SWASAN – MR MAHESHWARI AND I
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Swasan pregnancy – Samar is born
CHAPTER 63
6 MONTHS LATER
Swara : Come on baby, Tell Mumma… Mum…ma…mum…ma… My sweety pie! Tell na Samar. Mumma!
Sanskaar entered the bedroom, but stopped at the doorway as he saw his two most favourite people playing with each other. In the few short months that Sanskaar had known Samar, He was shocked at how Samar had entered his heart.
Every cry, Every toy, Every tantrum and every smile of his was etched into his heart. Three months ago, When Samar had severe stomach ache, Sanskaar had lost an entire week’s of sleep. He had wondered at that time if it would be the same way every time Samar fell ill. Or if he hurt himself. And if they had more children, How it would feel.
He looked at Swara now. She was such a natural mother. His lips softened to a smile as he looked at her disheveled appearance. She was wearing a T-shirt that he had bought for her which said BEST MOM EVER. She loved that shirt and wore it every 3 days. He saw her smile and laugh as Samar gabbled off in baby talk.
Sanskaar felt proud. Though he was only 6 months old, Samar was very smart. He had learnt to turn over and crawl by the time he was 4 months old. Soon after, he learnt how to high-five and give a fist pump, not to mention peek-a-boo. Yes, his son was very smart.
It only made the latest challenge more interesting. Just 4 days ago, he had challenged Swara by telling that Samar would tell papa first before Mumma. Swara had gladly accepted the challenge and seemed like she was in full preparation for it.
Swara’s voice caught him off-guard.
Swara (smiling at Sanskaar) : Do you think you’ll ever just come inside? Everyday you come and stand there at the door looking at the two of us. Why?
Sanskaar (smiling sheepishly) : I don’t mean to do that on purpose. (setting his briefcase down and walking towards the baby and Swara) I come inside all set to go in but then there you are, my love and my son, having fun together. You make such a perfect picture that I feel bad to come and disturb you.
Swara laughed and got off the bed. She placed two pillows on either side of Samar to protect him and then walked towards Sanskaar. She accepted his kiss on the cheek, then began removing his tie.
Swara (softly, tugging on the tie) : You know, Mr Maheshwari, the scene you see everyday isn’t a perfect picture. Do you want to know why? Because you are not there.
Sanskaar (placing his arms on Swara’s shoulders) : Because I am not there?
Swara (nodding) : Without Sanskaar, Swara isn’t complete. We are Mr Maheshwari and I… How can baby and I be complete without you? Sanskaar should be there, Papa should be there… Only then are we perfect.
Sanskaar (softly) : You know… I think there was a reason we were supposed to not like each other when we first met. I think there was a reason we struggled so much to finally be together.
Swara (placing her head on his chest) : Really? Why’s that?
Sanskaar : Maybe if we had found each other easily, we wouldn’t have paid much attention to every moment, every second that we are together and apart. We wouldn’t value our relationship so much.
Swara (sighing contentedly) : I love you Sanskaar.
Sanskaar (smiling and cradling his wife’s face) : I love you too, my Shona!
She brought him a glass of water as he changed into house clothes and played with Samar.
Sanskaar : Vaise, Swara… You are cheating.
Swara (surprised) : Me? How?
Sanskaar : You are teaching your son to tell Mumma? That’s cheating.
Swara (laughing) : How is it cheating?
Sanskaar : You get to spend the whole day with him all day every day. I don’t. If you teach him the full day, obviously he’ll tell Mumma first. Cheater cock! Jao.. I don’t want to talk to you.
He pouted as Swara watched him amused. He was surprised when she hugged him instead of retorting to his comment.
Swara (sadly) : My maternity leave ends tomorrow. How am I supposed to leave my baby here and go for work? I’ve never left him for a long time. (looking at Sanskaar’s face with anxiety) I’m scared. I don’t want to go.
