Hi lovely ladies,
How are you all? Sorry for late post.. I was busy with function which was held at our house. I m happy that I got 21 comments… Plz do keep commenting and encouraging me.
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case if any one missed the previous shot,
Shot 4
I m sorry for kunj lekin agar aap tension math lo twinkle haina apni pyar ke rangome rangne walI.
Credit to priya23 (yaar I loved this dialogue)
Disclaimer: this article is not meant to hurt anyone’s sentiment and if unknowingly I do so I sincerely apologize. No proof reading.
Lets begin
SHOT 5: ABUSING HER
They broke the hug when his pa had entered his room. She noticed them hugging and slightly coughed to gain there attention. It was awkward for both of them. His PA handed the bag which had some dresses in it. Twinkle looked at her villain surprised who asked his PA to leave through gestures. He said, “u don’t have any dress here so I asked her to bring something from mall. U wear this I’ll just be back”. Wearing his shirt back he went out. She took the dress and went to wear it. She came out wearing and he was left mesmerized. It was a long floor-touching white maxi with pink floral print on it. It had long sleeves with silver waist chain. (Sorry if u didn’t get it. I m really bad at describing). He came close to her and was about to say something but stopped by listening a voice. Someone was yelling “wow Ms. Twinkle Taneja wow…” Twinkle got to know whose voice was it. She ran down stairs as fast as she could followed by kunj. He was confused with her act but it was soon solved as he saw yuvraj standing on footsteps of the hall and clapping his hand, a sarcastic one. He continued yelling “i got to know ur character today all thanks to god and the person who showed us your true nature… See this pic..” . It was of when twinkle was in kunj s lap hugging him.Twinkle was only in his shirt and kunj only in his pants. He continued “U don’t have shame at all twinkle? Ohh… How can we accept shame from a w**re like you…” “mind your tongue yuvraj luthra” said kunj clenching his fist. “Oh so ur dear ‘boy friend’ is getting angry… Haww…” Said Yuvraj sarcastically. She was in tears. “Just shut your…” kunj said but was interrupted by yuvraj saying “I m not talking to you , I m talking to my dear ‘wife’ ” kunj was hurt listening the phase ‘my dear wife’. He continued ” ohh sorry sorry she will not be known as mine from today, she would just be your mistress from now” saying he took out the documents from some file and handed it to her. By seeing those documents she was numb and tears started gushing down her eyes. ‘DIVORCE’ was written in bold letters. Kunj took the papers and was shocked to see it. He looked at her and some unknown pain was found in his heart seeing her crying. She was more shocked to see the sign of Yuvraj in the divorce paper. After some drama she was forced to sign the papers. After signing yuvraj left from there and twinkle stood there numb. Kunj went to her and kept his hand on her shoulder. He stated “Twinkle, plz believe me. I have not sent him that pics plz believe me plz… I’ll surely find out who have done such an disgusting act. I ll not leave that person”. Twinkle turns towards him and stares at him expression less. Kunj thinks “I guess she still doesn’t believe me. How to prove that I m innocent. I have not done this now”. His thoughts were broken when he saw twinkle approaching towards him. He thought that she would again slap him but to his surprise she hugged him tightly and cried her heart out. Kunj stood stroking her hair by his hand in order to console her.
Shot ends with twinkle and kunj hugging each other.
To be continued….
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With love,
Urs Tamanna
25 Comments
Hey tamanna amazing yaar loved it aww bechari twinkle but it’s necessary Coz it’s twinj story loved twinkle n kunj villian excited for next one …
Do.xomt soon …??
Yaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyyyyyy! Finally you posted it! I was waiting for it badly! As usual the episode was fantastic!
I know tamanna u will not forget me
Feeling very sad for twinkle
Liking the plot
Do continue and post soon bye
Loved it 🙂 Awesome I really liked the episode … feeling bad for Twinkle but I feel Kunj is changing …
Love you 🙂 Post soon 🙂
Hey tammana amazing yaar loved it to the core
Waiting for next part as the main story gonna start
awesome shocking epi
Awesomee.. loved it.. but felt bad for twinkle.. eagerly waiting for the next ❤
Hey
it was good
try to post soon
loads of love
Nice but feel bad for twinkel anyway this should be happen as this is twinj story and extied for upcoming episode
Awesome ????lovely. Loved it
Post soon
It is amazing ????
Post soon cuz I can not wait to read next part???
Hey Tamanna lovely episode dear just loved it waiting impatiently for next one too plz post soon and sorry for not commenting on previous episode but it’s not my fault it’s due to network problem I hope you will understand and love you ???
Awesome episode tamanna I loved it pls post the next asap
hey tamanna it was awsm yrrr…..twinkle hugging kunj was so…so…good yrr loved it…and love u meri jaan
Hey Tamanna,
It was awesome!! Loved it
Amazing
Hey tamanna nice episode… I was also thinking like kunj that she will give her a tight slap n she should give I know kunj didn’t explore their pics but he done that cheap thing… Do continue…
That ws a really nice update dear!!! So well potrayed emotions.. just thinking who is doing it all..
Tamanna … yrr it was superb .. meri shona … how could u manage to write so well … I am falling in love with this fs more nd more … i literally thought that she will slap him .. but i was astonished to read that she hugged him … well u describe the pain perfectly … I want to kill uv … can’t he trust twinkle … but phir bhi I m happy na … coz divorce hogaya … or now there is only twinj … not any one to interfere in their unique love story written by u ….
I love each n every bit of it …. this was the masterpiece … i simply loved it ….
Post next asap …
Love u loads shona …❤❤
Hey aishu
Its just beyond words… I loved the previous and this episode so much… It was so emotional and you very well pinned down the emotions… U know I love Sid more in intense emotional scenes and here in ur ff I get to imagine him in emotional scenes… Thank you so much for that… Aishu I have a request plz show some more intense emotional scenes of Kunj plzzzzz… Post next soonest… Can’t wait to know the person whose sending all the pics of TwiNj to UV… Jo koi b hai I love him/her coz of him/her only TwiNj are coming more closer…
Love you?
Awesome…
Loving it ❤❤
Hey nakhre queen,??
Tune mera nam cmnt queen rakha,?? I love it,❤❤ and hope yeh bad cmnt queen ka cmnt read karke madam ke face pe smile ajaye.???
Well cmng to epi, soo much awesome episode,????? Love it,❤❤ but how dare to UV he said twinkle wh**re and yeh twinkle naii hai yeh UV khud hei ???? (joke’s a part) well plzzzz post next soon.☺☺ And longer epi cahiye mujhe itna naii chalega ???
Love you tammu,????
Amazing tamanna
I can’t wait plsss post soon
Loved it
Loads of love keep smiling
Wow Tamanna it was mindblowing episode… like kunj I too thought that she will slap him but she hugged him really too cute moment it was… emotions were discribed very well… hate that uv but happy that he is out of twinkles life now… well post next asap….
Love you♥♥
ohhhh god tammy☺
my tammy……….soooooo cute n lovely kunj is pity him
his past aww……bt he shuldnt hv done dat wid twinkle bt nt his fault
ohhoooo mein bhi naa☺hehe
leave bt srsly too cute yr♥
kunj pain twinkle emotions sooo beautifully portrayed loved it
loved it to core♥☺♥☺♥☺♥
soooo cute n adorable☺
n d dress was beautiful☺♥☺♥☺