HEY guys…ananya back…guys if ur not liking it do temme..pls…if u think am going off track then just correct me…i have no probs regarding negative comments…..i am open to suggestions…healthy criticism is most welcome
I FORGOT TO GIVE THE CHARACTER SKETCH..SO HERE U GO..BFORE WE BEGIN THE PART 2
SHIVAAY SINGH OBEROI: AN ARROGANT RUTHLESS ANGRY AND DASHING YOUNG MAN. A BUSINESSMAN AND IS THE VICE PRESIDENT OF OBEROI GROUP OF INDUSTRIES. IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH ANIKA RATHOD…LOVES HIS BROTHERS OMRU AND SOUMYA,PRINKU AND ISHANA ALOT…CAN GO TO ANY EXTENT FOR HIS FAMILY..STRONGLY BELIEVES THAT BLOOD, LINEAGE AND FAMILY DEFINE THE CHARACTER OF A PERSON
ANIKA RATHOD: SHE IS A SUCCESSFUL BUSINESSWOMAN…CEO OF AS GROUP OF INDUSTRIES (ANIKA SAAHIL…AND IT COINCIDENTALLY MATCHED WITH ANIKASHIVAAY)…SAAHIL IS HER ADOPTED BROTHER AND SHE LOVES HIM ALOT…..IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH SHIVAAY…..
EXCEPT OMISH, RUMYA,PRINKU AND DADI NO ONE KNOWS THAT THEY R IN RELATIONSIP….EVERYONE KNOWS THEM A BESTFRIENDS..GANG OF 6
OMKAARA SINGH OBEROI: ARTIST BY PROFESSION AND A SELF MADE BILLIONAIRE…IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH ISHANA PATEL…LEAST BOTHERED ABOUT FAMILY SURNAME ETC…HATES LIES, LIARS AND DISHONESTY…CAN GO TO ANY EXTENT IN THE PROCESS OF SUPPORTING THE TRUTH….NOT AT ALL INTERESTED IN BUSINESS…PHILOSOPHICAL AND DOES SHAYAARI
ISHANA PATEL: OWNS A DANCE ACADEMY IN MUMBAI AND OTHER COUNTRIES ALSO….ALL KINDS OF DANCES ARE TAUGHT THERE…SHE WANTS TO SPREAD INDIA’S CULTURE THROUGHOUT THE WORLD…IN A RELATIONSHIP WITH OM..HATES LIES JUST LIKE OM
ISHKAARA R IN A RELATIONSHIP AD EVERY1 KNOWS IT
RUDRA SINGH OBEROI: A FLIRT BY NATURE…..HE GOES WITH THE LOOKS OF A PERSON,,,,, NEVER TAKES LIFE SERIOUSLY……INNOCENT AND GULIABLE
SOUMYA: FAMILY FRIENDS OF THE OBEROIS….. BELIEVES IN HERSELF AND NOT IN HER APPEARANCE OR LOOKS..LIKE A FAMILY MEMBER
PRIYANKA SINGH OBEROI: THE ONLY SISSY FOR THE OBROS…..SABKI LAADLI..SHE IS VERY TENSED AND STRESSES..NEEDS TO TAKE MEDIINES FOR EVERYTHING..PMPERED ALOT BY HER BROTHERS
AND THE OTHER CHARACTERS R THE SAME….
COMING TO PART 2
HERE U GO..HOPE U LIKE IT
A LEAP OF 6 YEARS
scene 1
a woman is seen looking at oberois family pic
woman: finally..one is gone and now he remaining will also go..om and ishana mai kya kahu..meri ek baat ne sab kuch barbad kardi…..and shivaay baby..my plan worked out really well…..my intension is to destroy u all and im ready to anything for it….
she laughs wickedly
scene 2
somewere in mumbai
a small 5 year old girl is seen sleeping peacefully..her room is very well arranged…its a barbie themed room and everything related to barbie
a small boy of the same age comes to her room
he is wearing a blue jeans short and a red chhota bheem tshirt with ink blue 3/4 hands
he is really fair and is having blue eyes…..and is looking super cute
he puts a peacock feather near her nose and she wkes up by sneezing….
meanwhile a woman neatly dresses in a while palajo and a blue long slit top comes there
woman: aryan..u again woke her up….
girl: mamma..tee him..bad boy alyan
THAT NAUGHTY BOY IS ARYAN
aryan shows his tongue out and teases her
woman: not again aryan
aryan: mamma…aila bet me yestelday…this is levenge
THIS GIRL IS AIRA
woman: ok fne…tit for tat..go and get ready aira..u have to go to ur camp…today its drawing right?
aira: ha mamma
woman: so bus will be here in an hour..go fast and get ready
she leaves
woman: aryan…go having ur breakfast
aryan: mamma..u know na..ill nevel eat without aila
woman: oh god..u guys fight this much but will never do anything without eachother..