Sanskaar (hugging her tightly) : Don’t worry. It’ll be hard. But I know my Swara. She’s very sensible and strong. She will go to work day after and once she comes back, will be with Samar. Samar won’t feel bad. He knows his Mumma has to work. He’ll be a good boy. Isn’t that right, My brave boy?
Samar (smiling) : Goo…..
Swara and Sanskaar laughed. Sanskaar picked him up from the bed.
Sanskaar : That’s right… Good boy.. That’s what you are. Good boy Samar. My strong son.
Swara smiled. She mouthed ” I LOVE YOU ” to him and he stared at her with a delighted grin. Samar, growing tired of being ignored by his parents let out a loud wail and then began babbling.
Samar : Goo gaa.. glooo kala… eeeeee
Swara laughed. She looked at Sanskaar and they nodded.
Swara and Sanskaar (each kissing one of Samar’s cheeks) : We love you, Samar.
Samar smiled, let out a loud cackle and clapped his hands.
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A MONTH LATER
Swara (rolling her eyes) : Laksh! Calm down. She’ll be here soon.
Laksh (glaring at her) : What do you mean calm down? Her flight was supposed to land three hours ago. Which it did… It does not take three hours to come home.
Sakshi (eating some biscuits that Adarsh was forcing her to eat) : Laksh! Sit down. You’ll give me my morning sickness in the afternoon. God, Swara…How on Earth did you survive 9 months? Morning sickness is so annoying.
Swara looked at Samar who was in Uttara’s arms sleeping.
Swara (fondly) : It’s such a magical time. Just enjoy it Sakshi.
Laksh (abruptly) : Swara! Call her again.
Swara (hiding a smile) : Sure.. Wait.
She dialled Saanvi’s number but only got a switched off message. She frowned. Though it was funny and delightful to see Laksh so worried for Saanvi, it still had been three hours since she landed. Where was she?
Laksh frowned. Where was Saanvi? How could she make him worry like this? Didn’t she know how worried he’d be?
He thought back to three months ago when she had knocked on the door to his room.
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Saanvi : Laksh! Can I enter?
Laksh : Sure Saanvi! Come in. Do you have to tell me something?
Saanvi (walking in hesitantly) : Umm.. Yes. I just came to tell bye.
Laksh (surprised) : Bye? Why? Are you going somewhere?
Saanvi (nodding) : I’ve stayed here more than a year. It’s not really right. Papa is alone at home. I think I should go to him.
Laksh : But why… suddenly? Why do you want to go?
Saanvi (smiling) : I told you na.. Papa is alone and he’s missing me. Don’t worry… I’ll come back in some time.
Laksh : A week or so?
Saanvi : I’m not quite sure. Why don’t I tell you later?
He nodded reluctantly. Saanvi turned to go outside, but then looked back at him.
Saanvi : I’ll miss you a lot. Bye Laksh.
Laksh (sadly) : I’ll miss you too. Come back soon.
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Laksh thought of that conversation now. Saanvi had left him for three whole months. She had left for Mumbai and Laksh was stunned at how much he missed her.
He missed her witty repartee, her help with his editing. He missed the way she scolded him for being such a dramaqueen everytime. He missed his outings to the park only because Saanvi dragged him there. A few months ago, When he wanted to propose to her, He had had no idea what she meant to him. But today, he was scared at how much she meant to him.
She hadn’t done anything. She was normal as always. Helping the mothers a little, doing the editing, talking with Swara. But somehow, She had slowly grown closer to Laksh. He thought of them as friends, but he knew that the fear about where she was now was not due to mere friendship.
Saanvi had entered into his life like a whirlpool with her confession and all, yet she had mellowed down so much that she put aside her own feelings and became friends with him, not asking for anything else.
Laksh (thinking) : I need Saanvi in my life. Where are you?
Swara : Laksh!
Laksh looked at Swara blankly.
Laksh : Yes?
