
( shivaay and Rudra give an unbelievable vala look to their wives hearing them praising their brother so much and thinking that they don’t know that it is most dangerous when silent sea becomes violent)
Same time Scene at the gallery-
Hearing Ishu’s words Om was angry beyond limits. He lost his control on himself.
Om pulled Ishana’s hand and pinned her to the wall. Both of them were standing really close now..but noone cared enough to notice it.
Om ( yelled)- don’t you dare to talk bout my family. You have no right
Ishana( was angry too)- And you speaking aboit my character and values is also not very rightful.
Though his action was rough, a little misbehaving.. his eyes never left hers. Even in the moment filled with anger, they were talking through the intense eyelock which expressed nothing but their unknown attraction and passion for eachother❤❤❤❤❤❤
Precap- gang reaches the gallery… shivkara talk…om gives a challenge to ishu.
If you liked this plz plz tell me because i am thinking about stopping this….
Anyway, tomorrow i have a debate competition on ‘Education in mother tongue is necessary or not’. And i am going to speak from the negative side( which is off couse a challenge and a very difficult one) plz share your views, guide and wish me luck…i am supposed to prepare for it but here i am typing the ishkara ff on mobile ( common problems of teenagers like me….l think..????) plz comment guys i am waiting for your response and also tell whether you liked the story or not)
( Oops i almost forget this… Sorry if i hurted someone by showing Om’s behavior a little rude today. But even i am Kunal Jaisingh’s die heart fan. And we all gotta admit that with a humble, down to earth, understanding, mature peraom,Omkara IS an angry young man and this version of him DOES comes out whenever someone cheats, betrays or lies)
Good Night…Have sweet , cute, beautiful in short Omkara dreams???????
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Kavya…….this episode is good……a suggestion……is…..about omkara’s behavior…..i know some times we will lose control and our anger will burst out…..but yaar…its omkara….though he express his anger ….he will not behave like sso…….am telling because…….u portrayed om pulling ishu’s hands and pinning 2 wall…..i felt ….its not om…..but its sso….who use to do these with anika……so except this portion…..please from next part onwards don’t make om too much rude…..in actual ib we saw his anger in ishana confrontation scene…..and we all have well understood the depth of his character….as well as his emotions also…..Ok…..so this is just my suggestion only,……sorry if you feel bad……but whenever i will comment i will point out certain things as i read all ff from heart …….dear……so sorry……dear…..and apart from that I really loved … omkara’s anger, frustration, his disbelief on ishana…his sharp words…….all …which were too good and u have described them very well also……and @ the end….u said…..u have
made om….rude…….so its ok……when comes 2 creativity…..all have different choice…..different views…..and i really appreciate u for this wonderful work…..and thanks 4 giving a short summary of previous episodes also……Keep the good work and all the best……
Thank you so much for your appreciation Renima di. It means a lot to me. And thank you so much for sharing your view and me feeling bad?????no way di… I will always need your motivation, appreciation and corrections. After all, you are the inspiration for all of us. And don’t worry.. Om will soon realise his mistake and he’ll apologize Ishana in HIS SPECIAL WAY☺☺ Once again thanks a lot for your commen…
Nice …. ???
Thanks Riddhima
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Thanks for commenting Sat
Wow !!! Amazing loved dis om waiting for nxt episode……
Thanks Yashu and i will post the next one soon
Hello dear! Tnx for summary. I’m a bit sad becoz you made us wait so much for this one..and being carzy ishkara fan myself felt difficult to wait. It’s your choice dear…but…omkara becoming sso …a bit diffult to handle…silent killer type person in violent avatar is a bit scary …never mind dear it’s just suggestion being obssessed with om 😀 😛 . Anyways…story is improving epi by epi and becoming more interesting …hope om will again become calm,downearth,composed,polite. 🙂 . Hurry up (shivika nd rumya )gangs!! 🙂 😉 . And…for your debate i only could say is all the very best!! 😉 :-* 🙂
Hi Jaya and sorry for not posting the episode sooner. And as for the Omkara part, he will be back to his humble and soulful ( every girl’s dreamguy) avtar soon???.Thanks for commenting. I am glad that you liked my story
Fabulous episode.. loved it to the core.. Eagerly waiting for the next part..plz post asap…
Thanks a lot Ankita
Finally much avated episode has arrived it was awesome one Yar . If possible post next one soon.???
That’s so sweet of you dheemahee. Thanks a lot for commenting.
Awesome kavya……poor rudra and shivaay ???I liked the dialog that something good is going to happen in boring artist’s life??I don’t know how many shut ups he will here but still continues to give his talks?intense ishkara scene???waiting for the gang to reach there???
And ya gud luck for your debate….you know what when you are not emotionally connected to the topic then you speak with logic and the one opposite to you who speaks his heart and soul out for the topic will eventually loose his cool thus giving a chance to block him/her….I like to debate so this is a piece of guidance from my side.
Keep rocking?
Hey Chandini…i was just waiting for your comment. You know, your words always cheer me up. Thank you so much for your beautiful words and also the tip for debate. And it worked!!!! I won first prize in the interschool debate competition…. ??? Feeling very happy. Thanls for your help
Wow awesome kavya….congrats???????❤❤❤yaaye…..celebration time???????
Hi Kavya dear…..
After such a long time……but finally u r back……
I really luved the epi……..it was awesome…….and plz from next time plz don’t make us wait for soo long….
And another thing that I won’t suggest anything coz already Renima di has told u …..
But for ur debate….. I wanna tell u that u should be confident enough to answer the one who cuts u in between and questions u on any point that u have already mention….be strong and clear with ur points……and think that whosoever is the audience is completely illiterate at least for this topic…..
And all the best…….
Do ur best….
Be confident…..
And above all enjoy ur speech…..
Thanks a lot KehKasha i am gl. And i will not make any delay hereafter… Thanks for the tips for debate…really helpful. And i won it so again, THANK YOU VERY MUCH
Great kavya….I was waiting for your ff….plz don’t stop it…You know we can’t see ishkara in real IB….This ff is too good and I can see my favourite pair through this….
Thanks san. And even i am writing this ff because i miss Ishkara too much in ishqbaaz. Thanks again for your appreciation.☺
Hi kavya….I was a silent reader till dia moment…d episode is awsm ad I really missed ur ff ….waiting for long time..
But I luv ur ff d most….pls make d nxt one fast….
Thanks dear. And i will pest the next one soon
okay di i am first time reading your ff it is sooooooooooooooo lovely and outstandingggggg a bigggggg *teddy hug* Love you lotzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz keep rockinggggg dear. Post soon.
You are always welcome dear! :-* :-* … And i will always love your ff.
And…congratulations..winner!!
Nice
Well thats a very good way for the return of the amazing lshkara…☺☺ u r doing this well..l am so amused for the next episode … well as per me l think om is going to save ishana from the goons …
Btw u r doing awsome?
hey i was eagerly waiting for this…
I’m so happy to found it…
and i am sorry to comment so late…
but what to do busy schedule…
but it was really superb…
i can really understand this kind of reaction from both ishkara..
and u perfectly justified with it…
i loved that scene when both anisom were showing their belief on om..
and they way u compared him with sea..
it was perfectly suitable…
BTW once again sorry for commenting late…