aryan: ha we fight…but at the end v ale one…kiti aur ko ute hurt nahi kalne dunga mai…ill protect hel always (kisi aur ko use hurt nahi karne dunga…ill protect her always)
the woman remembers something and gets teeyeyed..she kisses him
woman: ok then..go and keep ur drawing kit ready..
aryan: ok mamma
he leaves..she also wipes her tears and moves towards the living room
guys u might have understood who it is?
scene 3
its OM…its a bedroom
a man is seen sleeping and the sun rays fall over him
he wakes and sits up
he rubs his eyes with his hands and takes a photo frame from under his pillow
he speaks to that photo
man: y did u do this with us god?
you were my only love anika…and god took that away also…..itna stupid aur drastic step lene se pehle ek baar soch leti…tum mere ek lauti pyaar thi, ho aur hameesha rahogi..i love u anika..bhale aaj tum mere saaath nahi ho…lekin jo yaadein tere saath juda hua hai..wahi mere loye kaafi hai..yeh zindagi sirf tere liye
he kisses that that pic and put it back under his pillow
he gets down and goes to get ready
HE IS SHIVAAY…U ALL MUST HAVE UNDERSTOOD IT
SCENE 4
another room in OM
a woman is sen sleepingon the bed and a man on the couch
the woman is 8 months pregnant
suddenly the alarm rings and the woman is still asleep tries to off it by turning this side..she comes to the edge of the bed and is about to fall down but the man holds her
man: ishana..tu paagal hai kya..what would have happened if u have fallen down?\YES. THAT WOMAN IS ISHANA
ishana: om..i cam see love for me in ur eyes..
om interrupts her
om: ishana..pls dont start ur nonsense again….i just cant forgive u..and baat ye caring nature ki..so lemme make it clear to u..im forced to do so..u r bearing my kid in ur womba nd hence im compelled to do so…so pls dont get any ideas
outside the room..rudra and soumya see this and get sad
SCENE 5
dwn in the living room all the elders r present
dadi: 5 yrs have passed on without u anika and yakees hi nahi hotha ki tum mar gayi..
she cires
jhanvi: mummyji sambhalo
tej: she was likemy daughter..god always takes away our loved ones
shakthi: 5 yrs ke baad this is our situation socho baccho ka kua haal hoga..especially shivaay ki
pinky: v should stay strongs atleast for them
she wipes her tears…
the all nod
dadi: but bhagwaan se ek baat zaroor poochungi…i hope her makes our om and ishana’s relation perfect like befoe
meanwhile tia comes
tia: granny dont worrry….everything will be fone..
dadi: hope so beta
she hugs dadi
TIA’S POV: DONT WORRY DADI..ILL DEFINITELY PRAY TO GOD THAT I DESTROY UR FAMILY AND I PROMISE U THAT ILL MAKE SURE UR FAMILY ENDS IN MY HANDS
precap: shakthis and tej undergo an accident…..aryan and aira go missing….rumya meet anika..they get shocked seeing her alive
42 Comments
Awesome…..waiting for yr next update eargerly
thanks sainaya
Awesome…..waiting for yr next update eargerly
Superb story dear…lover it a lot. …plz upload next episode soon…U just Rocked it Annanya dear…Keep Going On…
thanks alot adhya
Super
thanks
I loved it
am glad..luvng urs too
Thanq
Its awesome…..loved it…..but plz update soon…..
thanks bhavana
It’s very interesting. Pls post the next episode soon.
The title of your ff is the best line omkara have said ever.I really liked it.
thats my fav shayaari…. sach mein dhal jaate hai kisi..dil se dohraane ke baad..ishq pe hoga yakeen ishq hojane ke baad
anyways thankyou
Awesome
thanks
Wonderful…..loved it!!! Can’t wait to read more….
thanks hirah
I love to read your story. Please don’t stop writing.
thanks mithila
Its superb ananya .. but i have a request .. can you please translate the dialogue to english .. i dont understand hindi but i really want to read you ff ..
thanks bella..will definitely do it frm the next update
Just amazing…
tq lilly
Awesome i loved it
thanks shanaya
Eagerly waiting for nxt episode that’s all I can say…it was too fab…
thanks yashu
It’s awsm dear.. post d next one soon…☺☺??
thanks
plz write 2-3epi before leap or else I won’t read your ff
read it properly..i already introduced tue leap in this episode..i cnt chnnge it now..i wnt change it i i cn also…coz im gng according to my story..i accept suggestios and opinions but not orders…its purelyur wish to read it or nt…
Oh wow..post next soon !!
thanks mansi
Amazing dear…..superbbb……woww…..loved it
thankss shivika
I’m loving it…
thanks anshika
Impressed to the core. Post the next part asap.
Fabulous episode…