Swara : Why do you care if Saanvi is here or not?
Laksh stiffened. He looked around but Swara had been quiet enough so that only he heard the question.
Laksh : Because she’s my friend.
Swara (laughing) : For an author who writes about romance in his mysteries, you’re pretty clueless.
Laksh (scowling) : I’m not. I…
Saanvi (entering the house with many bags) : Hello Swara! Hey Sakshi, Adarsh, Uttara, my darling Samar…. (looking at Laksh) Hey!
Laksh (dazed) : Hey!
Laksh looked at Saanvi with a sort of longing in his eyes. He had not seen her face to face for three months and now.. Seeing her now made him feel warm all over and light. He frowned as he saw how late she was.
Laksh (demanding) : WHERE WERE YOU?
Saanvi (surprised) : I’m sorry?
Laksh : Your flight landed three hours ago. Where were you all this while? DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW WORRIED WE ALL WERE?
His last outburst woke up Samar who began crying. Swara took him in her arms and watched the conversation as she rocked him back to sleep.
Saanvi (exasperated) : I just got a bit side tracked. Why are you so angry with me?
LAksh : Angry? Who’s angry? Now being concerned for someone is called being angry. Great!
Saanvi : Laksh! That’s enough. None of the others are snapping at me. Only you are.
Laksh : Well, YOU DIDN’T LEAVE THEM THE WAY YOU DID ME!
Saanvi stood stunned. Whatever she had expected Laksh to tell, That wasn’t it.
Saanvi (quietly) : What do you mean?
Laksh : 3 MONTHS? YOU GO FOR 3 WHOLE MONTHS AND YOU SPOKE TO EVERYONE HERE EXCEPT FOR ME… HOW IS THAT SUPPOSED TO MAKE ME FEEL? DON’T YOU CARE?
Saanvi : CARE? WHY DO YOU CARE LAKSH? WHY DO YOU CARE IF I’M LATE? WHY DO YOU CARE THAT I NEVER SPOKE TO YOU IN THESE MONTHS? WHY DO YOU CARE ABOUT THE FACT THAT I WANTED TO, EVERY SINGLE MINUTE OF EVERY SINGLE DAY? WHY DO YOU CARE ABOUT ME?
Laksh : Why do I care about you? BECAUSE I FREAKING LOVE YOU..
The others who were watching this exchange smiled happily. Finally, After almost 2 years, Saanvi was getting her wish.
Swara : YESSSS! (Samar waked up again and Swara murmurs softly) Oh shit…. Sorry beta! Go to sleep.. Go to sleep.
Saanvi (with tears in her eyes) : Don’t make jokes like this. It’s really cruel.
Laksh : Joke? This is not a joke, Saanvi. I didn’t realise it until I said it. But I do.. I do love you. I don’t know when I started.. I don’t know how it started. But I do love you.
Saanvi : And Ragini?
Laksh : I did love her. A part of me mat never stop. But that part is so insignificant compared to the rest of my which wants you. I will not compare between the two of you, but what I felt for her is not what i feel for you. I need you.. I need you like I never needed anyone else. I want you the way no one can ever want you. I love you Saanvi, I swear.
Sanvi : O, Swear not by the moon, that inconstant moon, that monthly changes in her circled orb, lest that thy love prove likewise variable.
Laksh (with a soft smile) : Romeo and Juliet! Alright, Tell me what I should swear by?
Saanvi (walking towards Laksh) : Do not swear at all; Or, if thou wilt, swear by thy gracious self, which is the God of my idolatry,and i’ll believe you.
Laksh (disbelievingly) : You believe me?
Saanvi (nodded with tears in her eyes) : I do. I can see the look I’ve been waiting to see for such a long time in your eyes. I can see the tenderness, the… I love you so much Laksh!
Laksh (throwing his arms around her) : I love you too Saanvi. I love you too.
Sanskaar came from his study, papers in his hand. Seeing everyone watching Laksh and Saanvi together, he grew puzzled.
Sanskaar : What’s going on?
Swara (looking at her husband happily) : Baby, I do believe we’re about to have another wedding.
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5 YEARS LATER
Samar : Papa! Papa! Story.. Story!
Sanskaar ( smiling at his son who was tugging his hand) : Samar! Wait beta.. I have a little work. Why don’t you ask Mumma?
Samar : Mumma’s sleeping. She’s very tired because of Sahir.
Sanskaar sighed. Their second son Sahir was born only a month ago and they were learning that though raising one son was tough, raising two was even harder.
Though everyone helped take care of one another, the younger crowd were too many. Samar, Sahir, Adarsh and Sakshi’s daughter Antara, Ragini and Karan’s son Rishi and Laksh and Saanvi’s daughter Avni… All of them were born within successive years and now, the Maheshwari parivaar was bigger than ever.
Samar : Papa… Papa!
Sanskaar (keeping his papers on the table and picking up Samar) : Haan beta! Come.. I’ll tell you a story. Where’s everyone else?
Samar (shaking his head) : They didn’t want to listen.
Sanskaar (laughing) : Okay then… Let’s have some Papa-beta time.
Keeping Samar on his lap, Sanskaar opened his mouth to tell his story. But Samar interrupted him before he could open his mouth.
Samar : Papa! Today I asked Mumma to give 100 Rs to Shyamu Kaka.
Sanskaar (surprised) : Our gardener? Why?
Samar : I wanted to give him Sahir and the hundred rupees. Sahir’s no fun. He doesn’t even play with me. He’s too small.
Sanskaar smiled at his son.
Sanskaar : Do you know you were just as small before? You were as small as baby Sahir.
Samar (shaking his head) : No. I’m a big strong boy. I’m the eldest.
Sanskaar : That’s right. You are the eldest. You are a big strong boy. Which is why you’re supposed to be extra careful with your decisions. You need to think about your younger siblings : Antara, Avni, Rishi and Sahir.
Samar : Huh?
Sanskaar laughed.
Sanskaar : When I was small like you, My Bade papa told me a story. Do you want to hear it?
Samar : YES! Story! Yayyy….
Sanskaar : There was a father who had 4 children. The children kept fighting with each other and never played together.
Samar (horrified) : They never played?
Sanskaar (nodding) : They never played. Only fought and fought and fought. Their papa was very tired of this. So he went and brought 10 sticks which he tied together.
Samar (fascinated) : Then?
Sanskaar : He gave this bundle to the eldest child and asked him to break it. The eldest one tried. He bent it this way, then that way. Ugghhh..Come on, He cried out. Finally, he told no, he couldn’t do it and gave it to the next one. What do you think, Could he do it?
Samar (shouting) : NO!
Sanskaar : Exactly. He couldn’t do it. Nor could the third child or fourth. Everyone lost. Then their Papa took off the string that kept the sticks together. Now he handed each of them one stick and told them to break it. This time all the children managed to.
Samar : That’s good na?
Sanskaar (shaking his head) : Even they were very happy that they managed to break it. But their Papa told them… When the sticks were together, not one of you managed to cause them harm. They were strong and united. But once they became separate, they broke easily. Remember, the same can apply to you children. Stay together, grow together, play together, respect one another. The eldest show your younger siblings what is right and wrong. Be generous and devoted to them but at the same time, make sure they don’t go into the wrong hands. The younger kids, respect your elders. Believe that they know everything and will always protect you. The children heard their father’s words and became united.
Sanskaar frowned a little. Had he touched too serious a topic for a 5 year old? Would Samar even understand? Samar had always been a perceptive young kid, full of questions and really really smart. But maybe this was too much?
Samar (seriously) : Papa?
Sanskaar : Haan?
Samar : I will always take care of my sisters and brothers. Antu, Avni, Rishi and Sahir. I will always protect them. I am the eldest. I will be friends with them always. Then one day, I’ll tell my babies this story just like Bade Papa told you.
Sanskaar (hugging Samar) : Sounds like a plan, Champ!! I’m so proud of you. Now, Come on. It’s time for bed. Come on.
He sat in the chair as he rocked his son back to sleep. Once Samar fell asleep, Swara entered.
Swara (softly) : That was a beautiful story.
Sanskaar : You heard that? I thought you were sleeping.
Swara : I was. But then Samar never came to bed, so I came to check. (ruffling her sleeping son’s hair) You never told me this story.
Sanskaar : why didn’t you come inside?
Swara (smiling) : It was a father-son moment. I couldn’t come in between this.
Sanskaar : Every moment needs you. I need you. Bade papa was and will always be my inspiration. But you are my strength.
Swara (kissing him softly) : And you, mine.
Sanskaar : 6 years and counting…. Here’s to forever, Mrs Maheshwari!
Swara : We will be together forever and more. As as long it’s Mr Maheshwari and I….
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PRECAP : EPILOGUE 1
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I’m not really sure how to end this ff…. it means so much to me.
MMAI began simple enough, but soon grew into something that’s close to my heart. I’ve spent almost an entire year on this story and will miss writing it terribly.
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It’s not just the story… Each and every character meant soo much to me. The Laksh’s love story was never part of my plan.. it was purely an impulsive move at that time.. But I got to write a character like Saanvi for that… There’s just too much to tell about this story and i have no idea how to thank you all…
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i will save my thanksgiving speech for the epilogues…
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BUT I DO HAVE A REQUEST… PLEASE SILENT READERS, IF YOU GUYS ARE STILL THERE, PLEASE DO ME A FAVOUR AND COMMENT YOUR FAVOURITE MOMENT IN MMAI…. JUST A REQUEST FOR THIS LAST CHAPTER…
AND MY REGULAR COMMENTERS, PLEASE COMMENT YOUR FAVOURITE MOMENT IN MMAI AS WELL….
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THANK YOU EVERYONE… THANK YOU FOR BEARING MMAI AND ME..
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197 Comments
still can’t believe MMAI is ending… love this story… picking one best moment from this story will be unjustified… i was literally thinking y cant they plot this types of story on TV
Thnxxx Jaya ๐ ๐
Not being able to choose an episode makes ur comment even more spl… TYSM!!!!!
TV?? I guess probably bcos they can’t drag it for long then ๐ ๐
haha
I always loved this story…all good things have to end….plz do write new ff
Thnxxx soo much Anita ๐ ๐
Glad you loved MMAi!!!! <3 <3
I have started a new ff… IT's called She's not for me
I will be continuing my other ff as well ๐ ๐
Soooo good
Thnxxxx Simin ๐ ๐
I cannot come up with one favourite moment man there are too many. It was a nice experience reading this story and still feel like need to keep reading. My hearty wishes for you.
Sunkar!!! It’s been ages since I saw you ๐ ๐
How’ve you been?? ๐ ๐
Thnxxx soo much ๐ ๐
I’m grateful for ur words <3 <3
Awe
Thnxxx Tamil ๐ ๐
Amazing as always
Thnxxx Daljeet for always being there… ๐ ๐ <3
Awesome
Thnxxx once again… IT’s been a long time since i saw you… How are you?? ๐ ๐
Fine dear
Hw r u
I’m fine too ๐ ๐
Anjuuuuuuuuuu.. sorry today i can’t comment.. !! i can’t bear such blissful ending.. !! m crying.. !! it’s soo adorable … n damn emotional to handle.. !! i have no words to express my sentiments right away, though willl say “I LOVE MY SWASAN N THE WRITER”..
Thnk u.. ;-*
Kaksssss <3 <3
Don't cry babyy…. just as we remember Swasan everyday, we'll remember mmai toooo…. <3 <3
LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH!!! <3 :* :* :*
Tysm for being a part of mmai and supporting me <3
Btw I answered ur qn in the prev chappie… I'm 19 yrs old ๐ ๐
My bubbly Kakks… LOVE YOU!!!
LOVE U TOOO ANJUUUUUUU*hug…
yup I will always miss MMAI as i miss MY SwaSan..
haaa i just checked ur reply..actually i didn’t comment from account na,soo notification nehi mila..
uhhh. u r 19… goshhhh u r seriously too old.. 2 years elder than me.. ๐ :O…
I have a msg from CHANUUU,,,,
She is missing u soooo much..!! ;-*
You do??? Pls tell her i miss her toooo… I replied to her in wattpad… pls ask her to see it… <3 <3
Too old?? ๐ ๐
Haha.. in a good way? Or a bad way??
Awesome… Miss these story a lot…..?
Thnxxx soujanya ๐ ๐
will miss writing it!! ๐ ๐
Every moment of this story is my favorite I can’t describe in word its a amazing story u know when u r irregular how much I miss this story swasan was so smooth n pleasant???????? i love it I can’t take one as my fav ?????? but holi moments was most awesome for me cause from holis moment part I started reading this story once again want to say that I love the story line โคโคโคโคโคโคโคโค come back with another story like this love it ???n love u too for giving us such a beautiful story dear?????
Awww… Thnxxx Tanuja ๐ ๐
Partly one of the reasons why I wanted to finish this… MMAI means a lot and I don’t want to be irregular with it again… Once collstarts, I won’t be able to do it justice.. which is why i wanted to finish it noe…
LOVE you for saying it’s one of ur faveee…. <3 <3
Thnxxx soo much for ur word…
LOVE you tooooooooo
Come back with another story ???????? dearie
Its just amazing storyline anjali….I have read each and every part of it and every time with increased love for these character…Mr.Meheshwari and I has been a imp story for this year…
N this definetely tought to be pateint for the things you love…. sometimes i was so angry on u for taking so much time to post next update…but then when i read d part i forget all d anger…
Thnxxx Beba ๐ ๐
Aww… so sweet of you…
ik I’ve been very irregular… but hopefully managed to make up for it these past few days.. <3 <3
Thnxxx for being a part of mmai always <3 <3
yupp u have make up for dat….
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haha.. Thnxx ๐
Wow… Di that was amazing… And m sorry I couldn’t comment on last one as I saw it just now I mean through the link u gave… Abd shud day ur ff was wonderful… Enjoyed reading it a lot .. Although I started reading it late and had to read almost half of ur ff in one go… But still this journey was so different… Nd m really a big fan of ur writings ….. ??? and do tell a single moment out of this magnificent journey would not work so m saying I loved each n every moment of ur ff
Thnxxxx Shreeyu!!
Pls don’t tell sorry and all… The fact that u read it is more than enough… <3 <3
Glad you loved mmai <3 <3 <3
aww… TYSM!!! That's very niceee of you….Ur comment makes mmai allthe more spl <3 <3
Hehe that’s really sweet of u Di… M also writing few things I’ll b glad if u could read and tell ur reviewsโบ
SUREE!!!!
Pls give link or tell the name ๐ ๐
http://www.tellyupdates.com/user/4171/?profiletab=posts
Here u go with the link this of my TU profile so u will all my works here ?
Please give a princess to sanskar
Thnxxx Sagarika ๐ ๐
Will surely give <3
A wonderful story and a wonderful writer
Aww… thnnxxx Praju ๐ ๐
So nice of you!!! <3
Nyc
Thnxx Sus ๐ ๐
Amazing update… will miss this story alot… its very different form other stories… waiting for the epilogues… pls post next update soon…
Thnxxx So much Dharshaini ๐ ๐
I love ur name <3 <3
Glad you like MMAI ๐ ๐
I don’t know if you had remembered me or not! I don’t know I had just landed over here after a long time….and what I saw was last chapter of yours! Truly after reading the previous parts and this.. It was beautiful ! From initial episode reading this story and talking to you was amazing my favourite part was the one when sanskaar was going to propose Ragini but Swara came in between… Their kisses romancing each other…it was just wow!! Truly you are commendable writer….hope to see yours more stories soon!!
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AASHIIIIIII!!!!!!
How are you??? OFC I REMEMBER YOU!!!
Do you even have to ask??
I can’t believe ur back <3 <3 <3
YAYYY!!! you gonna disappear again?? Pls don't!!!
Thnxxxxx soo much Aashi ๐ ๐ <3 <3
Awesome dear
Thnxxx Febi ๐ ๐
the most favorite moment.. when swara gave Sanskar painting of him and his bade papa
that’s it… goosshh it’s soo touchy
Aww.. Mica… I love that moment too…
Thnxxxx….
Love you sooo much for always being there <3 <3 <3
Hi Anjali, I read your story first in wattpad and then started following it in tellyupdates. I read most of the chapters in a single go. It is one of the finest stories that I have read and I have read quite a few. Your characterisations and dialogues are magnificent.
You have made me look at Sanskar and Swara in an entirely new light.
I had neglected my family and my work for two full days when I read the story from the beginning upto the 4th chapter at one go. The story was too good for me to put my phone down and go to the kitchen. Believe me when I say we ordered dinner outside two consecutive days as I refused to stop reading.
I am feeling bad to see the story end. Please write a lengthy epilogue. Hope you come up with new stories.
Sorry. Its 48th chapter not 4th chapter
WOAHH!!!
2 days srsly?? ๐ฎ ๐ฎ ๐ฎ
Tell ur family sorry from my side <3 ๐ ๐
But.. Srsly… Thnxxxx soo much <3 <3
Ur comment really touched my heart!! <3 <3 ๐ ๐
I will always treasure it ๐ ๐ ๐
Thnxxxx once again <3 <3
I am already writing another story ๐ ๐ ๐
Anju it’s beautiful ๐ I liked the way Laksh out bursted, the way Saanvi confronted him. And the challenge between SwaSan are never ending ๐
Thnxxxx Dhara dii… Glad you liked it!!! ๐ ๐
Love you!!!!
i so love this FF… will miss not seeing Mr. Maheshwari and Mrs. Maheshwari
Thnxxx Kavita ๐ ๐
Glad you love mmai <3 <3
its a wonderful story.
Thnxx soomuch Stephy ๐ ๐
I m a silent reader and how can u ask us to pick one best moment when u know we can’t.Best wishes to u .Come soon wid another ff soonest
Thnxxx Mayra for coming up and speaking… Means a lot to me ๐ ๐
Aww… so nice of you to tell that!!
I’m already writing another ff…. it’s called She’s not for me ๐
want season 2 of this.Can u plzzzz
ummm… Idk if i’ll be able to continue this same story since I’ve used leaps and all… But if I ever get an idea again.. I’ll def think and write ๐ ๐
Very unique story…. I loved each n every moment of dis ff…. n very happy for laksh n saanvi,both r destined to be together…… u r too good…. Excellent work
Thnxxx soo much Tani ๐ ๐
You’ve always supported me ๐ ๐
Love you!!!!
Aaaww wat a wonderful journey v hd wid u n ur story…
Totally njyd it…sanskar n samaz father son moment n d story he shared was lovely…its one of favt ff i ve ever read…thanx for sharing it wid us…it wud b dffclt n injustice to d story if i ve to pick one fvrt moment coz its full of beautiful moments rite from d start till d end n its dffclt to pick any one… keep writng m sharing beautiful stories wid us..
Wil w8 for epilogue
Thnxxxx soo much Arshaanya ๐ ๐
You’ve supported me sooo much… really… I thank you for that!!! ๐ ๐
And sooo nice of you to tell that.. Makes it all the more special <3 <3 <3
Love you!!! ๐ ๐
???????????????????????????????????? Loved it. Miles/Sahir also born??
Its been dear to me too. I ll also save my farewell till d epilogue.
I ve Gregory’s still to read. I will finish it after my exams….and yes i want other books too….email me when u r free
YESSS!! Miles also born ๐ ๐
Thnxxx soo much Vyshu ๐ ๐
Did you get the books??
I sent them today….
Will post the epilogue soon ๐ ๐
All the best for exams <3 <3
Yes i ve got them…thank u sweetie. Just checked…Love u Anju??
I couldn’t believe it’s ending…. No more waiting for this story when everytime scrolling to see whether got MMI updates or no….. Will miss it a lot….. There is lot of scenes I love couldn’t pin point which one exactly the best……For me everything is the best….. But I like swasan knock jokes before wedding and their game time….. Today’s part was awesome….. Especially Laksh love declaration toward Saanvi….. Keep writing dear and please back with another ff…… ???
Thnxxx Rina ๐ ๐
I like their nok-jhoks too…
Love youu!!!.. I will write if u write.. Are you writing any more ffs???
Hope to see you moreee
<3<3
Are u on fb btw??
Welcome dear….. Yes i’m a writer my life’s miracles and just recently end it….. I already back with another ff in the name of AVIKA…..Just updated the intro….. Yes I’m in fb and wattpad too….. R u in fb too? So I can add u…
Anji it was a pure bliss!
Best part was when Samar wanted to give Sahir to shymu kaka, with 100 rs ??
This ff was soo damn good. I had started reading this after reading your name in so many ff analysis… And I decided to read it, the first chappy which I had read was when Sanskar wanted to propose Ragini.
Highlights
– holi
– swara’s fear of rain
– confession
– sanskar finally stopped believingto die
– marriage
-papad rasam in Marriage
– Swara’s delivery ?
-laksh’s confession
– samar’s wish to give away Sahir ?????
Now I’m waiting for (you know that) please give longgggg epilogue plus trouble Sanskar more n more in that ???
Meher love Anji ?
MEHER SWEETIEEEE!!! My sautan… And frankly the person I talk to mosttttt….
I still remember thinking that you were years older than me and wondering how on Earth I’m supposed to talk to you…
I first heard from Anu and others about you.. Ob i had seen your work.. But didn’t think of reading thhem until later…
just imagine.. We neve used to speak and now.. we talk soo much that I can’t imagine life without you…
I’m soo happy you read mmai <3 <3
Haha… Samar's wish ๐ ๐ Worse than Sparsh telling mumma ate baby?? ๐ ๐ ๐
ANJALIII LOVE MEHER MORE THAN MEHER LOVE ANJI ๐ ๐ ๐ :* :* :* :*
I'll post epilogue if you post kit2 and fl ๐ ๐
Lol, even I thought that you are tooooooo elder to me, and yes you are elder to me not matters of its 15 days only ??
I didn’t read your chappies cz of your good vocab, ???
Yayyyy!! Even I can’t imaginy life without you, all those stupidity which we did being a virtual family was unforgettable for me.
You can’t compare these two devils?
Noooooo Meher love Anji more…???
I have posted kit2 yesterday only, you greedy Anji ?
Greedy aur m?? :/ :/ :/
M bilkhul tumhari tarah hoon ๐ ๐ :* :*
Huh…Anjali loves Meher and Meher loves Anjali???Eva kaha gayiiii????
JETHANI JETHANI NA RAHIIIII
WESE THE TRUTH STAYS THE SAME ANYWAYS
EVA LOVES ANJI AND MUGGYYY THE MOST B)
Anjali <3 Meher <3 Eva <3 Meher <3 Anjali <3 Eva<3 Anjali ๐ ๐